[Veer]

Ekdum faadu aur masaladar update

[Mafiadon]

Absolutely wonderful and beautiful update ❤️

[Wasifahim]

Wonderful update

[wetpussy]

ashadaran writings

[srider69]

Somehow seems a repeat but good. Pl continue

[doctor ali b]

bohat awsome gajab ho gaya

[Mehtab_]

CHAPTER 8



Jab bedroom ka darwaza khula aur woh lilac saree mein wahan khadi thin, haath pehle se hi chehre ki taraf uthte hue, Uncle shocked nahi dikhe. Unhone peeli panty nahi giraayi, peeche nahi hate, na hi jo kar rahe the use chhupane ki koshish ki. 


Bajaaye iske unke muh par ek dheemi, santusht muskaan fail gayi. Unhone satin kapda apni naak se sataaye rakha aur saans lete rahe, is baar aur gehri, aankhein kapde ke oopar unki aankhon se atki hui. 

Muskaan rahi chahe unki ungliyan unke honthon ko dhak rahi thin. Unhone ek baar aur jaan-bujhkar saans li, unhe har second dekhne diya, pehle ki aakhir mein panty neeche karein aur shaant, lagbhag komal awaaz mein bole. 

“Yeh tumhari mahak le rahi hain.” 

Unhone ek chhoti ghutan si awaaz ki, mudi, aur itni jaldi kamre se nikalin ki saree ka pallu unke peeche ghisatta raha. 



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Woh thodi der aur wahan khade rahe, abhi bhi muskurate, abhi bhi peela kapda pakde, pehle ki shaanti se doosri panty uthayein aur unki khushbu lete rahein. Lagbhag 7 panty thin aur unhone ek-ek karke sabki mahak li. 

Us raat ghar alag mehsoos hua. Uncle Vivek ke jaane ke baad, Mummy kamron mein aise ghoomi jaise koi sapne mein chal raha ho. Unhone wahi plate do baar dhoya. 

Woh khule refrigerator ke saamne lambi der khadi rahi bina kuch nikale. Jab maine poocha kya chai chahiye to haan kaha, phir bhool gayin ki unhone maangi thi. 

Main apne kamre ke darwaze se unhe dekh raha tha jab woh kitchen mein paani pee rahi thin. Unke vichar saaf kahin aur the. Mujhe pata tha unmein kya bhara hai: Uncle ka chehra unki gandi panty mein dooba hua, unke chehre par khuli maza, yeh baat ki unhe sharm nahi aayi. 








Woh apne blouse ke neckline ko chhuti rahi jaise kapda achanak bahut tight lag raha ho. Ek baar woh apne bed ke kinare baithin aur band almari ko ghoor rahi thin jahan unke baaki underthings rakhe the. 

Woh jaldi nahi soyin. Roshni band hone ke bahut baad main unhe ek taraf se doosri taraf karwat lete sun sakta tha. Main unke bedroom mein dekh raha tha, woh ghumti-ghumti rahi, kuch saaf unhe tang kar raha tha. 

Woh nahi so pa rahi thin kyunki woh Uncle Vivek ke unki panty ki khushbu lene ke baare mein soch rahi thin. 



Kuch din baad dopahar ki garmi bhaari thi. Mummy bahar kapde clip kar rahi thin. Main gate ke paas neeche diwar par baitha tha, mobile scroll karte hue, jab maine andar se Uncle ki awaaz suni. 

“Shobha-ji, kya aap ek saaf towel la sakti hain? Yeh bilkul geela ho gaya hai.” 

Woh hamare bathroom ka istemaal kar rahe the. Mummy ne ijazat di thi kyunki unke ghar ki plumbing us din theek ki ja rahi thi. Main jahan tha wahi raha, sunte hue. Naram kadam corridor se guzre. 

Mummy: Vivek ji… main towel le aayi. Darwaze ke paas chhod rahi hoon. 

Uncle: (andar se, paani abhi chal raha) Shobha ji, yahan se nahi pahunch sakta. Rack bahut door hai. Bas thoda andar aakar mujhe de dijiye. 

