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Nikitha's character arc is fantastic like closed to reality and the sex between tharun and Nikki is more erotic. Let nikki have sex with tharun continuously
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(03-07-2026, 02:36 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Bro, I read the chapters multiple times, so don't question my involvement. It's almost 2:20 a.m. here.
I didn't selectively read anything. We read the story chapter by chapter, often with long intervals between updates, so naturally each chapter evokes different emotions.
Jay and Nikkitha are the readers' favorites, and Tharun is also a genuinely good-hearted person.
But Nikkitha keeps swinging back and forth. She's always ten steps behind, and everything she realizes comes only after the damage is already done.
She understood Jay's point of view only after they slept together, so that scene was important from a storytelling perspective.
Usually, people on this site read such scenes for... you know why. But because I'm so invested in the characters, it didn't arouse me at all. It just made me feel the emotional weight of the situation.
When Jay was with Anjali, Nikkitha was deeply hurt. Later, Jay realized his mistake, regretted it, and sought forgiveness.
In the same way, Jay can forgive Nikkitha too. In fact, he's already waiting to take her back.
Tharun already knows that Nikkitha doesn't love him. So, realistically, Nikkitha could sit down with Jay, have one honest conversation, and resolve everything.
The story could end right there.
But if, even now, she's still unable to take a stand, and after another 100+ chapters she eventually ends up with Jay only after being in a physical relationship with Tharun countless times, then what was the point of stretching all this emotional conflict, dear?
Point is journey! Every character has its own journey, Had Nikita been at this state before Tharun, Had she realized this truth about Jay before Tharun she would have instantly expressed her love to Jay and would have opened her heart in a heartbeat. She would have made Jay feel secure in love, she would have made him learn to safely love again, she would have patiently waited for him to start loving again and would have helped him the process but alas life doesn't work that way so does this story...the knowledge of why Jay has been that way all this time despite sharing great sex with her and unresponsive at rest of the times she just learned through her experience from her own state with Tharun...Had Tharun not been in her life at all, she would have eventually just parted ways with divorce even though there is no man in her life as soon as loan is paid off....Couldn't you see, Tharun in her life, Sharmi in Jay's life are teaching them life lessons in their own way.....
In a way they are becoming catalysts for the real couple to understand each other better than they did when they were together.... So point is journey to a place where they both learn to love in a way a couple should learn and in process realize all their mistakes they did all this time which kept them away from each other emotionally...so I feel there are more lessons to learn for Jay esp and Nikita too before they can sit and talk through and become one, if at all that is possible.
Major obstacle from Nikita's side is her nature of keeping promises above everything in her life....she promised to stay with Jay for loan, as wife, as a partner to show world that she is his wife for his family....she is so bound to that promise that she forgot to love herself and think about herself for a long time...she craved that love from Jay but when she did not get it and when she met Tharun its like a drop in the dessert that sucks rain, she in her desperate state again bounded herself to Tharun with a promise...even in that state she made sure Jay is fine, he has some one who can take care of himself, he doesn't turn into some one she would hate eventually in his desperation..... so she kept him apart, her promises have been her doom and she needs to raise above those to see what she truly needs in her life, who is that one person who actually in real will keep her heart happy...everything else is meaning less until she realizes it no matter how many times she sleeps with Tharun.
For Jay, he has been this giant troll who is stone hearted and never has been responsive and talks less too...maybe he has become like that since his GF cheated him and that trauma can sometimes make one hate love and hate being in love again...though he can see that Nikita has always been his savior, been his companion, been there for him through thick and thin, he never appreciated it expressively until she is vexed up and planned to leave him, So his hidden feelings has risen once he started to experience the fear of losing her....so he still has to become that responsive husband who shows how much he loves his wife, mere words are not enough, he could take a leaf from Tharun who thinks about Nikita all the time, a simple gesture of taking her to movie as she has been tied to house taking care of Jay was such a thoughtful gesture...Jay needs to learn such thoughtfulness to be able to give what Nikita has always wished it came from Jay.
