Yesterday, 09:50 AM
One of the best buildups .Great work.
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Thriller The Couple's Experiment – The Truth Changes Everything
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Yesterday, 09:50 AM
One of the best buildups .Great work.
Yesterday, 10:39 AM
This thriller will overtake all your previous work. All the best for the story.
Yesterday, 10:56 AM
I want Tara to stand out as her own character, not as a copy of Nikitha.(last story character ).The reason I say this is that Tara's character seems to be someone who hurts herself while also hurting the person who truly loves her. If she broke down after seeing her husband's condition when she came out of the bathroom, then why did she choose to play such a reckless and dangerous game? .No one knows Jeeva's side of the story yet. Only when it's revealed will we know who is really trying to pull whom down.
Condom packet Author saying " it must have slipped out earlier when she had moved her things " .If it was accidental, why was Tara crying? That's the part I don't understand.
Yesterday, 11:01 AM
(Yesterday, 09:35 AM)RCF Wrote: Tara wants lively life, she wants marriage without boredom, she wants her husband with more attention towards her, she do not want a calm husband and boring one. So instead of talking it through words and make her husband take her seriously, she planned a deliberate devious plan to kindle things between them organically.... As usual, RCF has done an excellent job of explaining Tara's character.
Yesterday, 11:16 AM
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This time, I’m not even going to read the comments, just the story.
Already enjoying this just sitting back as a spectator, no assumptions, no guessing, no wild scenarios playing in my head. For once, I just want to enjoy the show without getting emotionally attached. Let me be a little horny, have some fun, and simply enjoy the ride.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
Yesterday, 11:32 AM
(Yesterday, 11:01 AM)saka1981 Wrote: As usual, RCF has done an excellent job of explaining Tara's character. This time its not that simple my friend...Author weaving something crazy here... Tara seems too complicated to even understand her at least as of now...I only explained or tried to understand her from one perspective but there are layers here that are contradictory or at least need further clarity in future chapters or more anxiousness from husband to investigate and find out the truth....remember the truth changes everything is story name... 1. In first chapter, its clearly a love bite..her husband should know easily...Insect bite on breasts? very rare and not easy...instead of settling the matter with proper dialogue she changes topic towards his diary and Ramya... 2. I think in one of the chapters..Jeeva clearly accuses of her wanting Sam and this game is a means to get it with out guilt, any woman gets angry at it and would have made a big scene...here she simply drops a liner that "Looks like you don't trust me" but she doesn't drop the idea of this experiment? why? Wouldn't her husband doubting her right even before the game started make her drop the whole plan? Isn't it already giving bad vibes? so why is she still pushing for Sam? 3. Also I think in the same chapter Jeeva opens says "so you like to get fucked by him" its a critical time to choose a partner, She, in the beginning calms Jeeva's nerves by saying the partner choice is opposite person's so Jeeva get to choose her partner but the yardstick she chose is in such a way that Sam measures on top on the list...one who is pursuing her the most and will seduce her easily is the yardstick? why such criteria? The one criteria that decides everything is her own invention: highest capability to seduce, highest real test and when the list is being narrowed, that's when she reveals Sam pressing her tightly in lift and how she could feel everything at that moment and how she avoided him since then...what if she avoided but couldn't stop thinking about that lift scene? That means, the criteria and the man who fits well into the criteria is chosen carefully as the yardstick. why? 4. In recordings - Sam mentioned he would come right away and in a respectable way...Karthik asks for a date in beach...so who is the real test here? Karthik is the one who is more eager to take her to bed but she is interested in Sam...why? My earlier comment reveals one reason it could be where she might not feel safe with Karthik, true but why didn't she reveal that to Jeeva that Karthik cannot maintain secrecy as you can see background check reveals but that background check came a day later...so there should be some other reason..she wants Sam here...its clear, whether the reason is noble or not we will find out soon... 5. Jeeva questions her..."Are you tempted by someone" ...she replies saying "I want a friendship... our life is mundane, can't you see that" if all she wants is new friendship then isn't Arun or Nikhil best choice? then why the experiment? This wanting friendship contradicts the bringing out the jealousy from her husband theory.. So you see we are still way early in the story to be able to even gauge her character or any other plot signs. ~RCF
Yesterday, 11:51 AM
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(Yesterday, 11:32 AM)RCF Wrote: This time its not that simple my friend...Author weaving something crazy here...Tara's character is layered and complex. One of this author's greatest strengths is that just when we become convinced that a particular person is the culprit, the very next chapter proves us wrong. That's why, This time, I'll try to understand the characterization.(You are an expert at this.) I'm not going to speculate about what will happen next. I'll simply ask why the events in the latest chapter unfolded the way they did.