Mummy: (bahar khadi, awaaz savdhaan) Theek hai, main handle par rakh deti hoon. Darwaza kholte waqt le lijiye. 

Uncle: Farsh geela hai. Agar main aise bahar nikla to fisal jaunga. Please, bas do kadam andar. Main parda ke peeche hoon. 

(Woh darwaze ke threshold par kuch second ruki. Main corridor se dekh sakta tha unhe yeh pasand nahi aa raha. Unke kandhe sakht the, awaaz pehle se hi chhoti.) 

Mummy: Andar dhundhla hai… mujhe nahi lagta mujhe aana chahiye. 

Uncle: Exhaust aaj theek se nahi chal raha. Bas andar aao, towel do, aur chali jaao. Main nahi dekhunga. 








Mummy: …Theek hai. To aankhein band rakhna. 

(Woh andar kadam rakhti hain. Moti bhaap chhote bathroom ko bhar deti hai. Woh apni aankhein neeche, lagbhag band rakhti hain, aur fold kiya hua towel aage badhati hain.) 

Uncle: Thoda aur kareeb, Shobha ji. Abhi bhi nahi pahunch raha. 

Mummy: Main pehle se andar hoon. Please le lijiye. 

Uncle: Mera haath geela hai. Bas ek aur kadam aao taaki floor par na gire. 

(Woh himmat se aage badhti hain. Main unki awaaz mein sun sakta tha—woh jaise hi andar aayi nikalna chahti thin. Unki posture se sab kuch bechaini bata raha tha.) 

Mummy: Yeh lo… jaldi le lo. 

Uncle: Shukriya— 

(Unki ungliyan towel ki jagah unki kalai ke aas-paas band ho jaati hain. Ek smooth kheench mein woh unhe aur andar kheench lete hain, aadhe khule parda ke paar. Towel geele farsh par gir jaata hai.) 

Mummy: Vivek ji—! 

(Unki aankhein shock se khul jaati hain. Teen-char saaf second ke liye woh unhe seedha dekh rahi thin. Woh poori tarah nange the, paani abhi bhi unki chhati aur pet se beh raha tha. Unka lund bhaari, mota, aur aadha sakht, bhaap ke beech saaf latak raha tha.) 

Mummy: (awaaz toot-ti hui) Yeh— yeh aap kya— 

Uncle: (abhi bhi unki kalai halki pakde) Shobha ji, maaf kijiye— mujhe laga aapka haath towel hai. Dhundh bahut gehri hai, theek se nahi dikha. 

Mummy: Chhodiye— 

Uncle: Mera irada aapko kheenchne ka nahi tha. Haath ne bas jo saamne tha pakad liya. Yahan sab kuch safed hai. 

Mummy: (apni kalai chhudate hue, aankhein abhi bhi chaudi) Aap… aapko mujhe warning deni chahiye thi. 

Uncle: Maine kaha tha main parda ke peeche hoon. Sach mein nahi dikha. Bhaap soch se zyada thi. 

Mummy: Main… main sirf isliye aayi kyunki aapne kaha nahi pahunch pa rahe. 

Uncle: Aur main shukrguzar hoon. Sach mein. Main aapke ghar mein tipakta aur nanga nikalna nahi chahta tha. 

(Woh pehle se hi mud rahi thin, lagbhag thokar khate hue darwaze ki taraf. Unka chehra laal, saans asamaan. Unhone unhe saaf dekha—woh kuch second kaafi the.) 

Mummy: Mujhe maaf kijiye. Mujhe itna andar nahi aana chahiye tha. 

Uncle: Nahi, Shobha ji, maafi mujhe maangni chahiye. Dhundh, geela farsh… sab galat ho gaya. 

Mummy: Please bas… towel le lijiye. Main ja rahi hoon. 

(Woh jaldi bahar nikalti hain, darwaza zarurat se zyada jor se band karti hain. Unke kadam corridor se tez hote hain. Maine suna woh seedha apne kamre gayin, meri taraf dekhe bina.) 

