Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair

[amzad2004]

What shall we do, shall we send a message to Jay and Nikitha via whatsapp and ask them to get united and stop the story?

lol no heygi, I just humbly suggested that you may narrate the sequence based on logic, realty and justice. You may think about it.

[RCF]

Few things I noticed...

Nikita has a problem to not think through before making decisions.

1. She did not think properly and showed where she lived to Tharun in earlier episodes.
2. She mentioned to Tharun that she needs to take care of Jay as he is sick, why?
3. To cover earlier slip, she mentioned his wife is also working abroad giving doubts to Tharun that both live in same building and both their spouses working abroad.
4. She gave lot of liberty to Tharun so he can walk in any time and kiss or feel her body anytime he wants, there by becoming his girl friend with out even her consent at times.
5. She did not even ask him to break up with her girl friend first before going to a date, who does that? how dumb can one be to take a step in direction for her future but not address other's person's single status properly.
6. Revenge on Jay or not, she needs to take steps to make sure her future man is properly well behaved, I know sex also should be in the mix but she seems to be distracted and not taking Tharuns careless attitude towards their agreement seriously.  

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Few things I noticed...

Nikita has a problem to not think through before making decisions.

1. She did not think properly and showed where she lived to Tharun in earlier episodes.
2. She mentioned to Tharun that she needs to take care of Jay as he is sick, why?
3. To cover earlier slip, she mentioned his wife is also working abroad giving doubts to Tharun that both live in same building and both their spouses working abroad.
4. She gave lot of liberty to Tharun so he can walk in any time and kiss or feel her body anytime he wants, there by becoming his girl friend with out even her consent at times.
5. She did not even ask him to break up with her girl friend first before going to a date, who does that? how dumb can one be to take a step in direction for her future but not address other's person's single status properly.
6. Revenge on Jay or not, she needs to take steps to make sure her future man is properly well behaved, I know sex also should be in the mix but she seems to be distracted and not taking Tharuns careless attitude towards their agreement seriously.  

~RCF

She just started thinking with a sense, getting know each other is first thing.. From here things will change.

[Muhammad Hasan]

Remember Author, Too much reading the comments destroys the Story, It changes real path of the Story.

Legendary Author Krrish made the same mistake.

[amzad2004]

Remember Author, Too much reading the comments destroys the Story, It changes real path of the Story.

Legendary Author Krrish made the same mistake.

মিয়া আপনে পাঠকের পরামর্শকে এতো নেগেটিভ ভাবে নিচ্ছেন কেনো? লেখক গল্প সাজেশান অনুযায়ী গল্পের গতিপথ চেঞ্জ করতেই পারে।

[heygiwriter]

মিয়া আপনে পাঠকের পরামর্শকে এতো নেগেটিভ ভাবে নিচ্ছেন কেনো? লেখক গল্প সাজেশান অনুযায়ী গল্পের গতিপথ চেঞ্জ করতেই পারে।

Major issue with my characters in the story is they dont speak what they intended to, they sometimes get manipulated or go away from what they originally intended to do because of how society wants. 

You want me to behave like my character, i would face criticism than following readers opinion and change track. 

I  personally know how i ridiculed  a story, with my own hands to meet audience expectation. Sometimes let writer finish what he intended to do .

Im okay with opinions that can fix certain things, not changing authors original vision

[oxy.raj]

Any more updates, should we anticipate for rest of the day?

Thanks

[RCF]

মিয়া আপনে পাঠকের পরামর্শকে এতো নেগেটিভ ভাবে নিচ্ছেন কেনো? লেখক গল্প সাজেশান অনুযায়ী গল্পের গতিপথ চেঞ্জ করতেই পারে।

Amzad bhai, The way you have envisioned the story would reveal itself soon, Have patience my friend. Your thoughts are spontaneous so every update you feel highs and lows, we get it but let the story progress and you will see which is true love story which one is fake. Sex is integral part of these stories and should not decide your thought process. 

Sometimes characters feel they are in love and make sex but they will realize its not love so with out reading full story you cannot judge them in between the chapters. I request you analyze the story and not give harsh opinions. 

~RCF

[Priyaram]

Your writing is brilliant bro,please don’t change your originality for the readers comments bro,I know you are strong willed person,so won’t bend for other needs..
 The story is getting hotter day by day.
Nikitha and tharun chemistry also awesome bro..
Go ahead ..we are with you..

