[amzad2004]

Will sharmi tell Niki about everything happened in hotel in her absence.

Nikitha won't go with Tharun. She has a big task ahead tomeet jay family and prove them they are well settled and happy.

If she go with Tharun then jay family will accuse him marrying a slut that ran away with another man.

You are talking logically bro but unfortunately heygi do not write logically bro, he might even forget this chapter. He might is going to forget even the letter mystery chapter. Do not hope much bro.

[Rosymoon]

You are talking logically bro but unfortunately heygi do not write logically bro, he might even forget this chapter. He might is going to forget even the letter mystery chapter. Do not hope much bro.

What seems to be the issue? If this story doesn't interest you, why not simply keep quiet and exit the webpage?

[prshma]

Story has reached it's tipping point after a roller coaster ride. Lets see what Nikitha does and how does she react after she gets to know of the entire truth of what happened between Jay and Sharmi. Logically any wife would be immersed in guilt, regret and remorse for the acts committed by her after such a revelation. But here in this site logic is non existant. 

Still we as readers would want to watch a happy ending in this story where all the misunderstandings between these two silent lovers gets cleared and Nikitha finally comes out of her confused state of mind and clearly sees that she and Jay are meant for each other. They are meant to be in each others warm embrace until death parts them. 

Though this is an erotica story still i guarantee that an overwhelming majority of the readers would like to see an ending with Jay and Nikitha being together rather than seeing Tharun and Nikitha because we readers are after all humans and we do have a heart. We dont want to see two broken people and a broken family. 

About Tharun some arguments could be that he is the person who lost the most in this story. But the counter argument is that Tharun from the very beginning had the full knowledge that Nikitha is a married woman and still he went after her, who infact was her sub-ordinate colleague. That reflects his predatory attitude. In additon to it he still is in relationship with his girlfriend, he hasn't broken up with her either. That makes him a cheater as well as a debauch. Tharun can never be a good person notwithstanding how hard the writer wants to whitewash his charecter.       

[amzad2004]

What seems to be the issue? If this story doesn't interest you, why not simply keep quiet and exit the webpage?

If my comments irrigates you then ignore my comments. You can not dictate me like that. I do not give a damn your anger.

[amzad2004]

Story has reached it's tipping point after a roller coaster ride. Lets see what Nikitha does and how does she react after she gets to know of the entire truth of what happened between Jay and Sharmi. Logically any wife would be immersed in guilt, regret and remorse for the acts committed by her after such a revelation. But here in this site logic is non existant. 

Still we as readers would want to watch a happy ending in this story where all the misunderstandings between these two silent lovers gets cleared and Nikitha finally comes out of her confused state of mind and clearly sees that she and Jay are meant for each other. They are meant to be in each others warm embrace until death parts them. 

Though this is an erotica story still i guarantee that an overwhelming majority of the readers would like to see an ending with Jay and Nikitha being together rather than seeing Tharun and Nikitha because we readers are after all humans and we do have a heart. We dont want to see two broken people and a broken family. 

About Tharun some arguments could be that he is the person who lost the most in this story. But the counter argument is that Tharun from the very beginning had the full knowledge that Nikitha is a married woman and still he went after her, who infact was her sub-ordinate colleague. That reflects his predatory attitude. In additon to it he still is in relationship with his girlfriend, he hasn't broken up with her either. That makes him a cheater as well as a debauch. Tharun can never be a good person notwithstanding how hard the writer wants to whitewash his charecter.       

Exactly mam.

[jiivawonderland]

Coming to this Particular Story.. 

this is something very fresh and unique from the author. 

Opens with a  suspense, then we get into Secret marriage for company position --> Sex with Anjali for protecting Secret --> Deep friendship behind the situational marriage --> Deep love hidden behind the friendship unsaid--> New Player come in --> Nikitha expects more love --> She goes in denial mode to make Jay act on it. -- > Misunderstandings and Misreadsing --> Office escalations of personal growth --> Misunderstanding again --> Nikitha Sleeps with Tharun, she accepts his love. 


