Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story

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kavita mam ini jldi jeetu te preet da sex scene na create kreyo mai chahuna ke jeetu te preet dono thoda hor open hon indirectly ik dujje naal jida ke jeetu holi holi naal lmi pyi pabhi de dhid te hath fere kde dhuni ch ungal phere holi holi jeetu preet di agg bhadkawe te preet di fuddi chon laa dwe
for example preet nu jaffi paun to pehla samneyo apna mota lun pajame to bahar kad lwe te fer preet nu ghut ke jaffi paa lwe samne to te jide naal jeetu da lun preet nu apne dhid te mehsoos howe te preet di fuddi v hanju vhon lag jawe te fer jeetu holi holi apni pabhi di t-shirt dhid to tah chak dewe jide naal preet nu apne nange dhid te mota taaja lun feel howe te par dono jaane eda pretend karan jida ohna nu kuj pta na howe te fer holi holi luchiyan gla krda krda jeetu apni pabhi cum wife nu garam krda krda apne lun da paani apni pabhi de dhid te chad deve te fer dono eda ee so jaan❤️
baaki writer mam twadi apni mrji aa ke story nu kidr laike jana it’s just a suggestion 
mai ajj pehli var comment kita baaki luv u aa taadi writing skills nu❤️??

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' Ena b bharosa nyi mere tey ..' sar chuk preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
'Nyi bilkil nyi..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  vohat sharararti hunda ja riha tun menu tan dar lagda hun tere ton ..'
'Kyoun ..' ek dum bolea jeetu'  mere ton kahda dar tuhanu bhabhi ..'
'Bas teri niyat theek nyi lagdi'  soch lya c preet ney aap e gal agey tordi haan j tan jijhakda hoyea  kuch na bolea ... gal bdl layoungi



'Nyi bhabhi edan na kaho meria akhan ch vekh k kaho tuhanu meri niyat kharab lagdi a'  preet di thodi fad usda munh apney wal karda jeetu bina akh jhapkey usdean akhan ch vekhda bolea
'Akhan ch tan theek lagdi a par kitey hor kharab lagdi a ...' akhir preet ney us nal khuln di kosis kardi ney pehl krdi hoyi keha



'Hor kithon .. ' anjan jeha ho jeetu bolea ...smj bilkul b nyi ki keha bhabhi ney



'Ena bhola na bn sab pta tenu .' nimmi nimmi hasdi preet thori der pehlan apney lak tey chubdey jeetu dey lun da kadakpan tey sek chetey krdi boli
'Nyi bhabhi nyi pta .' Preet nu hasdi vekh nah ch sar hillanda jeetu b hasda hoyea bolea
'Chal nyi pta tan na sahi .. meinu son dey apney manjey tey ja k awen sadey vich b kitey sukhi tey jaspreet didi wang  kuch  ' apney upron rjayi lah prey krdi preet boli
'Oh kyoun .. nyi bhabhi sadey vich udan thori ho ...' bholla jeha bn jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea
'Pta nyi lagda .. kal b mein thori sochea c tenu chumi dayoungi .. naa ji naa'  kamrey ch edar udar vekhdi hasdi hoyi preet boli' aag tey gheo jinney ek dujey ton dur rehn una e changa ..'
'Oh hun samjea   ' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea' Par sadey vich aag kaun a tey gheo kaun..'
'Dono ...'hasdi hoyi preet holi jehi burburayi'  na baba mein nyi deor naal ...eni besarm nyi mein'  manjey tey uth beithdi preet jeetu wal vekhdi sochn lgi halley b nyi samjda eh munda pta nyi kyoun jijhak riha ena kuch tan keh ditta fer b eh ..

'ohh acha acha'  Jeetu b uth beith preet wal vekhda bolea   'ek gal dasso bhabhi ..'
' kehri ..' aas jehi hoyi preet nu gardan ghuma us wal vekhdi boli'  hun ki puchna reh gya.'
' sachin bhabhi tusi  thalley kuch nyi paya'  gaur naal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
'Ajay b tenu nyi pta lga eni nedeyo b nyi  'apni hik wal vekhdi preet boli
'Nyi o nyi'  sharart ch nima nima hasda jeetu bolea
'Fer ..' thori hairaan hundi preet boli
'Sachin thalley kuch nyi paya'  kol beithi preet nu vekhda jeetu bolea
'Aho baba kameej thalley kuch  nyi paya'  jeetu nu edan apney wal vekhda vekh preet b hasdi hoyi usnu cherdi boli'  nwa nwa jwaan hoyea sada jeetu begainia bhabhia di hik vekh vekh haukey lenda c ...sochea chal koi na mein cha pura kar dindi haan deor da'
'Nyi mera matlab salwar thalley kuch nyi'  bhabhi nu tichar kardi sun hausla kr usdey munh wal vekhda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea
'Ki .. ' ek dum akhan kad di preet boli
'Daso na ..' shararat ch muskuranda jeetu preet dey salwar ch ghutey hoye pattn wal vekhda bolea
'Jeetu hun tun  kuch jyada e nyi  ..' jeetu nu vekhdi chahey ghuri wat akhan kad di preet ney keha pr jeetu nu enj himmat kr khul k gal karda sun awaz ch chehak bharea hassa aa gya
'Daso na bhabhi'  preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu fer bolea
'Menu nyi pta'  apna hassa rok akhan churandi preet munh dujey passey krdi boli
'Matlab kuch nyi paya..'preet nu akhan churandi vekh jeetu fer usnu cherda bolea
'Nyi nyi payi a kachi.' kahli kahli ch apney aap e usdey munh vichon nikl gya
'Kehrey rang di'  preet di salwar wal vekhdey ney muskurandey hoye puchea
'Chup kar key beitha reh marungi' akhan kad di preet boli' chabblda hoyea agey wadhi janda tun'
 'Daso na bhabhi'  preet dey gussey ch lukey hassey nu vekh jeetu fer bolea
'Jehrey rang di salwar'  dasdi dasdi hass e pyi preet jeetu di himmat vekh ...
'Hye dikhayo na'  preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu chehkda hoyea bolea  
'Beitha reh chup krkey wada aya... dikhyo na..' jeetu wal vekhdi apna hath hwa ch lehrandi preet boli'  hor na kuch dikhawan tenu..'
'Hye j hor b kuch dikha  deo mja e aa javey' bina akh jhapkey jeetu preet dean akhn ch vekhda bolea' kadi vekhi nyi.'
'kinnia luchea gallan karda apni bhabhi nal. .. luchha..' preet b bina akh jhapkey jeetu dean akhn ch vekhdi boli lag riha c usnu jeetu kuch na kuch sharart karuga
'Sachin bhabhi kdi nyi vekhi'  preet nu bina akh jhapkey apney wal vekhda vekh jeetu apna sah niglda  bolea  
'Fer mein ki krraan'  bechain hundey jeetu di hallat vekh preet b usnu cherdi boli'  rupi  nu kahin o dikha dayougi..'
'Tusi nyi dikha  ..' bhabhi nu gussey na hundi vekh unha da jwaab sun besabra jeha ho uthea jeetu ...
'Nyi ji mein eni besrm nyi k deor nu dikhaawn ..'sharm bharea nakhra krdi preet jeetu ton akhn churandi boli .. par chaa jeha chad gya usnu umeed jehi hoyi hun jeetu himmat karuga