Uncle: (dheere se, darwaze ke peeche se) Shobha ji… towel farsh par hai. Kya aap— 

Lekin woh pehle se chali gayi thin. 








Us din ke baaki hisse mein woh khud nahi thin. Unhone dal mein cheeni daal di. Chai taiyar hone ke baad gas chalu chhod di. Mere sawalon ka jawab aadhe dhyan se diya. 

Jab maine poocha kya kuch galat hai to kaha garmi se sir dard ho raha hai. Mujhe sach pata tha. Woh us mote, bhaari lambai ko dekh rahi thin jo unhone galti se dekha jab towel le kar bathroom mein gayi thin. 

Das inch, sakht, paani us par beh raha, nazar andaz karna namumkin. Woh ek nazaara unki aankhon ke peeche atak gaya tha aur chhodne se inkaar kar raha tha. 

Us shaam main unhe bedroom mein kapde fold karte paaya. Main darwaze ke frame se jhuk gaya. 








“Dopahar se aap chup hain,” maine kaha. 

“Bas thaki hui.” 

“Aapne pehle doodh mein namak daalne wala tha.” 

Unhone chhoti, majboori hanssi di. “Main kuch aur soch rahi thi.” 

“Kya?” 

“Kuch zaroori nahi. Ghar ka kaam. Tumhare Papa ke zameen ke kaagaz.” 

“Aap apni gardan chhute ja rahe hain jaise kuch tang kar raha ho.” 

Unhone turant haath gira diya. “Mausam hai. Bahut nami.” 

Maine khamoshi ko ek pal baithne diya. “Uncle bathroom mein bahut der rahe.” 

Unki ungliyan fold ho rahi saree par sakht ho gayin. “Paani ka pressure kam hai. Bas itna.” 

“Aap unhe towel le gayi thin.” 

“Unhone maanga tha.” 

“Aur phir aap aisi nikalin jaise bhoot dekh liya ho.” 

Woh muh pher kar almari kholi. “Tum soch rahe ho. Jao khao. Khana thanda ho raha hai.” 

Mujhe pata tha woh chhupa rahi thin. Unke kandhe kaise sakht rahe, mujhe muh dikhane se inkaar, awaaz mein savdhaan khali-pan—sab bata raha tha unke lund ki tasveer abhi bhi unki aankhon ke peeche chal rahi hai. 

Baad mein usi shaam main Uncle ke ghar gaya. Unhone darwaza pehle se muskurate hue khola, jaise mera intezar kar rahe hon. 

Main: Main seedha yahan aaya. Ghar par baith nahi pa raha tha. 

  

Uncle: (pehle se cigarette peete, ek bhaun upar) Tum bechain lag rahe ho. Kya hua? 

  

Main: Main sab sochta rehta hoon. Khaas kar bathroom. 

  

Uncle: (dheemi muskaan) To aakhir mein tum iske baare mein theek se baat karna chahte ho. 

  

Main: Tumne unhe dhoka diya, hai na? 

  

Uncle: Haan diya. Maine kaha towel nahi pahunch raha. Nirleh banaya. Mujhe pata tha woh hichkichayengi, mujhe pata tha agar sahi tarike se poochun to phir bhi andar aayengi. Main chahta tha woh dekhein, beta. Main chahta tha woh kuch second jahan unki aankhon ke paas koi chara na ho. 

  

Main: Main corridor mein tha. Maine poora dekha. 

  

Uncle: Tumne dekha woh aankhein lagbhag band karke andar aayi? 

  

Main: Haan. Aur maine dekha tumne unki kalai kheenchi. Maine unka chehra dekha jab unhone aankhein kholi. 

  

Uncle: Unka chehra kaisa tha? 

  

Main: Shock. Phir kuch aur jo woh dikhana nahi chahti thin. Unhone usko zarurat se zyada der dekha. 

  

Uncle: Accha. Yahi to maqsad tha. 

  

Main: Aur bhi hai. Mujhe pata hai unhone tumhe unki gandi panty ki khushbu lete dekha. 

