Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair

[heygiwriter]

Author left lot of bread scrums for us to pick and figure out, At least based on story so far without taking any future predictions into consideration, I can confidently say Nikitha is already in love with Jay for a very long time, just did not realize it yet. We have given direct context on how Jay is feeling and he proposed his love already. Whether Nikitha believes it or not doesn't matter, we know Jay loves her now...at least we have seen him grow close to her recently. Nikitha thinks its only insecurity and possessiveness and from her perspective it is true as she always thought if she pursues relationship outside their marriage she thought Jay would understand and adjust as she did in case of Anjali. As he is behaving irrationally she is now mad at him as she thinks he is not fair to her as she was to him. Only thing she did not realize is that arrangement was when both of them were just friends with benefits. When in love seeing lover with another person is very painful, she is not realizing that she is not just taking revenge or pursing new experiences by trying to seek love or that thrill of being wanted with Tharun but also breaking Jay slowly piece by piece and pushing him away.

Nikitha though as projected here as caring only as a friend, we have many instances all over 40 chapters where she was a wife to Jay not only on paper but in life as well. She gave her everything to this marriage as a wife should all these years and in doing so she herself committed to this marriage knowingly or unknowingly. When some one does that there is no going back, she will miss her home, her marriage, her constant care she takes of Jay, her constant worry about him all the time...all these feelings are not just care, they are domestic, comes with proprietary over other person thinking he is mine...only difference here is she did not realize yet what she is sacrificing in falling for Tharun's charm. When that initial attraction, lust and attention dries out, she will see the clear skies with out fog where she would crave her caring for Jay, she would crave her grounded life where her role is a wife all these years. By that time she will push Jay as much as possible to the edge unknowingly by being in relationship with Tharun.

Both of them constantly worry about each other right from their breakfasts to their health and one realized his love for her and it would take time for her to realize it. All these years, Jay did not feel it nor added any efforts, its time he sacrifices his love for her so she could experience true relationship outside, like properly date, get attention and enjoy physical relationship that comes from young love. She has missed all those by marrying Jay in the process of escaping so she never got to enjoy any of these hence her cravings are genuine, Jay needs to understand this and give her space.

As for Tharun, Though author mentioned he did not want to make any one villain of the story wantedly, he still will end up one as his intentions were never noble. Whether he saw Jay with Anjali or not, whether this office every one openly flirts with others or not, doesn't give him rights to pursue a married lady being a manager himself, there itself his righteousness fails in the very first step. So him getting Nikitha at the end would be a serious flaw to the natural order.

Excellent story again and perfectly written emotional games between all 3 characters.
~RCF

Yes i did'nt say it openly, i just make sure you take all hints. one of hints, which would shape future episodes is this "I fear i moved far from fixing it" last few chapters are glimpse of it.

[heygiwriter]

Tharun is a master with his words , he has lot of patience to get Nikitha as his sex partner or even his wife too . And  
story looks like Nikitha has started having feelings for Jay but still I am routing for Tharun and Nikitha all the way

Nikitha always had feelings for him. Her anger is he didnt see her. Tharun and Nikitha world is a bubble, its shines, get attraction, looks beautiful, but longevity is questionable!

[heygiwriter]

MAN, trust me, Nikitha loves Jay the most. She hasn't dropped even a pinch of that love. Everything she is doing now comes from anger and pain. She is venting it all out. She waited patiently for years, and when she finally got the right weapon in Tharun, she started using it.


The only thing she hasn't realized yet is that she loves Jay more than anything. Every minute, her mind is filled with him. She is just using a better-looking, more attentive man like Tharun to erase Jay's memory because she is hurt.

There are some brilliant moments in this story. I honestly don't know how Hey Gi writes like this.

Tharun took Nikitha to a rich restaurant. There were royal dresses, luxury, romance—everything. He took her to his apartment, kissed her passionately, and she got involved in the moment. You could feel the sensual, romantic atmosphere between them.

Then, in the very next scene, when she becomes worried about Jay, she rushes home and takes him out for dinner. Jay takes her to a small hotel. It isn't luxurious. It isn't royal. With her modern, elegant outfit, she almost looks out of place there. Yet somehow, that's where she seems most like herself.

