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(Yesterday, 10:06 PM)Deepak Sanjeev Wrote: Nikki and jay family were there in the temple only for few minutes and after knowing they are lovers they cursed and left the place and it has been years since they moved to Bangalore. She didn't talk to any of his family members. How did they trace and this uncle remember nikki is surprising element.
It looks like you missed two chapters in a row, where the maternal uncle meet him at hospital, followed by Jay and Nikkitha going to Jay's Village where unlce tricked and shamed him before Jay's father. This exactly happened after he shifted to Bangalore. :)
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(Yesterday, 07:46 PM)RCF Wrote: You are always wanted bud!
Do not say story is not moving since 20 chapters, people will get hurt here  When have you ever gone soft on authors or on me?
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(Yesterday, 10:28 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: When have you ever gone soft on authors or on me?
Lol I play both sides, that's the fun in reading GOOD stories, I do not read 99% of stories here...Only read which has meaning and purpose.
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The investigation of the letter has forgotten by the Author Heygi as usual. Or it is intentionally avioded. Who was the culprit? Is heygi trying to save Tharun? Is it irrelevent now?
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(Yesterday, 11:07 PM)amzad2004 Wrote: The investigation of the letter have forgotten by the Author Heygi as usual. Or it is intentionally avioded. Who was the culprit? Is heygi trying to save Tharun? Is it irrelevent now?
When time comes, it will be revealed my friend, its not forgotten. Everything will have purpose but will be revealed at right time when it makes most impact.
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(Yesterday, 11:11 PM)RCF Wrote: When time comes, it will be revealed my friend, its not forgotten. Everything will have purpose but will be revealed at right time when it makes most impact.
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Glad you have that patience.
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(Yesterday, 11:11 PM)RCF Wrote: When time comes, it will be revealed my friend, its not forgotten. Everything will have purpose but will be revealed at right time when it makes most impact.
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Understood bro. Heygi tend to forget incidents that is why I wanted to know.
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(Yesterday, 10:46 PM)RCF Wrote: Lol I play both sides, that's the fun in reading GOOD stories, I do not read 99% of stories here...Only read which has meaning and purpose.
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This may be hard to believe, I look for your comments to judge the story. And I already mentioned this.
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(Yesterday, 11:18 PM)amzad2004 Wrote: Understood bro. Heygi tend to forget incidents that is why I wanted to know.
Amzad my friend, I have sincere advice, I have seen you comment on many stories including the time from Krish's story...you are emotional and too connected with stories but the choice of your words in expressing your angst against characters need to change...it offends writers...they selflessly give their time and effort to write stories for free so do not be harsh in judging their skill...
Words we choose should be constructive...for ex, there is no need for you to say, Heygi forgets his characters as usual, instead say when he actually forgets and point that when time comes but not early...he is ready to take criticism but that doesn't mean we should take it for granted and say anything that we want, it only muddles a healthy atmosphere here where readers are interacting and expressing their love for the story...we are all strangers but interact here for only story so keep it to story and not personal. Respect is important bro! Take it coming from a friend and please read your comment again before you post it....I know you are good and only mean well at the end.
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(Yesterday, 11:21 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: This may be hard to believe, I look for your comments to judge the story. And I already mentioned this.
Thank you, we all have different perspectives and yet we express it with out any animosity because its just a story....nothing wrong in our thoughts sometimes proven wrong. I have been proven many times that my thought process is wrong by Authors before, If a reader can intelligently guess story or judge it correctly at every bend and express his thoughts, Imagine a writer will have more knowledge and thought process on each character so ultimately its Author's choice in how he wants write and why, they are also human so they make mistakes too but criticism needs to be taken lightly by them and not get too offended.
I still do not know why you got so much pissed on your story for asking a simple logic. It was a good story and you left it in between....It has lot of promising context with couple entering into affair at parallel stages....please continue that my friend.
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(Yesterday, 11:24 PM)RCF Wrote: Amzad my friend, I have sincere advice, I have seen you comment on many stories including the time from Krish's story...you are emotional and too connected with stories but the choice of your words in expressing your angst against characters need to change...it offends writers...they selflessly give their time and effort to write stories for free so do not be harsh in judging their skill...
Words we choose should be constructive...for ex, there is no need for you to say, Heygi forgets his characters as usual, instead say when he actually forgets and point that when time comes but not early...he is ready to take criticism but that doesn't mean we should take it for granted and say anything that we want, it only muddles a healthy atmosphere here where readers are interacting and expressing their love for the story...we are all strangers but interact here for only story so keep it to story and not personal. Respect is important bro! Take it coming from a friend and please read your comment again before you post it....I know you are good and only mean well at the end.
