Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair

[jaatrangila99]

Hi yaar,

I have all the adjectives and adverbs to describe you, but your biggest flaw is your pacing. I could skip ten or fifteen chapters, come back, and feel like I hadn't missed anything. 

The words change, but the story barely moves. There's no real sense of progression, growth, or transformation—just different versions of the same chapter. Consistency is your strength, but without momentum, it starts to feel like stagnation. 

A great story makes every chapter feel indispensable. Yours often makes them feel interchangeable.

And I started to think, how this is anywhere near to eroticism? Where is adultery? (Adultery is my favourite theme)

Now you know how our professor's fell after checking out exam sheets.  




By the way, I got 1st Division .......

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 81: Mumbai Entanglements


The moment their flight landed in Mumbai, the chaos of the city greeted them with humid air and bustling energy. HR had arranged for two company representatives to receive the team at the airport. After a smooth one-hour drive, they arrived at a luxurious seaside hotel, its grand lobby gleaming with marble and soft lighting.

The HR representative handed over four car keys with a professional smile. “As advised, each of you gets access to a car. Feel free to explore the city whenever you want.”

HR informed us that business tycoon, Dhruv had already reached the previous night. “He’s scheduled a meeting at 10 AM,” the representative informed them. 

“Rest now — it’s only 5:50 AM. After today’s meeting, you’ll need to plan the rest of the schedule based on the outcome. Feel free to call us, if you need any guide. Here are some route maps for nearby attractions.” He then gestured toward the elevators. “We’ve booked two spacious bedrooms. Men and women can share separately, or we can arrange individual rooms if preferred.”

Tharun said thanks, we will let you know if anything neeed, 
The representatives bid good bye and assured they will be back here at 9 to pick them up. 

A room boy helped with their luggage as they headed upstairs.

As they walked down the elegant corridor, Sharmi felt a mischievous spark. She wanted to test the waters again — one more push to stir jealousy. She thought Nikki will succumb to this play, she cant act anymore with what she gonna do.  With a playful tone and a shy giggle, she announced loud enough for everyone to hear:

“Hey Nikki, just like we joked in the flight… it would be great if we could stay in our partners’ rooms instead of the girls together.”

Nikitha turned, her expression unreadable for a moment. She glanced at Jay, then at Tharun, and said calmly, “Thank you. I would prefer that.” Me and Tharun will take that room at the end.

Without waiting for a reaction, she walked alongside Tharun toward the last room at the end of the corridor. The door clicked shut behind them with a loud, final creek. With her suitcase left out in hallway. 

Jay stood frozen in the hallway, stunned.

Sharmi was equally stunned, but she started realising, Nikitha was not some one who could be just okay with the jealosy games, something seemed to shift.. she is yet to figure it out.. But she solidly believes Nikitha had still has love on Jay.  She turned to Jay with a confused smile, she realised Jay was furious,  Jay’s face darkened with frustration and suspicion.

“What are you doing, Sharmi?” he asked, voice low but intense. “What the hell are you really doing?”

He stepped closer, eyes searching hers. “She’s just jealous. She’s pretending to prove she chose him — can’t you see it? 

Jay was alarmed, Wait… what do you know about us, Sharmi? Why are you claiming she is just pretending? From the very first day, your behavior has been suspicious. Tell me — what exactly are you trying to do? Who the hell are you?”

His voice rose with every word, anger and confusion mixing dangerously.

Sharmi’s eyes widened. Before he could say anything more, she quickly placed her hand over his mouth to silence him and pushed him backward into their assigned room. The door shut behind them with a soft click.

At that exact moment few seconds before, Nikitha — who had stepped out of her room to grab her suitcase in the hallway — witnessed everything.

She saw Sharmi’s hand covering Jay’s mouth.
She saw Sharmi pushing him inside the room.
She saw the door close.

A heavy, stabbing pain exploded in her chest. For a few seconds, she stood paralyzed, breath caught in her throat. The image burned into her mind. Without a word, she turned around, stepped back into Tharun’s room, and locked the door with trembling fingers.

Inside, Tharun noticed her sudden pallor. “Nikki? What happened?”

She didn’t answer. She simply walked to the bed and sat down, her mind reeling.
The women have to share the bed with other men… for their own games.

Meanwhile, inside the other room, Jay pulled Sharmi’s hand away from his mouth, breathing heavily.
“Sharmi…” he warned, voice dangerously low.

The tension in Mumbai had only just begun.

[RCF]

Lol dude let them fuck man, you do not need this much cushion for Nikita to sleep with Tharun, these games from Sharmi are unreal, no one will poke this much into others life, at this point I just want to go into the story and kill the bitch. Or would want Jay to give a tight slap to the bitch.

~ RCF

[RCF]

Hi yaar,

I have all the adjectives and adverbs to describe you, but your biggest flaw is your pacing. I could skip ten or fifteen chapters, come back, and feel like I hadn't missed anything. 

The words change, but the story barely moves. There's no real sense of progression, growth, or transformation—just different versions of the same chapter. Consistency is your strength, but without momentum, it starts to feel like stagnation. 

A great story makes every chapter feel indispensable. Yours often makes them feel interchangeable.