The entire time, when she came back from Tharun's palce.. She was worried, she's beating him, cursing him, teasing him, ordering him around. She looks like a bossy wife who has complete rights over her husband. That's the love.

The writer quietly shows us the difference between those two worlds. 

We know Nikitha is madly in love with Jay. 
We know Jay is making mistakes.

We, as readers, are practically screaming at them, but the characters themselves haven't heard it yet.

I have a feeling Nikitha will realize what true love is only after she gives herself completely to Tharun. 
Sometimes lust and excitement have to fade before a person can see love clearly.
That's what makes this story so fascinating to me.

There are many beautiful moments, interesting one i will post in next comment.

MUCH LOVE HEY GI

Thanks for the love. Get ready for a ride

[heygiwriter]

In my opinion you did fantastic job so far. But my hart got bleed when I read the 1st date chapter, I think unwillingly it showed a gold digger posture of Nikita. I have lost few galloon of blood, do not worry I visited hospital and refill from the blood bank. I understand this would necessary for the story's progression. I am very tense for upcoming chapters because you have a tradition to blunder a story at any stage. Also you have replied to a reader that every dynamics will change. It makes me to plan to book a bad in cardiac department at nearest hospital. I have already weaken eye sight.
Any normal person with a mature brain witho0ut hesitation is rooting to Jay and Nikita. Only those who are brainless immature people are rooting to Tharun and Nikita. I hope those sex retarded people will rotten in hell.
Pls heigi do not sent me to hospital.

Where is the gold digger part comes? I guess you have an issue with 'Overthinking'.. im not commenting personal. but you comments/ feedbacks are far extreme from story's context or intentions. 

Did any of the readers feel she is gold digger?  I bet no one will feel except you. 
Where and when did money came into part of story?  

Did you think Nikitha fall for costly dress. i mean the royal hotel , dress. 

Money has nothing to do with this.. 

Nikitha just wanted to feel loved, she wanted acknowledgement from loved one.. 

Jay seemed like never did that, but look at Tharun, he purchsed her a modern dress for special date.. 

[Im breaking this --> is a factor coming subtly in upcoming chapters..., (Nikitha would be happy if Jay even got her a simple saree, she just wanted something from loved one, not a costly dress, this is sort of simple things she expect) // may be i will change it bit as i have to open here..]

if the 'feeling loved, noticed' confused you for gold digging i'm sorry bro, you need to meet doctor for overthinking. Chill just a joke. 


There is Subtle Message kind of Metaphor, immediately.. 

Right in next scene, she was in same dress the modern and rich one, she would have looked odd at a small hotel, even the owner of shop doubtfully asked. 

But it didn't bother her, she blindly followed Jay and sat with him, eat Idlies. 

No matter how odd it is she will fit herself into it for Jay. 

That's the Subtle Message i conveyed in that Scene. 

All Jay need to do is take all clues and ACT.  

[heygiwriter]

Enjoy the Day off, you deserve it after back to back episodes...

Thanks for consideration :)

[amzad2004]

Where is the gold digger part comes? I guess you have an issue with 'Overthinking'.. im not commenting personal. but you comments/ feedbacks are far extreme from story's context or intentions. 

Did any of the readers feel she is gold digger?  I bet no one will feel except you. 
Where and when did money came into part of story?  

Did you think Nikitha fall for costly dress. i mean the royal hotel , dress. 

Money has nothing to do with this.. 

Nikitha just wanted to feel loved, she wanted acknowledgement from loved one.. 

Jay seemed like never did that, but look at Tharun, he purchsed her a modern dress for special date.. 

[Im breaking this --> is a factor coming subtly in upcoming chapters..., (Nikitha would be happy if Jay even got her a simple saree, she just wanted something from loved one, not a costly dress, this is sort of simple things she expect) // may be i will change it bit as i have to open here..]

if the 'feeling loved, noticed' confused you for gold digging i'm sorry bro, you need to meet doctor for overthinking. Chill just a joke. 


There is Subtle Message kind of Metaphor, immediately.. 

Right in next scene, she was in same dress the modern and rich one, she would have looked odd at a small hotel, even the owner of shop doubtfully asked. 