  

(Uncle ek second ke liye ruk jaate hain, phir ek shaant hanssi nikalte hain.) 

  

Uncle: Kab? 

  

Main: Us dopahar jab tum unke bedroom mein the. Maine unhe jaan-bujhkar wahan bheja. Maine kaha almari se kuch gayab hai taaki woh andar aayein jab tum unhe chehre se sataaye hue the. 

  

Uncle: (ab mujhe ghoorte hue) Tumne yeh kiya? 

  

Main: Haan. 

  

Uncle: Tum chhote haramzade. Idhar aao. 

  

(Woh haath badha kar mera kandha pakadte hain, ek baar sakhti se dabate, lagbhag pyaar se.) 

  

Uncle: Main iske liye tumhe chum sakta hoon. Tumne sach mein setup kiya taaki woh mujhe pakad le. 

  

Main: Main chahta tha woh dekhein. Main chahta tha woh jaanein tum kya karte ho jab koi nahi dekh raha. 

  

Uncle: Aur unhone dekha? 

  

Main: Woh kuch second wahan khadi rahi. Tumne pehle notice bhi nahi kiya. Unhone dekha tumne kapda naak se sataya. Phir woh bina kuch kahe peeche hat gayin. 

  

Uncle: Yahi wajah hai ki uske baad se woh mere saath itni ajeeb hain. 

  

Main: Unka dimag theek se kaam nahi kar raha, Vivek. Bathroom ke baad se. Woh doodh jala deti hain, jumle ke beech mein bhool jaati hain kya keh rahi thin, pallu theek karti rehti hain chahe zarurat na ho. 

  

Uncle: Kyunki unhone mera lund dekha. Aur kyunki unhone mujhe us jagah ki khushbu lete dekha jahan unki chut din bhar baithti hai. 

  

Main: Haan. 

  

Uncle: Main unhe hafte se chodna chahta hoon. Holi ki raat se. Us pal se jab maine woh safed saree unke hips ke aas-paas hilte dekhi. Mainne tab kaha tha main unhe lunga. Mainne matlab kiya tha. 

  

Main: Mujhe koi dikkat nahi. 

  

Uncle: Phir se kaho. 

  

Main: Mujhe koi dikkat nahi agar tum meri Mummy ko chodo. Main iska intezar kar raha hoon. 

  

Uncle: Tum iske baare mein kitni der se soch rahe ho? 

  

Main: Har raat. Tumhare ghar se jaane ke baad main ghar jaata hoon, bed par leta hoon, aur apne aap ko sahlaata hoon soch kar tum unke oopar ho. Sochta hoon unki chuchiyaan kaisi dikhengi jab tum blouse neeche kheenchoge. Sochta hoon woh chup rehne ki koshish karengi jab tum andar dhakeloge. 

  

Uncle: Tum yeh kar rahe ho? 

  

Main: Holi ke baad se lagbhag har raat. Kabhi main nashta ki table sochta hoon. Kabhi bandage wali dopahar jab woh pet ke bal thin. Kabhi bathroom. Hamesha tum unhe chod rahe ho. 

  

Uncle: (awaaz neeche, moti) Aur tum abhi yahan baith kar yeh bata rahe ho. 

  

Main: Kyunki main chahta hoon yeh asal mein ho. 

  

Uncle: Aur kya kar rahi hain woh? 

  

Main: Jab tum nahi hote to woh tumhare baare mein poochti hain. Chhote sawal. “Vivek ji ne theek se khaya?” “Woh akele kyun rehte hain?” Phir chup ho jaati hain, jaise unhe ehsaas ho gaya bahut pooch liya. 

  

Uncle: Unki chut geeli ho rahi hai, beta. Main bina chhue bata sakta hoon. Koi aurat aadmi ka lund galti se nahi dekhti phir doodh jalati hai aur uske baare mein poochti hai jab tak unki taangon ke beech kuch na ho raha ho. 

  

Main: Tum sochte ho woh iske baare mein sochti hain to geeli hoti hain? 

