My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

[Aragon]

From Last two or three updates the story becomes stagnant.. Same things repitation... Please look into this bro

[Anubantu]

Repeating the same line story daily..
Plz spice up..
Its my suggestion only
Final right is for author

[Paty@123]

Plz speed up the story, are you making him stalled

[saka1981]

Guys, drafting wednesday's chapter currently. And it's going to be a very long long day :-). A lot of fun. Anybody wants to guess what's gonna happen tomorrow?

“What is going to happen? Is Azad going to have sex with Anjali, with Sunny watching them? Or, after Azad and Anjali finish, will Sunny come and check the bed, trying to figure out what Azad did to Anjali from head to toe? Or will Sunny masturbate while thinking about Anjali? One of these three things is going to happen.”

[Authorsunny]

Author's note:

Dear readers,

As I mentioned earlier, this is not a sex story. It was never written to drop humiliation, cuckson, or similar elements out of nowhere without proper buildup.

I know most stories here move quickly from tension to explicit scenes. That is not a criticism of fellow authors. Those stories have their own audience, and that audience enjoys them.

This story, as the title suggests, is closer to a daily soap opera. Some chapters exist only to build character, relationships, and situation. That slower pace is necessary if the story is going to hold together.

I am committed to this story and I try to give readers something new. That does not mean I will insert scenes that do not belong just because they are requested.

Many of you have asked in DMs and on Telegram for humiliation, cuckson, and similar elements. Without spoiling where the story is headed, I can say this: the story will not suddenly change direction.

There will be proper buildup, emotional drama, and a course that stays true to the characters and the plot.

Thank you for reading and for staying with it.

[V1star]

May be sunny won't go office tomorrow,Anjali will get fever.,may be Anjali will catch sunny while fapping

[V1star]

[firing]

Excellent update, make sure she get's a new phone in the next update.

[Paty@123]

రచయిత గమనిక:

ప్రియమైన పాఠకులారా,

నేను ఇంతకు ముందే చెప్పినట్లుగా, ఇది శృంగార కథ కాదు. సరైన నేపథ్యం లేకుండా, అవమానం, భార్యాభర్తల మధ్య సఖ్యత లేదా అలాంటి అంశాలను అకస్మాత్తుగా చొప్పించడానికి ఈ కథను ఎప్పుడూ రాయలేదు.

ఇక్కడి చాలా కథలు ఉత్కంఠ నుండి స్పష్టమైన దృశ్యాలకు వేగంగా వెళ్తాయని నాకు తెలుసు. ఇది తోటి రచయితలను విమర్శించడం కాదు. ఆ కథలకు వాటికంటూ ఒక ప్రత్యేక పాఠకవర్గం ఉంటుంది, మరియు ఆ పాఠకవర్గం వాటిని ఆస్వాదిస్తుంది.

ఈ కథ, శీర్షిక సూచించినట్లుగా, ఒక రోజువారీ సీరియల్‌కు దగ్గరగా ఉంటుంది. కొన్ని అధ్యాయాలు కేవలం పాత్రలు, సంబంధాలు మరియు పరిస్థితిని నిర్మించడానికి మాత్రమే ఉంటాయి. కథ నిలకడగా ఉండాలంటే ఆ నెమ్మదైన వేగం అవసరం.

నేను ఈ కథకు కట్టుబడి ఉన్నాను మరియు పాఠకులకు కొత్తదనాన్ని అందించడానికి ప్రయత్నిస్తాను. కేవలం అడిగారని సంబంధం లేని సన్నివేశాలను చొప్పిస్తానని దీని అర్థం కాదు.

మీలో చాలామంది DMలలో మరియు టెలిగ్రామ్‌లో అవమానం, భార్యాభర్తల మధ్య సఖ్యత మరియు అలాంటి అంశాల కోసం అడిగారు. కథ ఎటు వెళ్తుందో ముందుగానే చెప్పకుండా, నేను ఇది చెప్పగలను: కథ అకస్మాత్తుగా దిశ మార్చుకోదు.

సరైన నేపథ్యం, భావోద్వేగ నాటకీయత ఉంటాయి మరియు అది పాత్రలకు, కథాంశానికి అనుగుణంగా సాగుతుంది.

చదివినందుకు మరియు నాతో పాటు ఉన్నందుకు ధన్యవాదాలు.

Plz go as per your own and original ideas, only request is relieved the stress on son and request not to make him cuckson,

[baddu]

Plz go as per your own and original ideas, only request is relieved the stress on son and request not to make him cuckson,

[baddu]

Excellent story. Detailed explanation. Point to point inch to inch. Waiting for update.

[Avneet]

Awesome story

[V1star]

May be sunny will ask Anjali some question unintentionally...and it turnout to be a shocker for anjali....she would feel nervous to coverup and it will become more awkward...
Sunny will  feel he shouldn't have asked.
Or azad becomes a bit desparate in their flat.
Wednesday guess.

[V1star]

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[spica308]

Perhaps mystery of dead phone will be revealed.
Azad is recording their encounters. That is why phone is dead soon after he leaves.
Wait and watch I guess

[Tea_Kadai_Boy]

I couldn't find my last comments. Don't know the reasons.
That part where Sunny comes home in the evening, knowing that Azad had had his afternoon with his mother, and had to wait long time for the door to be open and going inside the house, and seeing the condition of his mother, things of the rooms and its environment, is completely jarring and out of the sync with the flow and writing of the story.
That part was explicit and out of turn. The logical course of your style of writing would have been, the mother Anjali would be extra cautious and would have cleaned herself and the room. Despite the same Sunny would have seen the escaped things from cleaning. It is somewhat out of sync that Anjali had slept till he comes and cleaned hurriedly and sunny seeing things explicitly.
But that part showed hints of character of motherly cuckold where son sees widow mother fucked by someone else.
That part apart subsequent parts are on fire.

[Authorsunny]

Hi buddy,

Yeah, some comments have definitely been deleted. Not sure of the exact reason. Maybe the ones that used Azad’s earlier name got pulled because of forum restrictions.

About that scene feeling out of place — Sunny has already accepted the relationship to a large extent. He was sent out on celebration night, and the next night he was sent home while Ma came back later. There are already enough signs for him to understand what’s happening behind his back.

In the scene you mentioned, Ma had fallen asleep after a heavy session in the afternoon. She was already exhausted from the previous night and hadn’t slept properly. After sex with Azad, it’s natural she drifted off. On top of that, her phone battery has been acting up — she may have set an alarm that never ringed.

It isn’t fully in “motherly cuckold” territory yet. It’s more about the son discovering the affair, seeing how deeply she’s into it, and watching that transformation.

That said, I take the criticism the same way I take the praise. It keeps me mindful of what readers expect while I write the next chapters.

[V1star]

I demand azad saab to give Anjali a waist chain.

[Leo Arya]

Waiting for the next update bro...

[firing]

This is how I imagine anjali Sunny's mom after azad left her full