Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair

[heygiwriter]

One sincere request as i read Heygi comment earlier that things like "end the story" demotivates the writers . Please refrain from using such lines. Give all suggestions or criticisms or appreciations for the things that happened so far in the story with respect to characters in the story as that will tell them what the readers pulse is and make them refine their skill.

I can understand the anguish in your suggestion of ending because I myself is obsessing over this story but asking the author to put a specific ending is like hijacking a plane to take it to the destination we want.

Pls consider this in a constructive way.

 Thanks for voicing out. Its seriously demotivated me, a part of our brain will only register something like that. 

We would forget how we spend laughing at all jokes, but a slap will be remembered for ever.  For an author "End the Story" is Slap and Humiliation.

[heygiwriter]

In the whole of the last chapter there was no Jay in Nikitha's mind.  She has moved on from Jay truly from the time she invited Tharun into her life. Only her promises and gratitude made her take care of Jay and some moments with Tharun made her realise Jay's love for her and her misunderstanding of jay in various situations

1. She thought about her and Jay's issues from months ago to apply them for Tharun.
2. When she thought about breaking hearts. She thought about only Mithra and Tharun's parents. She didn't consider Jay or Tharun or herself for that matter. Because she believed Jay moved on properly and her and Tharun's hearts are in the right place.
3. She casually discusses her sex with Jay with Tharun and mentions that her gratitude for Jay made her offer multiple rounds and the abundant care and love he showed

Heygi , probably after completing the story if you can do a simple Q&A round for clarity it would be great to know your thoughts process as an author

Sure

[RCF]

In the whole of the last chapter there was no Jay in Nikitha's mind.  She has moved on from Jay truly from the time she invited Tharun into her life. Only her promises and gratitude made her take care of Jay and some moments with Tharun made her realise Jay's love for her and her misunderstanding of jay in various situations

1. She thought about her and Jay's issues from months ago to apply them for Tharun.
2. When she thought about breaking hearts. She thought about only Mithra and Tharun's parents. She didn't consider Jay or Tharun or herself for that matter. Because she believed Jay moved on properly and her and Tharun's hearts are in the right place.
3. She casually discusses her sex with Jay with Tharun and mentions that her gratitude for Jay made her offer multiple rounds and the abundant care and love he showed

Heygi , probably after completing the story if you can do a simple Q&A round for clarity it would be great to know your thoughts process as an author

Nikita will not end up with Tharun, I have faith in her love...Trust love everything else do not matter. 

~RCF

[oxy.raj]

 Thanks for voicing out. Its seriously demotivated me, a part of our brain will only register something like that. 

We would forget how we spend laughing at all jokes, but a slap will be remembered for ever.  For an author "End the Story" is Slap and Humiliation.

Here is my two cents, Writing isn’t just typing words, it’s investing time, emotion, imagination, and patience into building something meaningful from nothing.

Writing is not casual labor. It’s hours of building worlds, shaping characters, rewriting, doubting, and still choosing to continue. The person who creates carries the full weight of that process. So when someone who has never written a story decides to step in and dictate how it should go, it doesn’t sound insightful—it sounds arrogant.

If you can’t create, that’s your limitation. But don’t stand on the sidelines and pretend to be a director of someone else’s work. That’s not guidance—it’s noise dressed up as opinion.

Respect the effort. Or stay out of it. Don't criticize the meal if you can't make one..

[Dorabooji]

Why jay parents not insistedvon Nikitha. They did not back her like Tharun parents did for mithra. Is that the love jay mom had on Nikki. Are they acted treating her like daughter in front of others . Where they gone in the divorce proceedings

[Mahesh12345]

 Thanks for voicing out. Its seriously demotivated me, a part of our brain will only register something like that. 

We would forget how we spend laughing at all jokes, but a slap will be remembered for ever.  For an author "End the Story" is Slap and Humiliation.

See writer it's not humiliation actually you played with reader's emotions because of your writings.

Every reader owns the character here every one knows it's a fictional story and it's not real but every reader owns the character to them. They feel like it's injustice for jay that's it only

Here actually reader's thought in one point of view and you thought iin other point of view that's the problem.

Actually reader's don't have personal grudge on you. They think only about characters that's it.

Every reader invest their own emotions in your story. At that point you succeed. In my point of view if any reader involve in the story then The writer succeed but here at your stories all reader's involved that means you got top position. Think in this way 

Rest of all your wish 

[heygiwriter]

Why jay parents not insistedvon Nikitha. They did not back her like Tharun parents did for mithra. Is that the love jay mom had on Nikki. Are they acted treating her like daughter in front of others . Where they gone in the divorce proceedings

Because unlike Mithra whose love is real,

Nikitha marriage is not bound by love but situation and Jay's mother know it.

This was last words shared by Jay's mom to her

//

His mother helped her up and hugged her tightly.

“You will always be our daughter,” she whispered. “No matter what.”

//

[Hornytamilan23]

I don't know only it's me.... First time in this site I don't like the sex scene.. between Nikitha and tharun.. may be due to the connection author created through lines....

Me too... nikitha and tharun, whatever happens between them... it didnt connect in anyway, especially copulation

[Hotgiri]

I really like Tarun and Nikita sex rather than she is having sex with Jay who already cheated her by having sex with Anjali

[Hornytamilan23]

Nikita will not end up with Tharun, I have faith in her love...Trust love everything else do not matter. 

~RCF

After all these Fiasco..

[DesertStorm]

Nikita will not end up with Tharun, I have faith in her love...Trust love everything else do not matter. 