  

Uncle: Mujhe pata hai. Unka shareer uske baad sukha nahi rehta jo unhone dekha. Bathroom se nikalte unka tarika, agli subah mujhe dekhne se inkaar… unki chut pehle se iske baare mein soch rahi thi chahe unka muh na bol raha ho. 

  

Main: Saaf kaho. 

  

Uncle: Unki chut mere liye geeli ho rahi hai. Yahi mera yakeen hai. Aur ab mujhe vaishyaayein nahi chahiye. Pehle unhe bulaata, paise deta, istemaal karta, bhej deta. Kuch der baad sab ek jaisi lagti hain. Tumhari Mummy nahi. Ab main sirf unhe hi chodna chahta hoon. Sirf unhe. 

  

Main: Papa abhi bhi unse shaadi-shuda hain. 

  

Uncle: Khaas kar tab. Woh unki biwi rehti hain. Woh meri randi ban jaati hain. Yahi bandobast hai jo mainne tumse kaha. Kuch nahi badla. 

  

Main: To bahut der mat karo. 

  

Uncle: Main der nahi kar raha. Main bas soch unke dimag mein thodi der aur baithne de raha hoon. Bathroom, panty, us subah unka haath pakadna… yeh pehle se kaam kar raha hai. Agli baar jab main unhe akele paunga, main dekhne par nahi rukunga. 

  

Main: Accha. 

  

Uncle: (saans chhodte, lagbhag muskurate) Tum sach mein ismein mere saathi ho, hai na? 

  

Main: Haan. Main ismein tumhara hoon aag se. 

[Raja99]

Very good and interesting story

[Sumitra Sen]

Zabardast aur jhakkas update

[Jasmin.]

zabardast, mast aur bahut badhiya update!

[Mehtab_]

CHAPTER 9



Uske kuch din baad, jab hum nashta kar rahe the, Mummy ne plate se nazar uthaye bina kaha. 


“Kya tumhare paas Vivek ka phone number hai?” 

Maine chabana band kiya. “Kyun?” 

“Mujhe unse kuch poochna pad sakta hai. Bazaar ke baare mein. Ya agar woh shahar ja rahe hon. Bas practical baatein.” 

“Tum seedha ja sakti ho. Woh do ghar door rehte hain.” 

“Kabhi-kabhi call karna aasaan hota hai.” 

“Kya yeh dosti ke baare mein hai?” 

Unhone chhoti, savdhaan sar hilayi. “Haan. Unhone takhne aur groceries mein madad ki hai. Yeh bas shista charan hai.” 

Mujhe pata tha yeh sirf shista charan nahi hai. Unki ungliyan tablecloth ke kinare ko masal rahi thin, bata raha tha woh kuch aur soch rahi hain. Phir bhi maine kaagaz ka tukda liya, number saaf likha, aur unki taraf ghuska diya. 

Unhone use do baar fold kiya aur blouse ki jeb mein daal diya jaise woh cheez gayab ho sakti ho. 

Us raat khane ke baad main chup raha. Jab woh apne bedroom mein gayin to main kuch minute intezar karta raha, phir bina awaaz ke corridor se chala aur us jagah khada hua jahan se aadhe khule darwaze se dikh sake. 

Woh bed ke kinare baithi thin usi lilac saree mein, chhota fold kiya hua kaagaz haathon mein. Woh us kaagaz ko bahut lambi der tak dekh rahi thin. Unke dimag mein sau-sau vichar daud rahe the. 








Unhone use kai baar ulat-pulat kiya. Unka angutha numberon par phira. Woh side table par rakhe phone ko lambi der ghoor rahi thin, saaf khud se jhagda kar rahi thin. 

Ek baar unhone kaagaz neeche rakha aur uthi jaise faisla kar liya na karne ka. Phir phir se baithin, use uthaya, aur dheere-dheere number type kiya. 

Maine dekha unhone call button dabaya. 