Yesterday, 11:56 AM
When Jeeva enters house, he finds dining room condition as follows:
"The dining chairs were not pushed in properly. Two of them stood at odd angles, as if people had left them in a hurry. On the table itself, several vessels and the serving spoon had been shifted all the way to the far edge — the way things move when someone is pressed against the table and needs space." Jeeva gets following text "Tara: He’s eating. Almost nearing climax. Will leave soon. Wait outside until I text." Draw your own conclusions. She shows him a text she had typed but never sent: He’s gone. You can come up. Why not send ???? She plays apartment gate application visitor log. Clear as day: Sam Arya’s vehicle exited at 8:18 p.m. Vehicle left. Whats App sent by Sam at 8:21 does not indicate his location. Then there is uncertainity about box of condoms. I have not drawn any conjectures. All above is quoted from the story
Yesterday, 02:01 PM
Story is only in intro fase and you guys are behaving like we are near climax. Stop mentioning every small details and stop drowing conclusions. Let author write atleast 50 - 60 chapters. I think this story will have more updates than last story.
I think following things will happen (as per past 2 story): Tara will fuck Sam definitely. Now don't ask me why and how. She will definitely find a reason. Jeeva will become a cuck. He will be traumatized & emotionally tortured by his 7 year wife or love of his life. That's the whole story. All we can do is just enjoy the flow. Don't get emotional. Maintain your mental peace and enjoy. Don't know how this Sam and that other lady character will develop. But I think Sam will walk away after fucking Tara. And don't expect Tara to consider her husband's emotions or anything else. She will just cuck her husband and later will do some randi rona and Jeeva will somehow find that TRUE LOVE means becoming a CUCKOLD and letting his wife fuck someone else. So the marriage will survive. And Jeeva will not be able to fuck that other lady as much. I am intentionally not using her name because it is a story about Tara fucking Sam, not Jeeva fucking her. Don't try to find any logic about Tara's action. She will commit adultery and will still find a cuck to literally worship the ground on which she is walking. She will become a ideal Woman for other sluts. A well gym going hunk to fuck her senseless and a cuck husband for society.
Yesterday, 02:35 PM
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I am getting bored. So I am writing some bullshit. Don't take it seriously. This has nothing to do with the story.
Story of Condom:- After getting bored by her husband, Tara is trying to find some excitement by having sex with someone else. But she didn't want to be called a Whore. So, this experiment. After manipulating her husband she started this whoring journey. Dinner sean: Sam liked the food. But he like the cook more. So he informed her already that he will eat her after eating her food. Tara was also very excited. During dinner Sam was not able to control himself. So he started kissing her. But Tara want to use condom. How can Sam allow it. He is a MAN not a cuck. So he throws the condom and bend Tara at dinner table and started fucking her then and there. During the process that cuckold husband become despo. So he texted his lovely wife ( which is getting fucked at that time). As a dutiful wife how can Tara hide the actual situation from her cuckold husband. So Tara texted him about CLIMAX. But Tara being crazy cunning bitch, was well aware that her despo husband will not wait outside and will come crying. So she begged Sam to end the session in hurry. After westing her 7 years will a boring man, finally she is having sex with a real man. And she is also having the thrill of getting fucked while her husband is standing outside. This is the kind of thrill she is carving for. So she was desperate for erasing the evidences. So that she can continue this thrill. But unfortunately her despo cucky walkes in before she complete her bathing and rearranging the dinner table. Gor her this is very unexciting. So she become irritated. Condom trophy: As that condom was snatched from her hand and thrown away by a real man and after that she was fucked in a rough manner. She might have cummed for 1st time in 7 years. So she will treasure that condom like a souvenir. That is not just any other condom.