'Mein sochea j tusi'  akhan churandi preet wal vekhdey hoye enj lagea jeetu nu shyad bhabhi mn jawey j thori hor himmat krey..
'Rupi di vekh lawin us kol b hay .' Jeetu wal vekh preet akhan matkandi usnal hor khuldi boli 'Naley  kehndey ney chattia rang warangia thalley eko jehey..'
'O teri bhabhi'  uchi jehi chehak k bol jeetu  preet wal vekhn lga    'tusi b enia chakmia gallan'
'Karnia paindia kyi baar deor nu Akl den lyi'  soch lya  c preet ney hun jijhak mitta e deni jeetu di
'Deo fer..' bhabhi nu enj khul k boldi majak kardi sun jeetu chehkda hoyea bolea
'Mein tan dey dewan pr tere ton lay nyi honi'  tedi akh nal jeetu wal vekhdi muskurandi hoyi preet kuch der chup reh  hasdi hoyi boli  'Akl..'
Kini jor di dil dharkeya jeetu da eh tan usnu e pta c jad bhabhi ney keha 'Mein tan dey dewan pr tere ton lay nyi honi'  
Lun tan funkarda jhatka lay akad e gya enj lga jiven bhabhi   keh mn gyi
'Haan shyad kadi liti nyi na . Na e kisi ney diti'  jeetu  b  hausla kr thodi der chup reh muskuranda hoyea bolea  ' Akl'
'Eda wada ho gya aj tak nyi liti  kmaaal a'  jeetu da jwaab sun us dean akhan ch vekhdi preet kuch sochdi boli'  Akl'
'Nyi kadi nyi naley fer menu kis ney deni'  massom jeha munh bna jeetu bolea  'Akl'
'Kyoun ena sohna sunkha a tenu kehri nah karu Akl den ton'  jeetu wal vekh dil e dil ch burburayi preet' luchia thori jehi himmat tan kr jehri akl tun mangda na mili tenu  tan kahin ..'
'Koi  den wali  mili e nyi'   preet dey munh wal vekhda jeetu usnu cherda bolea' tusi dey deo' janbuz k thori der chup reh bolea' Akl'
'Koi na ji dey dindi bol kini ku laini a'  es ton pehln k jeetu gal badley bol e pyi preet eni muskil nal tan jeetu usnal khulan lga c nyi chahundi c hun b jijhkey o'
'Sari laini  ' chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea
'Oye  hoye...lay layounga sari'  akhn matkandi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli
'Kosis karunga jini ku lay hoyi lay layounga'  yakeen jeha hon lga jeetu nu chahey bhabhi gal Akl den di kr rahi a par o usnu ki den lyi keh riha smj gyi a bhabhi
'Chal theek a fer  'hasdi hoyi jeetu wal vekh preet   chatt wal vekh sochn  lgi..hun koi harkat karuga jeetu es baar nyi rokna usnu na e koi nakhra krna ..sochdi di dil dil dharkn tez hon lgi
'Chup kyoun kr gye  deo b hun Akl'  preet nu chup beithi vekh jeetu bechain ho bolea

'Na ji mere tonh nyi dey honi tenu Akl  ..' samj na ayi o kiven pehl karey  akhir hasdi hoyi boli' Akl tan tenu rupi e dey sakdi a ..lay k gyi tan c tenu apney amb dey baag ch  lay laini c uston Akl'
'Kehndi viah ton baad ..' bhabhi di naah sun mayous hunda jeetu hssn di kosis krda bolea ek baar edan lagea c usnu bhabhi mn gyi par bhabhi ney gal e bdl diti



'Tun thori jehi himmat karda  dey deni c rupi ney'  Akl'  jeetu nu cherdi preet hasdi hoyi us wal vekhn lgi jiven keh rahi hovey kaka ji  eni ku himmat tan mundey nu aap krni paindi a
'Sachin ..' chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea'  j mein kosis krda mn jandi rupi'
'Aho eh tan mundey dey hath hunda kidan tikani saheli'  jeetu nu cherdi  akh matka us wal enj vekhea preet ney  jiven keh rahi hovey j nyi yakeen tan hun himmat kr k vekh
'Sachin bhabhi' Bhabhi dean akhan di sharart bullan ch nimmi nimmi muakurahat vekh chehkda goyea bolea
'Hanji sachin ..' hor ki'  jeetu wal vekh usdey modey tey hath mardi.preet boli  'budu e tun ena b nyi pta'
'Acha j mein thori himmat krn tan tuhanu tika sakda'  sharart nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
' Oye Mein saheli di gal kr rahi haan bhabhi di nyi ..' so ja hun vohtey supney na vekh aap b so tey menu b son dey' jan buj k son da nakhra krdi preet boli pta c usnu  j o mukurugi tan e jeetu ney himmat krni
'Daso na J bhabhi tikani hovey fer kini ku himmat  ' masoom jeha bn sharart bhari jid krda jeetu bolea
'Koi fayada nyi kaka ji eh bhabhi nyi tere ton tika honi'  jeetu nu cherdi uksandi preet bharwatey chuk akhn matkandi hasdi hoyi boli'kehn tan lgi c kaka ji bhabhi tikana tere bas di gal nyi  teri jagah koi hor deor hunda .. hun tak tan usney apni bhabhi thalley nap ragr b diti honi c'  pr boli nyi bs shararati muskan muskurandi us wal vekhn lgi
'O kyoun'  bhabhi dean akhn di sharart vekh jeetu bechain hunda bolea