Woh unhe kehna chahti thin ki ruk jaayein. Yeh kehna chahti thin ki unki panty ke saath jo kiya woh galat tha, unhe kabhi unke bedroom mein nahi aana chahiye, towel wala waqya bhool jana chahiye. 

Yahi wajah thi unhone number maanga. Unhe line kheenchna tha. Phir bhi jab phone unke kaan se bajne laga, unka doosra haath gale par tha aur saans sthir nahi thi. 

Wahi aurat jo shock mein muh dhak leti thi ab us aadmi ko call kar rahi thi jisne yeh sab kiya, aur main dekh sakta tha ki jo line woh kheenchna chahti thin woh pehle se hi usse patli thi jise woh maan ne ko taiyar thin. Raat mein unhone unhe call kiya. 

Mummy: Vivek, mujhe chahiye tum dhyan se suno kyunki main tumse jhagda karne call nahi kar rahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Yeh ummeed bhari shuruat hai, Shobha. Aam taur par jab tum aisi awaaz mein call karti ho to mujhe lecture milne wala hota hai. 

Mummy: Shayad tumhe chahiye. 

Uncle Vivek: Shayad. Khaas kar tumhari jaisi sundar aurat se. Lekin tum bahut serious lag rahi ho. 

Mummy: Main serious hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: To main apna poora dhyan dunga. 

Mummy: Accha. Kyunki main sun rahi hoon tum mere baare mein kya keh rahe ho. 

Uncle Vivek: Mere akele hone ke baare mein? 

Mummy: Haan. 

Uncle Vivek: Aur? 

Mummy: Aur yeh sach nahi hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Tumne bahut jaldi jawab diya. 

Mummy: Kyunki yeh kehna hi bekaar hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Kya? 

Mummy: Haan. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum nahi sochti aajkal tum akele lag rahi ho? 

Mummy: Nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Thoda bhi nahi? 

Mummy: Nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum hichkichi. 

Mummy: Nahi hichi. 

Uncle Vivek: Bilkul hichi. 

Mummy: Vivek, main nahi dungi tum isko apne khelon mein badalne. 

Uncle Vivek: Main sirf sawal pooch raha hoon. 

Mummy: Tum hamesha yahi kehte ho usse pehle ki mujhe chhedna shuru karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Shayad mujhe maza aata hai dekhna tum kitni jaldi naraz hoti ho. 

Mummy: Yahi to meri baat hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum isko dilchasp bana deti ho. 

Mummy: Main serious baat karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: To karo. 

Mummy: Mujhe nahi chahiye tum mere feelings diagnose karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Main kuch diagnose nahi kar raha tha. Main observe kar raha tha. 

Mummy: Tum nahi jaante meri zindagi mein kya ho raha hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Shayad sab nahi. 

Mummy: Bilkul. 

Uncle Vivek: Lekin main cheezein notice karta hoon. 

Mummy: Aur kabhi-kabhi tum aisi cheezein notice karte ho jo hain hi nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Kabhi-kabhi main aisi cheezein notice karta hoon jo tum khud nahi notice karti. 

Mummy: Yeh unhi mein se ek hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Agar tum aisa kehti ho. 

Mummy: Main aisa kehti hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum bahut determined lag rahi ho. 

Mummy: Kyunki main hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: Yeh tumhari impressive qualities mein se ek hai. 

Mummy: Mujhe flirt mat karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Mujhe nahi pata tha mujhe tumhari taarif karne ke liye ijazat chahiye. 

Mummy: Tum jaante ho mera matlab. 

Uncle Vivek: Main bilkul jaanta hoon. 

Mummy: To ruk jaao. 

Uncle Vivek: Main koshish karunga. Lekin mushkil hai khaas kar tumhari jaisi rani ke liye. 

Mummy: “Koshish”? 

Uncle Vivek: Maine kaha main koshish karunga. 

Mummy: Vivek. 

Uncle Vivek: Theek hai, theek hai. Jari rakho. 

Mummy: Mainne call karne ki ek mukhya wajah hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Mujhe shak tha. 

Mummy: Tumhe meri cheezon mein ghusna band karna hoga. 