[heygiwriter]

Any more updates, should we anticipate for rest of the day?

Thanks

Didnt get time.. a lot re edited required.. will try to post 2 chapters per day

[amzad2004]

oh my god! bro heygi and bro RCF you both understand bangla? Or it is Google translate? Both of your point to be noted. I humbly expressed my opinions. What makes both of you translated my bangla comment?

[Priyaram]

Can we expect second update now bro?

[Mukul@99]

Sir there used be feast of updates to your stories prior before. But now 2 updates per day sounds more like a strategic move to kill us with anticipation. Keeps us counting down the moments until when is the next chapter dropping ? (Just a good-natured banter) Thank you sir.

[jaatrangila99]

Following things are not going to happen (they will end the story):-
(1) Jai & Nikki will not have a open and detailed conversation.
(2) Jai will not leave Nikki and move on.
(3) Tharun will not stop his advances.
(4) Nikki will never stop Tharun's physical advances, but will stop Jai.
(5) Nikki will always show some mixed signals to Jai to keep him close.
(6) Tharun will never find out about Nikki and Jai's marriage. I don't want it to be a blackmail story.
(7) Jai will never think about revenge.



How the story is going to uncover:-
(1) Nikki will have sex with Tharun.
(2) Jai will behave like a cuckold and will still worship the ground on which Nikki walks.
(3) Tharun will humiliate Jai. We can expect some drama here.
(4) Nikki and Jai will not end their relationship.


How the story will end:-
(1) Jai will become a cuckold.
(2) Nikki will still have sex with Tharun.
(3) Tharun will walk away (or we can expect some drama like he was fired from his post).
(4) Jai and Nikki will stay together like husband and wife.


I also used to comment like you. I didn't realise that it was I who was wrong, not author. I was throwing some tantrums. I was expecting the story to move in a certain direction. Like why this is not happening? Why that is happening? Why this character is behaving in this perticular manner.

That was my mistake. I never realised that I am just a reader. And after successfully ruining last story (Suresh - Sneha - Gautam) I realised 1 thing that don't force author too much. I don't want this story to end in same manner. Now I can only cook some scenarios in my head about Suresh's revenge.

If you don't like the story, then don't read. Simple. Stop behaving like a brat. Learn from my mistakes.


I am not asking you to stop commenting, but be in limits.

[Priyaram]

Hi bro..any chance for update today?

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 47: Four Hearts & Silent Care


As soon as Tharun left, the door clicked shut behind him, and the house fell into heavy silence. Nikitha stood near the stairs for a long moment, her heart sinking. She had let this happen. She hadn’t stopped Tharun from coming inside, from hugging her in her nighty, from speaking so casually in front of Jay. The realization hit her like a cold wave.

Jay must be boiling inside. She thought. 

She felt a sharp pang of guilt. She hadn’t intended for things to escalate like this at home — their shared space. Taking a deep breath, she went downstairs, hesitant and panicked.

Jay was lying on the bed, eyes closed, looking exhausted. He didn’t speak when she entered.

“I’m sorry,” Nikitha said softly, standing near the edge of the bed. “I promise I’ll stop him from coming here again.”
Jay remained silent for a few seconds, then opened his eyes. His voice was tired, drained of energy.

“What difference does this make?” he asked.
Nikitha: “Pardon?”

Jay: “Let me be honest with you, Nikki. For the past few days, we’ve been exchanging the same set of words again and again. I have no strength left to argue with you. All I can say is one thing — you are not in your right mind. You are filled with anger and rage. Fine, it’s okay… but what I would say is: Don’t change tracks without knowing your destination. It would be meaningless if you change in the middle and still lag behind.”
Nikitha looked at him, her chest tight. “Please be precise. I’m not interested in long arguments — not because I’m tired or ignoring you. You need to rest well.”

Jay exhaled slowly. “You are playing with four hearts, Nikki. Be careful. In the process, I’m sure you may break many hearts. It’s up to you to reduce the numbers.”

Nikitha was confused for a second, then understood exactly what he meant — Jay, Tharun, and Mithra. She stayed quiet for a moment.