But it didn't bother her, she blindly followed Jay and sat with him, eat Idlies. 

No matter how odd it is she will fit herself into it for Jay. 

That's the Subtle Message i conveyed in that Scene. 

All Jay need to do is take all clues and ACT.  

Should I cancel the plan to book a bed in cardiac department at my nearest hospital then?

[heygiwriter]

Im not sure if you are playing or serious.   

Chill and enjoy ..

[suryaspk]

So far so good. More than erotica or adultery this feels lot like a love story. For this reason you will face more hate if you fumble.
I personally don't want to root for anyone. If Jay love isn't reciprocated he should move on. Whatever mistake Jay did was when they were in FWB. When Jay expressed his love niki should have given him chance rather than going out with Tharun to irritate him. Or least should have told it won't work between them and moveon. Ask him to try to express love and at the same time going out with another man is wrong to me.

[Raj_Rohan]

Add gifs, pics.

Simply reading paragraph during erotic scene feels boring sometimes.

Consider this point pls..

[RCF]

Yes i did'nt say it openly, i just make sure you take all hints. one of hints, which would shape future episodes is this "I fear i moved far from fixing it" last few chapters are glimpse of it.

Lol I now know how you think and write. If I am not wrong, Jay will respond, put efforts and gets soft approvals from Nikitha too but just when things are going his way, Some situations would put Nikita and Tharun alone and she first with resistance but would sleep with him and that would change everything completely. As of now she is fighting it because she is mad at Jay and also her cravings for love and to find some one who loves her is strong but she is still thinking about Jay but the moment she has sex with Tharun, she will drift away at a very rapid pace into the affair. 

Jay despite his all efforts will end up losing her, I am guessing he will move out of that house even before they pay the loans. Its inevitable. 

As for "I fear i moved far from fixing it", I do not agree, she thinks she did but not yet. She never tried to fix it in the first place, If she herself keeps saying even before their fight started that this is not real marriage, just on paper over and over then when did she actually try to fix it? Make it real for both of them? Start love with Jay? She never did take any steps so her thinking that she moved far from fixing it is just her mind telling her do not be in this convenient setup anymore and seek love but she is failing to see the love right in front of her eyes. 

Every person is different in expressing love..If Jay making a rough sex with rage when he sees her kissing Tharun for first time is not love then what is it? Why did Nikita slap Jay when she saw him dragging Anjali into store room, all those stares for Jay at office all the time, she could have simply warned him but she slapped because its her pain watching with Anjali. Both love each other and show it occasionally but failed to recognize it all this time over years. But I am guessing things will be more complicated once Nikita enters into an affair with Tharun and as usual lust and thrill will collide with love. 

~RCF

[Mukul@99]

The story is beautifully poised. The aura created around the characters and story is absolutely exquisite. Seriously the aura is on an other level, that makes you forget yourself in the moment of bliss. Nothing can beat that experience. The best story on the forum. No .. Wait ! What ever story Mr.Heygi writes becomes the best story on the forum.

[heygiwriter]

Lol I now know how you think and write. If I am not wrong, Jay will respond, put efforts and gets soft approvals from Nikitha too but just when things are going his way, Some situations would put Nikita and Tharun alone and she first with resistance but would sleep with him and that would change everything completely. As of now she is fighting it because she is mad at Jay and also her cravings for love and to find some one who loves her is strong but she is still thinking about Jay but the moment she has sex with Tharun, she will drift away at a very rapid pace into the affair. 

Jay despite his all efforts will end up losing her, I am guessing he will move out of that house even before they pay the loans. Its inevitable. 

As for "I fear i moved far from fixing it", I do not agree, she thinks she did but not yet. She never tried to fix it in the first place, If she herself keeps saying even before their fight started that this is not real marriage, just on paper over and over then when did she actually try to fix it? Make it real for both of them? Start love with Jay? She never did take any steps so her thinking that she moved far from fixing it is just her mind telling her do not be in this convenient setup anymore and seek love but she is failing to see the love right in front of her eyes. 