'Menu nyi pta  'jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli   'so ja hun .. kini rat ho gyi a'  keha chahey preet ney eh pr na tan manjey ton uthi... na e lmi pyi bs nimi nimi hasdi kamrey ch edar udar vekhn lgi

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kavita mam ini jldi jeetu te preet da sex scene na create kreyo mai chahuna ke jeetu te preet dono thoda hor open hon indirectly ik dujje naal jida ke jeetu holi holi naal lmi pyi pabhi de dhid te hath fere kde dhuni ch ungal phere holi holi jeetu preet di agg bhadkawe te preet di fuddi chon laa dwe
for example preet nu jaffi paun to pehla samneyo apna mota lun pajame to bahar kad lwe te fer preet nu ghut ke jaffi paa lwe samne to te jide naal jeetu da lun preet nu apne dhid te mehsoos howe te preet di fuddi v hanju vhon lag jawe te fer jeetu holi holi apni pabhi di t-shirt dhid to tah chak dewe jide naal preet nu apne nange dhid te mota taaja lun feel howe te par dono jaane eda pretend karan jida ohna nu kuj pta na howe te fer holi holi luchiyan gla krda krda jeetu apni pabhi cum wife nu garam krda krda apne lun da paani apni pabhi de dhid te chad deve te fer dono eda ee so jaan❤️
baaki writer mam twadi apni mrji aa ke story nu kidr laike jana it’s just a suggestion 
mai ajj pehli var comment kita baaki luv u aa taadi writing skills nu❤️??

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Duja viah story tusi hun tak xossip tey padi .. preet da apney deor jeetu nal viah ho janda tey o waps apney sohrey ghar aa jandi sare ghar ch raunkaan mud waps aa jandia .. bas kmi c tey eh k jeetu ajay b preet nu bhabhi smj ijjat maan dinda .. tey preet b usnu apna gharwala na smj deor smj e khushi khushi us ghar ch rehn lgi ethey tak story tusi xossip ch padi .. usdey close hon ton baad mein eh story agey continue krn lgi haan umeed a holi holi punjabi section dey sarey readers es site tey aa jangey ... 
So mere valuable readers story da agla part .....


3rd update

Thand da mausam uton asmaan ch badl sham velley e enj lag eiha   c jiven rat pay gyi hovey ... pura vehrda dhund nal bhar gya ..dangar wadey da kam muka preet chaunkey ch beithi dudh ubaldi chulley dey sek nal apney hathan nu sekdi bar bar buhey wal vekh ehi soch di aj jeetu ajay tak nyi sehron mudeya  agey tan mud anda c ...es velley tak... keh k b nyi gya c der nal ayounga ... fer kithey reh gya .. dopehr dey bibi bapu ji b massi di khair khabr lain  wandey challey gye c 
Kayi dina di keh rahi c bibi bapuji nu  apni bhain kol  jaan lyi ..ageyo kuch din college ch jeetu nu b   chuttia c ...ehi soch dopehrey  bibi   apni bhain  nu milan  bapiji naal wandey tur gyi ... ..
 'Eh munda aa janda'  chulley ch lakr pa agg da sek wadhandi preet burburayi'  roti tuk da kam muka aram nal kamrey ch beithdi ethey tan thand e vohat a .. '
 'Shukr a aa gya'  cycle lay andar andey jeetu nu vekh sakoon da sah lendi preet burburayi ...
 'Ah layo bhabhi tuhada smaan'  cycle ton thailla lah chaunkey ch   preet kol aa khada hunda jeetu  bolea
 'Oh tan theek a ..'  jeetu ton thaila fad preet us wal vekhdi boli'  aj eni der kyoun la diti .. mausam vekh kinna khrab a ..'
 'O bhabhi tesan tey gaddi late c ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  bibi kithey a ..'
 'Dasea tan c tenu bibi ney aj wandey jana'  sar chuk jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Oh mein bhul e gya'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay mein roti tuk da ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  puria wahan da sweater pa lavin thand vohat a ..'
 'Nyi roti nyi khani ajay bhukh nyi ...' kamrey wal janda jeetu bolea'  halley time b ena nyi hoyea bdl tey dhund kaarn hanera lag riha ..'
 'Chal theek a jad khani hoyougi das devin'  chulley uton ubldey dudh da patila chuk ek passey rakhdi preet boli
' cha bna layo bhabhi ..' bda chit karda ..'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  thand vohat a' 
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay ....uni der mein cha banadi haan ..' thand ch preet da apna chit kar riha c cha peen da...  patili chuk chulley tey rakhdi kamrey wal jandey jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sweater jarur pa lawin....'
'Layo ji gram gram cha peo'  cha dey dono gilas hath ch fdi preet eh kehndi hoyi kamrey andar aan e lgi c k dehleej tey e ruk gyi... andar jeetu nu sheeshey mohrey khad apney wall swarda vekh hassa e nikl aya usda ..
Pith c us wal .. shyad kapdey badlda badlda sheeshey ch apney aap nu vekhn ch ena ulj gya k kurta paan da dhiyan b nayi riha ..eni thand ch b upron nanga ..thand nyi lgdi es mundey nu.. kuch sochdi hoyi preet kehn e lgi c thand lag jayougi kuch pa lay mundeya par keh na saki ..buhey tey khadi khadi usdi nangi pith nu nihardi gaur na usdey  uchey lambey bharwey  jism wal vekhn lgi.. sohna ucha lamba kad niklya a jeetu da .. 3/4 salan ch pura gabru jwan ho gya... majboot modey fulley hoye wahan dey dolley .. chauri tagri pith   ... kini der khadi nihardi rahi ... 
 'Bas kar hor kinnia ku chuzzan marnia sheeshey nu'  .. kol aa apney dhiyan ch rujey sheeshey wal vekhdey jeetu nu cherdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  kapdey paa lay thand lag jayougi ...'
 'Ohhh o o bhabhi ...' gal na suji jeetu nu ki boley manjey tey pya kurta chukda bolea'  cha ban gyi ..'
'Haan'  jeetu di nangi hik wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  mein tan kado di lay k khadi c par jnab tan sheeshey mohrey ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' galley ch kurta fsa panda hoyea jeetu apni jhep mitan di kosis karda bolea 
 'Tera kasoor nyi'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jwani ch sarey  mundeya da ehi haal hunda'  aahh lay fad cha pee' 
 'Ruko jra ... ' apney galley ch fsey kurtey nu thalley karda muskuranda jhepda jeetu hassan di kosis karda bolea..
Cha dey gilass dona hathan ch fdi kuch na boli preet akhan tikayi jeetu di nangi  chauri majboot hik wal muskurandi hoyi vekhn lgi .. apney aap e usdi njar haithan nu jeetu dey pattan wal fislan lgi ..pajamey andar shant lun da njar anda ubaar vekh bull tukdi ek baar tan sochan ch pay gyi preet .. sahi e das rahi c jaspreet .. andaza landi akhan nal napn si kosis kardi nu jaspreet di gal sahi lagan lgi ... chahey shant c par fer b andaza lana aukha nayi c preet lyi kinna ku wada mota tey lumba kala sap hoyouga jeetu da ..  
 'Deo chah ..' jeetu di awaz sun ek dum apnia njran usdey pattan ton hta usdean akhn ch vekhdi preet boli'  sweater tan pa lay ...'
 'Koi na paa layounga bhabhi'  preet dey hathon cha da gilass fad ghut bharda hoyea jeetu bolea'  bibi kiney bjay gyi ..'
'Dopherey.' majey tey beithdi hoyi preet boli' tun tan bhul e gya    aj bibi ney jana jaldi ghar aa jawan ..par pta nayi tera dhiyan kithey rehnda. .'
' chetey nyi riha aj jana c unha ney  ..' preet kol e manjey tey beithda jeetu kuch sochda hoyea bolea'  fer tan aj asin ghar ch ekeley ...'
 'Haan kyoun ..' ek baar tan dil dharak uthea preet da jeetu di gal sun ..
 'mera matlab aj tan sarey kam  tuhanu e karney painey ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
 'Muka lye sarey kam ..' dhar kad lyi .. dangra nu pathey pa andar b kar dita  .'Hasdi hoyi preet boli'  hun tan bas roti took da reh gya das devin jad khani hovegi ...'
 'Ajay nyi khani'  cha da khali gilass ek passey rakh manjey ton uth sweater chuk panda jeetu bolea  'acha bhabhi mein huney aya ...'
' hun kithey challea .. eni thand ch ' jeetu nu bahar janda vekh preet boli ..' hanera ho gya' 
 'Bas thori der ch aya bhabhi ..' kahli kahli ch kamrey ton bahar niklda jeetu bolea ..' jra kam a kisi naal...'