It may look simple but making a story , making all travel through all of their emotions, with logical and convincing way is tough.. The first part of story had Jay and Nikitha's sex which was lovely, then when he does the same to show his ownership, she got hurt, beautifully captured without exaggarting. 


We as a reader may feel Jay and Nikkitha loves each other sincere, but unsaid love, not even giving idea of what your partner think about is a crime, Jay is facing the troubles just for it. As soon as Tharun came in, she kind of feel everything she wantyed is coming through Thaurn. Bt the catch is she unkowingly got very much connected to Jay so she could not move, thas why it took a long journey and misunderstanding situations to finally get bedded by Tharun. 

Even now she choosed Tharun after even realsing Jay came for her and got into accident. 

Next we need to wait and see. 



But very interesting point is unlike other stories, the third man or Alpha male? kind of character Tharun sounds very genuine and sincere towards Nikitha. This is what it makes complicated and way more interesting.. 


Like author give hints, Nikitha might end up hurting many hearts in the process.  But whom will she end with? or She wont end with anyone? author had hinted about when she left Jay house, she didnt go to Tharun's home she just claimed but she went to a hostel remember? 

is this an early hint? Naturally it should be the way if she breaks everyone. Going back to Jay dont make sense.. and the Mithra character, will Tharun speak to her? with Nikitha now choosing Tharun, how wil he handle it ?


Very Excited for this story. Your second best after Mirna story. :)

[saka1981]

Nikkitha is the main culprit here. Because even when Tharun is having sex with Nikkitha, she keeps remembering Jay's face. So why doesn't she analyze her own mind?.

"Jai was in a relationship with Anjali, but he didn't suffer after she left. He was only with Anjali physically. However, Nikita is here with Tarun, connected to him both physically and emotionally."

"Nikita belongs with Jai. When her adoptive mother tried to get her married off, Jai was the one who helped. He got her a job, and they both came up in life together. When did Tarun ever help Nikita? Because of his kiss, Nikita would have lost her job. Jai even saved her . What else did Tarun do except sleep with Nikita?"

[jiivawonderland]

The glimpse of Jay, when Tharun goes inside Nikitha is a nice touch. It was time he got into accident right. I just imagined a melancholy bgm while they are having sex, my mind imagine Parallel like a split screen. 

On Top Jay is being rescued from car after accident, the rod hitting the car by mechanics to break the door. That ting sound. 

On bottom, Tharun enters Nikitha, with that Thud sound.. 

and the melancholy BGM plays.. 

Ufff cinematic..

[jiivawonderland]

Nikkitha is the main culprit here. Because even when Tharun is having sex with Nikkitha, she keeps remembering Jay's face. So why doesn't she analyze her own mind?.

"Jai was in a relationship with Anjali, but he didn't suffer after she left. He was only with Anjali physically. However, Nikita is here with Tarun, connected to him both physically and emotionally."

"Nikita belongs with Jai. When her adoptive mother tried to get her married off, Jai was the one who helped. He got her a job, and they both came up in life together. When did Tarun ever help Nikita? Because of his kiss, Nikita would have lost her job. Jai even saved her . What else did Tarun do except sleep with Nikita?"

I guess author is telling us something else, just helping and saving one alone cannot be taken as a token of love or considered to be love. Imagine a brotherly figure helps her? or a c op or a laywer or just friends.. 

Issue is she doesnt felt loved, and they considered sex is just a friends with benefit right? 

when she was experience the love she wanted from Jay in Tharun, she is lost into him.. She is in denial mode, considering year of togetherness and help as love. 

But when started realising, misunderstanding keep popping up like Sharmi. The visuals at morning hotel, which made her Choose Tharun. 

I guess she thinks its too late after sleeping with Tharun.. Any way only author can answer it.

