07-08-2026, 02:55 PM
Let's move ahead friends.
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Adultery Ajab Si Piyas
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07-08-2026, 02:55 PM
Let's move ahead friends.
07-08-2026, 02:59 PM
“Nooooooo… Neeruuuuuuu…Noooooo.” Written by Maitri Patel.
The words escaped my lips, yet my body had completely rebelled; there was no resistance. My mouth moved instinctively toward Neeru’s Lund (cock). As my face drew close to his Lund (cock), a sharp, heavy, foul stench assaulted my nostrils. I instantly realized it was the reek of Neeru’s stale sweat, mingled with the pungent odor of dried semen and old urine. My hand was still on his Lund (cock), stroking it gently. The smell of urine was so potent and sharp that it seemed as though he never washed his Lund (cock) after peeing. Looking at Neeru with a hint of disgust and wrinkling my nose, I asked, “Neeru… don’t you wash this after peeing?” Neeru grinned, revealing his filthy, yellow-red teeth, and replied, “Madam-ji… I have to work in filth all day long. Washing it or not makes no difference, really. Madam-ji… just show it some love… pleeeease… it needs your affection, Rani.” Neeru pulled me slightly closer toward his Lund (cock). As Neeru pulled me, my lips were now mere inches from his Lund (cock). I knew Neeru deliberately called me names like ‘Rani,’ ‘bhosdi-ki’ (cunt), and ‘behenchod’ (sister-fucker), and I actually liked it; that’s why I never objected. Whenever he used those words, I felt a strange thrill, though I never let it show. Reluctantly, I pressed my soft, pink lips against his dark, filthy, repulsive Lund (cock). It felt to me as though this Lund (cock) and his Gaand (ass) were the filthiest parts of this dirty man’s entire body. But at Neeru's urging, I slowly began to kiss his Lund (cock). The foul, mingled stench of sweat, semen, grime, and urine was filling my nostrils. Associated for this Maitri and Funlover. Gradually, my tongue joined in the kissing. I started to gently lick his Lund (cock). The foreskin of Neeru's Lund (cock) moved up and down with the motion of my hand. Sometimes I would pull the skin back, exposing the deep blue head, which I would then lick; at other times, I would push the skin forward, hiding the head and giving the Lund (cock) a strange appearance. There was a peculiar white substance under the foreskin that my tongue licked away; I didn't even realize when I had done it. Once, when I pulled the foreskin all the way back, the tiny opening at the tip was revealed. I inserted the tip of my tongue into it. It felt strange, and I burst out laughing. Then, I took the retracted foreskin between my lips and began to suck on it thoroughly. I straightened Neeru's now fully erect Lund (cock) and began licking it from base to tip. As I licked him, my eyes remained locked with his. Edited by Funlover. When my mouth reached the base of his Lund (cock), the thick, dark, and dirty hair growing there began to brush against my nose. Pressing my head down right there, Neeru said, "Madam-ji... show a little love with your tongue here, too." Like an obedient whore, without a second thought, I began running my tongue through that dirty hair. The hair was so long that it kept getting into my mouth; I took the strands between my lips and sucked on them, wetting them in the process. The entire area was soaked in Neeru's sweat, and the sweat hadn't dried yet. ************************************************************************.................... Stay tuned friends. Maitri Patel.
07-08-2026, 03:02 PM
Neeru was now sitting on the sofa with his legs spread wide, while I was down below. He spread his legs even further and, while sucking on the coarse hair at the base of his Lund (cock), he guided my face, pushing it slightly, toward the area between his filthy thighs and his Lund (cock).