So this journey is from far from over to be able to resolve with a simple chit chat between lead couple....they are not ready yet nor they understand each other well yet....let see what's in store further in the story. Tharun's heavy involvement emotionally with Nikita is also a threat for the couple, when he is giving readily what Nikita always wanted with out much efforts like Jay, her tending towards her lover than husband is easy and she doesn't have to struggle against and fight against the promise she gave too but unfortunately heart doesn't work that way, the way mind works....so ending will be interesting.
~RCF
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(03-07-2026, 02:36 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Bro, I read the chapters multiple times, so don't question my involvement. It's almost 2:20 a.m. here.
I didn't selectively read anything. We read the story chapter by chapter, often with long intervals between updates, so naturally each chapter evokes different emotions.
Jay and Nikkitha are the readers' favorites, and Tharun is also a genuinely good-hearted person.
But Nikkitha keeps swinging back and forth. She's always ten steps behind, and everything she realizes comes only after the damage is already done.
She understood Jay's point of view only after they slept together, so that scene was important from a storytelling perspective.
Usually, people on this site read such scenes for... you know why. But because I'm so invested in the characters, it didn't arouse me at all. It just made me feel the emotional weight of the situation.
When Jay was with Anjali, Nikkitha was deeply hurt. Later, Jay realized his mistake, regretted it, and sought forgiveness.
In the same way, Jay can forgive Nikkitha too. In fact, he's already waiting to take her back.
Tharun already knows that Nikkitha doesn't love him. So, realistically, Nikkitha could sit down with Jay, have one honest conversation, and resolve everything.
The story could end right there.
But if, even now, she's still unable to take a stand, and after another 100+ chapters she eventually ends up with Jay only after being in a physical relationship with Tharun countless times, then what was the point of stretching all this emotional conflict, dear?
Don't give such suggestions. I have already tried that (after accident).
And Nikita will always cry. When she is inside Jay's bedroom - she will cry for Tharun and she will cry for Jay - when she is inside Tharun's bedroom. That's how story will continue otherwise it will end. And as per author, it is just the interval. We have to wait for climax.
And there are many more individuals who will appear in story like her stepmom etc.
So story will continue. Just enjoy the flow.
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(03-07-2026, 07:06 AM)RCF Wrote: Point is journey! Every character has its own journey, Had Nikita been at this state before Tharun, Had she realized this truth about Jay before Tharun she would have instantly expressed her love to Jay and would have opened her heart in a heartbeat. She would have made Jay feel secure in love, she would have made him learn to safely love again, she would have patiently waited for him to start loving again and would have helped him the process but alas life doesn't work that way so does this story...the knowledge of why Jay has been that way all this time despite sharing great sex with her and unresponsive at rest of the times she just learned through her experience from her own state with Tharun...Had Tharun not been in her life at all, she would have eventually just parted ways with divorce even though there is no man in her life as soon as loan is paid off....Couldn't you see, Tharun in her life, Sharmi in Jay's life are teaching them life lessons in their own way.....
In a way they are becoming catalysts for the real couple to understand each other better than they did when they were together.... So point is journey to a place where they both learn to love in a way a couple should learn and in process realize all their mistakes they did all this time which kept them away from each other emotionally...so I feel there are more lessons to learn for Jay esp and Nikita too before they can sit and talk through and become one, if at all that is possible.
Major obstacle from Nikita's side is her nature of keeping promises above everything in her life....she promised to stay with Jay for loan, as wife, as a partner to show world that she is his wife for his family....she is so bound to that promise that she forgot to love herself and think about herself for a long time...she craved that love from Jay but when she did not get it and when she met Tharun its like a drop in the dessert that sucks rain, she in her desperate state again bounded herself to Tharun with a promise...even in that state she made sure Jay is fine, he has some one who can take care of himself, he doesn't turn into some one she would hate eventually in his desperation..... so she kept him apart, her promises have been her doom and she needs to raise above those to see what she truly needs in her life, who is that one person who actually in real will keep her heart happy...everything else is meaning less until she realizes it no matter how many times she sleeps with Tharun.