11 hours ago
Chapter 17 – Five Kilometres Away [SAM POV]
Five kilometres from the apartment where Tara still lay awake, Sam Arya sat on the edge of his bed in the dark, cock half-hard against his thigh, mind replaying the night in slow, frustrated loops. He could not sleep. Not after coming that close. Two weeks. That was all it had taken for the woman he had wanted to fuck for years to suddenly open the door herself. He had watched Tara for a long time. Longer than he liked to admit. That face alone was enough — sharp, clean, unfairly beautiful. The kind of face that made a man hard just from standing near her in a meeting. Her body was quieter but no less dangerous: soft breasts that moved under her kurtas, a narrow waist, hips that filled her sarees in a way that stayed in a man’s mind long after she walked past. He had jerked off to the memory of her more times than he could count. Especially after the lift. That evening months ago the crowd had pushed him forward. For a few long seconds his chest had crushed against her tits. He felt the soft give of them, the warmth of her body, the exact shape of her nipples through the thin fabric. He could have stepped back. He had not. He had stayed, letting the pressure continue until the doors opened. She had gone quiet after that day. Stopped unnecessary conversation. He had thought the chance was dead. He was not desperate. His wife and kids lived in another state. Loneliness was real, but he had other women when he needed them — careful, hotel-room affairs that never reached his real life. He was a family man. He did not risk everything for ordinary sex. But Tara was different. She was the hard-to-get kind. The kind that made the hunger sharper. Taking a woman who had kept every door shut for years felt like a real conquest. But it happened like a miracle one day, two weeks back, its an approach from Tara. he had walked into his cabin with a tablet and a soft question about a new design application. She sat closer than necessary. Her knee almost touched his. He showed her the shortcuts. She listened. When she left she smiled at him in the corridor the next morning. Then the morning after that. The smiles were small, almost private. They felt like invitations he had not earned. He did not trust invitations that arrived too easily. He tested her. When she asked him to accompany her to a financier — a story that already smelled wrong — he said yes, only to watch her face. The meeting never happened. Instead she suggested coffee “to thank him properly.” The first coffee was formal. The second was less so. By the fourth evening it had become routine: she finished her work, he finished his, they left the building together, and the café table was already waiting. No one asked for the routine. It simply existed. He did not trust how fast it moved. A woman like Tara did not suddenly start inviting a married colleague into her evenings without a reason. So he watched. He waited. He kept his hands to himself and let her make the next move. Then came the birthday. She called him at midnight. Her voice was warm, almost playful. “You’re soon going to get what you’ve wished for a long time.” He knew exactly what he had wished for. Her under him. Legs open. That perfect face twisted while he fucked her. When she asked that morning if he was going home for the birthday, he told her the truth: no. His family was away. That is when she invited him home for dinner. He said yes without hesitation. In the car that evening, with her sitting beside him in a cream saree that moved every time the vehicle turned, the decision formed cleanly. He stopped at a medical shop under the excuse of buying medicine. Inside he took one single pack from a box of three, slid it into the front pocket of his jeans, and left the rest on the counter. Just in case luck decided to favour him. The apartment was quiet when they arrived. No second pair of shoes at the door. No male voice. She went straight to the kitchen, already prepared — ready mixes, chicken bought on the way, rice steaming. He asked about her husband. She answered lightly that Jeeva would come soon, that he was delayed at the office. The words sat between them like a clock. Hours passed. The food was ready. Still no husband. Sam ate slowly, watching her. Around 8:15 she checked her phone. That was when the idea hit him clean and hard. He reached for the hot-water jug, pretended to be careless, and let it tip. Hot water splashed across the table, across the front of her saree, across his shirt. Steam rose. The wet fabric clung to her blouse, outlining her breasts clearly, the dark line of cleavage visible where the saree had shifted. His intent was simple use this scenaior, appear half naked before her, use this and make a move. She jumped back. “I’m sorry,” he said. “It’s too hot. I wasn’t careful.” She looked down at herself. Then at him, “You should dry yourself. That’s the bedroom. I’ll bring a towel.” Sam expected exactly the same He went in and closed the door. He stripped off the wet shirt and hung it on the chair. When she returned with the towel she stopped for half a second at the sight of his bare chest. He took the towel. Their fingers touched. She left. He waited. He removed his jeans as well. The condom pack fallen when the jeans came off; he did'nt see it yet. He stood there in only his briefs, cock already thickening from the possibility. He wanted her to come back. He wanted the door to open while he was like this. He wanted to see her face when she realised he was ready to fuck her right there on her marital bed if she gave the smallest sign. Instead her voice came through the wood, raised and urgent. “Sam — my husband will take five minutes to arrive. He always has the habit of taking a bath the moment he comes