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Thanks, two chapters on the way :)
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Chapter 113 - The Wednesday - The Mirror 1
The morning sun filtered softly through the curtains as Nikkitha stood before the mirror, adjusting the dbang of her salwar. Her mind was already drifting toward the day’s tasks when her phone buzzed. Tharun had arrived early and was waiting in the car downstairs. She smiled to herself, quickly gathering her things.
By the time she stepped out, Sharmi had joined them. The three exchanged quick greetings, and the car pulled away from the apartment complex. But instead of taking the familiar route to the office, Tharun turned onto an unfamiliar road. Nikkitha glanced at him curiously.
After a few minutes, the car slowed and stopped outside a charming little restaurant tucked away from the main traffic. The place looked serene—soft lighting, gentle instrumental music floating in the air, and the comforting aroma of fresh coffee and spices.
“Tharun, this spot is almost five kilometers off our usual route,” Nikkitha said, half-amused, half-concerned. “Won’t we get late?”
He turned to her with a warm, reassuring smile.
“Today, you don’t need to worry about that. Stop asking questions and just enjoy the moment with me.”
She couldn’t help but smile back. They stepped inside together. The breakfast spread—fluffy idlis, crisp dosas, perfectly seasoned chutneys, and aromatic filter coffee—was delicious. For the first time in weeks, Nikkitha allowed herself to truly relax, savoring not just the food but the gentle care Tharun showered on her. His eyes rarely left her face, and every small gesture felt like a quiet promise.
When they returned to the car, Tharun once again steered away from the office route. Nikkitha turned to him, eyebrows raised.
“What are you doing? Aren’t we going to the office?”
He grinned. “No. We’re going to watch a movie.”
“What?” She was pleasantly surprised, though worry quickly followed.
“Tharun, we have work. I left Jay with responsibilities, and I need to balance things at the office about my absence…”
Tharun reached over and gently squeezed her hand. “I know. But not today. You need a break too. I don’t want your life to become mundane. We should find time for fun, for each other—to talk, to simply be. Ever since we came back from Mumbai, you’ve been so caught up in taking care of everything… and everyone. You need to breathe as well.”
Nikkitha looked into his eyes, feeling a rush of warmth that nearly brought tears. She was overwhelmed by how deeply he understood her.
“I don’t know what I can ever give back to you,” she whispered. “You love me too much.”
“Then let’s start by spending the day together,” he replied softly.
She smiled, catching his hand. “Actually… let’s not go to the movie.”
“Why not?”
“I don’t want to sit in a theatre today,” she said, a playful glint in her eyes. “You know how it would go. We’d watch for a few minutes, then start talking, then I’d probably cry about something, you’d console me, and then we’d end up kissing anyway.” She laughed at her own words.
Tharun burst out laughing too. “So it’s become that predictable, huh?”
“Maybe,” she teased.
Tharun said, then “Let’s go to our home instead. We’ve never really spent a full day there.
It’s going to be our home one day.
Consider it as a trailer for future, Let’s just… be there.”
Her face lit up. “Nice. Im in, Let’s pick up some vegetables—I’ll cook for you.”
“No,” she said quickly. “I’ll cook for you.”
They stopped at a nearby grocery store, filling a bag with fresh vegetables, spices, and a few other essentials.
The drive to Tharun’s apartment felt charged with quiet excitement.
The moment they stepped inside and the door clicked shut, Tharun wrapped his arms around her from behind, pulling her close.
Nikkitha leaned back into his chest, her heart racing.
She turned in his embrace and looked up at him.
What can I possibly give a man who gives me everything?
The thought kept echoing in her mind.
She placed the grocery bag on the table and turned back to him. “Let me cook some other day. Right now, I just want to spend time with you.”
Tharun didn’t need another invitation. In one smooth motion, he lifted her effortlessly into his arms and carried her to the bedroom. He laid her down gently on the bed.
Nikkitha looked around, taking in the room.
It was tastefully done—minimal yet elegant.
A large mirror adorned the headrest wall, reflecting the soft city view from the curtained window.
“You’re such a tasteful man,” she murmured.
He smiled as he removed his shirt, left in just his pants, and settled against the headrest.
“That’s why I got lucky with someone as beautiful as you.” He patted the space beside him invitingly.
She moved closer, resting her head on his shoulder.
For a few moments, they simply breathed together.
She recounted everything happened in past weeks,
how she cried in bathroom, and how he came all over the night for her.
And today with a day taking off for her, a dedicated time for her.
This man gives me everything even after knowing i didnt love him yet. she thought.