For Jay, he has been this giant troll who is stone hearted and never has been responsive and talks less too...maybe he has become like that since his GF cheated him and that trauma can sometimes make one hate love and hate being in love again...though he can see that Nikita has always been his savior, been his companion, been there for him through thick and thin, he never appreciated it expressively until she is vexed up and planned to leave him, So his hidden feelings has risen once he started to experience the fear of losing her....so he still has to become that responsive husband who shows how much he loves his wife, mere words are not enough, he could take a leaf from Tharun who thinks about Nikita all the time, a simple gesture of taking her to movie as she has been tied to house taking care of Jay was such a thoughtful gesture...Jay needs to learn such thoughtfulness to be able to give what Nikita has always wished it came from Jay.
So this journey is from far from over to be able to resolve with a simple chit chat between lead couple....they are not ready yet nor they understand each other well yet....let see what's in store further in the story. Tharun's heavy involvement emotionally with Nikita is also a threat for the couple, when he is giving readily what Nikita always wanted with out much efforts like Jay, her tending towards her lover than husband is easy and she doesn't have to struggle against and fight against the promise she gave too but unfortunately heart doesn't work that way, the way mind works....so ending will be interesting.
~RCF
1000 Kisses.
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(03-07-2026, 07:42 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: 1000 Kisses.
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(03-07-2026, 02:36 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: The story could end right there.
When i quote this comment, i removed all other text of yours, to make a point, see as a writer seeing this single word will drain my energy my enthusiasm to post story. You may have 1000s of good points but for a writer this single word will only stick in the mind.
What I'm taking is, they wanted me to end the story. ??
Imagine you are a writer you post a lot stories, but when you people want you to end the story or like one user who always pin harsh words on me to write the story in the way he wants?
Like every one i had a world outside too. Im not asking you to stop criticizing, please select the words wisely, world will be same no matter if is stop this story or continue or stop writing itself. Similarly same for reader if they read this or skip this. Somewhere in middle we come here for a time for us, to get some pleasure in reading a sex story with some nice backing story, human emotions and situations. I came for that, my pleasure in writing. Your should be reading.. I rest my case here.
Another request stop using SUch bold fonts with heavy colors its disturbing to read.
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(03-07-2026, 07:56 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: When i quote this comment, i removed all other text of yours, to make a point, see as a writer seeing this single word will drain my energy my enthusiasm to post story. You may have 1000s of good points but for a writer this single word will only stick in the mind.
What I'm taking is, they wanted me to end the story. ??
Imagine you are a writer you post a lot stories, but when you people want you to end the story or like one user who always pin harsh words on me to write the story in the way he wants?
Like every one i had a world outside too. Im not asking you to stop criticizing, please select the words wisely, world will be same no matter if is stop this story or continue or stop writing itself. Similarly same for reader if they read this or skip this. Somewhere in middle we come here for a time for us, to get some pleasure in reading a sex story with some nice backing story, human emotions and situations. I came for that, my pleasure in writing. Your should be reading.. I rest my case here.
Another request stop using SUch bold fonts with heavy colors its disturbing to read.
He Heygi,
Don’t pay attention to his post, when people commented and criticised his story he couldn’t be able to bare and stop giving update the story and giving knowledge to here to others
He has ego and attitude which no one is care about, so please ignore comment people like him who don’t have any sense
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This was was absolutely gripping.
Complicated souls, confused minds & conflicted thoughts...Trademark Mr.Heygi.
Sir you have a great ability to put clear images in the reader's mind. Your writing has such a natural flow; it is incredibly easy to get swept up in the narrative. Eagerly awaiting to see how the story unravels. Counting down the moments until the next chapter. Thank you sir for the surreal reading experience.
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WAIT, WHAT DID I JUST READ?
When I was thinking it was impossible for Nikitha to go back towards Jay, especially after the way she and Tharun had been having intense sex in the bed, suddenly you brought in the mirror to show what she was doing? Like a relisation? I have never seen anything like that even in movies.