And I started to think, how this is anywhere near to eroticism? Where is adultery? (Adultery is my favourite theme)

Maybe you should skip this story since all chapters seem same to you lol

[Rangabaashyam]

Will Dhruv fall for Nikki and ask for Nikitha for few nights to give them the project. Waiting

[heygiwriter]

Hi yaar,

I have all the adjectives and adverbs to describe you, but your biggest flaw is your pacing. I could skip ten or fifteen chapters, come back, and feel like I hadn't missed anything. 

The words change, but the story barely moves. There's no real sense of progression, growth, or transformation—just different versions of the same chapter. Consistency is your strength, but without momentum, it starts to feel like stagnation. 

A great story makes every chapter feel indispensable. Yours often makes them feel interchangeable.

And I started to think, how this is anywhere near to eroticism? Where is adultery? (Adultery is my favourite theme)

Simple dont read it, ignore this story and move on.

[heygiwriter]

Lol dude let them fuck man, you do not need this much cushion for Nikita to sleep with Tharun, these games from Sharmi are unreal, no one will poke this much into others life, at this point I just want to go into the story and kill the bitch. Or would want Jay to give a tight slap to the bitch.

~ RCF

I have to make that cushion else it wont be little unbelievable when two had so strongly attached to each other..

[RCF]

I have to make that cushion else it wont be little unbelievable when two had so strongly attached to each other..

I get it man but Sharmi is annoying as hell...she better be the one to bring them together.

[Rangabaashyam]

Every time nikki get angry she crossed line. What will she do now.

[heygiwriter]

I get it man but Sharmi is annoying as hell...she better be the one to bring them together.

She is the typical cupid character, her first attempt was successful, she is believing trying her magic again, we should only wait and watch , will her magic gets repeated like the refreshment program day or gets misfired in different way.

[RCF]

Nikita will become stone hearted now and push her feelings for Jay to a closed pandora's box inside her heart now....

We can see how that would feel as if Sharmi and Jay are lovers and how Sharmi dragged Jay into the room as if they are waiting for privacy all the time when they were flying....

The real bhakra in this whole game is Tharun even though he gets to fck her....
Still I feel ending won't be apt if Nikita and Jay reconcile...Nikita has just made too many mistakes at this point and no one is that naive in realizing her feelings and evaluating them....maybe she ending up with Tharun is more apt for her considering she is going through so much to remove Jay from her system...or will she be able to we have to see....Poor Nikita has been receiving wrong hints over and over making her pain unbearable at this point and would make worse decisions of rushing herself into sex with Tharun to ease the pain...

~RCF

[naruto9211]

She is the typical cupid character, her first attempt was successful, she is believing trying her magic again, we should only wait and watch , will her magic gets repeated like the refreshment program day or gets misfired in different way.

Let your protagonist have some spine man.
Your story reflects the society at Large.. No accountability for women. They literally get away with almost anything.
Please show actions have consequences.
If you don't.. I will take this as subject and write a story.

[Mahesh12345]

Actually I want to say something.in your all stories husband is victim and outside person is hero and wife should be Always enjoy with outsider person.

I observe your all stories the conclusion will be like husband always red flower but wife Always got pleasure that's the thing.

Here also nikki enjoy with tarun and jay as usual red flower 

[heygiwriter]

Let your protagonist have some spine man.
Your story reflects the society at Large.. No accountability for women. They literally get away with almost anything.
Please show actions have consequences.
If you don't.. I will take this as subject and write a story.

please go ahead. but atleast wait untill i wrap up this story.

[RCF]

Let your protagonist have some spine man.
Your story reflects the society at Large.. No accountability for women. They literally get away with almost anything.
Please show actions have consequences.
If you don't.. I will take this as subject and write a story.

I agree but I also think Heygi knows to tie all the loops at the end as well. 

Nikita will face consequences for her actions and will lose everything, she will lose Jay and also realize who she loves but later...some people are craving sex like their only aim is to read that and nothing else so let them have few chapters lol 

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Actually I want to say something.in your all stories husband is victim and outside person is hero and wife should be Always enjoy with outsider person.

I observe your all stories the conclusion will be like husband always red flower but wife Always got pleasure that's the thing.

Here also nikki enjoy with tarun and jay as usual red flower 

I want to break that pattern too, hence i made one story Malavika, but it needed more time.

[suryaspk]

Hey man updates are great. You have put in lot of efforts, big appreciation for this whirlwind of updates. Opinions aside you have progressed story in quick phase after your short break.

[RCF]

I want to break that pattern too, hence i made one story Malavika, but it needed more time.

You can break it here too by not giving Nikita Jay at the end, she doesn't deserve him :) 

Just saying won't be apt but she truly adamant on leaving him since the beginning of this story and it also feels she is the one who truly never understood Jay, not the other way round. Even Sharmi knows him too well now....

[heygiwriter]

You can break it here too by not giving Nikita Jay at the end, she doesn't deserve him :) 

Just saying won't be apt but she truly adamant on leaving him since the beginning of this story and it also feels she is the one who truly never understood Jay, not the other way round. Even Sharmi knows him too well now....

I have already envisioned how it will end. but they will go through sea of emotions in middle of sex.

[heygiwriter]

Hey man updates are great. You have put in lot of efforts, big appreciation for this whirlwind of updates. Opinions aside you have progressed story in quick phase after your short break.

Thanks i could see many waited for episodes, want to honor my readers who waited and checked here every time. Im always greatful to you all :) for taking time to appreciate me also criticize me , sometimes it do shapes me as a story teller