~RCF

RCF, i might have mentioned this multiple times that I am hooked to  this story and reread the earlier chapters to find clues where Nikitha felt love towards Jay after their challenge. She definitely realised that Jay loved her deeply more than her own love for Jay in the past. Never once she felt love towards Jay in literal words like "I love Jay" even in her own thoughts .

She felt jealousy, concern, care and an overwhelming gratitude to make him a better person, to solve his family issues and to clear his name in the company etc., we know all these combined is what one can define as love but did she ever think that way even internally. What's her definition of love? 

She believes What Tharun showed is love even though so far she didn't reciprocate to Tharun that she loves him. But what did Tharun show atleast in the courting period and few instances after she moved in?

Remove the dates and romance in office, he showed he is patient, offered a shoulder, comforted her when she is down, fought with her parents (is it parallel to Jay Nikitha marriage), had sex with her knowing she is yet to love him. All this happened with Jay too. But she believed when those are happening with Jay , love is something more. She never defined that.

When she herself believes she is not loving Jay (she loved Jay till sometimes before Taruna entry as per her own admission) and she is not deserving of him, how will the reconciliation work. May be there is a way but I am not able to see the path.

[Hornytamilan23]

I really like Tarun and Nikita sex rather than she is having sex with Jay who already cheated her by having sex with Anjali

Super bro, Atleast you had a good time.

[Hotgiri]

Yes bro, I had good very good time with all heygi stories

[Priyaram]

Finally few people killed a very good story..
Hi writer ,,Any chance you change your mind and continue the story as you planned already please

[Dorabooji]

Nikitha will end up again in women's hostel or in an orphanage only.

Will mithra accept a man slept with a married woman for months as her husband.

[Priyaram]

I still believe,this story still has lot of dramas,emotions,sex etc
Please consider and make it a long story..

[Hotgiri]

Nikita will stay with Tarun at the end…

[amzad2004]

Hey heygi I wounder how many chapters you are goint to publish today? I am very much hopeful to see Nikkita sure about Jay and sharmi that they are not lovers and acknowledge about Jay's sacrifices. Her confusion on Tharun's past have made me stop wipping inside. I hope you are keeping this story narration according to logical as possible as you can. True love never dies, never lost. I hope you know that.

[RCF]

RCF, i might have mentioned this multiple times that I am hooked to  this story and reread the earlier chapters to find clues where Nikitha felt love towards Jay after their challenge. She definitely realised that Jay loved her deeply more than her own love for Jay in the past. Never once she felt love towards Jay in literal words like "I love Jay" even in her own thoughts .

She felt jealousy, concern, care and an overwhelming gratitude to make him a better person, to solve his family issues and to clear his name in the company etc., we know all these combined is what one can define as love but did she ever think that way even internally. What's her definition of love? 

She believes What Tharun showed is love even though so far she didn't reciprocate to Tharun that she loves him. But what did Tharun show atleast in the courting period and few instances after she moved in?

Remove the dates and romance in office, he showed he is patient, offered a shoulder, comforted her when she is down, fought with her parents (is it parallel to Jay Nikitha marriage), had sex with her knowing she is yet to love him. All this happened with Jay too. But she believed when those are happening with Jay , love is something more. She never defined that.

When she herself believes she is not loving Jay (she loved Jay till sometimes before Taruna entry as per her own admission) and she is not deserving of him, how will the reconciliation work. May be there is a way but I am not able to see the path.

Nikita committed to someone then the things you do for others you won't brand it as love, She thinks she moved on, she has always thought that she moved on, she was consistent in that behavior and mindset all the time. She made sure Jay is not loving her anymore and she committed to Tharun....so in her mind she moved on when she said yes for sex with Tharun in Mumbai, so nothing that happens will change that in her mind unless she knows that Tharun is not hers to have and claim. once that reality settles then her world will turn upside down to ashes...any other thought on who she loves, who is her partner, where would her life go from here, Do I really love Tharun or Jay, all these questions only come after her world crashes beneath her feet...

So only possibility for her to travel back in time and analyses her mistakes is when she knows Tharun cannot be hers anymore....Remember her words, I never had fatherly and motherly love, I only got it from you over the years but didn't realize it but now do not think I am missing out, I get it from Tharun...so what happens when she loses it, when that love that Tharun has for her is not a right one, he himself has not moved on from Mithra or Mithra did not move on from Tharun...where would Nikita end up? 

Every perspective that you are searching from Nikita won't happen until she loses Tharun....

Also, Do you think she did all the things she did for Jay only for escaping from guilt from her end?No maybe she is thinking its all about guilt, but its not guilt only, its her heart won't allow her to move on until she made sure Jay is OK. that's love bro...its not for her guilt she did all those things though it was projected that way all through the story, it is her love for Jay. Remember after her commitment, she ran on road naked because Jay is in danger...there is nothing Tharun could have done to stop her...only thing on her mind is Jay's life. Only that time alone her heart was running things everywhere else in this story her mind is ruling things, what happens when heart takes over again...

I know the ending is stretched to 3 months now from the time she left Jay and never thought about him which seems unusual to me but if she ends up with Tharun then maybe the ending is meant to be practical end. Readers need to adjust and see the things as consequences for the actions and live with those kind of message, which is fine...but not necessarily correct. 

~RCF

[Losliyafan]

Nikitha will end up again in women's hostel or in an orphanage only.

Will mithra accept a man slept with a married woman for months as her husband.

May be with Tharun child in her womb