Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair [COMPLETED]

[heygiwriter]

I know , Some commenteters really destroyed this beautiful story.
But I really wanted it's second season.
It's really sad this story doesn't get second season 
I really looking forward for Sneha and Aditya chemistry, how they get into they bed and Suresh taking revenge from Gautom.
But its not happening right....????

I wont . Im Sorry for that. 

Im just looking for some ideas, that interest me :) got some inputs in private message. lets see

[rk1300051]

I wont . Im Sorry for that. 

Im just looking for some ideas, that interest me :) got some inputs in private message. lets see

Sorry I have no clue.
But may some day you write this story without an outstanding plots.

[heygiwriter]

Sorry I have no clue.
But may some day you write this story without an outstanding plots.

Very tough, just try to be in my shoe, the amount of negativity it got. Even this story i had bit rushed towards end. As i feared if this will be unfinished story given my personal issues. Anyhow managed.

[RCF]

Read most of your stories late and here's my review even though its late.

Orchestration of wife's cheating:
Really good one, the emotional maturity at the end is too good. I liked the way husband thought out all scenarios for his wife before letting her go...though the story could extend little bit in terms of establishing the second partner and wife's chemistry well, seems their arc was rushed a bit. Husband being distant and cold to her could make her fall for other man but it was not covered in depth.

Husband's doubt:
My biggest gripe is this story, did not like it at all...the strength of this story is Rohan and how smoothly he manipulated the couple and esp Nivi..that aspect alone made me complete that story. I did not like bringing in the second couple and Rohan shifting to different woman nor the ending how ladies take control and Prem is merely a pawn at the beginning and also a pappu at the end. He should have got his credit for investigating and finding the truth and should have an emotional breakdown with Nivi but it didn't happen and story went into completely different arc with two other characters involvement. Least fav of your story for me.

Mirna: This one, yet to read, heard great things about it, will read when time permits...Usually I do not like to read stories that are completed....its like watching a movie while it is playing in theater vs watching on OTT after an yr.

100 days: This one is again one of the best stories, though at the end it was prolonged like a serial, Surya coming back and understanding things why Rahul did what he did should have been the ending...Its Rahul's sacrifice that gave him Anandi in the first place and should have recognized the efforts he put into making his wife fall for him, so everything that came after that and its credit goes to Rahul, even though he conspired and made him to go to Jail, Surya should have forgiven him and gave their life back to them....that would have been apt than this sharing between both men at the end, that screwed it up for me but overall much matured writing in this one.

Wife's Dilemma: This one I think can be finished, I liked it midway until the repetitive sessions and back & forth for Sneha with out consistency in her stand made her character weak, I am sure that is the reason you are not completing it. Suresh and Gautham are fine and its Sneha's character arc I felt is screwed up emotionally. I understand why wouldn't take it further.

Nikita: one of the best on this forum in terms of situations and screenplay writing.

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Read most of your stories late and here's my review even though its late.

Orchestration of wife's cheating:
Really good one, the emotional maturity at the end is too good. I liked the way husband thought out all scenarios for his wife before letting her go...though the story could extend little bit in terms of establishing the second partner and wife's chemistry well, seems their arc was rushed a bit. Husband being distant and cold to her could make her fall for other man but it was not covered in depth.

Husband's doubt:
My biggest gripe is this story, did not like it at all...the strength of this story is Rohan and how smoothly he manipulated the couple and esp Nivi..that aspect alone made me complete that story. I did not like bringing in the second couple and Rohan shifting to different woman nor the ending how ladies take control and Prem is merely a pawn at the beginning and also a pappu at the end. He should have got his credit for investigating and finding the truth and should have an emotional breakdown with Nivi but it didn't happen and story went into completely different arc with two other characters involvement. Least fav of your story for me.

Mirna: This one, yet to read, heard great things about it, will read when time permits...Usually I do not like to read stories that are completed....its like watching a movie while it is playing in theater vs watching on OTT after an yr.

100 days: This one is again one of the best stories, though at the end it was prolonged like a serial, Surya coming back and understanding things why Rahul did what he did should have been the ending...Its Rahul's sacrifice that gave him Anandi in the first place and should have recognized the efforts he put into making his wife fall for him, so everything that came after that and its credit goes to Rahul, even though he conspired and made him to go to Jail, Surya should have forgiven him and gave their life back to them....that would have been apt than this sharing between both men at the end, that screwed it up for me but overall much matured writing in this one.

Wife's Dilemma: This one I think can be finished, I liked it midway until the repetitive sessions and back & forth for Sneha with out consistency in her stand made her character weak, I am sure that is the reason you are not completing it. Suresh and Gautham are fine and its Sneha's character arc I felt is screwed up emotionally. I understand why wouldn't take it further.

Nikita: one of the best on this forum in terms of situations and screenplay writing.

~RCF

Thanks a lot

but i would suggest you to read MIRNA story its my best work i would say. Nikitha is second best of mine. 

Rest had many flaws and i take some liberty, but i would agree Rahul Nivi story is worst of mine.

[Hotgiri]

Hey Heygi

I like Rahul and Nivi Story

[heygiwriter]

Hey Heygi

I like Rahul and Nivi Story

i Rank it worst :) for many reasons i noticed after

[Hotgiri]

I am looking for same story where there is no emotional attachment and each one enjoy with others

[Yours_bear_for]

i Rank it worst :) for many reasons i noticed after

In future will you bring part 2 of this story or something else related to this plot or story?

[amzad2004]

Plot : Husband age 40, Wife age 35, They have 1 high college going kid. Husband's older brother's son came to stay with them and get admission in college near their home. Later he is beginning to lust his chachi. Then drama and family struggle will started. Heygi you can consider this plot. Hope this innocent comment would not deleted by you. :D

[Mrmoon]

Heygiwriter,

I like this story..and i say u r the best writer in this xossipy.  What ever happens is happens, whether umight  got trapped with users comments.

I kindly request you to complete sneha and suresh story in what ever way u want but please wrap up the story...incomplete will not suit you..

Thanks

Your straight forwarded fan

[shrujay123]

Plot : Husband age 40, Wife age 35, They have 1  high college going kid. Husband's older brother's son came to stay with them and get admission in college near their home. Later he is beginning to lust his chachi. Then drama and family struggle will started. Heygi you can consider this plot. Hope this innocent comment would not deleted by you. :D

Bro right about old man young wife neighbour storie it's hot

[amzad2004]

Bro right about old man young wife neighbour storie it's hot

I do not agree bro. It is not logical bro. In reality old men are usually have diabetes BP problems. They could not satisfied young women. So young men is appropriate.