10-08-2026, 07:56 AM
Send me a picture of Monica and Ill generate the pictures for you
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Adultery Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel)
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10-08-2026, 07:56 AM
Send me a picture of Monica and Ill generate the pictures for you
10-08-2026, 09:07 AM
Monica needs Tauji in her ass, Ustad in Pussy and husband in mouth. That much might satisfy her desire
10-08-2026, 09:57 AM
This update was pure inferno!!
The way you wrote the whole stripping sequence and then the sex was extremely graphic and intense. Ustad’s forcefulness and Monica’s resistance felt very real — she kept pushing back verbally, but her body was clearly in its own ..... uncontrollable ...descent. One thing that stood out was Ustad’s control. He held himself back completely during the blowjob, didn’t release at all. That’s probably why he was so urgent once he started fucking her. Even in the first position he controlled himself, and only in the second position did he finally let go — the way you described him pulsing and flooding her was very strong and satisfying after months of buildup and tease.
10-08-2026, 09:59 AM
Major 2 takeaways for Monica, apart from the guiltrush:
1. Her body was craving for this.... coz she orgasmed twice ..... without her own fingering...! This should return as and when shw revisits this 2. Even after finishing, Ustad didn’t crash out. He just got up, cleaned himself roughly, and dressed up while she was completely spent. (Opposie off Monica vs Rakesh..... with Rakesh spent) That detail made him feel even more dominant and probably left him more hungry - for Monica in days to come. Superbly done. This was one of the strongest most satisfying updates !
10-08-2026, 10:23 AM
(10-08-2026, 09:57 AM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: This update was pure inferno!! thanks....though I was planning to make it much better but my Ill health prevented me from writing to my max potential Working on my next update hopefully This will be 2x better Thanks for supporting
10-08-2026, 10:24 AM
(10-08-2026, 09:07 AM)Munda007 Wrote: Monica needs Tauji in her ass, Ustad in Pussy and husband in mouth. That much might satisfy her desire Gawd ...that's graphic What do others think on this idea ? Too much too soon ? Please let me know if you think this is the next natural discourse ....will be really keen to know
10-08-2026, 11:54 AM
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10-08-2026, 02:07 PM
(10-08-2026, 07:25 AM)SilverArrow Wrote: Thanks for supporting That was outstanding.... Continue with desi village setting some scenes with milking the cow/buffalos or mating of buffalos then using them as example of perfect bull like ustad and perfect cow as monia And involve some village slut bhabhis who tells erotics stories of them fucking huge dicks in village makes monica more slutty towards huge dicks
11-08-2026, 12:23 AM
11-08-2026, 11:19 AM
Great Update Sweetrati Bhai You Are Amazing Aapne Jo Garam Kiya Hai Mahol Uska Koi Jawab Nahi Sach Me Aapke 3 stories maine Padhi wo 3 no amzing The Bas Aapke Mood Pe Aur Aapke Health Issue Se Aapka Kam Atak Jata Hai But Aap Comeback Bohot Dhamekdar Karte Ho Thank You Bhai We Are Waiting
11-08-2026, 11:21 AM
Monica Ke Past Incidents Yane College Ka Adventure Uske Ex Ke Sath Sex Scene uske Adulthood Enjoy Solo Trips Enjoy with Strangers Ye Bhi dalo please
11-08-2026, 12:02 PM
Bhai please make some situational hot action between tauji and Monica,, when Monica is High and no one is nearby,, it'll be fun and erotic
11-08-2026, 09:47 PM
How many men will shove their cocks inside her.
3 5 7 9 Countless
11-08-2026, 10:06 PM
I hope writer don't just jump scenes to scenes throw some hot moments between transition from one scene to other
12-08-2026, 11:02 AM
Bro, I fucking loved it. all the drama and fake resistance,,, playing the pati vrata… but there was no denying how hungry she was to feel him inside her, and all that talk about whatever happened between them ending there? nah, I’d say this is just the beginning.
12-08-2026, 12:31 PM
(12-08-2026, 11:02 AM)Blackdick11 Wrote: Bro, I fucking loved it. all the drama and fake resistance,,, playing the pati vrata… but there was no denying how hungry she was to feel him inside her, and all that talk about whatever happened between them ending there? nah, I’d say this is just the beginning. Thanks... For supporting I have started writing the next part this morning..will complete by Afternoon or evening Will post by evening Thanks again for supporting sir ..Means the world to me
12-08-2026, 12:35 PM
(11-08-2026, 10:06 PM)KingRocks Wrote: I hope writer don't just jump scenes to scenes throw some hot moments between transition from one scene to other Completely agree Sir This is a deep odessey..not a slam bang type of story .. I appreciate your taste for transition screen play .. Few readers love this under burn and I can't say how happy I am to read comments which talk of under current.. Keep supporting.. And do read my next update in the evening |
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