It was even filthier there, yet I was helpless to do anything else. So, silently, I let my tongue slip out and began licking the space between his thighs and his Lund (cock). I ran my tongue over the area from bottom to top, licking away all the grime and sweat. Maitri's product. I couldn't believe I could sink this low, that I could be so filthy as to lick such a dirty part of a lowly servant's body. After finishing one side, I moved my mouth to the crease of his other thigh and began licking there. It was the same story, sweat, dirt, and stench, but I didn't care about any of it; I just kept running my tongue over it. I don't know why, but I was actually enjoying it now. It had become intoxication. Everything about Neeru and his body, even the filthiest parts, had started to feel appealing and desirable to me. Neeru grabbed his erect Lund (cock) and began tapping it against my cheeks, then against my lips. I watched him as he did this. When his Lund (cock) struck my lips, I stuck out my tongue, and he began tapping the head of his Lund (cock) against it. Then, once again, I took the head of his Lund (cock) into my mouth, between my lips, and started sucking on it. After a while, Neeru pulled his Lund (cock) out of my mouth and, lifting it up, said, “Ma’am... show some love to these balls too.” When I touched that tuft of hair with my hand for the first time, I realized his round balls were nestled right there within it. I gently buried my mouth, nose, and lips into that hairy cluster and began to kiss them. I took the hair between my lips and, while sucking, slowly pulled back; then, I started licking Neeru’s balls with my tongue. Crafted by Maitri. Neeru was practically losing his mind with pleasure. He seemed to be writhing, rapidly stroking his Lund (cock) up and down as if he wanted to release his semen into me right then and there. But I didn't want to let him do that just yet. I moved his hand away and, while still licking his balls, took his Lund (cock) in my hand; stroking it gently, I said, “Don’t do that, Neeru... if you release everything now, how will you fuck me later? Don’t you want to fuck my Choot (pussy)?” I smiled and went back to licking and kissing his balls and Lund (cock). I took one of Neeru’s balls, hair and all, into my mouth, trying to suck on it. But his balls were quite large, making it difficult to fit the whole thing inside my mouth. So, I kept just a portion of it in my mouth, sucking and licking it, and savoring the pleasure. Edited by Funlover. ***********************************************........................ Stay here friends. Maitri Patel.
07-08-2026, 03:05 PM
After a while, Neeru lifted his legs and held them up, exposing his dark, dirty buttocks to my view. The cleft of his Gaand (ass) was completely covered in hair. Produced by Maitri.
Neeru said, "Madam... kiss here too. This spot deserves some love as well." Gently stroking his hips, I kissed his dark buttocks and, without him saying another word, licked them with my tongue. Neeru gasped and said, "Madam... right in the middle, too." I glanced at his face from between his legs, then extended the tip of my tongue and began licking the hairy cleft of his ass, moving from bottom to top. As my mouth neared the cleft, I felt a wave of nausea; the stench was foul, indescribable, really. Neeru placed both hands on his buttocks and began to spread them apart. I pulled my face back slightly and watched him do it. As Neeru spread his buttocks wider, I caught a glimpse of his dark anal opening, hidden amidst the hair. Holding his buttocks apart, Neeru looked at me silently; perhaps he didn't have the courage to speak. But without letting him feel disappointed, I looked at him and began caressing his anal opening with my finger. As I applied a little pressure, my finger slipped into his tight hole, and Neeru jerked upward on the sofa, "Ooooh, fuck (Bahan ki lodi)... what are you doing, Madam?" I smiled and said, “I’m doing exactly what you were doing to my Gaand (ass) a little while ago… so why are you jerking your own Gaand (ass) up like that now?” Neeru understood what I meant and said with a smile, Written by Maitri. “But Madam... I had even caressed that spot with my tongue.” I said, “No, no… that place, ass hole of yours is very dirty.” *****************............................................................ That's it for the day friends. Next episodes after receipt of your comments. Until than Maitri wishes you JAY BHARAT.
07-08-2026, 03:10 PM
Three episodes are posted.
Thanks for reading friends...... But being frank with you all, I am disappointed with the way fans or readers behave. The writer puts more than 5-6 hours into creating one episode to entertain you all. Please take one minute to leave a comment on how you are liking the story, what more can be done etc . Feedback loop can make be better author and more motivated to write.
08-08-2026, 01:34 PM
Let's move further in this story.
08-08-2026, 01:39 PM
“I don’t know what kind of filthy things you’re making me do... I’m not an animal like you, to engage in such dirty acts...”