[robertnow]

I guess author is telling us something else, just helping and saving one alone cannot be taken as a token of love or considered to be love. Imagine a brotherly figure helps her? or a c op or a laywer or just friends.. 

Issue is she doesnt felt loved, and they considered sex is just a friends with benefit right? 

when she was experience the love she wanted from Jay in Tharun, she is lost into him.. She is in denial mode, considering year of togetherness and help as love. 

But when started realising, misunderstanding keep popping up like Sharmi. The visuals at morning hotel, which made her Choose Tharun. 

I guess she thinks its too late after sleeping with Tharun.. Any way only author can answer it.

I felt the same. Helping and rescuing someone alone isn't love, right?


Jay's mobile phone is actually a strong piece of evidence. When Sharmi searched for photos, the only picture of Jay and Nikitha together was their temple wedding photo. Okay, let's assume they intentionally avoided taking pictures together to safeguard their relationship. Even then, why was the only photo the marriage picture?

That simple scene tells us a lot about the kind of relationship they shared. I genuinely believe both Jay and Nikitha had taken each other for granted all these years. Not even one casual photo together, yet they had a regular physical relationship? That contrast says a lot.

I strongly feel they both became too comfortable and stopped making an effort to cherish their relationship. It was only after Tharun entered their lives—only after Jay felt challenged—that things started changing. Suddenly, he wanted to prove how much he loved her.

Similarly, Nikitha was upset when Anjali entered the picture, but deep down she knew Anjali was never a real threat. Anjali was already married, and Nikitha understood she wasn't going to affect her marriage with Jay. So she never truly felt challenged.

Tharun was different. His presence challenged Jay emotionally, making him realize what he could lose. In the same way, when Sharmi entered Jay's life, Nikitha finally felt that same insecurity. That's when she was no longer willing to simply let things go.

But the real challenge begins now. Unlike Sharmi, whose relationship with Jay was largely a misunderstanding and whose marital status is still unknown to Nikitha, Tharun's relationship with Nikitha is real and fully acknowledged by her. She accepted his love and experienced it herself.


What Tharun said in the last chapter really stood out to me: he told her to take her chance and said that if, after seeing Jay's true love, she still wanted to go back to him, she could. That moment showed what kind of person Tharun is. He isn't trying to force her or manipulate her; he's giving her the freedom to make her own choice.

I think that's what makes the upcoming chapters so difficult. If Nikitha reaches a clear decision, she will inevitably have to hurt one of them. There is no painless outcome anymore, because both relationships have become real in different ways.

To me, that's one of the most interesting aspects of the story—both Jay and Nikitha only seemed to fully recognize the value of their relationship when they genuinely feared losing each other. Now, however, Nikitha isn't choosing between an illusion and reality; she's choosing between two genuine relationships, and that is what makes her decision so heartbreaking and make readers panic. Personally readers may root for both Jay and Tharun, in way that they don't get affected much and get happiness in a fitting way.

[saka1981]

I guess author is telling us something else, just helping and saving one alone cannot be taken as a token of love or considered to be love. Imagine a brotherly figure helps her? or a c op or a laywer or just friends.. 

Issue is she doesnt felt loved, and they considered sex is just a friends with benefit right? 

when she was experience the love she wanted from Jay in Tharun, she is lost into him.. She is in denial mode, considering year of togetherness and help as love. 

But when started realising, misunderstanding keep popping up like Sharmi. The visuals at morning hotel, which made her Choose Tharun. 

I guess she thinks its too late after sleeping with Tharun.. Any way only author can answer it.

Author only know the answer . In past Nikki broke jay's heart ..at present going to be broke tharun's heart   . In future know about the truth from sharmi ...nikki heart also going to be broke . sharmi think she is cleaver .but she is the reason nikki moving to tharun .All characters did mistake . but one characters only get punishment for mistake  .

Nikki is going with tharun means jay will get pain.

Nikki is going with jay means tharun will get pain.