 'Thand  vohat a ...aa ja rajayi ch beih ja ..' majney tey beithi preet mungfali chabdi jeetu nu kamrey ch aya vekh chaukri mar beith rajaayi nal apney goddey dhakdi  boli
 'Sahi keh rahey o bhabhi aj tan sachin thand jyada a ..dhund  pay rahi a bahr ..' preet wal vekhda thand nal kambda jeetu bolea
 'Hor ki ajay 6 e  bjey ney enj lagda jiven adi raat ho gyi hovey ...mein tan jaldi jaldi kam mukaye ..thand naal bura hall c ... aaa ja rajayi ch beith. .' manjey tey ek passey hundi preet jeetu lyi jagah bnandi boli
 'Es baar lagda thand jyada payo gi'  manjey tey  preet samney chaukri maar beithda jeetu   rajayi naal  apney goddey dhakda bolea
 'Aah lay mungfli kha ... ' gud di dheli tey mungfali nal bhari hoyi thalli rajayi utey rakh  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sehar di mungfali da swad e vakhra hunda' ..
' meinu tan chetey e bhul gya c tusi mungfali mangwayi ..o tan jad chetey aya pehlan mungfali liti fer baki smaan' mungfali da chilka lah giri kad chabda hasda hoyea jeetu bolea 'shukar a chetey aa gya nyi tan dobara sehr jana paina c ..'
 'Hye sachin'  chehkdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli
 'hor ki bhabhi pehli baar tusi koi cheez mangwayi c ...' gud di dheli chuk dandi wad hasda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  lya k tan deni paini c ...'
 'Acha ji .. ' preet b hasdi hoyi boli'  eh tan das aj eni der kidan ho gyi sehar ch ...tun tan kehnda c jaldi mud aana aj ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' thalli vichon mungfali chukda  jeetu bolea'  yaaran dostan nal sehar ghuman firan chalea gya ..'
 'Yaaran dostan nal k rupi nal ..'mungfali chabdi preet gaur nal jeetu wal vekh usnu cherdi boli..
' tuhanu kidan .. mera matlab tuhanu kis ney dasea'  jhepda hoyea jeetu bolea
' gya c rupi naal'  muskurandi chehkdi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli...
'Haan'  ena keh edar udar vekhda jeetu bolea'  rastey ch unha dey pind utar gye ..kehndi sada pind vekh lay'
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 'Oye hoye munda sohrey pind ja k aya'  chehkdi chulbali hassi hasdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli 
 'Nyi nyi'  ek dum bolea jeetu'  ghar nyi gya usdey' 
 'Naley apey keha rupi dey pind gya c'  dhiyan nal jeetu nu vekhdi  boli preet
 'Haan par unha dey ghar nayi' .. 'Teshan ton thori e dur unha dey khet ney   nal e   unha da amba da baag c'  kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye saheli nal amban dey baag ch  ' akhan matka bharwatey chuk preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b..' preet di gal sun sharma e gya jeetu

