Adultery என்னால் தாம் எல்லாம் என்னை மன்னிச்சிடு அம்மா

[Lust king 66]

[Sandbox]

katha mundijichu

[Srk70]

@GumShot bro don't end this story tamil most viewed story ur write ✍️ ur own style bro don't end write own idea think don't end Sangeetha

[Rishabh1]

Dear author, tamil is not my first language yet I've read the vast majority of the story except last 30 pages using translation I know it only captured 80% of the essence yet still wonderful narration!, I've paused/stopped because it was too much suffering to take in. Initial episodes with kumar were outright brutal and most hurtful part was Rajesh episode, it was so hurtful to the extent that even rajesh himself was stunned why sangeeta was tormenting sanjay like that. In this entire story biggest loser is Ajay he was working in dubai like a dog for the family and when rajesh was joking about how he was offering breadcrumbs of salary and promotion to keep him busy so that he can ravage his wife! Sangeeta was nonchalant and casually laughs with him, Did she ever have any love for Ajay or Sanjay??

The excitement and driving force of the story is Sanjay's longing and devotion to his mother, I did not care who is screwing who or how often, as a writer you had the absolute authority to take the story in whichever direction you want, but it would've been nice if the plot had been faithful to the characters.

All sex episodes of sangeeta with her lovers, you explained them in vivid detail and the acts of love after the sex like tying taali, calling them maava, feeding each other lovingly etc these acts amplified sanjay's suffering cause his sex episodes (albeit, only a few) with sangi were always short with out much detail, even with out sex I was waiting and waiting for her to actually give him some true motherly love! All she does is telling him to focus on his and career and she fucks around!

Ironically the only occasions she offered him her pussy was out of gratitude for his unconditional love whether it's in ooty or when he rescued her with all that milk producing shenanigans!! I'm not saying sanjay is a saint and he is also flawed and he definitely fucked around, but the way you presented him, he was a decent chap and his love for his mother is unwavering. Another thing I never understood is he's got bigger dick than all her lovers and she was clearly on next level of ecstasy when she was with him but yet again she discards him like a used condom why!?

I dont know what to say brother, Mother son stories are truly special because this dynamic simply doesn't exist in other relationships, she can be your provider, healer, mentor and everything. I really wish he gets true motherly love from sangeeta or he makes peace with it as a fact of life and moves on!!

Thank you for all your hard work!!

[Alone lover]

@gumshot

[Rishabh1]

Ok! I've completed the remaining published parts of the story until page 209, largely skimmed other bits but mainly focused on dynamic between Sangi and sanjay. I will conclude my interpretation of the story with this comment.

It looks like criticism but dear gumshot treat it as a tribute to the magic you've created, I'm only trying to understand the characters that's all.

In these last few chapters sangeeta seems to care bit more about sanjay than previously, a welcoming direction of the story! had a decent anal session in the open, well deserving I guess! Then shit hits the fan when sanjay becomes asexual because of kumar's dirty act. Then comes the twins and Sanjay's cuckold/pimp shade comes out, fine! he wanted his mother to be sexually satisfied but what unclear was he was feeling jealous and also getting an erection, and so many times he wanted to fuck her but unlucky!! so not sure whether he could get it up and actually fuck or he secretly enjoying being a cuck!

Also what surprises me is that why everyone else is casually fucking her but not him, yes he did have few chances but mostly it's his frustration than satisfaction we get to read about. Sangeeta character is also very erratic, one day she says she truly loves him the next, you are jealous, don't touch me. I found it hard to understand her behavior. If there is one constant thing in the entire story that she simply can not refuse a dick that comes into her vicinity whether it's twins, velu, dilip whoever. This time sanjay partly gave blessing to be with twins but yet again she cheated wherever possible. As usual it was heart wrenching to read sanjay's agony.

If we move to Divya character, it was good to see them reunited but yet again he pimped her to diwakar (and to sayyed) for same reason when he could clearly relieve himself and satisfy her, here I felt disgusted with his behavior. Finally he did the deed with divya but then immediately after divya cheats on him lol, I think at this point all of them should have a ganbang session haha.

All that aside, Sanjay proved his love to sangi every single time so I hope you would give a fitting end to the story!

Sangi may be a stunner but remember this story only exists because of Sanjay's unconditional love for Sangi.

Thank you for such an erotic story.

[Srk70]

@GumShot please continue story

[Raju@Vijay]

vera kadhai ezutha plan pola idha drop panrenuh sollama readers hunger la vaikraa manasu enna manasu oh

[Haroldfkumar2]

Update pls

[Looking_for_Love]

Dear author, tamil is not my first language yet I've read the vast majority of the story except last 30 pages using translation I know it only captured 80% of the essence yet still wonderful narration!, I've paused/stopped because it was too much suffering to take in. Initial episodes with kumar were outright brutal and most hurtful part was Rajesh episode, it was so hurtful to the extent that even rajesh himself was stunned why sangeeta was tormenting sanjay like that. In this entire story biggest loser is Ajay he was working in dubai like a dog for the family and when rajesh was joking about how he was offering breadcrumbs of salary and promotion to keep him busy so that he can ravage his wife! Sangeeta was nonchalant and casually laughs with him, Did she ever have any love for Ajay or Sanjay??

