Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair [COMPLETED]

[heygiwriter]

Thanks once again Heygi!!

It's such a beautiful thing how you made this story progress and completed the way you envisioned.. As an author you have the freedom to end the story how you wanted to end and when it aligns with what readers thought it would give appreciation and if it doesn't go the way readers thought it would give negative/critical feedback.. my point is some readers are writing comments that are totally unrelated the way characters are portrayed ( i myself am guilty of this though I don't use strong bad words), i would only request you to keep your cool because most of the readers (incl me) read what is written but not read the nuances or unwritten things (like RCF),  so I suggest you not to respond or not respond harshly to those readers....

Having said this, I will just say that never ever change your vision of any story that you are writing based on readers because the characters you create play to your tune and bt changing based on readers demand you will not be able to do justice to either your own vision or readers vision.. example is sneha suresh Gautham story where you yourself admitted that you didn't do justice to your vision... Hope you will take these suggestions from a friend who wishes you all the best for your future writings...

Also consider my earlier suggestion to venture into mainstream writing where you can capture more audience and enthrall them with your writings!!!

Read you very soon with your new story, my friend!!!

Thanks a lot

[saka1981]

How should I begin? Should I start by thanking Heygi bro  for this wonderful story. This doesn't satisfy me.

At first glance, the story seems simple—a husband and wife separate and eventually reunite. But what truly makes it special is the way the author has narrated it. The storytelling is so engaging that you can't never predict what will happen next. The unexpected twists, the way love and desire are woven together so naturally, and the reminder that everyone has hidden chapters in their lives that no one else gets to read—all of these make the story stand out.There is so much more to appreciate about it.

For those who ask, "Can things like this really happen in real life?", I would simply say: go and explore the world around you. There are many websites and communities where people openly share experiences involving unconventional relationships, including couples who willingly explore intimate experiences with other partners. Such situations do exist, even if they are not widely discussed.what matters most is  In b'lore  the some appartments belongs to the  living together cpls only .so manything around in the world . we can't predict it's wright or wrong . Boz everyone life is different .

Last one 

Heygi Bro , You are " MAGICAL SCREEN PLAY WRITER "

[heygiwriter]

How should I begin? Should I start by thanking Heygi bro  for this wonderful story. This doesn't satisfy me.

At first glance, the story seems simple—a husband and wife separate and eventually reunite. But what truly makes it special is the way the author has narrated it. The storytelling is so engaging that you can't never predict what will happen next. The unexpected twists, the way love and desire are woven together so naturally, and the reminder that everyone has hidden chapters in their lives that no one else gets to read—all of these make the story stand out.There is so much more to appreciate about it.

For those who ask, "Can things like this really happen in real life?", I would simply say: go and explore the world around you. There are many websites and communities where people openly share experiences involving unconventional relationships, including couples who willingly explore intimate experiences with other partners. Such situations do exist, even if they are not widely discussed.what matters most is  In b'lore  the some appartments belongs to the  living together cpls only .so manything around in the world . we can't predict it's wright or wrong . Boz everyone life is different .

Last one 

Heygi Bro , You are " MAGICAL SCREEN PLAY WRITER "

Thank you, but this doesnt satisfy you?

[saka1981]

You guys tell me what you guys wanted to do. 

Wont touch that Suresh Sneha story. 

Malavika story is in pipeline but i needed more time. 


Anything short we can try

Core Subject : "We don't realize the value of what we have while it's in our hands. It is only when it ends up in someone else's hands that we truly understand its worth."

Two married couples choose to exchange partners. It is only when each husband sees his wife in another man's embrace that he truly realizes her worth and understands the depth of what she means to him.

The reason I chose two men and two women is that when one woman is involved with two men, one person's heart is deeply hurt. One experiences pain while the other experiences pleasure. That's why I chose two men and two women instead.

[saka1981]

Thank you, but this doesnt satisfy you?

im not satisfied , i can write minimum 5 updates about ur choosing word's skill, character Design , screen play  , sply GIF & Erotic writing  skill ... "There's so much more I could say."

[heygiwriter]

Core Subject : "We don't realize the value of what we have while it's in our hands. It is only when it ends up in someone else's hands that we truly understand its worth."