 'Kyoun.kyoun ki mein b  ' jeetu nu cherdi preet dey munh vichon 
Pta nyi kidan nikl gya ...' fer chuppey preet dey bag dey amb..'
 'Nyi bhabhi ..Aj kal kehra ambn da mausam '  preet wal vekh  jeetu bolea..
 'Oh haan sach ..' gal sambln di kosis kardi preet boli shukar c jeetu usdi tichar nayi samjeya
 'Vohat wda amban da bag a unha da ...' mungfali kha gud di dheli nu dandi wad da jeetu bolea
 'Acha ..' jidan jeetu masoom jeha ban das riha c na rok saki preet apney aap nu fer usnu cherdi boli'  sara baag dikhaya rupi ney
 'Haan bhabhi .. ' mein tan thak e gya  
Baag ch turdey turdey ...' sehaj swah ch gal karda jeetu bolea
 'Beh jana c kitey'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  ' hor kon c naal ..'
 'Koi nyi bas  asin dono'   mungfali chuk khanda jeetu bolea 
 'Hye sachin ...tusi dono baag ch  ekeley.'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet muskurandi hoyi usnu cherdi boli' fer tan ..'
 'Edan da kuch nyi bhabhi'  boldey boldey shrma gya jeetu munh usda lal hon lga 
 'Fer kidan da kuch'  akhan matkandi jeetu nu sharm nal lal hunda vekh preet usnu hor cherdi boli'  jaffi juffi tan payi honi saheli nu ..'
 'Nayi bhabhi mein nyi'  ach khachanda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi ney payi c ..'
 'Hye sachin matlab tun sharmanda reh gya tey jaffi b  rupi ney aap..' jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  meri deorani tan bdi tez nikli ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharma k mungfali chabda edar udar vekhn lga...
 'Usney jaffi payi tun kuch nyi ..' gaur nal jeetu da chehra pdan di kosis kardi preet usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli 
 'mein ki ..' haklanda sharmanda ena bol chup e kar gya jeetu ..
 'Budu a tun b ..' hasdi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli'  kudi ney aap tenu jaffi payi tey tere kolon baag ch kuch b nyi ...'
 'Edan thori bhabhi j koi aa janda uthey fer ..' ek dum bolea jeetu 
 'Hye meria rabba tun tan kudi nalo b jyada darda'  jeetu wal vekh hasdi  hoyi preet boli'  tere kolon tan kudi nu jaffi b nyi pyi o b bechari nu aap pani pyi ...tun hor ki...' boldi boldi ruk gyi preet
Kuch na bolea jeetu mungfali khanda edar udar kamrey ch vekhn lga..
 'Lassi karwa diti tun tan jeetu'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  ki sochdi hoyougi rupi ...  kinna budu a jeetu' 
 'Nyi bhabhi ena b budu nyi ..' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu ......
 'Rehn dey rehn dey pta menu'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet fer usnu cherdi boli
 'Oh tan bas jijhak riha c .. mein'  kuch soch preet ton akhn churanda jeetu holi jehi bolea'  fer tan rupi e mintan kardi c na kar jeetu koi aa jayouga ..'

 'Ki keha ..' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea .sun tan lya c preet ney ki keha jeetu ney fer b swad lendi hassdi hoyi boli'  ki keha tun ..'
 'Kuch nyi'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi nu puch layeo mein  budu haan k nyi ..'
 'Oh ho acha ji'  muskurandi hoyi preet  jeetu nu cherdi boli' matlab kanto fulln tey lay e ayea sada jeetu ...'ena bol uchi uchi hassan lgi preet .....
' katto tan aap ayi c fullan tey..' halka halka sharma k hasda hoyea jeetu bolea..
 'Oh ho ..' jeetu dey munh ton eh sun hasdi hoyi preet b swad lendi boli'  fer tan palosi honi kanto ...'
 'Palosni paini c ..' jhijhak mitta khulda hoyea jeetu bolea'  hun j rupi aap...'
 'Oye hoye'  akhan matkandi preet dey munh ton bina sochey samjey nikl gya'  ki ki kita fer ..'
'pehlan tan aap jaffi paa menu tichar krn lgi gallan e andia k kuch hor..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali khanda jeetu boleea'  jad mein jaffi paan lga fer agey agey bhjan lgi ...'
'Fer'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet usda chehra pdan di kosis kardi boli
 'Fer ki amb dey buttey pichey  fad  k ghut k jaffi pa lyi udon kehndi chad dey jeetu koi aa jayo ..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali chabda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ho fer ..' ajay b yakeen nyi  c preet nu k jeetu sach bol riha
 'Fer ki hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  mud k nyi tichar karugi menu .... har baar 
 kehndi hundi c bas gallan e krnia andia k ..'
 'Hye sachin bdi chakmi saheli a teri Fer tan ....dasna c gallan e nyi hor kuch b anda ..' jeetu di gal sun akhan matkandi preet boli
 'Lag gya pta usnu Fer tan kahey na kar na kar..' sharmanda muskuranda jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye ki na kar...' jeetu nu cherdi preet boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b ...' akhan churanda jeetu edar udar vekhda bolea
 'Ki mein...' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  baag ch mundey nu kudi aap  lay k gyi ... fer kahdi na kar na kar .. mundey ney tan hath ayi patola saheli napni e c ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharmanda muskuranda hoyea edar udar vekhn lga .. bhabhi eni khul k tichar karugi umeed nyi c usnu ..
 'Nap lyi fer ..' muskurandi mungfali chabdi preet jeetu wal vekh hasdi akhn matkandi boli
 'Haan ...' achkhachnda muskuranda haklanda hoyea jeetu ena bol preet dey hathon mungfali dean kadiyean giria chuk chabda bolea
 'Oye hoye sachin ..'  apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu nu vekhdi preet nu yakeen nyi hoyea jo usney jeetu dey munh ton sunea sach a k jooth ..'
 'Hor ki bhabhi ..' gud di dheli nu dandi wad khanda jeetu bolea ..'   jad ghut k jaffi pyi ghabrandi hoyi boli'  hye eni jaan jeetu ... '
'Fer'  jeetu dey gatheeley jism nu nihardi preet boli
 'Fer ki bhabhi .. lag gya pta usnu gallan e nyi  hor b kuch anda menu..' muskuranda nimma nimma hasda jeetu bolea
 'Sachin.. 'chehkdi hoyi preet boli'  waisey hor ki anda .
 'Sab kuch . Muskuranda sharmanda jeetu bolea'  koi hor gall karo bhabhi menu dasdey nu sang lagdi a ..
 'Acha ji uchi uchi uasdi hoyi preet boli'  jad saheli nu jaffi payi udon nyi sang lgi ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  das na hor ki ki ..'
 'Tin char chumia littia usdean fer chadeya  na na kari javey'  sharmanda jijhakda bol e pya jeetu
Ohhh  ...  ' jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli'  bas chumia e littia hor kuch nyi..'
Nyi ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' Munh vekhn wala c usda dari hoyi ghabrayi hoyi  mintan krn lgi jan  dey jeetu menu koi vekh layouga .
'
 'Tun jan ditta..' jeetu di gal bdey dhiyan nal sundi preet boli 
'Haan'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  mintan krn lag pyi c ..'
 'Jhalla e a tun ena ku tan nakhra kardi e a kudi naley app lay k gyi  tenu apney baag ch nap  leni c'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Npi tan c bhabhi ghut k jaffi pyi c' kamrey ch edar udar vekhda sharmanda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Oh ho gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet usnu cherdi boli'  hor kuch nyi kita'  
 'Nyi kehndi hanera ho riha chal hun waps chalea ..'  nimma nimma hasda sharmanda jeetu bolea
 'Oh tey waps aa gye tusi'  thori hairaan ho gaur nal jeetu nu nihardi preet boli 
 'Haan ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu gal badlda bolea'  kal vekhea na tusi ..kidan jaapreet bhabhi nal....

