Coerced Shadow: Entrapment of my mother

Rupak, a request for you - if you are even remotely considering the idea of altering the language of this story - please do not do that. Keep maintain the same for the rest of this story. Else, the consistency in the language will be lost. Bring about the changes in your approach regarding language from your next story.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Ray.Rowdy…I lost interest in this story. Lost the plot now… Currently writing another story in simple way with an erotic plot….trying to make this story more realistic…Story can be controversial….I feel this story is extremely impractical…son can’t see so many things…Next time onwards…I will try to reduce the sex scenes and focus on plot…Thanks for the feedback…It is not easy to write cuckold stories…
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Bro it's really hurting to read this message
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Rupak, feeling sad to read that you have lost interest in this story. And yes, it is always tough to write cuckold stories. For that matter, any stories. It takes a great amount of effort to pen down a story. I cannot even write a single line. 

Now, here I have seen one factor that plays a vital role in stories not getting completed is that - the writers start writing a story with great enthusiasm; however, most of the time, without clearly figuring out the climax of the story. And through midway, they lose direction and leave the story unfinished. That's been the major reason of many great stories here abandoned midway. And I have pointed out this fact many a times here in this forum. So, my request to you is that, please clearly chalk out the climax first and then start weaving your story. If possible, take your time, you don't have to rush. We are always with you. You will definitely come up with something very interesting - that is for sure. So, please structure out on the ending of the story first. Once it gets finalized, start writing. 

I am a fan of your stories since early days, way back to 15-16 years ago. I think your first story was "Aamar Bondhu Sanjayer Baba". Or, is that "Raja Saheb"? Plot of your stories are always exciting - no question about that. Hope the next one will not be an exception.

And one more thing. Regarding the language of your stories. I would like to request you to get back to your earlier language of narrating your stories. This used to be simpler and most engaging one. Now, it is up to you what approach you will take regarding the language.

In addition to that, the size of the story does not matter. What matters is that what impression it leaves behind on readers. For instance, your "Raja Saheb" and "Aamar Bondhu Sanjay er Baba" were not very big stories; however, they still resonate. There are also many stories of other writers which are not novels in size however they have strike a great chord with the readers. So, don't care about the size. Induct sex-scenes for the sake of the plot - not the other way round. If it feels sex-scenes are less however, your story is pretty well molded - then it's absolutely fine. Readers should have the feeling after finishing the story - "শেষ হইয়াও হইলো না শেষ". That's the ultimate compliment one writer can get. So, don't bother about the size of the story.

On an ending note, I would like to request you to consider finishing this current story without getting into too much of hassle - just to complete the arc and reasonable ending, just it should not be felt as an abrupt ending. Consider the idea - not bounding on you.

Will definitely waiting for your next one. And hope you will have well thought out the ending before starting this story.
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বাংলাই লিখেন আপনার গল্প অনেক মিস করছি
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this story reminded me of one of rupakda’s classics, “Bandho Darja”. Though, “kalo bari” and raja saheb had more intriguing erotic scenes.
Wish someday he would change his mind and continue the remaining part of this story, or at least one more part.
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The front door slammed open with a crack that vibrated through the entire flat.

I dropped the glass of water I’d been holding. It shattered against the floor, but neither Mom nor I moved. We just stared at the doorway.

Ravi stood there, his silk kurta soaked with sweat, face twisted into something between a grin and a snarl. His eyes swept past me, landed on Ma—still in that wrinkled yellow sari, phone clutched to her ear like a lifeline.

“Still talking,” he said, voice eerily calm. “I just had you last night, Debjani. And you’re already whining on the phone.”

Ma’s mouth opened, but no sound came out. Her fingers tightened around the receiver.

“To him, no less.” Ravi stepped over the broken glass, each footfall deliberate. “Your precious husband. I heard your voice from the stairwell. Whispering about being torn. About what I did to you.”

He was lying. He must have been listening from outside. The phone had been against her ear, but she hadn’t been speaking when he entered. She’d been listening—her breath hitched, face pale as Ravi’s voice crackled through the line from the penthouse.

But Ravi didn’t wait for corrections. He snatched the phone from her grip and slammed it onto the marble side table. The casing split, plastic scattering.

“Ravi—” Ma’s voice cracked, her hands rising as if to shield herself. “Please, he doesn’t know anything. I was just listening to you, you called me first, remember? You told me to stay home and wait.”

Ravi backhanded the air next to her face—close enough that her head snapped sideways from reflex alone. “Don’t lie to me in front of your son.” His eyes slid to me, dark and amused. “Ayan, come here. Sit on the sofa. You’re going to watch something educational.”

My feet wouldn’t move.

“Now,” he growled.

I shuffled to the sofa, my legs numb, body operating on some animal instinct to obey. To survive.

Ravi turned back to Ma. He grabbed her wrist and yanked her to her feet. The yellow sari slipped off her shoulder, revealing the mottled skin beneath—old bruises, new marks. She whimpered, not in pain, but in that particular tone I’d learned to recognize. Fear mixed with something far more dangerous.

“You know what happens to disobedient sluts, Debjani?” Ravi murmured, his lips brushing her ear. “They get broken somewhere new.”

Ma’s eyes found mine, wide and wet. She shook her head—not at me, at him. But her body was already leaning into his grip, her breath quickening in that telltale way.

Ravi’s free hand worked at her sari’s pallu, unraveling the fabric with rough efficiency. “You called me from home. You said you were torn. And now you’re sitting here, not resting, not preparing—mourning your dignity.” His teeth flashed. “That warrants correction.”

He ripped the sari away in one violent motion. The golden-yellow silk puddled at her feet, leaving her in just a thin petticoat and the frayed blouse. Her body was covered in marks—my body flinched, but I couldn’t look away.

“Turn around,” Ravi said. His voice left no room for negotiation.

Ma turned. Her back faced me, the hooks of her blouse visible across her shoulder blades. Ravi unhooked them one by one, the tiny metal clasps snapping free like small explosions in the quiet room.

“Bend over the sofa arm,” he said.

Ma’s knees buckled, but she managed to move. She bent over the arm of the sofa, her fingers clawing into the upholstery. Her face was turned toward me, tears streaking her cheeks, but her lips were parted. Her chest heaved.

Ravi lifted her petticoat. No underwear. His low whistle cut through the silence. “Already bare. You knew this was coming, didn’t you?”

Ma sobbed, but her hips pushed back an inch.

Ravi undid his own belt with one hand. The leather slid free with a hiss. For a terrible second, I thought he would hit her with it. Instead, he tossed it aside and freed himself. No condom, just like last night. The bare, flushed head of his cock glistened under the flat’s dull light.
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want me to continue?
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Yes continue
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Bhai Mera manana h ki isme rohan ko jyada include na ki uske papa ko rohan ko ye sab krne do kyuki hmlok ka age approx 24 h to apne aap ko soch kar story padhne mein jyada mja aata ya fir jo tumhari marzi
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any chance for update..
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