Coerced Shadow: Entrapment of my mother

[ray.rowdy]

Rupak, a request for you - if you are even remotely considering the idea of altering the language of this story - please do not do that. Keep maintain the same for the rest of this story. Else, the consistency in the language will be lost. Bring about the changes in your approach regarding language from your next story.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

[Rupakpolo1]

Ray.Rowdy…I lost interest in this story. Lost the plot now… Currently writing another story in simple way with an erotic plot….trying to make this story more realistic…Story can be controversial….I feel this story is extremely impractical…son can’t see so many things…Next time onwards…I will try to reduce the sex scenes and focus on plot…Thanks for the feedback…It is not easy to write cuckold stories…

[Farz@123]

Bro it's really hurting to read this message

[ray.rowdy]

Rupak, feeling sad to read that you have lost interest in this story. And yes, it is always tough to write cuckold stories. For that matter, any stories. It takes a great amount of effort to pen down a story. I cannot even write a single line. 

Now, here I have seen one factor that plays a vital role in stories not getting completed is that - the writers start writing a story with great enthusiasm; however, most of the time, without clearly figuring out the climax of the story. And through midway, they lose direction and leave the story unfinished. That's been the major reason of many great stories here abandoned midway. And I have pointed out this fact many a times here in this forum. So, my request to you is that, please clearly chalk out the climax first and then start weaving your story. If possible, take your time, you don't have to rush. We are always with you. You will definitely come up with something very interesting - that is for sure. So, please structure out on the ending of the story first. Once it gets finalized, start writing. 

I am a fan of your stories since early days, way back to 15-16 years ago. I think your first story was "Aamar Bondhu Sanjayer Baba". Or, is that "Raja Saheb"? Plot of your stories are always exciting - no question about that. Hope the next one will not be an exception.

And one more thing. Regarding the language of your stories. I would like to request you to get back to your earlier language of narrating your stories. This used to be simpler and most engaging one. Now, it is up to you what approach you will take regarding the language.

In addition to that, the size of the story does not matter. What matters is that what impression it leaves behind on readers. For instance, your "Raja Saheb" and "Aamar Bondhu Sanjay er Baba" were not very big stories; however, they still resonate. There are also many stories of other writers which are not novels in size however they have strike a great chord with the readers. So, don't care about the size. Induct sex-scenes for the sake of the plot - not the other way round. If it feels sex-scenes are less however, your story is pretty well molded - then it's absolutely fine. Readers should have the feeling after finishing the story - "শেষ হইয়াও হইলো না শেষ". That's the ultimate compliment one writer can get. So, don't bother about the size of the story.

On an ending note, I would like to request you to consider finishing this current story without getting into too much of hassle - just to complete the arc and reasonable ending, just it should not be felt as an abrupt ending. Consider the idea - not bounding on you.

Will definitely waiting for your next one. And hope you will have well thought out the ending before starting this story.