I was jerking off to the scene unfolding between Nikitha and Tharun. When he asked for a second round, I was seriously wondering if they would try a new position or something. Because just minutes back, she was responding to his request and wholeheartedly tried for him. But then came the surprise. Nikitha locked her gaze on the mirror. THE TRUTH OUT - UNEXPECTED and UNBELIEVALE YET IT WAS SO GOOD.
But WAIT DEAR AUTHOR
Before this scene, I actually wanted to scold you for bringing in the Nikitha and Tharun sex scene at all. In the previous chapter, we were left on a massive cliffhanger about who had come to Jay’s house to save him! I knew it could be Nikitha, but I was hoping it would be someone else. If it was her, I thought it would feel fake. After treating him so coldly for a whole week, why would she suddenly support him? Maybe she would bring the loan closure papers to show the uncle, but the uncle had not come for that, he came there just to ridicule him, right? So revealing loan paper looks illogical.
When such a serious incident was happening on Wednesday evening, the chapter ended abruptly on that cliffhanger. So I was furious when the next chapter went back to the Wednesday morning incident. Then you started explaining the mirror magic, and Tharun was spouting some nonsense that I mostly ignored because, the entire setup promises a upcoming hot sex scene, At least, I thought, I had a hot sex scene to enjoy.
But what i got after that was completely unexpected. Without any preaching, without anyone telling her anything, Nikitha learned her lesson through her own actions. She stood in Jay’s shoes for once.
Beautiful. Poetic.
Now that she has arrived at Jay’s place, the entire setup feels so authentic. She looks so much more beautiful as a character now.
Can’t wait to see what you have in store next!
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Now the next question is: who really deserves Nikitha?
Right now, I want to delete all my expectations and wishes from my mind. I just want to stay open. Let Nikitha, that sweet soul, choose whoever she wants. Let her enjoy whatever she wishes.
She is entering a long period of turmoil now. She already lost her mother once and may be longing for real love. Her father was just acted like stranger to her, as he only listened to her stepmother. I believe half her life has been loveless.
When she entered Jay’s life, she was honest and loyal. She carried genuine love for him. That’s why it’s so believable that she couldn’t endure the pain when she realised Jay compared her to Anjali, his side chick, and put them on the same level.
To a girl who grew up with a stepmother, it makes complete sense that she would naturally hate any woman who comes in as a side chick, right? So did the author create the stepmother character just for this purpose? and the step mother was cruel like she planned to marry of her to old man for money !
Now I understand why she got so hurt when Jay equated her with Anjali. Even if he said it only once, it must have dug deep into her wounds. That’s why one single action still makes her so mad at him.
Given such a loveless history, it makes sense why she went to Tharun when he gave her everything she needed.
Nikitha is a beautiful, misunderstood soul for the larger part of her life. I can really relate to that.
Now she have Tharun's care and love,
Now she understood Jay's sincere love, (expressed like her)
After years of being unloved in her stepmother’s house, the author has gifted her with two loves at once.
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(03-07-2026, 07:56 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: When i quote this comment, i removed all other text of yours, to make a point, see as a writer seeing this single word will drain my energy my enthusiasm to post story. You may have 1000s of good points but for a writer this single word will only stick in the mind.
What I'm taking is, they wanted me to end the story. ??
Imagine you are a writer you post a lot stories, but when you people want you to end the story or like one user who always pin harsh words on me to write the story in the way he wants?
Like every one i had a world outside too. Im not asking you to stop criticizing, please select the words wisely, world will be same no matter if is stop this story or continue or stop writing itself. Similarly same for reader if they read this or skip this. Somewhere in middle we come here for a time for us, to get some pleasure in reading a sex story with some nice backing story, human emotions and situations. I came for that, my pleasure in writing. Your should be reading.. I rest my case here.
Another request stop using SUch bold fonts with heavy colors its disturbing to read.
Very good. One point i made really stood out to you. In the same way, some parts of your chapters stood out to me, and that's why I shared my thoughts. It was the replies to those comments that triggered me.
As for everything else you mentioned, I've already said the same things to other readers and to Amzad. Be Gentle to the authors.
Your request is accepted. No font colour's, just black and white.