The words escaped my lips, though my voice lacked its usual strength. Neeru said, “Madam... please... just use your tongue a little... I’d enjoy it so much.” A product of Maitri. I glanced at him, and then looked again at his asshole. There was some dark, caked-on substance there; I couldn't quite tell what it was. I slowly moved my mouth toward his asshole and lightly touched it with the tip of my tongue. Neeru jerked with pleasure. I smiled and began to slowly run my tongue over his Gaand (asshole). My tongue moved gently against that filthy opening, and I started licking it. I felt a strange sense of revulsion toward that area, but at Neeru’s urging, I licked it for a while longer while simultaneously stroking his Lund (cock), gripping it firmly in my fist. Then, when the foul odor of his dirty ass became unbearable, I pulled away and stood up, saying, “That’s it... I can’t do any more of this here.” Neeru grabbed my hand and pulled me down, letting my delicate body fall onto his filthy frame as he said, “So, Madam... come back into my arms now.” Neeru held me tight against his body and began kissing my cheeks. I responded in kind; our lips met, and we started sucking on each other’s mouths. From behind, Neeru caressed my pussy while moving his finger in and out of it. Neeru kissed my lips and said, “Madam... now take this lovely Lund (cock) of mine into your Choot (pussy)... please.” Jointly written by Maitri and Funlover. I grabbed his Lund (cock) and said, “Is this a lovely Lund (cock)? You never even wash it, yet you call it lovely?” I climbed onto Neeru’s lap and rested my legs on the sofa on either side of his thighs. Neeru held his Lund (cock) and positioned it against my Choot (pussy). I aligned my Choot (pussy)’s opening with his Lund (cock) and pressed down. Neeru’s Lund (cock) slid right into my Choot (pussy). As I sat down “sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm” letting out a sharp “Aah...” as I took his Lund (cock) fully inside my Choot (pussy), I wrapped my arms around Neeru’s neck and kissed him. Neeru slowly began thrusting from below, and I started moving up and down in rhythm. His Lund (cock) was sliding in and out of my wet Choot (pussy), and I was thoroughly enjoying the fucking. Neeru’s rough, dark hands were on my naked, fair, and soft waist, gently caressing it. His hands moved down from my waist to my hips and began stroking them. Then, his fingers slipped into the cleft of my buttocks, and he started gently caressing my asshole. Neeru brought that same finger up and placed it in my mouth; I began to suck on it. Once his finger was thoroughly wet with my saliva, he moved it back to my asshole and slowly began pushing it inside. I didn't resist, and his finger entered my ass, just the tip. I jerked slightly and said, “Neeru… what are you doing? Please take it out.” Neeru replied, “It’s nothing, Madam-ji… you’re going to like it.” Keeping his finger inside my ass, Neeru started thrusting his Lund (cock) in and out of my Choot (pussy). At the same time, he began moving his finger in and out of my ass, stimulating me from within. I started enjoying it too; I slowly began bouncing on his Lund (cock) again, letting Neeru fuck me from both ends simultaneously. After fucking me like this for a while, Neeru flipped me over onto the sofa, stood up, and positioned himself on the carpet between my legs. Neeru lifted my legs, exposing my Choot (pussy) fully to him; holding his Lund (cock) in his hand, he began rubbing it up and down against my wet Choot (pussy). Then, he positioned the blue head of his Lund (cock) against my opening and thrust the entire length inside in one go, making me gasp sharply. Neeru hoisted my legs onto his shoulders, re-inserted his Lund (cock) into my Choot (pussy), and began fucking me hard and fast. Crafted by Maitri. Neeru's dark, thick Lund (cock) was sliding in and out of me; when he leaned down to kiss my lips, the way he had arched my back made it feel like it was about to snap. ********************................................. Stay here only............ Maitri Patel.
08-08-2026, 01:47 PM
Even then, I said nothing; instead, I sucked on Neeru’s ugly, dark lips and let him fuck me.