Uncle Vivek: Yeh bahut zyada serious ilzaam hai. 

Mummy: Main ilzaam nahi laga rahi. Main keh rahi hoon band karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Aur tumhe kya lagta hai main kar raha hoon? 

Mummy: Mujhe explain mat karwao. 

Uncle Vivek: Main sach mein utsuk hoon. 

Mummy: Kyunki main jaanti hoon maine kya notice kiya. 

Uncle Vivek: Aur tum pakki ho? 

Mummy: Haan. 

Uncle Vivek: Matlab main tumhari underwear ki khushbu le raha tha? Tum bahut pakki lag rahi ho. 

Mummy: Haan. 

Uncle Vivek: Theek. Main samajhta hoon tum kyun naraz ho. 

Mummy: Kya? 

Uncle Vivek: Bilkul. 

Mummy: To joke mat banao. 

Uncle Vivek: Mainne koi nahi banaya. 

Mummy: Tum banane wale the. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum mujhe bahut acchi tarah jaanti ho. 

Mummy: Badkismati se. 

Uncle Vivek: Mujhe “yaadgar” pasand hai. 

Mummy: Tum namumkin ho. 






Uncle Vivek: Aur phir bhi tumne mujhe call kiya. 

Mummy: Kyunki main yeh saaf karna chahti thi. 

Uncle Vivek: Natural. 

Mummy: Isliye nahi ki main tumse baat karna chahti thi. 

Uncle Vivek: Yeh thoda sakht hai. 

Mummy: Yeh sach hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Agar tumhe yeh khud se kehna hai. 

Mummy: Vivek! 

Uncle Vivek: Main chhed raha hoon. 

Mummy: Mujhe chhedna band karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum sach mein nafrat karti ho maan ne se ki main tumhari jild ke neeche utar gaya. 

Mummy: Mujhe kuch maan na nahi hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Bilkul nahi. 

Mummy: Mera matlab hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Pata hai. 

Mummy: To tum kyun muskura rahe ho? 

 

Uncle Vivek: Kyunki jab tum naraz hoti ho to tum predictable ho. 

Mummy: Main predictable nahi hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: Ho. 

Mummy: Kaise? 

Uncle Vivek: Tum tez bolne lagti ho. 

Mummy: Nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Haan. 

Mummy: Nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Aur phir tum israr karne lagti ho ki tum naraz nahi ho. 

Mummy: Main naraz hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: Bilkul. 

Mummy: Tum iska maza le rahe ho. 

Uncle Vivek: Thoda. 

Mummy: Tum namumkin ho. 

Uncle Vivek: Tumne yeh pehle bhi kaha hai. 

Mummy: Kyunki yeh sach hai. 

Uncle Vivek: Yaad hai us dopahar jab main naha raha tha? 

Mummy: Nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Yaad hai. 

Mummy: Yaad hai tum naha rahe the. 

Uncle Vivek: Aur tum mere liye towel laayi thin. 

Mummy: Haan. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum andar aayi, mujhe dekha, ek second ke liye ruk gayi— 

Mummy: Main nahi ruki. 

Uncle Vivek: Bilkul ruki. 

Mummy: Main hairan hui thi. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum aisi lag rahi thin jaise bhool gayi ho kya kehne wali thin. 

Mummy: Kyunki mainne ummeed nahi ki thi tum us haalat mein hoge. 

Uncle Vivek: Mujhe tumhare chehre ka nazaara yaad hai. 

Mummy: Shuru mat karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Main sirf yaad kar raha hoon. 

Mummy: Tum jaan-bujhkar mujhe sharminda kar rahe ho. 

Uncle Vivek: Shayad mujhe yaad dilane mein maza aata hai un palon ka jab tum ab jitni composed nahi thin. Shayad tumne kuch bada dekha tha, hai na? 

Mummy: Main poori tarah composed thi. 

Uncle Vivek: Natural. 

Mummy: Thi. 

Uncle Vivek: Agar tum aisa kehti ho. 