Also I'll try not to get emotionally attached to your characters anymore. And when I say that, please take it as a compliment—your characters are written so well that they genuinely touched my heart.
None of us is perfect. I'm not, and neither are you. Let's leave it at that and move forward. Case Dismissed.
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(03-07-2026, 08:38 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Very good. One point i made really stood out to you. In the same way, some parts of your chapters stood out to me, and that's why I shared my thoughts. It was the replies to those comments that triggered me.
As for everything else you mentioned, I've already said the same things to other readers and to Amzad. Be Gentle to the authors.
Your request is accepted. No font colour's, just black and white.
Also I'll try not to get emotionally attached to your characters anymore. And when I say that, please take it as a compliment—your characters are written so well that they genuinely touched my heart.
None of us is perfect. I'm not, and neither are you. Let's leave it at that and move forward. Case Dismissed.
Thanks :)
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(03-07-2026, 08:21 AM)robertnow Wrote: WAIT, WHAT DID I JUST READ?
When I was thinking it was impossible for Nikitha to go back towards Jay, especially after the way she and Tharun had been having intense sex in the bed, suddenly you brought in the mirror to show what she was doing? Like a relisation? I have never seen anything like that even in movies.
I was jerking off to the scene unfolding between Nikitha and Tharun. When he asked for a second round, I was seriously wondering if they would try a new position or something. Because just minutes back, she was responding to his request and wholeheartedly tried for him. But then came the surprise. Nikitha locked her gaze on the mirror. THE TRUTH OUT - UNEXPECTED and UNBELIEVALE YET IT WAS SO GOOD.
But WAIT DEAR AUTHOR
Before this scene, I actually wanted to scold you for bringing in the Nikitha and Tharun sex scene at all. In the previous chapter, we were left on a massive cliffhanger about who had come to Jay’s house to save him! I knew it could be Nikitha, but I was hoping it would be someone else. If it was her, I thought it would feel fake. After treating him so coldly for a whole week, why would she suddenly support him? Maybe she would bring the loan closure papers to show the uncle, but the uncle had not come for that, he came there just to ridicule him, right? So revealing loan paper looks illogical.
When such a serious incident was happening on Wednesday evening, the chapter ended abruptly on that cliffhanger. So I was furious when the next chapter went back to the Wednesday morning incident. Then you started explaining the mirror magic, and Tharun was spouting some nonsense that I mostly ignored because, the entire setup promises a upcoming hot sex scene, At least, I thought, I had a hot sex scene to enjoy.
But what i got after that was completely unexpected. Without any preaching, without anyone telling her anything, Nikitha learned her lesson through her own actions. She stood in Jay’s shoes for once.
Beautiful. Poetic.
Now that she has arrived at Jay’s place, the entire setup feels so authentic. She looks so much more beautiful as a character now.
Can’t wait to see what you have in store next!
I did make a similar comment. The only difference is that I didn't sugarcoat it or wrap it in polite words. I was direct and honest about how I felt. My intention was never to offend or disrespect anyone.
I simply chose to express my opinion as it was, without adding any "honey" to make it sound softer. Directness can sometimes come across as harsh, but it doesn't mean the intention behind it is malicious.
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(03-07-2026, 07:20 AM)jaatrangila99 Wrote: Don't give such suggestions. I have already tried that (after accident).
And Nikita will always cry. When she is inside Jay's bedroom - she will cry for Tharun and she will cry for Jay - when she is inside Tharun's bedroom. That's how story will continue otherwise it will end. And as per author, it is just the interval. We have to wait for climax.
And there are many more individuals who will appear in story like her stepmom etc.
So story will continue. Just enjoy the flow.
Sure, bud.
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(03-07-2026, 08:21 AM)robertnow Wrote: WAIT, WHAT DID I JUST READ?
When I was thinking it was impossible for Nikitha to go back towards Jay, especially after the way she and Tharun had been having intense sex in the bed, suddenly you brought in the mirror to show what she was doing? Like a relisation? I have never seen anything like that even in movies.