in. Don’t take too much time. Sorry.” The words killed the moment cold. He stood frozen, cock still half-hard, anger rising sharp in his chest. She had known exactly how close he was. She had shut it down deliberately. He dressed quickly. When he picked up the jeans the pocket was empty. The condom was gone — somewhere on the floor, under the bed, against the wall. He had no time to search. A soft knock sounded. He opened the door with his face controlled. Outside, Tara had already shifted every vessel to one side of the table. The chairs stood at odd angles. The air still smelled of spice and hot water. “I’m leaving,” he said. “I’m sorry for the mess.” He let his eyes drop once more to the wet front of her saree, to the clear shape of her breasts. She noticed. She immediately adjust the fabric. “Goodbye, Sam. Sorry I could not treat you well. It’s all messy.” “I have equal share in that,” he answered. Then he left telling dry yourself, dont catch cold. In the car he sat for a full minute before starting the engine. The missing condom bothered him less than the speed with which she had closed the door on him. She knew what he wanted. She had felt the intention the moment he spilled the water. If she found the condom later and said nothing, that silence itself would mean she was willing to keep the door open. He drove home, showered, and lay on the bed staring at the ceiling, cock still restless. She knows I came prepared to fuck her, he thought. And she didn’t ask about the condom. That means either she is pretending not to see… or she is ready to let it happen next time. He closed his eyes, already deciding he would push harder. Morning at Tara's house Jeeva was still in the bathroom when she knelt beside the bed and reached under it. Her fingers closed around the small square packet. She quickly decided to placed that in the box she usually hold it, but she don't remember taking one out of it and keep it ready — a quiet contingency in case the experiment ever went further than planned. But the colour was wrong. Same brand, different shade, a faint printed flavour she had never bought. She stared at it. The house had been cleaned thoroughly the previous morning after Jeeva left early. No one else had entered the bedroom except Sam, for those few minutes while he dried his shirt. Her eyebrow rose once, slowly. So he had walked into her house with a condom in his pocket. He had come ready to fuck her on her own bed if the chance appeared. The realisation did not shock her as much as it should have. It settled instead like a quiet confirmation. The experiment had selected the right man. She wanted. Tara has her own secret, she wanted a right man for her intent, not sex. She pushed the foreign packet deeper under the bed, beside the one that belonged to her, and stood up before the bathroom door opened. Both of them — five kilometres apart and in the same house — now knew exactly what the other intended. The real test had only just begun. Now Tara realise how dangerous the game is, she wanted to take control, before Sam smells it.
10 hours ago
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He was half naked in her bedroom in front of her and it did not make any changes in her mind seeing his six pack?? He he.. when he went to medical she did not think anything strange..so it must be jeeva going to cross the line first. If she is reporting to sam, then she is doing this for her promotion as second agenda.
10 hours ago
Expect the unexpected
9 hours ago
It seems Sam is the one who can keep up with Tara's sexual appetite
9 hours ago
Sam and tara are more like Nikitha and tharun
8 hours ago
Sam was simply the correct instrument, Her intention doesn't seem either friendship as she stated nor invoking jealousy in her husband, neither it is an affair...so what was she looking for in this game?
She's still keeping one option open in case she slips, her own box under the bed confirms that but why go through so much risk after all these years....there seems to be some hidden agenda rather than simple friendship, testing loyalty or stirring her marriage for passion...none of them seem to be the reasons though shown them as intentions outside. There's a goal bigger here than either "fix the passion in marriage" or "want Sam"..what happens when Sam enters the game understanding her experiment...he is obviously already doubting her intentions all these two weeks, he won't be the one who will just be used as trash for her own experiment. ~RCF
7 hours ago
(8 hours ago)RCF Wrote: Sam was simply the correct instrument, Her intention doesn't seem either friendship as she stated nor invoking jealousy in her husband, neither it is an affair...so what was she looking for in this game? Perhaps that's why Jeeva didn't want Sam around. Did Tara's desire for Sam become so intense after the elevator incident that it blinded her to everything else?
7 hours ago
(7 hours ago)saka1981 Wrote: Perhaps that's why Jeeva didn't want Sam around. Did Tara's desire for Sam become so intense after the elevator incident that it blinded her to everything else? I do not think its desire, nor her intentions has anything to do with Sam..but she is playing with fire for sure..question is why? If she really has desire for Sam then nothing can stop her from having affair with Sam, he has proven record of sleeping with woman in secrecy already. He is clean outside too so her intention was never to cheat Jeeva for sure... ~RCF
6 hours ago
Hope sam won't take risk of coming to tara house of late. Instead he may take her to his apartment. Still eagerly waiting for beach story and gift.
6 hours ago
Welcome heygi!
This forum doesn't have much thriller stories. Hope this becomes the best one. |
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