Adultery Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel)

[The_Ramukaka]

[The_Ramukaka]

[The_Ramukaka]

[The_Ramukaka]

[The_Ramukaka]

[abcturbine]

Great going.....keep it up

[shrenik007]

Great story!! Keep it up!!!

[SilverArrow]

Great going.....keep it up

Thanks...what did you like most ? Any ideas to move ahead ?

[SilverArrow]

Great story!! Keep it up!!!

Thanks sir
Any suggestions to move ahead

[SilverArrow]

What? That's it?

Not proceeding further? Waiting for next read already.....

What you mean by thats it ? If you would clarify will be helpful thanks 
Thanks for your support and your reading ....:)

[Herbiee]

Woow. Teasing update. Awesome but unfinished scene. Waiting for a satisfying scene again. Keep update stunning episodes bro.

[Herbiee]

How could he leave her without fully enjoying that perfect situation even though he had the chance? He could have used this opportunity to explore her better. I believe no one would leave a sexiest woman like Monica. Why did he do that? How can he do that?!!!!

[shrenik007]

Thanks sir
Any suggestions to move ahead

Nahi Sir.Its just fantastic!!! Just started reading your story!!!

[Authorsunny]

Hey buddy, if you don't mind, which AI are you using for those photos?

I'm writing another story, "My Mother and the Landlord," and I'm looking for AI photos like that.

[The_Ramukaka]

Hey buddy, if you don't mind, which AI are you using for those photos?

I'm writing another story, "My Mother and the Landlord," and I'm looking for AI photos like that.

Appreciate your interest bro. Sent a DM.

[Blackdick11]

she won’t say it out loud, but she gets fucking soaked when her huge tits get aggressively sucked and roughly kneaded.
hope to see more of theirs gym session.

[Mande]

Great narration! Details of gym along with posture correction, muscle strength…hmm you really mixed well the reality with eroticism.

The massage episode was really very well written possibly will give ideas to the readers how to enjoy the private moment :)
the last voyerism to the delivery guy is an extra spice to this episode.


At the end i would say this female centric stories heroine the way you have depicted is really class apart. It felt so natural and easily comparable to lot of females of metros that is the mental tussle, the word usage, the dresses….its never felt out of the place or vulgar…the depiction is so engaging that once readers starts, he or she will only finish the entire episode…such was the description. Thats the reason readers wants the next episode so do I:)

Thank you for entertaining us with skilful writing and i am sure you have earned a place in the mind of lot of readers. Keep this up and we are there to consume in true spirit?

[SilverArrow]

Great narration! Details of gym along with posture correction, muscle strength…hmm you really mixed well the reality with eroticism.

The massage episode was really very well written possibly will give ideas to the readers how to enjoy the private moment :)
the last voyerism to the delivery guy is an extra spice to this episode.


At the end i would say this female centric stories heroine the way you have depicted is really class apart. It felt so natural and easily comparable to lot of females of metros that is the mental tussle, the word usage, the dresses….its never felt out of the place or vulgar…the depiction is so engaging that once readers starts, he or she will only finish the entire episode…such was the description. Thats the reason readers wants the next episode so do I:)

Thank you for entertaining us with skilful writing and i am sure you have earned a place in the mind of lot of readers. Keep this up and we are there to consume in true spirit?

Thanks...do keep the suggestions coming

[wxxxx]

Monica should have asked Ranga to come home while Rakesh was at home, then the story scenes would have been more exciting. Later, I sincerely request the writer SilverArrow to add a scene where Ranga comes home while Rakesh is at home and Rakesh gets very excited seeing Monica and Ranga having wild sex.

[shrenik007]

Great story. These are just my suggestion. You are an excellent writer. I feel later parts of the story feels hurried.
One thing I missed in the later chapters is the humiliation / exposure element that was handled much better in the beginning. Earlier, Monica’s embarrassment, her awareness of being watched, the possibility of being recognized, and Rakesh’s reaction all added tension. Later, situations become bigger and faster, but that psychological discomfort is not explored as much.

The humiliation should also come from the situation and Monica’s psychology, not simply from making every new event more extreme. That would bring back the tone of the early story. I liked the train arc very much. The train arc worked because Monica was still negotiating dignity, embarrassment, curiosity and fear at the same time. That mix is much more interesting than simple escalation. The massage arc is also very well written!!
All the best !!