Two married couples choose to exchange partners. It is only when each husband sees his wife in another man's embrace that he truly realizes her worth and understands the depth of what she means to him.

The reason I chose two men and two women is that when one woman is involved with two men, one person's heart is deeply hurt. One experiences pain while the other experiences pleasure. That's why I chose two men and two women instead.

Nice plot

[saka1981]

Nice plot

Note - Both are have babies .  one couple is feeding baby  stage .The reason I say we should have a child is that after the baby is born, there is a possibility of a small distance or strain developing between the husband and wife. They may not be physically intimate for some time. That is why I say this.

Heygi bro , I have only plot  . ur the master of playing with emotion & Screen play . so that i  suggests this plot

[Adi04]

You guys tell me what you guys wanted to do. 

Wont touch that Suresh Sneha story. 

Malavika story is in pipeline but i needed more time. 


Anything short we can try

Anything like son voyeur mother's affair with other person cheating with dad
Son watching each and every detail like whatapp chats ,phone call

[Runer]

You guys tell me what you guys wanted to do. 

Wont touch that Suresh Sneha story. 

Malavika story is in pipeline but i needed more time. 


Anything short we can try

When you wrote Mirna Vikram story, you told about a plot. Boss and employee's wife story.

[heygiwriter]

When you wrote Mirna Vikram story, you told about a plot. Boss and employee's wife story.

totally forget about that

[DasuLucky]

Thank You Heygi..   

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Hi heygi.


congratulations for completing your story successfully.

i enjoyed reading the emotional roller-coaster with lots of twits and turns. 

i like how you design your characters and situations between them.

i really appreciate your contribution to xossipy as writer.

i read some comments that disturb you. my suggestion for you " ignore them and keep moving forward ".  

if you searching for plot for your new story there are many you can try like : Cuckold, cheating, wife swap, wife sharing, open marriage,revenge, money world, [b]thriller, swingers with multiple different age couples, [/b] brothers loving one girl or sisters loving one guy, unexpected situations like wife and Husband travel some place and face different cultures sexually, .


keep up the good work like always you do.


Regards  
Ramesh_Rocky

[amzad2004]

Wow haygi you have got comment from one of the elite writer from exbi era. Sir Ramesh is one of the greatest of all time. You are one of VIP now in xossipy. Congratulation buddy. I am happy for you.

[rk1300051]

Why are you not writing Suresh and Sneha story'....?????

[heygiwriter]

Why are you not writing Suresh and Sneha story'....?????

i cannot continue it, the story got trapped as i listened to few commentators and now i could not do justify.

[Runer]

Write boss and employee's wife story ( your plot)

[heygiwriter]

Hi heygi.


congratulations for completing your story successfully.

i enjoyed reading the emotional roller-coaster with lots of twits and turns. 

i like how you design your characters and situations between them.

i really appreciate your contribution to xossipy as writer.

i read some comments that disturb you. my suggestion for you " ignore them and keep moving forward ".  

if you searching for plot for your new story there are many you can try like : Cuckold, cheating, wife swap, wife sharing, open marriage,revenge, money world, [b]thriller, swingers with multiple different age couples, [/b] brothers loving one girl or sisters loving one guy, unexpected situations like wife and Husband travel some place and face different cultures sexually, .


keep up the good work like always you do.


Regards  
Ramesh_Rocky

Thanks

[prshma]

You guys tell me what you guys wanted to do. 

Wont touch that Suresh Sneha story. 

Malavika story is in pipeline but i needed more time. 


Anything short we can try

Please write a story where the cheating wife and his lover are punished brutally by the husband. It will satisfy the readers a lot. 

[amzad2004]

i cannot continue it, the story got trapped as i listened to few commentators and now i could not do justify.

You have to get rid of the homewrecker obsession. You are not telling the truth. You took the advice and it became super hit. Now just make ghautam suffer.

[rk1300051]

i cannot continue it, the story got trapped as i listened to few commentators and now i could not do justify.

I know , Some commenteters really destroyed this beautiful story.
But I really wanted it's second season.
It's really sad this story doesn't get second season 
I really looking forward for Sneha and Aditya chemistry, how they get into they bed and Suresh taking revenge from Gautom.
But its not happening right....????