“I don’t have words to thank you,” she said softly. “You’ve been my savior. I thought leaving that relationship would destroy me… but you made sure it didn’t. You waited so patiently, giving me time so I wouldn’t feel like I was missing out on anything.”
Tharun stroked her hair, listening.
She wanted to change the topic, she quickly composed herself and she looked around.
Her gaze drifted to the large mirror. “Why do you have such a big mirror here? And what are those little stars pasted on it?”
Tharun chuckled. “It’s my magic mirror.”
“Magic mirror?” she asked, amused.
“Yeah. A strange, honest man appears in it sometimes he is straight-talking, moral, no-nonsense. Whenever I make a mistake, I stand in front of it and question myself. It feels like someone else is holding me accountable, even though it’s just me talking to myself. But it helps me stay grounded.”
Nikkitha laughed softly. “Interesting. Why call it magic?”
“Because these days, real conscience is rare. My inner voice only shows up occasionally—like magic, sudden and unexpected.”
She turned toward the mirror. “Has this honest man appeared recently?”
Tharun looked at their reflection, his voice turning sincere.
“Yes. When I started falling for a married woman I was only supposed to be casual with… he showed up and scolded me for spoiling her life.”
Nikkitha’s eyes softened. She told, Tell him you gave shelter to that women whose life was already spoiled by uncertainties. She studied the mirror as if the figure might actually appear. “Has he shown up lately?”
Tharun’s gaze met hers in the reflection. He reads her mind and want to cut off her restless mind..
he said.. “He’s here right now. He’s asking why I’m wasting time talking nonsense when I have such a beautiful woman beside me. He says I should make her pregnant, give her my child, and let him shape them into better people.”
Nikkitha gasped and playfully smacked his arm. “If you want to have sex with me, just ask!
Don’t spout all this nonsense!”
Tharun laughed, pulling her closer. “I wasn’t making it up to seduce you. I really do talk to myself through that mirror. It keeps me honest.”
She searched his eyes for a moment, then smiled. “Okay… I believe you Mr. Honest.”
“Good,” he whispered, cupping her face.
“Because I don’t want to lie to be with you. If I want you, I’ll ask… or I’ll simply take you when the moment feels right.”
While Nikkitha was about to lose herself again to Tharun, she doesnt know she is going t face a brutal truth, in the same bedroom.
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Wow.. waiting for it.. awesome update.. waiting for gifs in the next one
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Again…whirlwind of emotions….
What o don’t believe is the disconnect…between Jay and Nikki….
Even when Jay is getting exposed and humiliated…..
And what about the letter…who wrote it…
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In the last update who came in last when jay suddenly felt good
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For the first time, I no longer need my dick to raise. Just want to know, what happened and how she ended in Jay's home on time to save him from humiliation..
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"While Nikkitha was about to lose herself again to Tharun, she doesn't know she is going to face a brutal truth in the same bedroom."
I like this line for many reasons. One of them is that while Sneha ended up being labeled a slut, you're determined that Nikkitha shouldn't have to carry that same label.
'To lose herself again to Tharun'—those are carefully chosen words. Kudos
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So Mrs. Honest will also emerge from that mirror at some point and show her truth....Interesting! I still feel she won't realize that early and turn things around so fast I expected her to struggle a lot and defend her decision for a while, it could be a reference for future rather than next episode.
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(11 hours ago)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: "While Nikkitha was about to lose herself again to Tharun, she doesn't know she is going to face a brutal truth in the same bedroom."
I like this line for many reasons. One of them is that while Sneha ended up being labeled a slut, you're determined that Nikkitha shouldn't have to carry that same label.
'To lose herself again to Tharun'—those are carefully chosen words. Kudos
Yes absolutely these lines are showing a darker side and darker truth for tharun. Hope writer will do a great justice to the story
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(Yesterday, 11:33 PM)RCF Wrote: Thank you, we all have different perspectives and yet we express it with out any animosity because its just a story....nothing wrong in our thoughts sometimes proven wrong. I have been proven many times that my thought process is wrong by Authors before, If a reader can intelligently guess story or judge it correctly at every bend and express his thoughts, Imagine a writer will have more knowledge and thought process on each character so ultimately its Author's choice in how he wants write and why, they are also human so they make mistakes too but criticism needs to be taken lightly by them and not get too offended.
I still do not know why you got so much pissed on your story for asking a simple logic. It was a good story and you left it in between....It has lot of promising context with couple entering into affair at parallel stages....please continue that my friend.
~ RCF I'm not immune to comments, which is probably a trait I should work on. Plus, I just can't write outright eroticism. Once Heygi's story ends, I'll start mine and actually finish it before he begins another one. LOL.
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