Nikki don't want choose  jay or  Tharun means . Nikki will get pain .

surly one heart will be broke . waiting for that moment . in this story no happy ending

[amzad2004]

Nikkitha is the main culprit here. Because even when Tharun is having sex with Nikkitha, she keeps remembering Jay's face. So why doesn't she analyze her own mind?.

"Jai was in a relationship with Anjali, but he didn't suffer after she left. He was only with Anjali physically. However, Nikita is here with Tarun, connected to him both physically and emotionally."

"Nikita belongs with Jai. When her adoptive mother tried to get her married off, Jai was the one who helped. He got her a job, and they both came up in life together. When did Tarun ever help Nikita? Because of his kiss, Nikita would have lost her job. Jai even saved her . What else did Tarun do except sleep with Nikita?"

Exactly bro. I agreed.

[amzad2004]

It seems you have misunderstood and misjudged us. We never commented with intention of any enemity towards heygi. Our intention is always to pointed out heygi's mistakes so that he can corrected his mistakes. Fiction is not about only sex. Sex is part of fiction erotica. See you have express your opinion about us which you have right to express in that way we also have the right to express our opinion upon heigy's story and characters even though in a harsh way. It is not because of us that haygi tend to take breaks. It is because of he wants to write this story coutiously and wisely. He does not want to make any blunder I believe. It is commiting injustice to blame us for these delays.

[heygiwriter]

I felt the same. Helping and rescuing someone alone isn't love, right?


Jay's mobile phone is actually a strong piece of evidence. When Sharmi searched for photos, the only picture of Jay and Nikitha together was their temple wedding photo. Okay, let's assume they intentionally avoided taking pictures together to safeguard their relationship. Even then, why was the only photo the marriage picture?

That simple scene tells us a lot about the kind of relationship they shared. I genuinely believe both Jay and Nikitha had taken each other for granted all these years. Not even one casual photo together, yet they had a regular physical relationship? That contrast says a lot.

I strongly feel they both became too comfortable and stopped making an effort to cherish their relationship. It was only after Tharun entered their lives—only after Jay felt challenged—that things started changing. Suddenly, he wanted to prove how much he loved her.

Similarly, Nikitha was upset when Anjali entered the picture, but deep down she knew Anjali was never a real threat. Anjali was already married, and Nikitha understood she wasn't going to affect her marriage with Jay. So she never truly felt challenged.

Tharun was different. His presence challenged Jay emotionally, making him realize what he could lose. In the same way, when Sharmi entered Jay's life, Nikitha finally felt that same insecurity. That's when she was no longer willing to simply let things go.

But the real challenge begins now. Unlike Sharmi, whose relationship with Jay was largely a misunderstanding and whose marital status is still unknown to Nikitha, Tharun's relationship with Nikitha is real and fully acknowledged by her. She accepted his love and experienced it herself.


What Tharun said in the last chapter really stood out to me: he told her to take her chance and said that if, after seeing Jay's true love, she still wanted to go back to him, she could. That moment showed what kind of person Tharun is. He isn't trying to force her or manipulate her; he's giving her the freedom to make her own choice.

I think that's what makes the upcoming chapters so difficult. If Nikitha reaches a clear decision, she will inevitably have to hurt one of them. There is no painless outcome anymore, because both relationships have become real in different ways.

To me, that's one of the most interesting aspects of the story—both Jay and Nikitha only seemed to fully recognize the value of their relationship when they genuinely feared losing each other. Now, however, Nikitha isn't choosing between an illusion and reality; she's choosing between two genuine relationships, and that is what makes her decision so heartbreaking and make readers panic. Personally readers may root for both Jay and Tharun, in way that they don't get affected much and get happiness in a fitting way.

Good observation

[heygiwriter]

The glimpse of Jay, when Tharun goes inside Nikitha is a nice touch. It was time he got into accident right. I just imagined a melancholy bgm while they are having sex, my mind imagine Parallel like a split screen. 