Driven by Neeru’s thrusting and the intensity of the act, I reached my climax. The walls of my Choot (pussy) contracted and released their fluids, and I went limp, letting my head fall to the side. Produced by Maitri. A short while later, Neeru pulled his Lund (cock) out of my wet Choot (pussy), climbed over me, and said, “Madam... open your mouth, quick.” I protested, “No... Not in my mouth.” But as he moved over me, a powerful jet of semen shot from his dirty, dark Lund (cock) and splattered onto my face. Just as I opened my mouth to speak, Neeru thrust his spurting Lund (cock) inside; without stopping, he emptied the rest of his load directly into my open mouth. Even as I thrashed my head about, I was forced to swallow the semen down my throat. Neeru’s Lund (cock) jerked inside my mouth as it released its load, the semen flowing straight down my throat and into my stomach. Realizing that resistance was futile, I began sucking his Lund (cock) myself, draining it of every last drop of semen. Exhausted, Neeru collapsed onto the sofa beside me, rested his head on my shoulder, and said, “Madam... I really enjoyed fucking you today.” Hearing this, my face flushed red with embarrassment. Edited by Funlover. Neeru picked up a photo frame from the side table next to the sofa and gazed at it. The frame held a picture from my wedding to Saud; I was dressed as a bride, looking stunning in a maroon wedding outfit. Neeru kept looking at my picture and said, “Madam... you look lovely in that wedding outfit. I wish I could have seen you in it on your wedding day; that would have been amazing.” Hearing this, I blushed and asked, “So, do you not like the way I look right now, complete naked?” He kissed my cheek and pulled my nipples and said, “No, Madam... that’s not it at all.” “Well, what would you have done if you’d seen me as a bride?” Neeru replied, “Madam... I would have made you my bride.” I laughed and said, “Have you seen your own face? You never even wash up, yet you talk about making me your bride.” I asked again, “Neeru... why do you stay so dirty?” Neeru said, “Sorry, Madam... I’ll bathe properly and come tomorrow; that’ll be fine, right?” Blushing, I rested my face against his dirty chest, kissed it, and said, “No... There’s no need to bathe. You look just fine, dirty as you are.” And to myself, I thought, *“I’ve grown to love both you and your filth; your dirty scent actually turns me on even more now.” Neeru laughed at my words, wrapped his arm tightly around me, pulled me close against his body, and began kissing my cheeks. My eyes fell on the clock, and I saw that it was nearly three o'clock, time for Saud to arrive. We had completely lost track of time while making love. I nudged him to get up and said, “Come on, stop talking and get out of here... everyone will be arriving soon, and if they see their bride in your arms like this, you’re done for. All I did was sticking a finger up your ass...” Neeru got up, picked up his clothes from the sofa, put them on, and started to leave; I walked him to the inner door, naked, and he bent down, sucked my nipple, and pulled out my nipples like a rubber once, and stepped out. I went back to the kitchen, grabbed my clothes, and headed to my room and into the bathroom. That asshole Neeru had completely worn my body out again today. He had fucked me so hard and so thoroughly that I didn't have the strength left to take another Lund (cock). His Lund (cock) had left a mix of pain and satisfaction deep within my Choot (pussy). You could say my Choot (pussy) was swollen from the pounding his Lund (cock) had delivered, and my Gaand (ass) was burning too. But those moments had given me a strange kind of pleasure and erotic thrill, and, above all, a deeply satisfying servicing of both my holes. I was grateful to Neeru and his Lund (cock) for that. The mere thought of it made my Choot (pussy) gush with juices all over again. Created by Patel. That night, as Saud and I lay down to sleep, I found myself thinking of Neeru once more. **********************************………….. That's it for the day friends. The NEXT will be after receipt of your valued comments. Until then Maitri Patel wishes you JAY BHARAT.
08-08-2026, 01:53 PM
(26-07-2026, 01:30 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Wonderful writings.... In the next two episodes, you will get to read about a woman's introspection through the character of Sana. Something you had wished for. I have written these episodes specifically for that purpose. Stay with the story and please continue sharing your valuable thoughts.
11-08-2026, 12:33 PM
Next episode is awaiting your comments on previous updates to post.
Thank you.
11-08-2026, 03:21 PM
Sana lost her soul to Neeru's dirty acts.
