Adultery Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel)

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Super erotic updates!

I think this was a super direction taken by the author to develop the plot. And we should really commend the fact that the author is very brave to go with this direction for the story.

Also, I think the scenario of the parents-in-law coming in and staying with them for a month, I think that is also a very good swerve into the story to bring some groundedness from the regular sexual tension filled adventures. So kudos to the author for bringing in a heavy dose of realism.

- Monica suddenly moving towards the desi dressing, a good touch, but I think she should also be used to wearing western dresses within the home in front of Sasuma because she is having a very distinct personality. (She's Monica not a Monisha  or a Sneha)
- I think one little missed point was when Sasuma has already got the scent of Monica putting on a pretend act, maybe she could have given a little hint that " it's okay, You can ease out. Be yourself. You don't need to really push yourself hard to be in dresses that maybe you're not regularly comfortable with - a direct green signal types.
And then right after that, when Bheem and Ustad visit the home, she being braless, that would have shown a great over extension done by Monica that should, of course, infuriate Sasuma. So that little bit would have been amazing to show how Monica took the opportunity and just went into a completely different tangent with Sasumas green signal

- Slight more details in that conversation when they were sitting and talking and eating. Maybe a bit more double meaning conversations with the pakora, with the maybe the chutney. And maybe doing like callbacks of what happened on the dining table. I think that should have been there. And obviously Sasuma would have never got the hint, but a bit of unsettling could have been done by Bheem more so. So that would have been very good to present.

- And similarly, as they move to the scene where there's this new betting ring and then there's Guddabhai. So I think those were well done. But maybe the house tour should have been properly micro-detailed with Monica and Ustad and Rakesh and Ustad casually holding her hand or maybe just brushing his hand on her ass or maybe patting her ass or pulling her closer by the waist. I think those could have been amazing if they were slightly included.

- Also there was this bit of the cousins dancing with Monica. I think that dance sequence could have been slightly more detailed. What song they were dancing on and maybe just to then start to pass some crude comments directly into Rakesh's ear.

- but i feel a missed opportunity    ...... was the whole incident of the leggings. I think in that one, I really wish Monica had tripped over kinda deliberately onto Ustad's lap and Ustad should have also taken the opportunity to grope her bare thighs and ass given that golden opportunity. So I think that could have been a very good heightened super.

Overall, really appreciate the effort put in by the author to steer the story and to navigate this instead of just probably taking the easy way out. And also really appreciate all the efforts put in to make the images and apt gifs and perfectly place them. And also it's a good font size, very easy to read, very thoughtful of the writer. Waiting for the next update. Keep it up!

Thanks for your wonderful suggestions

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Superrrrb.. Waiting for next adventurous scenes of Monica.
 

Woow so apt representation of Monica
Her profound ass is indeed the reason for her plight
Love it 
Thanks

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wow bhai
was expecting the studs eating her out, but whilte most of the erotis scenes happened, the raid has caused a sudden stop in the evnet
but really it was high ride for everyone who red teh story
soory for the birthday hubby, but seems like our heroine is always naughty, sexy but still careful to take the dip fully
she is open, till  certain level..
this is good to keep the story flowing
if you bring in she fucks every tom dic kand harry, people will lose the interest... this was my thought, but as author and readers, everyone may have differnet ideas

Agreed complete with you
Monica has a class ..