I was jerking off to the scene unfolding between Nikitha and Tharun. When he asked for a second round, I was seriously wondering if they would try a new position or something. Because just minutes back, she was responding to his request and wholeheartedly tried for him. But then came the surprise. Nikitha locked her gaze on the mirror. THE TRUTH OUT - UNEXPECTED and UNBELIEVALE YET IT WAS SO GOOD.
But WAIT DEAR AUTHOR
Before this scene, I actually wanted to scold you for bringing in the Nikitha and Tharun sex scene at all. In the previous chapter, we were left on a massive cliffhanger about who had come to Jay’s house to save him! I knew it could be Nikitha, but I was hoping it would be someone else. If it was her, I thought it would feel fake. After treating him so coldly for a whole week, why would she suddenly support him? Maybe she would bring the loan closure papers to show the uncle, but the uncle had not come for that, he came there just to ridicule him, right? So revealing loan paper looks illogical.
When such a serious incident was happening on Wednesday evening, the chapter ended abruptly on that cliffhanger. So I was furious when the next chapter went back to the Wednesday morning incident. Then you started explaining the mirror magic, and Tharun was spouting some nonsense that I mostly ignored because, the entire setup promises a upcoming hot sex scene, At least, I thought, I had a hot sex scene to enjoy.
But what i got after that was completely unexpected. Without any preaching, without anyone telling her anything, Nikitha learned her lesson through her own actions. She stood in Jay’s shoes for once.
Beautiful. Poetic.
Now that she has arrived at Jay’s place, the entire setup feels so authentic. She looks so much more beautiful as a character now.
Can’t wait to see what you have in store next!
Im Glad you Enjoyed it :)
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(03-07-2026, 08:00 AM)Hotgiri Wrote: He Heygi,
Don’t pay attention to his post, when people commented and criticised his story he couldn’t be able to bare and stop giving update the story and giving knowledge to here to others
He has ego and attitude which no one is care about, so please ignore comment people like him who don’t have any sense
Yes, you're 100% right. I'm well aware of my flaws. Maybe that's why, instead of spending my time reading H.Book, I'm addicted to this story. So please don't expect me to be the embodiment of goodness. I'm a pakka hypocrite, and I know it.
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(03-07-2026, 08:32 AM)robertnow Wrote: Now the next question is: who really deserves Nikitha?
Right now, I want to delete all my expectations and wishes from my mind. I just want to stay open. Let Nikitha, that sweet soul, choose whoever she wants. Let her enjoy whatever she wishes.
She is entering a long period of turmoil now. She already lost her mother once and may be longing for real love. Her father was just acted like stranger to her, as he only listened to her stepmother. I believe half her life has been loveless.
When she entered Jay’s life, she was honest and loyal. She carried genuine love for him. That’s why it’s so believable that she couldn’t endure the pain when she realised Jay compared her to Anjali, his side chick, and put them on the same level.
To a girl who grew up with a stepmother, it makes complete sense that she would naturally hate any woman who comes in as a side chick, right? So did the author create the stepmother character just for this purpose? and the step mother was cruel like she planned to marry of her to old man for money !
Now I understand why she got so hurt when Jay equated her with Anjali. Even if he said it only once, it must have dug deep into her wounds. That’s why one single action still makes her so mad at him.
Given such a loveless history, it makes sense why she went to Tharun when he gave her everything she needed.
Nikitha is a beautiful, misunderstood soul for the larger part of her life. I can really relate to that.
Now she have Tharun's care and love,
Now she understood Jay's sincere love, (expressed like her)
After years of being unloved in her stepmother’s house, the author has gifted her with two loves at once.
YES.
She yearned for Love, that she didn't get from her own home.
Her story comes a short flashback but i had removed it considering pace.
She had a beautiful life, when her biological mother was alive, who was a musical teacher by herself. Where she gained knowledge of playing Piano. Which is why when she found piano at Tharun's apartment she played it instantly, his house warmly reminded her mother because of piano.
But i reduced those details, as following scene they had to kiss, and some other elements.
Nikitha is even misread by many users, but we cant help it, like how she lately understood Jay, audience will take time to understand Nikitha, but before the climax, she would be understood by many.
