27-06-2026, 07:15 PM
After so long time,,,,,Thanks
| Poll: Q. Further buildup of Ravi and Bhola's Role in the story. You do not have permission to vote in this poll. |
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| 1. Ravi is not informed by Preeti or Simran and Bhola continues to milk Simran and thereafter proceed to tge next level. | 57 | 47.11% | |
| 2. Ravi is convinced by Preeti and thereafter Simran separately to allow Bhola to milk her and also impregnate them both at a later stage. | 28 | 23.14% | |
| 3. Ravi notices one day Simran getting milked but doesn't intervene and then makes way for Bhola to even impregnate Simran in future. | 35 | 28.93% | |
| 4. Something else entirely sent on DM. | 1 | 0.83% | |
| Total | 121 vote(s) | 100% | |
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27-06-2026, 07:40 PM
Very nice update, waiting for the next part of the story. Requesting the author to write 2 or more web pages of content and post it next , whenever he or she can
27-06-2026, 08:51 PM
grt writting & Erotic episodes ..bhola show heaven to simran ... thank you for updates
27-06-2026, 09:31 PM
Impotent husband should understand his incapability to satisfy a woman and impregnate her. He should accept and allow simran to live with bhola and gracefully move out of her life after knowing she is pregnant with bhola children later. Simran telling she love her husband is not true at all. She loves only the money and wealth he generates hate him from bottom of her heart.
27-06-2026, 10:16 PM
Honestly speaking, you could've done alot better than this
This update feels completely different from all the other ones, there's no intense action, suspence, desire It didn't feel like Simran was taking BHOLA's massive dick inside her pussy for the first time, their sex was quite normal I think getting pressured by us audience for the update could be the reason behind this, I request you to take your time and work on this update Don't take it as criticism it's a honest opinion by a genuine fan of this Thread : )
28-06-2026, 10:57 AM
Such a fantastic read. A story with heat and substance. One of the most erotic writing. Beautiful descriptive writing that doesn’t hold back.
The use of sensory details made the setting feel vivid. Passionately demonstrated sex and a whole range of emotions. The characters are detailed, the scenes hot and steamy, and the circumstances that lead to those scenes quite intricate. Very crafty, not a single gorgeous word is wasted. A work that invades your mind. This story is so tightly written, highly entertaining and all-around delightful. Thank you for an absolute surreal reading experience.
28-06-2026, 11:58 AM
Let bhola and Simran have fun mutually and not like either of them was having birth control pills to delay the pregnancy.
Let Simran get pregnant and enjoy in those 9 months as well and post delivery too. We can have time jump say 10 to 15 years until the baby is a teenager and let bhola return and both of them continue there relationship once again ... for a second pregnancy. If she can hide it from her husband and kid. Guys i am really liking your comments. One user even said i could have done better. I am sure I could have. As luck wud have it, just when i was finishing the final scenes something terrible was happening in my love life. I am not a youngstar, but Dil to Bachcha hai Ji. It disturbed me a lot and i was a bit engaged elsewhere mentally. What to say. Women! You can't live with them, you can't live without them. Next update will be deliberate and will have some drama definitely. We are graduating to Chapter 5 now. We need some spice too in the mixture. But lets give it some time. And thanks a lot for the comments. They are really engaging.
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28-06-2026, 03:19 PM
(28-06-2026, 01:47 PM)doodhwale_bhaiya Wrote: When can we expect an update..... I hope it will be a long and engaging one
28-06-2026, 04:11 PM
(28-06-2026, 01:47 PM)doodhwale_bhaiya Wrote:Thank you for this amazing update. Eager to see what simran and preeti will talk about now. Hope to see more of updates in early future. Also, hope you find find some comfort in your love life with time, only advice from my side is take care of your mental peace and focus without that you will loose yourself in life and with heartbreak first thing a person is his mental peace and focus, take care brother.
28-06-2026, 05:36 PM
Please make Simran feel guilty
29-06-2026, 01:09 PM
Fantastic updates
29-06-2026, 04:03 PM
29-06-2026, 05:01 PM
29-06-2026, 06:45 PM
If only some gifs added to story it's gonna be bomb
29-06-2026, 07:44 PM
29-06-2026, 08:20 PM
(29-06-2026, 07:44 PM)jiljilrani Wrote: Yes Let the useless impotent bastard husband die. He is of no use to simran, story or society I think in some of the actions of Simran with bhola , she is bit concerned about her husband...let's wait for the update and pregnancy. I just want this story to be a Simran-bhola story unlike other stories where several characters get involved with the female lead and the main plot of the story is lost in further chapters. Till now it has great pace and engagement with readers I feel., as the action between the two has just started
29-06-2026, 09:10 PM
Does she has concerns for husband. Good joke
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