On Top Jay is being rescued from car after accident, the rod hitting the car by mechanics to break the door. That ting sound. 

On bottom, Tharun enters Nikitha, with that Thud sound.. 

and the melancholy BGM plays.. 

Ufff cinematic..

 thanks

[amzad2004]

I felt the same. Helping and rescuing someone alone isn't love, right?


Jay's mobile phone is actually a strong piece of evidence. When Sharmi searched for photos, the only picture of Jay and Nikitha together was their temple wedding photo. Okay, let's assume they intentionally avoided taking pictures together to safeguard their relationship. Even then, why was the only photo the marriage picture?

That simple scene tells us a lot about the kind of relationship they shared. I genuinely believe both Jay and Nikitha had taken each other for granted all these years. Not even one casual photo together, yet they had a regular physical relationship? That contrast says a lot.

I strongly feel they both became too comfortable and stopped making an effort to cherish their relationship. It was only after Tharun entered their lives—only after Jay felt challenged—that things started changing. Suddenly, he wanted to prove how much he loved her.

Similarly, Nikitha was upset when Anjali entered the picture, but deep down she knew Anjali was never a real threat. Anjali was already married, and Nikitha understood she wasn't going to affect her marriage with Jay. So she never truly felt challenged.

Tharun was different. His presence challenged Jay emotionally, making him realize what he could lose. In the same way, when Sharmi entered Jay's life, Nikitha finally felt that same insecurity. That's when she was no longer willing to simply let things go.

But the real challenge begins now. Unlike Sharmi, whose relationship with Jay was largely a misunderstanding and whose marital status is still unknown to Nikitha, Tharun's relationship with Nikitha is real and fully acknowledged by her. She accepted his love and experienced it herself.


What Tharun said in the last chapter really stood out to me: he told her to take her chance and said that if, after seeing Jay's true love, she still wanted to go back to him, she could. That moment showed what kind of person Tharun is. He isn't trying to force her or manipulate her; he's giving her the freedom to make her own choice.

I think that's what makes the upcoming chapters so difficult. If Nikitha reaches a clear decision, she will inevitably have to hurt one of them. There is no painless outcome anymore, because both relationships have become real in different ways.

To me, that's one of the most interesting aspects of the story—both Jay and Nikitha only seemed to fully recognize the value of their relationship when they genuinely feared losing each other. Now, however, Nikitha isn't choosing between an illusion and reality; she's choosing between two genuine relationships, and that is what makes her decision so heartbreaking and make readers panic. Personally readers may root for both Jay and Tharun, in way that they don't get affected much and get happiness in a fitting way.

As per Haygi's narration there is only one true love in this story and that is between Jay and Nikita. As per the story that heygi is narrating actually here is nothing to choose. Their love bond is rooted deep inside in their hearts. It is impossible to uprooted by anyone. As per Heygi's narration Nikita has been taking all her decision upon pure rage and hurted emotions. She does not love tharun and never will. Now the matter is Heygi is always tend to walk through illusion about his charackters and wants to readers also ride the rolercoaster through illusion and enjoy the illogical sequences. In this story Nikita character never in the position to choose. Logically it never will be. But author wants to show us there is a choosing drama going on. I do not want to say much becuse then heygi blames me for his drained nerves and some readers acussing me as a enemy of heygi. Heygi loves to creat tweist and emotional drama in his story to engage the readers to dwell with it. He is improving by the way. He wants us to believe there is a choosing game going on so be it, I won't argue. Author wish is my command.

[Steven Rajaa]

Waiting for the climax

[heygiwriter]

Waiting for the climax

Consider the previous chapter as Interval

[NityaSakti]

Consider the previous chapter as Interval

The story has just started 

[amzad2004]

It seems heygi is getting emotional. Bro RCF pls advice heygi not to stretch the story too long. Another 100 chapters may caused some readers get admitted to hospital. I am sure heygi is planning to set the cmotional scale to tip of the everest peak. Bro RCF's help is needed.