Adultery Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel)

[SilverArrow]

wow bhai
was expecting the studs eating her out, but whilte most of the erotis scenes happened, the raid has caused a sudden stop in the evnet
but really it was high ride for everyone who red teh story
soory for the birthday hubby, but seems like our heroine is always naughty, sexy but still careful to take the dip fully
she is open, till  certain level..
this is good to keep the story flowing
if you bring in she fucks every tom dic kand harry, people will lose the interest... this was my thought, but as author and readers, everyone may have differnet ideas

Thanks your words and encouragement means the world to me

[SilverArrow]

i discovered your story 2 days back and went through all of it within 2 days.. really loved it.. here is my review of things i lkied about the story

1. Gradual buildup of Monica's descent into sexual debauchery.

it begins with accidental exhibitionism with maid's husband, the guard to accidental infidelity with the armyman at manali and eventually to forced humilitiaon in the train. all of these events gradually ignite latent desires within monica, as she seeks active sexual satisfaction at the hands of lakhan and with friends after the birthday party. This really adds to the realism and erotic nature of the story. Any real woman like Monica wont become a slut overnight.. her gradual descent into the world of cuckoldry is intoxicating to read..

2. Monica being turned on by Rakesh's humiliation.

Although u have not fully explored it yet. but i loved this aspect of Monica's psyche.. especially when she is excited after javed and rafiq rub semen over his face... and at the end of last update where his friends r calling him a cuck while his monica looks on.
Rakesh being physically weak and meek adds to this submissive & humiliation angle.

3. Your exceptional command over the language and the brilliant expression.

Despite having interesting ideas, many writers r not able to execute an erotica because they cannot express properly. U clearly are gifted. There is flow to your writing and the way you write scenes. it is difficult to for me to articulate but i hope you get my feelings.
The way you describe Monica's mental state in different scenes.. guilt, shame mixed with excitement and arousal in her taboo situations.. its just fantastic.
Monica's clothing has also been perfectly described.. u really paint a perfect picture of an urban upper class indian woman with naughty desires

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Thanks so much... I really get encouraged by these kind words.. I can't be thankful enough

[SilverArrow]

It is going great.
Request next Build up to be slow, seduction to be slow...Don't jump into sex immediately

Want hubby to be fooled by Wifey...But Hubby not knowing he is being played.
Wifey - should use her hubby's trust  to manipulate him

Sure again thanks
You and your kind support has been oxygen for authors like us...God bless u dear

[drlund]

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