Mummy: Yeh kehna band karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Kya? 

Mummy: “Agar tum aisa kehti ho.” Tum aise kehte ho jaise mujhe vishwas nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Shayad nahi. 

Mummy: Vivek— 

Uncle Vivek: Phir se. 

Mummy: Kya? 

Uncle Vivek: Woh tone. 

Mummy: Main bhaari saans le rahi hoon kyunki main frustrated ho rahi hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: Maine notice kiya. 

Mummy: Uspar comment mat karo. 

Uncle Vivek: Main sirf poochne wala tha ki tum theek ho. 

Mummy: Main theek hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: Sure? 

Mummy: Haan. 

Uncle Vivek: To main ruk jaunga. 

Mummy: Accha. 

Uncle Vivek: Abhi ke liye. 

Mummy: Vivek! 

Uncle Vivek: Kya? Tum jaanti ho main rok nahi sakta. 

Mummy: Yeh baat khatm. 

Uncle Vivek: Tum call kaat rahi ho? 

Mummy: Haan. 

(Line dead ho gayi. Maine suna unhone phone jor se rakha. Jab main shaanti se unke kamre ke darwaze par gaya to woh bed ke kinare baithi thin, jabda sakht, aankhein gusse se bhari, ek haath chhati par dabaya hua jaise saans ko normal dhakel rahi hon.) 

Woh phone ko lagbhag poora ek minute ghoor rahi thin. Phir use uthaya aur phir se dial kiya. 

Call connect hua. Kai second tak sirf awaaz thi. 

Geeli. Rhythmic. Jild par jild. Sthir aur bina jaldi. Phir ek geehri, control wali saans jo baat-cheet ki nahi thi. 

Mummy: Vivek ji…? 

Awaaz jaari rahi. Ab kareeb, jaise phone source ke bilkul paas rakh diya gaya ho. 

Mummy: Vivek ji, jawab do. 

Abhi bhi sirf naram, geeli stroke aur unki shaant saans. Jaise woh hasthmaithun kar rahe hon. 

Mummy: Mujhe pata hai tum kya kar rahe ho. Band karo. Yeh koi joke nahi. 

Unki apni saans bhi uthne lagi, us raftaar se milti hui jo woh sun rahi thin. 

Mummy: Vivek… please. Main jo keh rahi thi use khatm karne call ki thi. Iske liye nahi. 

Stroke nahi ruka. Woh poori tarah chup rahe, apne lund par haath ki awaaz line bharne de rahe. 

Mummy: Main sun rahi hoon. Samajh rahe ho? Main sab sun rahi hoon. 

Unki awaaz patli ho gayi. Gussa abhi bhi tha, lekin shabdon ke beech wahi asamaan saans thi jo pehle thi, ab aur tezi se. 

Mummy: Kuch kaho. Kaho ki tum meri undergarments chhuna band karoge. Kaho ki tum mujhse aise baat nahi karoge. 

Sirf geeli rhythm ne jawab diya. Sthir. Bina sharm. Itna kareeb ki unki mutthi ka har hilna saaf tha. 

Mummy: Vivek… 

Unhone unka naam ek baar aur kaha, naram, aur phir line par hi rahi, sunte hue, unki saans andhere mein uth-gir rahi jab woh kuch nahi bole. 

Uncle Vivek: Inhi dino mein se kisi din, tumhare pati ke wapas aane se pehle, main tumhe chodunga. 

Mummy: Kya? Tum mujhse aise kaise keh sakte ho. Aisa mat kaho. 

Uncle Vivek: Main kahunga. Ghar shaant hoga. Tum darwaza khol dogi. 

Mummy: Nahi. 

Uncle Vivek: Khol dogi. Tumhara ek hissa pehle se jaanta hai. 

(Maine dekha meri Mummy apne aap ko chhune lagi thin, mujhe apni aankhon par yakeen nahi hua) 








Mummy: Main shaadi-shuda hoon. 

Uncle Vivek: Pata hai. Yeh nahi badalta jo main chahta hoon. 

 

 

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