[Harbi]

Duja viah story tusi hun tak xossip tey padi .. preet da apney deor jeetu nal viah ho janda tey o waps apney sohrey ghar aa jandi sare ghar ch raunkaan mud waps aa jandia .. bas kmi c tey eh k jeetu ajay b preet nu bhabhi smj ijjat maan dinda .. tey preet b usnu apna gharwala na smj deor smj e khushi khushi us ghar ch rehn lgi ethey tak story tusi xossip ch padi .. usdey close hon ton baad mein eh story agey continue krn lgi haan umeed a holi holi punjabi section dey sarey readers es site tey aa jangey ... 
So mere valuable readers story da agla part .....


3rd update

Thand da mausam uton asmaan ch badl sham velley e enj lag eiha   c jiven rat pay gyi hovey ... pura vehrda dhund nal bhar gya ..dangar wadey da kam muka preet chaunkey ch beithi dudh ubaldi chulley dey sek nal apney hathan nu sekdi bar bar buhey wal vekh ehi soch di aj jeetu ajay tak nyi sehron mudeya  agey tan mud anda c ...es velley tak... keh k b nyi gya c der nal ayounga ... fer kithey reh gya .. dopehr dey bibi bapu ji b massi di khair khabr lain  wandey challey gye c 
Kayi dina di keh rahi c bibi bapuji nu  apni bhain kol  jaan lyi ..ageyo kuch din college ch jeetu nu b   chuttia c ...ehi soch dopehrey  bibi   apni bhain  nu milan  bapiji naal wandey tur gyi ... ..
 'Eh munda aa janda'  chulley ch lakr pa agg da sek wadhandi preet burburayi'  roti tuk da kam muka aram nal kamrey ch beithdi ethey tan thand e vohat a .. '
 'Shukr a aa gya'  cycle lay andar andey jeetu nu vekh sakoon da sah lendi preet burburayi ...
 'Ah layo bhabhi tuhada smaan'  cycle ton thailla lah chaunkey ch   preet kol aa khada hunda jeetu  bolea
 'Oh tan theek a ..'  jeetu ton thaila fad preet us wal vekhdi boli'  aj eni der kyoun la diti .. mausam vekh kinna khrab a ..'
 'O bhabhi tesan tey gaddi late c ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  bibi kithey a ..'
 'Dasea tan c tenu bibi ney aj wandey jana'  sar chuk jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Oh mein bhul e gya'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay mein roti tuk da ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  puria wahan da sweater pa lavin thand vohat a ..'
 'Nyi roti nyi khani ajay bhukh nyi ...' kamrey wal janda jeetu bolea'  halley time b ena nyi hoyea bdl tey dhund kaarn hanera lag riha ..'
 'Chal theek a jad khani hoyougi das devin'  chulley uton ubldey dudh da patila chuk ek passey rakhdi preet boli
' cha bna layo bhabhi ..' bda chit karda ..'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  thand vohat a' 
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay ....uni der mein cha banadi haan ..' thand ch preet da apna chit kar riha c cha peen da...  patili chuk chulley tey rakhdi kamrey wal jandey jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sweater jarur pa lawin....'
'Layo ji gram gram cha peo'  cha dey dono gilas hath ch fdi preet eh kehndi hoyi kamrey andar aan e lgi c k dehleej tey e ruk gyi... andar jeetu nu sheeshey mohrey khad apney wall swarda vekh hassa e nikl aya usda ..
Pith c us wal .. shyad kapdey badlda badlda sheeshey ch apney aap nu vekhn ch ena ulj gya k kurta paan da dhiyan b nayi riha ..eni thand ch b upron nanga ..thand nyi lgdi es mundey nu.. kuch sochdi hoyi preet kehn e lgi c thand lag jayougi kuch pa lay mundeya par keh na saki ..buhey tey khadi khadi usdi nangi pith nu nihardi gaur na usdey  uchey lambey bharwey  jism wal vekhn lgi.. sohna ucha lamba kad niklya a jeetu da .. 3/4 salan ch pura gabru jwan ho gya... majboot modey fulley hoye wahan dey dolley .. chauri tagri pith   ... kini der khadi nihardi rahi ... 
 'Bas kar hor kinnia ku chuzzan marnia sheeshey nu'  .. kol aa apney dhiyan ch rujey sheeshey wal vekhdey jeetu nu cherdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  kapdey paa lay thand lag jayougi ...'
 'Ohhh o o bhabhi ...' gal na suji jeetu nu ki boley manjey tey pya kurta chukda bolea'  cha ban gyi ..'
'Haan'  jeetu di nangi hik wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  mein tan kado di lay k khadi c par jnab tan sheeshey mohrey ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' galley ch kurta fsa panda hoyea jeetu apni jhep mitan di kosis karda bolea 
 'Tera kasoor nyi'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jwani ch sarey  mundeya da ehi haal hunda'  aahh lay fad cha pee' 
 'Ruko jra ... ' apney galley ch fsey kurtey nu thalley karda muskuranda jhepda jeetu hassan di kosis karda bolea..
Cha dey gilass dona hathan ch fdi kuch na boli preet akhan tikayi jeetu di nangi  chauri majboot hik wal muskurandi hoyi vekhn lgi .. apney aap e usdi njar haithan nu jeetu dey pattan wal fislan lgi ..pajamey andar shant lun da njar anda ubaar vekh bull tukdi ek baar tan sochan ch pay gyi preet .. sahi e das rahi c jaspreet .. andaza landi akhan nal napn si kosis kardi nu jaspreet di gal sahi lagan lgi ... chahey shant c par fer b andaza lana aukha nayi c preet lyi kinna ku wada mota tey lumba kala sap hoyouga jeetu da ..  
 'Deo chah ..' jeetu di awaz sun ek dum apnia njran usdey pattan ton hta usdean akhn ch vekhdi preet boli'  sweater tan pa lay ...'
 'Koi na paa layounga bhabhi'  preet dey hathon cha da gilass fad ghut bharda hoyea jeetu bolea'  bibi kiney bjay gyi ..'
'Dopherey.' majey tey beithdi hoyi preet boli' tun tan bhul e gya    aj bibi ney jana jaldi ghar aa jawan ..par pta nayi tera dhiyan kithey rehnda. .'
' chetey nyi riha aj jana c unha ney  ..' preet kol e manjey tey beithda jeetu kuch sochda hoyea bolea'  fer tan aj asin ghar ch ekeley ...'
 'Haan kyoun ..' ek baar tan dil dharak uthea preet da jeetu di gal sun ..
 'mera matlab aj tan sarey kam  tuhanu e karney painey ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
 'Muka lye sarey kam ..' dhar kad lyi .. dangra nu pathey pa andar b kar dita  .'Hasdi hoyi preet boli'  hun tan bas roti took da reh gya das devin jad khani hovegi ...'
 'Ajay nyi khani'  cha da khali gilass ek passey rakh manjey ton uth sweater chuk panda jeetu bolea  'acha bhabhi mein huney aya ...'
' hun kithey challea .. eni thand ch ' jeetu nu bahar janda vekh preet boli ..' hanera ho gya' 
 'Bas thori der ch aya bhabhi ..' kahli kahli ch kamrey ton bahar niklda jeetu bolea ..' jra kam a kisi naal...'



