My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

[Authorsunny]

Author’s note – a short update for everyone following this story:

Guys, I am still here.

I am reading every comment. I can see how closely many of you are following the house, the revealations, and the slow change between Sunny and his mother. That attention means a lot. Thank you for staying with a story that moves at this pace.

Some of you have asked why the thread was moved to this section, and why new updates are being posted. I want to be direct about that.

The site admin wrote to me after a reader report. The concern was the interfaith contrast in the story — ***** household, '. landlord, food and festival details that could be read as undermining a community’s practices. The admin’s instruction was clear: new interfaith stories are not being approved, characters should stay within the same community, cultural and traditional practices of any religion should not be demeaned.

I want to say this plainly: interfaith was never the main engine of this story. The spine has always been the mother’s affair seen through the son’s eyes, the one-room flat, the neighbours, the money, the clothes, the quiet shift in the house. The community contrast was extra colour for readers who like that layer. It was not written to insult anyone’s faith, festival, or food. If it landed that way for anyone, that was not the intention.

Given the guidelines, I have two honest options:

1. Continue here as the story already stands, in this section, without rewriting the earlier chapters.

2. Change names and backgrounds so every character belongs to the same community, remove interfaith framing going forward, edit the earlier posts where needed, and have the thread moved back to the main section again.

Either way, the core does not change: mother’s affair through the son’s lens, slow burn, slice of life, same household, same tension.

I am new on this site. I do not want to guess the rules a second time and put the thread at risk. If you have a preference between the two options, or a practical suggestion about names / how far the older posts should be edited, please feel to share it. 

Updates will start again once this is settled. The next stretch of the story is already planned and it does get more interesting from here.

Thank you for the patience, and for treating a long, slow story as something worth waiting for.

— sunnythorve

[wxxxx]

I would like to specially request the author sunnythorve to change the name of his son Sunny to Javed and the name of his mother Anjali to Nasreen.

[apsingh]

what a hippocraay jaha har Parkar ki incet story baap beti ma beta daadi pota ki story bharpur ha is story se pathako ki bhawana ahat ho rahi ha namaskar kata hoo is site par bhi logo ko aitraj ha fir wo yaha kyoo ha my suggestion aap isse ulta interfaith story likhe jaha bete ka mame javed ho or man ka name amit ho fir bharpur samarthan milega

[apsingh]

without commitment appos this type of restriction

[V1star]

Bro...if possible continue landlord referring as Saab,bhai,owner saab


If required change his name as ISHAN Saab.or IMMAN saab.who don't have any interest in faith,festival celebrations,practices.
Whatever the faith of landlord , mr desai,mrs kulakarni, and Sunny, landlords mom characters remain as it is.
His name won't change the soul of the story.

Final descision is yours only bro.for me ,already this story is a classic.
I feel seeing this great story in separate section will effect it's popularity.

[Sandbox]

Author’s note – a short update for everyone following this story:

Guys, I am still here.

I am reading every comment. I can see how closely many of you are following the house, the revealations, and the slow change between Sunny and his mother. That attention means a lot. Thank you for staying with a story that moves at this pace.

Some of you have asked why the thread was moved to this section, and why new updates are being posted. I want to be direct about that.

The site admin wrote to me after a reader report. The concern was the interfaith contrast in the story — ***** household, '. landlord, food and festival details that could be read as undermining a community’s practices. The admin’s instruction was clear: new interfaith stories are not being approved, characters should stay within the same community, cultural and traditional practices of any religion should not be demeaned.

I want to say this plainly: interfaith was never the main engine of this story. The spine has always been the mother’s affair seen through the son’s eyes, the one-room flat, the neighbours, the money, the clothes, the quiet shift in the house. The community contrast was extra colour for readers who like that layer. It was not written to insult anyone’s faith, festival, or food. If it landed that way for anyone, that was not the intention.

Given the guidelines, I have two honest options:

1. Continue here as the story already stands, in this section, without rewriting the earlier chapters.

2. Change names and backgrounds so every character belongs to the same community, remove interfaith framing going forward, edit the earlier posts where needed, and have the thread moved back to the main section again.