Regarding who she will end up, i didn't think that way, climax will be mostly how she going to stay happy, and making her people happy :)
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(03-07-2026, 08:59 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Yes, you're 100% right. I'm well aware of my flaws. Maybe that's why, instead of spending my time reading holy books, I'm addicted to this story. So please don't expect me to be the embodiment of goodness. I'm a pakka hypocrite, and I know it.
Hi buddy,
Please don't mention holly books here. I also respect them and read them.
But we both are young. So we like sex as well. Sometimes we like things which are not acceptable as per society standards. Like adultery etc. Many times it is only sexual fantasies and nothing to do in real life. It doesn't make us hypocrite. It's just we are enjoying the things which are supposed to be enjoyed in this fase of life.
And yes I also observed it, that your intention is not wrong. Just like me, you don't know how to structure your reply. How to choose better words. In exactly your words "Honey".
Our reply provide completely opposite message (sometimes). Like we are saying something and after reading message is delivered something else.
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(03-07-2026, 07:06 AM)RCF Wrote: Point is journey! Every character has its own journey, Had Nikita been at this state before Tharun, Had she realized this truth about Jay before Tharun she would have instantly expressed her love to Jay and would have opened her heart in a heartbeat. She would have made Jay feel secure in love, she would have made him learn to safely love again, she would have patiently waited for him to start loving again and would have helped him the process but alas life doesn't work that way so does this story...the knowledge of why Jay has been that way all this time despite sharing great sex with her and unresponsive at rest of the times she just learned through her experience from her own state with Tharun...Had Tharun not been in her life at all, she would have eventually just parted ways with divorce even though there is no man in her life as soon as loan is paid off....Couldn't you see, Tharun in her life, Sharmi in Jay's life are teaching them life lessons in their own way.....
In a way they are becoming catalysts for the real couple to understand each other better than they did when they were together.... So point is journey to a place where they both learn to love in a way a couple should learn and in process realize all their mistakes they did all this time which kept them away from each other emotionally...so I feel there are more lessons to learn for Jay esp and Nikita too before they can sit and talk through and become one, if at all that is possible.
Major obstacle from Nikita's side is her nature of keeping promises above everything in her life....she promised to stay with Jay for loan, as wife, as a partner to show world that she is his wife for his family....she is so bound to that promise that she forgot to love herself and think about herself for a long time...she craved that love from Jay but when she did not get it and when she met Tharun its like a drop in the dessert that sucks rain, she in her desperate state again bounded herself to Tharun with a promise...even in that state she made sure Jay is fine, he has some one who can take care of himself, he doesn't turn into some one she would hate eventually in his desperation..... so she kept him apart, her promises have been her doom and she needs to raise above those to see what she truly needs in her life, who is that one person who actually in real will keep her heart happy...everything else is meaning less until she realizes it no matter how many times she sleeps with Tharun.
For Jay, he has been this giant troll who is stone hearted and never has been responsive and talks less too...maybe he has become like that since his GF cheated him and that trauma can sometimes make one hate love and hate being in love again...though he can see that Nikita has always been his savior, been his companion, been there for him through thick and thin, he never appreciated it expressively until she is vexed up and planned to leave him, So his hidden feelings has risen once he started to experience the fear of losing her....so he still has to become that responsive husband who shows how much he loves his wife, mere words are not enough, he could take a leaf from Tharun who thinks about Nikita all the time, a simple gesture of taking her to movie as she has been tied to house taking care of Jay was such a thoughtful gesture...Jay needs to learn such thoughtfulness to be able to give what Nikita has always wished it came from Jay.
So this journey is from far from over to be able to resolve with a simple chit chat between lead couple....they are not ready yet nor they understand each other well yet....let see what's in store further in the story. Tharun's heavy involvement emotionally with Nikita is also a threat for the couple, when he is giving readily what Nikita always wanted with out much efforts like Jay, her tending towards her lover than husband is easy and she doesn't have to struggle against and fight against the promise she gave too but unfortunately heart doesn't work that way, the way mind works....so ending will be interesting.
~RCF
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