 'Thand  vohat a ...aa ja rajayi ch beih ja ..' majney tey beithi preet mungfali chabdi jeetu nu kamrey ch aya vekh chaukri mar beith rajaayi nal apney goddey dhakdi  boli
 'Sahi keh rahey o bhabhi aj tan sachin thand jyada a ..dhund  pay rahi a bahr ..' preet wal vekhda thand nal kambda jeetu bolea
 'Hor ki ajay 6 e  bjey ney enj lagda jiven adi raat ho gyi hovey ...mein tan jaldi jaldi kam mukaye ..thand naal bura hall c ... aaa ja rajayi ch beith. .' manjey tey ek passey hundi preet jeetu lyi jagah bnandi boli
 'Es baar lagda thand jyada payo gi'  manjey tey  preet samney chaukri maar beithda jeetu   rajayi naal  apney goddey dhakda bolea
 'Aah lay mungfli kha ... ' gud di dheli tey mungfali nal bhari hoyi thalli rajayi utey rakh  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sehar di mungfali da swad e vakhra hunda' ..
' meinu tan chetey e bhul gya c tusi mungfali mangwayi ..o tan jad chetey aya pehlan mungfali liti fer baki smaan' mungfali da chilka lah giri kad chabda hasda hoyea jeetu bolea 'shukar a chetey aa gya nyi tan dobara sehr jana paina c ..'
 'Hye sachin'  chehkdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli
 'hor ki bhabhi pehli baar tusi koi cheez mangwayi c ...' gud di dheli chuk dandi wad hasda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  lya k tan deni paini c ...'
 'Acha ji .. ' preet b hasdi hoyi boli'  eh tan das aj eni der kidan ho gyi sehar ch ...tun tan kehnda c jaldi mud aana aj ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' thalli vichon mungfali chukda  jeetu bolea'  yaaran dostan nal sehar ghuman firan chalea gya ..'
 'Yaaran dostan nal k rupi nal ..'mungfali chabdi preet gaur nal jeetu wal vekh usnu cherdi boli..
' tuhanu kidan .. mera matlab tuhanu kis ney dasea'  jhepda hoyea jeetu bolea
' gya c rupi naal'  muskurandi chehkdi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli...
'Haan'  ena keh edar udar vekhda jeetu bolea'  rastey ch unha dey pind utar gye ..kehndi sada pind vekh lay'
.'
 'Oye hoye munda sohrey pind ja k aya'  chehkdi chulbali hassi hasdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli 
 'Nyi nyi'  ek dum bolea jeetu'  ghar nyi gya usdey' 
 'Naley apey keha rupi dey pind gya c'  dhiyan nal jeetu nu vekhdi  boli preet
 'Haan par unha dey ghar nayi' .. 'Teshan ton thori e dur unha dey khet ney   nal e   unha da amba da baag c'  kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye saheli nal amban dey baag ch  ' akhan matka bharwatey chuk preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b..' preet di gal sun sharma e gya jeetu

 'Kyoun.kyoun ki mein b  ' jeetu nu cherdi preet dey munh vichon 
Pta nyi kidan nikl gya ...' fer chuppey preet dey bag dey amb..'
 'Nyi bhabhi ..Aj kal kehra ambn da mausam '  preet wal vekh  jeetu bolea..
 'Oh haan sach ..' gal sambln di kosis kardi preet boli shukar c jeetu usdi tichar nayi samjeya
 'Vohat wda amban da bag a unha da ...' mungfali kha gud di dheli nu dandi wad da jeetu bolea
 'Acha ..' jidan jeetu masoom jeha ban das riha c na rok saki preet apney aap nu fer usnu cherdi boli'  sara baag dikhaya rupi ney
 'Haan bhabhi .. ' mein tan thak e gya  
Baag ch turdey turdey ...' sehaj swah ch gal karda jeetu bolea
 'Beh jana c kitey'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  ' hor kon c naal ..'
 'Koi nyi bas  asin dono'   mungfali chuk khanda jeetu bolea 
 'Hye sachin ...tusi dono baag ch  ekeley.'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet muskurandi hoyi usnu cherdi boli' fer tan ..'
 'Edan da kuch nyi bhabhi'  boldey boldey shrma gya jeetu munh usda lal hon lga 
 'Fer kidan da kuch'  akhan matkandi jeetu nu sharm nal lal hunda vekh preet usnu hor cherdi boli'  jaffi juffi tan payi honi saheli nu ..'
 'Nayi bhabhi mein nyi'  ach khachanda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi ney payi c ..'
 'Hye sachin matlab tun sharmanda reh gya tey jaffi b  rupi ney aap..' jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  meri deorani tan bdi tez nikli ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharma k mungfali chabda edar udar vekhn lga...
 'Usney jaffi payi tun kuch nyi ..' gaur nal jeetu da chehra pdan di kosis kardi preet usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli 
 'mein ki ..' haklanda sharmanda ena bol chup e kar gya jeetu ..
 'Budu a tun b ..' hasdi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli'  kudi ney aap tenu jaffi payi tey tere kolon baag ch kuch b nyi ...'
 'Edan thori bhabhi j koi aa janda uthey fer ..' ek dum bolea jeetu 
 'Hye meria rabba tun tan kudi nalo b jyada darda'  jeetu wal vekh hasdi  hoyi preet boli'  tere kolon tan kudi nu jaffi b nyi pyi o b bechari nu aap pani pyi ...tun hor ki...' boldi boldi ruk gyi preet
Kuch na bolea jeetu mungfali khanda edar udar kamrey ch vekhn lga..
 'Lassi karwa diti tun tan jeetu'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  ki sochdi hoyougi rupi ...  kinna budu a jeetu' 
 'Nyi bhabhi ena b budu nyi ..' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu ......
 'Rehn dey rehn dey pta menu'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet fer usnu cherdi boli
 'Oh tan bas jijhak riha c .. mein'  kuch soch preet ton akhn churanda jeetu holi jehi bolea'  fer tan rupi e mintan kardi c na kar jeetu koi aa jayouga ..'

