Adultery Manasi fas gayi jaal me...

[Mande]

Aapka story main page say gayeb ho giya…logo ko pata nehi chalega….to story ka naam change kar saktay ho to readers ko samajh ayega. Peechay ka thora sa background de dengay to people can relate.

Mainay naya update para…bahut achcha tarikay say bayan kiya aap nay….now mali aur dudhwala do kirdar ki entry hogi kiya? Anyway leekhtay rahiya bindas….writing enjoyable hai aur bahut clear hai….saath may rahengay….keep updating.

[PariLuthra]

Aapka story main page say gayeb ho giya…logo ko pata nehi chalega….to story ka naam change kar saktay ho to readers ko samajh ayega. Peechay ka thora sa background de dengay to people can relate.

Mainay naya update para…bahut achcha tarikay say bayan kiya aap nay….now mali aur dudhwala do kirdar ki entry hogi kiya? Anyway leekhtay rahiya bindas….writing enjoyable hai aur bahut clear hai….saath may rahengay….keep updating.

Aur do din wait karte hai mene admin mail kiya hai iske regarding 
Unka kya decision hai wo dekhte hai uske baad me next update me pura recap dal dungi..

[PariLuthra]

Aapka story main page say gayeb ho giya…logo ko pata nehi chalega….to story ka naam change kar saktay ho to readers ko samajh ayega. Peechay ka thora sa background de dengay to people can relate.

Mainay naya update para…bahut achcha tarikay say bayan kiya aap nay….now mali aur dudhwala do kirdar ki entry hogi kiya? Anyway leekhtay rahiya bindas….writing enjoyable hai aur bahut clear hai….saath may rahengay….keep updating.

Story main page par wapas aa chuki hai aur ab se regular updates bhejti rahungi..
Gardner (mali) ka aham role hai par dudhwale ka itna jyda nahi hai. Ye real touch hai jo hua tha wahi mention kiya hai... So padhte rahiye. Aaj ka update shyam tak dungi story me ...

[Hotgiri]

Pls give update on Manasi story

[swati1235779]

Please update on this story