The excitement and driving force of the story is Sanjay's longing and devotion to his mother, I did not care who is screwing who or how often, as a writer you had the absolute authority to take the story in whichever direction you want, but it would've been nice if the plot had been faithful to the characters.

All sex episodes of sangeeta with her lovers, you explained them in vivid detail and the acts of love after the sex like tying taali, calling them maava, feeding each other lovingly etc these acts amplified sanjay's suffering cause his sex episodes (albeit, only a few) with sangi were always short with out much detail, even with out sex I was waiting and waiting for her to actually give him some true motherly love! All she does is telling him to focus on his and career and she fucks around!

Ironically the only occasions she offered him her pussy was out of gratitude for his unconditional love whether it's in ooty or when he rescued her with all that milk producing shenanigans!! I'm not saying sanjay is a saint and he is also flawed and he definitely fucked around, but the way you presented him, he was a decent chap and his love for his mother is unwavering. Another thing I never understood is he's got bigger dick than all her lovers and she was clearly on next level of ecstasy when she was with him but yet again she discards him like a used condom why!?

I dont know what to say brother, Mother son stories are truly special because this dynamic simply doesn't exist in other relationships, she can be your provider, healer, mentor and everything. I really wish he gets true motherly love from sangeeta or he makes peace with it as a fact of life and moves on!!

Thank you for all your hard work!!

HI Rishabh1 Bro,
There is two types of readers for this story
1_the ones who enjoys Sanjay's hurting & Insulting & tormented by everyone
2_The ones who feel Bad for sanjay
whatever you felt while reading this story I too felt it and and there are a lot of type 2 readers suffers the same heart break like Sanjay.
This story is not for faint  hearted, this is for the ones who enjoys tormenting others.
After the Ooty scene I too thought Sanjay as a Hero, then Author suddenly Made him the worst character in this Story.
even the Twins Happily got to enjoy sex with their Mother & Sangeetha. Sanjay the Poor soul as usual  gets Humiliated and Left heart broken.
I read authors previous discontinued stories. He follows the same pattern. He always creates a scape goat guy to humiliate & hurting him for the readers to enjoy.
[b]I stopped caring when divya & sangeetha both transforming into real Sluts. 
I stopped reading the story from the last update Now author is making both Sanjay & divya pure sluts and Sanjay a Cuckold.
I read from the comments and Understood that Now both divya & Sangeetha are going to have 3some with an Old man.
Author already Changed Sanjay character into cuckold and he gave Permission for Both Divya & Sangeetha to fuck with anyone they want.
This story began as adultery and changed into Incest and Finally fully into Cuckold. We may never experience the romance and sweet talk between Mother & Son.
I always enjoyed those scenes the way this Author written, I am also fan for his narration.
Finally the Sanjay we know is no more and he Is RIP. This story is neither Incest nor Adultery. 
This Cuckold story is all about humiliating the loved ones Blinded by Lust and fucking with anyone they want.[/b]

[Looking_for_Love]

Ok! I've completed the remaining published parts of the story until page 209, largely skimmed other bits but mainly focused on dynamic between Sangi and sanjay. I will conclude my interpretation of the story with this comment.

It looks like criticism but dear gumshot treat it as a tribute to the magic you've created, I'm only trying to understand the characters that's all.

In these last few chapters sangeeta seems to care bit more about sanjay than previously, a welcoming direction of the story! had a decent anal session in the open, well deserving I guess! Then shit hits the fan when sanjay becomes asexual because of kumar's dirty act. Then comes the twins and Sanjay's cuckold/pimp shade comes out, fine! he wanted his mother to be sexually satisfied but what unclear was he was feeling jealous and also getting an erection, and so many times he wanted to fuck her but unlucky!! so not sure whether he could get it up and actually fuck or he secretly enjoying being a cuck!

Also what surprises me is that why everyone else is casually fucking her but not him, yes he did have few chances but mostly it's his frustration than satisfaction we get to read about. Sangeeta character is also very erratic, one day she says she truly loves him the next, you are jealous, don't touch me. I found it hard to understand her behavior. If there is one constant thing in the entire story that she simply can not refuse a dick that comes into her vicinity whether it's twins, velu, dilip whoever. This time sanjay partly gave blessing to be with twins but yet again she cheated wherever possible. As usual it was heart wrenching to read sanjay's agony.

If we move to Divya character, it was good to see them reunited but yet again he pimped her to diwakar (and to sayyed) for same reason when he could clearly relieve himself and satisfy her, here I felt disgusted with his behavior. Finally he did the deed with divya but then immediately after divya cheats on him lol, I think at this point all of them should have a ganbang session haha.

All that aside, Sanjay proved his love to sangi every single time so I hope you would give a fitting end to the story!

Sangi may be a stunner but remember this story only exists because of Sanjay's unconditional love for Sangi.

Thank you for such an erotic story.

Finally You Understood this is Cuckold Story.

[Haroldfkumar2]

Update pls

[Looking_for_Love]

Gumshot Announced No More Updates, He Discontinued this story.
His New Story மலரோடு கீதா
All Gumshot Fans Assemble

மலரோடு கீதா

[Haroldfkumar2]

Update pls