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I don't think tharun has any problem. It's because of the timing of he switching the pills, uk trip and revelation of Jay witnessing Tharun and Nikitha, Tharun being outside the door and Nikitha becoming more vulnerable because of Jays revelation that led Nikitha to have sex with Jay on that day in UK.. even if one of the above conditions didn't meet then she wouldn't have had sex with Jay... This is definitely one of the characters that stayed true to her compass of what's right in her eyes throughout the story..
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No consequences for Bitch.. Worst possible ending ?
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Meanwhile jay fucking sharmi brains out giving her second child.
I felt nikki avoid pills to give birth to Tharun child in remembrance of her love with him.
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Heygi,
Thanks for a wonderful experience of a story that left me going through all sort of emotions from each chapter to chapter... It's truly a great experience to read this story and engage during it's publishing... I am repeating my self when I say that your imagination and the way you construct scenarios and weave them in such a way is simply outstanding... Like i mentioned in previous comment the reveal from Jay witnessing Tharun and Nikitha couldn't have happened at a better time to lower her guard and go with the flow to have sex with Jay when Tharun is standing outside the door.. I mean you clearly wrote why Jay can't say no to her on the UK flight and you brought that when Nikitha asks Jay to not deny her wish to be intimate with Jay... Simply superb!!!
I have only couple of question (if you want to answer),
1. By asking for round 2, are you implying that Nikitha felt the same gratitude she felt for Jay earlier with Tharun and because it's their farewell thing and it's how she wanted to express her gratitude or did jay message her about Sharmi's wish that they wanted second baby that made Nikitha go for 2nd round?
2. Why do you do these endings Heygi like Rahul Anandhi Suriya and Vikram Mirna Bharat? I actually wrote this in one of my earlier comments that it gives raise to lot of ambiguity in the readers minds
On a whole I really appreciate your writing, commitment and engagement to/with the readers
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Dear Author please start Suresh and Sneha story
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Author’s Note
Jay-Nikitha life is already beautiful — there is nothing that needs to be shown as “better” than this.
The playful conversation of Jay and Nikitha was deliberately written to highlight their deep level of understanding, trust, bond, and openness.
The “Homecoming” is the perfect ending. Nikkitha has completed her promise. Tharun is finally moving on.
The second round was her gift to him — she didn’t want to leave anything unfulfilled. She wanted him to have that sense of completeness.
Jay’s text after Sharmi hinted about wanting a second child was not about good or bad or a matter of topic to be discussed.
it was about how perfectly Jay understands Nikkitha. Their resolute stands strong: no hiding, no half-communication.
Whatever Jay sent (It can be Jay wanted to have sex, or he could have simply said i sent her home after knowing the intention), it was exactly what she wanted jay too do in that moment. That silent understanding made her heart pull toward home even faster.
That is why she initiated the second round — to close this chapter completely for Tharun, so she could return to Jay sooner.
This chapter is both end and epilogue.
(This post was last modified: 19-07-2026, 10:28 PM by
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Thanks a bunch for this wonderful story.
Appreciate your efforts to complete this
Take a Bow!!!
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Thanks to every one who patiently travelled on this story. Special thanks to RCF , his analysis helped readers to understand story better.
and to every other supporters a milion thanks.
I wiill take a short break, i will come back with new story. :) But if you guys have any plot ideas or wish you can post it here or send private messages.
Thanks
With Love
HeyGi
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Thanks for the story HeyGI
Enjoyed and entertained thoroughly! Well deserved applause and appreciation from all of us.
Hopefully your next is not a cuckold story, I hate that genre lol
~ RCF
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Few questions still in mind
Even after having a puppy love with Mithra and marrying her why did Tharun not get along is something I did not like.
You could have brought the family of Jay and Nikitha together.
Sad that Mithra and Tharun family not thankful to Nikitha. Why Mithra not successful in claiming Tharun.
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Thanks once again Heygi!!
It's such a beautiful thing how you made this story progress and completed the way you envisioned.. As an author you have the freedom to end the story how you wanted to end and when it aligns with what readers thought it would give appreciation and if it doesn't go the way readers thought it would give negative/critical feedback.. my point is some readers are writing comments that are totally unrelated the way characters are portrayed ( i myself am guilty of this though I don't use strong bad words), i would only request you to keep your cool because most of the readers (incl me) read what is written but not read the nuances or unwritten things (like RCF), so I suggest you not to respond or not respond harshly to those readers....
Having said this, I will just say that never ever change your vision of any story that you are writing based on readers because the characters you create play to your tune and bt changing based on readers demand you will not be able to do justice to either your own vision or readers vision.. example is sneha suresh Gautham story where you yourself admitted that you didn't do justice to your vision... Hope you will take these suggestions from a friend who wishes you all the best for your future writings...
Also consider my earlier suggestion to venture into mainstream writing where you can capture more audience and enthrall them with your writings!!!
Read you very soon with your new story, my friend!!!