Either way, the core does not change: mother’s affair through the son’s lens, slow burn, slice of life, same household, same tension.

I am new on this site. I do not want to guess the rules a second time and put the thread at risk. If you have a preference between the two options, or a practical suggestion about names / how far the older posts should be edited, please feel to share it. 

Updates will start again once this is settled. The next stretch of the story is already planned and it does get more interesting from here.

Thank you for the patience, and for treating a long, slow story as something worth waiting for.

— sunnythorve

I would go with option 2 given that, The viewership will be lost if this story stays here. I know its a pain but you can simply abandon this thread here and start a continuation with changed name in the  main forum and return back here to correct it when you find time later.


Also, dont get stressed out with this simple things, having the experience of handling much bigger forums than this the fear of the admin stands valid especially in these weather.

[spica308]

Updates will start again once this is settled. The next stretch of the story is already planned and it does get more interesting from here.


— sunnythorve

Since this a story based on events inspired by true situations, I feel Option 1 -- Continue here as the story already stands, in this section, without rewriting the earlier chapters.
For greater visibility, may be a post in general section with introduction (Authors’ note before Chap 1) and a rider that this is a NSFW erotic story that involves various kinks and genres — including cuckson, interfaith, exhibitionism etc. It cannot be expected to stay ideal or always morally correct. Include link to story in this section. Your readers by commenting on the post in general section could keep it on first page thus ensuring viewership is not lost.
This should put off squeamish readers. Perhaps moderators will take more sympathetic view.
In any case, please indicate your intent.
As mentioned, next stretch of story is already planned (written ?), Please continue to post updates in this section. Do not keep your loyal readers waiting

[Minki]

I am agree with you

[wxxxx]

I would like to specially request the author sunnythorve to follow the instructions of xossipy admin and keep the story going. I would like to specially request the author sunnythorve to change the name of the son Sunny to Javed and the name of the mother Anjali to Nasreen.

[Ayush01111]

I would love to see mother how much she goes a head in thw name of 5 year and afyer i want to see son to brings mom this nashabof azadi she mustvcryvas much she is enjoying this time let every one desapier and only left son and his words which kill every time mother

[V1star]

Anjali in kitchen

[Max Duncun]

Such a mind game ...great story beautifully written .its an art. Even if you change the name of one main.
character ... no impact at all on our side. Dont delay send us your next chapter soon.tc

[Minki]

no continue as it is it's beutiy scene of this story please ignore all controversy and update you are too ?

[Aragon]

I also choose option 1.... Please continue the story... We are with you

[Aragon]

Please continue the story bro.. We are all waiting for it..
And my vote for Option 1

[wxxxx]

I sincerely thank the author sunnythorve for taking the story forward through his skillful writing. Readers are eagerly waiting for the next update very soon.

[Authorsunny]

Author Update:

Guys, thank you for all your comments, the DMs, and the suggestions. It means a lot that so many of you are still invested in this story even after it got delisted from the main section.

Please keep writing - comments, feedback, suggestions, appreciation, even criticism. All of it keeps me motivated and helps me write the next part with more care.

Now the most important part about the story going forward:

I am planning to create a new thread in the main section. This existing story will be slightly redone and reposted there - names changed, and a few references adjusted, so it fits the site guidelines. However, it will take some time in doing so.

Meanwhile, I will finish the current day’s journal entry in this threat itself.

I don’t want to leave the chapter hanging at a crucial point. The Sunday dinner, the walk downstairs, and whatever follows that night still need their proper close in this thread. Once that day’s entry is complete, this thread will have a clean stopping point, and the new main-section thread can begin from the next morning.

Hope this works for all!

New update coming very soon, guys. Probably, today evening/night or latest by tomorrow.

— sunnythorve

[Minki]

no i was not with you any how you are free best of luck

[saka1981]

Waiting for your update...we always with you bro :)

[wxxxx]

Update please