She is lovingly doing that do him. Jealous of Neeru to get such a obedient madam. Thank you
12-08-2026, 03:52 PM
(11-08-2026, 03:21 PM)ananth1986 Wrote: Sana lost her soul to Neeru's dirty acts. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for following Sana and Neeru’s complicated story. Sana’s choices and inner conflict are an important part of the story line, and there is still much more to unfold. I truly appreciate your reading, support, and valuable comments.
12-08-2026, 03:53 PM
Let's move ahead friends.......................
12-08-2026, 03:57 PM
Sana’s emotional struggle with Neeru: A deep dive
Sana’s relationship with Neeru is not merely physical; it is a profound emotional and psychological struggle. This conflict is the most powerful element of the story. Let us understand it in detail: 1. The Clash of Class & Identity (Self-Respect vs. Degradation) Sana views herself as a "highly educated, sophisticated, rich, fair, and beautiful doctor’s wife." To her, Neeru is the exact opposite: dark-skinned, filthy, uneducated, a servant, and foul-smelling. Written by Maitri Patel. When she sucks his dirty Lund (cock), licks his Gaand (ass), or swallows his sweat and pus, a piercing voice rises within her: "Who am I? How did I accept such degradation?" This degradation fills her with self-loathing, yet there is a strange, intoxicating pleasure in that very hatred. She knows she is sinking "low," yet she cannot stop herself. 2. Guilt vs. Addiction (Betrayal of her husband) Saud, her handsome, well-groomed, and loving husband, comes to mind every time. When Neeru thrusts his Lund (cock) into her Choot (pussy) or ejaculates into her mouth, images of her wedding with Saud, his loving touch, and the scent of his perfume flash through her mind. This is immediately followed by self-loathing: "I betrayed my husband... and with ‘this’ filthy man, of all people?" Yet, the addiction is so overpowering that it suppresses the guilt. She tells herself, "Just one more time... never again," but that "one time" keeps repeating itself. 3. The Paradox of Disgust and Attraction Everything about Neeru, his stench, sweat, the smell of urine, greasy hair, dark Lund (cock), and pus, repulses Sana. Yet, that very revulsion arouses her. This psychological twist is incredibly powerful: The greater the disgust, the greater the pleasure. The more intense the self-disgust, the more intense the orgasm. She asks herself, "Am I really this filthy?" and the answer comes: "Yes... and I’ve started to love it." 4. The Power Dynamic Socially, Sana is far above Neeru, yet physically and sexually, she has become his slave. This inverted power dynamic turns her on even more. She knows she is the "mistress," yet Neeru uses her like a "whore", and she revels in it. 5. What happens next? (Emotionally) Short-term: Guilt will mount, but so will the addiction. She will tell Neeru, "Just one last time," only to call him back herself. Edited by Funlover. Long-term: Either she will completely break down and become Neeru’s total slave, or one day there will be an explosive surge of guilt (which could give the story a new twist). *******************************……………………. Stay tuned friends. Maitri Patel.