Who was the fourth one she wondered. 
Assuming third heart belongs to Mitha, she said

“Don’t think I’m not considering Mithra and her feelings,” she said finally. “The reality is I cannot help her when she displays the same level of affection towards Tharun. He ends up leaning on me, wanting more. Like me, he will have a word with her if we are seriously taking this. Don’t worry. You all have to face the consequences for how you take your loved ones for granted. And it’s too early to speak about breaking hearts. We’ve just begun to know each other. Let’s not talk about it anymore.”

Jay didn’t push further. He lay there lost in thought.

After a pause, Nikitha asked, puzzled, “Who is that fourth heart that would get hurt in the process? You, Mithra, Tharun… who is the fourth one?”
Jay looked at her and said, “I didn’t realize you’re so heartless that you forget you have a heart… and it would get hurt when things get complicated.”

Nikitha : “I don’t know where you learned to speak like this. You cannot love or read people’s love or reciprocate, but you know how to hurt and make fun. Right, let it be.”

Jay thought she was in rage, he feared if she would go back office, while he may need her support. But deep inside he knows if she even decides to go he cannot stop her. 

Hiding his hesitation, he decided to ask After a minute,

Jay: “Tharun told you to come back to the office at noon, didn’t he? anything important, if there is something you go i can manage.”
Nikitha looked at him. “I don’t want to. I have to be here. Tharun will understand.”

The entire day passed in relative quiet. Nikitha took care of Jay with gentle dedication — feeding him kanji, changing his damp cloths, making sure he took his medicines on time. His fever gradually came down. She barely left his side.

That night, she stayed awake longer than usual, checking on him every now and then. When he finally fell into a peaceful sleep, she lay beside him, her mind a whirlwind of guilt, confusion, and exhaustion.

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The next morning, while preparing fresh kanji, Nikitha called Tharun. She really didn’t want any more unwanted complications. She was also a little disappointed with how he had behaved the previous day.

She hadn’t responded to his messages either.

“Tharun,” she said firmly when he picked up. “It’s important.”
Tharun: “Anything serious? Is Jay fine?”

Nikitha: “He’s better. But listen… Don’t come home unannounced again.

Tharun: Why? Did tharun said anything?

Nikitha: No, neighbors noticed you frequently and started asking about it. (She lied), So“Don’t come home unannounced again,” she said firmly. “If you respect me, I want you to obey my words. Lets just meet outside in the office or somewhere, no more to my house.”

Tharun was quiet for a moment, then replied, “Okay. I’ll wait for you at the office.”
Nikitha: “One more thing… I thought we had an agreement when we spoke at the beach. 

I hope you are a gentleman who would honor my opinion.”
Tharun: “I’m sorry, Nikki. I just missed you.”

Nikitha: “I have made the toughest decision in my life. I want to prove something to myself. I want to tell myself I could experience love. I hope you understand. Meet you at the office. Bye.”

Tharun: “Bye, Nikki.”

Three hours passed.

After finishing the kanji and ensuring Jay had eaten, Nikitha went to the office in the afternoon. When colleagues asked where she had been, she gave a simple lie: “A distant relative was sick. I was at the hospital.”

Tharun and Nikitha shared a knowing glance across the floor.
At 4 PM, as soon as she entered Tharun’s cabin, he closed the door behind her and looked at her with concern mixed with desire.
Nikitha was little disappointed with Tharun, as they are alone, she decided to test him. 

[Priyaram]

Nikitha is fixated to find the love with other men,she is adamant to find that love outside..

Nikitha wants to prove jay that her choice is better…
Tharun- Mithra relationship pathi konjam solunga..
Are they falling apart really..?

Can’t wait to see how the relationship will be twisted between tharun and Nikitha.
 Give big updates bro please..
Again..
Thanks a lot for the wonderful story..

[Hornytamilan23]

Major issue with my characters in the story is they dont speak what they intended to, they sometimes get manipulated or go away from what they originally intended to do because of how society wants. 

You want me to behave like my character, i would face criticism than following readers opinion and change track. 

I  personally know how i ridiculed  a story, with my own hands to meet audience expectation. Sometimes let writer finish what he intended to do .

Im okay with opinions that can fix certain things, not changing authors original vision

Good

[oxy.raj]

I believe, Tharun will pass the test..

[heygiwriter]

Stop annoying man. Let me stop writing.. You tell me what should i do, how should the story progress. ? 

You want me me to Nikki stay away from Tharun, and join back Jai right?

Why then this story to be written on Xossipy?