 'Ki keha ..' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea .sun tan lya c preet ney ki keha jeetu ney fer b swad lendi hassdi hoyi boli'  ki keha tun ..'
 'Kuch nyi'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi nu puch layeo mein  budu haan k nyi ..'
 'Oh ho acha ji'  muskurandi hoyi preet  jeetu nu cherdi boli' matlab kanto fulln tey lay e ayea sada jeetu ...'ena bol uchi uchi hassan lgi preet .....
' katto tan aap ayi c fullan tey..' halka halka sharma k hasda hoyea jeetu bolea..
 'Oh ho ..' jeetu dey munh ton eh sun hasdi hoyi preet b swad lendi boli'  fer tan palosi honi kanto ...'
 'Palosni paini c ..' jhijhak mitta khulda hoyea jeetu bolea'  hun j rupi aap...'
 'Oye hoye'  akhan matkandi preet dey munh ton bina sochey samjey nikl gya'  ki ki kita fer ..'
'pehlan tan aap jaffi paa menu tichar krn lgi gallan e andia k kuch hor..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali khanda jeetu boleea'  jad mein jaffi paan lga fer agey agey bhjan lgi ...'
'Fer'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet usda chehra pdan di kosis kardi boli
 'Fer ki amb dey buttey pichey  fad  k ghut k jaffi pa lyi udon kehndi chad dey jeetu koi aa jayo ..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali chabda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ho fer ..' ajay b yakeen nyi  c preet nu k jeetu sach bol riha
 'Fer ki hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  mud k nyi tichar karugi menu .... har baar 
 kehndi hundi c bas gallan e krnia andia k ..'
 'Hye sachin bdi chakmi saheli a teri Fer tan ....dasna c gallan e nyi hor kuch b anda ..' jeetu di gal sun akhan matkandi preet boli
 'Lag gya pta usnu Fer tan kahey na kar na kar..' sharmanda muskuranda jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye ki na kar...' jeetu nu cherdi preet boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b ...' akhan churanda jeetu edar udar vekhda bolea
 'Ki mein...' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  baag ch mundey nu kudi aap  lay k gyi ... fer kahdi na kar na kar .. mundey ney tan hath ayi patola saheli napni e c ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharmanda muskuranda hoyea edar udar vekhn lga .. bhabhi eni khul k tichar karugi umeed nyi c usnu ..
 'Nap lyi fer ..' muskurandi mungfali chabdi preet jeetu wal vekh hasdi akhn matkandi boli
 'Haan ...' achkhachnda muskuranda haklanda hoyea jeetu ena bol preet dey hathon mungfali dean kadiyean giria chuk chabda bolea
 'Oye hoye sachin ..'  apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu nu vekhdi preet nu yakeen nyi hoyea jo usney jeetu dey munh ton sunea sach a k jooth ..'
 'Hor ki bhabhi ..' gud di dheli nu dandi wad khanda jeetu bolea ..'   jad ghut k jaffi pyi ghabrandi hoyi boli'  hye eni jaan jeetu ... '
'Fer'  jeetu dey gatheeley jism nu nihardi preet boli
 'Fer ki bhabhi .. lag gya pta usnu gallan e nyi  hor b kuch anda menu..' muskuranda nimma nimma hasda jeetu bolea
 'Sachin.. 'chehkdi hoyi preet boli'  waisey hor ki anda .
 'Sab kuch . Muskuranda sharmanda jeetu bolea'  koi hor gall karo bhabhi menu dasdey nu sang lagdi a ..
 'Acha ji uchi uchi uasdi hoyi preet boli'  jad saheli nu jaffi payi udon nyi sang lgi ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  das na hor ki ki ..'
 'Tin char chumia littia usdean fer chadeya  na na kari javey'  sharmanda jijhakda bol e pya jeetu
Ohhh  ...  ' jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli'  bas chumia e littia hor kuch nyi..'
Nyi ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' Munh vekhn wala c usda dari hoyi ghabrayi hoyi  mintan krn lgi jan  dey jeetu menu koi vekh layouga .
'
 'Tun jan ditta..' jeetu di gal bdey dhiyan nal sundi preet boli 
'Haan'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  mintan krn lag pyi c ..'
 'Jhalla e a tun ena ku tan nakhra kardi e a kudi naley app lay k gyi  tenu apney baag ch nap  leni c'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Npi tan c bhabhi ghut k jaffi pyi c' kamrey ch edar udar vekhda sharmanda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Oh ho gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet usnu cherdi boli'  hor kuch nyi kita'  
 'Nyi kehndi hanera ho riha chal hun waps chalea ..'  nimma nimma hasda sharmanda jeetu bolea
 'Oh tey waps aa gye tusi'  thori hairaan ho gaur nal jeetu nu nihardi preet boli 
 'Haan ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu gal badlda bolea'  kal vekhea na tusi ..kidan jaapreet bhabhi nal....

Hlo kavi ji. Main tuade writing skills da fan han. Main tuadi story rishtean di chanv v read kr reha c xossip te but xossip bnd ho kaaran puri nhi pad skya. Kindly suggest me ke main puri story kithe te kiwe pad skda. Jdo deepu te seerat bahr chle jande aa te deepu jaspreet nu thoda othe tk read kiti. Meri hi nhi hor v bot sare readers di eh desire aa ke eh puri read kriye.