12-08-2026, 03:59 PM
In short:
Sana’s conflict with Neeru is a struggle with the question, "Who am I?" She is on the verge of losing her entire identity (doctor, wife, high-class woman), and this mix of the fear of loss and the thrill of the experience is what keeps drawing her back to Neeru. Sana’s guilt towards Saud - In detail Sana’s guilt regarding Saud is the story’s most painful and deeply emotional layer. This guilt isn't limited merely to the act of cheating; it cuts right through her identity, love, respect, and self-worth. Let’s break it down layer by layer: 1. The pain of love and betrayal Sana truly loves Saud. Maitri Patel's product. She knows how deeply Saud adores her; he finds her "beautiful," respects her body, and shows affection and tenderness even during sex. When Neeru fucks her, thoughts of Saud flood her mind, the scent of his clean, fair body, his loving kisses, and the way he calls her "darling." In those moments, Sana feels as though she is trampling upon Saud’s love. Inner voice: "He loves me so much... and here I am, in his home, right beside his bed, getting fucked by a filthy servant." 2. The humiliation of class and status Both Sana and Saud belong to wealthy, educated, high-society families. Saud’s Lund (cock) is "fair, smooth, and beautiful", to Sana, it symbolizes perfection. Neeru’s Lund (cock) is "dark, dirty, foul-smelling, and uncircumcised", to Sana, it symbolizes degradation. When Neeru thrusts his Lund (cock) into her pussy or ejaculates into her mouth, Sana feels she has sunk far below Saud’s level. Inner voice: “The man I married, the one with whom I shared my first kiss and my wedding night, is the very man in whose home I am now sucking the Lund (cock) of a low-class, filthy man. My wedding photo is right there, and I am swallowing Neeru’s semen.” 3. The pain of physical comparison Every time she endures Neeru’s filthy body (sweat, stench, grime, the smell of urine), Sana thinks of Saud; Saud’s body always smells of perfume. Saud’s Lund (cock) is clean, fair, and smooth. Saud shows affection during sex. With Neeru, everything is the opposite: filth, force, and degradation. Yet, Sana’s body craves Neeru. This comparison shatters Sana the most. Inner voice: “A kiss from Saud used to feel like heaven... and today, I am sucking Neeru’s filthy Lund (cock) and swallowing his semen. Have I fallen this low?” 4. Fear of the future Sana fears what might happen if Saud finds out. Saud would be heartbroken. His respect for her would vanish forever. Their perfect marriage and perfect life would be ruined. But the greatest fear is that Sana would never be able to forgive herself. She knows that even while living with Saud, she craves Neeru. This double life is eating her up inside. 5. Practical manifestations of guilt (how it might appear in the story) After Saud comes home, Sana repeatedly cleans herself and washes her face, yet the stench of Neeru lingers in her nostrils. When Saud kisses her, she feels as though her lips are still tainted with Neeru’s semen and saliva. While having sex with Saud at night, Sana thinks of Neeru and cannot hold herself back, experiencing a mix of guilt and lust. In private, she weeps and berates herself, yet she still waits for Neeru’s return. An example of an inner monologue (which could be used in the story): “Saud… do you know what happened today? Your wife, the woman you love so deeply, the one you cherish more than life itself, today, she took a filthy servant’s Lund (cock) into her mouth. She swallowed his semen. And the worst part is… I actually enjoyed it. I am cheating on you, Saud… and I cannot stop myself.” ******************************************************…………………………. Thank you for reading. I know this is boring update for you friends. Thanks Maitri Patel.
12-08-2026, 04:01 PM
Friends, I honestly don’t know how successfully I have been able to portray Sana’s inner turmoil, the conflict between her loyalty to her husband, her emotional confusion, and the choices that have pulled her into a troubling situation. The other way she is liking Neeru's dirty activities, his dirty cock and smell which he has in his body. She repeatedly thinks that the same dirty thing with Neeru would be the last time, beu the 'last' never come. She become the hore of Neeru and his actions which allures her to go under him again and again. His all abusive activities attract her.
Being a woman, I have tried to explore not merely the circumstances around her and in her soul, but the emotional struggle taking place within her- a struggle of conscience, vulnerability, confusion, and conflicting desires. I hope, for a little while, this piece of writing was able to take you beyond the surface of the story and make you look at Sana’s situation from a different perspective. I would genuinely love to hear your thoughts, suggestions, and honest feedback. Your responses always help me understand whether I have been able to convey the emotions of my characters in the way I intended. **************************............... JAY BHARAT from Maitri Patel.
13-08-2026, 01:03 PM
13-08-2026, 04:00 PM
You described Sana's feeling toward Neeru
Now Sana's pain in her heart is exposed. Feeling & heartfelt of Sana are perfectly explained. Thank you
15-08-2026, 10:52 AM
(13-08-2026, 04:00 PM)ananth1986 Wrote: You described Sana's feeling toward Neeru Thank you so much for your heartfelt feedback! I’m really glad Sana’s emotions, inner pain, and feelings toward Neeru came across so clearly. It means a lot to know that you could connect with her emotions. Stay tuned for what comes next! |
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