Every person is different in expressing love..If Jay making a rough sex with rage when he sees her kissing Tharun for first time is not love then what is it? Why did Nikita slap Jay when she saw him dragging Anjali into store room, all those stares for Jay at office all the time, she could have simply warned him but she slapped because its her pain watching with Anjali. Both love each other and show it occasionally but failed to recognize it all this time over years. But I am guessing things will be more complicated once Nikita enters into an affair with Tharun and as usual lust and thrill will collide with love. 

~RCF

She had moved already, she allowed Tharun.. their last kiss had crossed everything. Its just that, it doesnt stay with her.. Jay keeps occupying her. a nuance

[amzad2004]

Im not sure if you are playing or serious.   

Chill and enjoy ..

Serious bro

[RCF]

She had moved already, she allowed Tharun.. their last kiss had crossed everything. Its just that, it doesnt stay with her.. Jay keeps occupying her. a nuance

If she did then the pain that she sees on Jay shouldn't matter for her or she shouldn't be even think about Jay. It would even be a sad ending if they come back to each other at the end. 

Only people who belong to each other are those that move on but they do not realize their feelings for the right person yet. 

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

If she did then the pain that she sees on Jay shouldn't matter for her or she shouldn't be even think about Jay. It would even be a sad ending if they come back to each other at the end. 

Only people who belong to each other are those that move on but they do not realize their feelings for the right person yet. 

~RCF

Thats why complicated. She had Tharun who is offering everything. She wanted to move on. Moving on.. But she kept holding Jay, with rage, anger and still expecting him to do something one day..

[heygiwriter]

The story is beautifully poised. The aura created around the characters and story is absolutely exquisite. Seriously the aura is on an other level, that makes you forget yourself in the moment of bliss. Nothing can beat that experience. The best story on the forum. No .. Wait ! What ever story Mr.Heygi writes becomes the best story on the forum.

Thanks

[heygiwriter]

So far so good. More than erotica or adultery this feels lot like a love story. For this reason you will face more hate if you fumble.
I personally don't want to root for anyone. If Jay love isn't reciprocated he should move on. Whatever mistake Jay did was when they were in FWB. When Jay expressed his love niki should have given him chance rather than going out with Tharun to irritate him. Or least should have told it won't work between them and moveon. Ask him to try to express love and at the same time going out with another man is wrong to me.

Thats the complicated part, she cant leave also she dont want to miss a chance right before.

[RCF]

Ask him to try to express love and at the same time going out with another man is wrong to me.

Agreed partially but she already mentioned to him if she ever felt love from she would return back and he has to accept her with her affair with Tharun too just like she accepted him with Anjali, though her logic is wrong morally compared to Jay. Jay and Anjali were a thing when they were friends but this is different so definitely a mistake if she ever want to be with Jay it would be too difficult to reconcile at later point. 

Jay moving on would be the best thing for Nikita to see the reality. 

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Agreed partially but she already mentioned to him if she ever felt love from she would return back and he has to accept her with her affair with Tharun too just like she accepted him with Anjali, though her logic is wrong morally compared to Jay. Jay and Anjali were a thing when they were friends but this is different so definitely a mistake if she ever want to be with Jay it would be too difficult to reconcile at later point. 

Jay moving on would be the best thing for Nikita to see the reality. 

~RCF

Lets see what's in store for them. 

Have you noticed when he said "Everything was fine until they were friends, when love came everything turns upside down'

Its one of Hint

[RCF]

Lets see what's in store for them. 

Have you noticed when he said "Everything was fine until they were friends, when love came everything turns upside down'

Its one of Hint

Yes that's his justification for her question on why he was being unfair to her and its perfectly apt. Though he should allow her to pursue her own wishes as their marriage is still a contract between them, him trying to show his love is not wrong. It should technically stop Nikita and she should make sure if he is truthful but she is already attracted to Tharun by then and she couldn't see the love from Jay. 
Irrespective of whether she could see Jay's love for her or not, My point is she loves him and not yet realized. When she first kissed Tharun on terrace, she was broken, she felt like she betrayed, she wanted solace in the arms of Jay. Only a person who feels she cheated will react that way, if it was just a marriage on paper why would she feel that way? Her saying that Jay slept with Anjali so I will sleep with Tharun is OK for argument sake but true inner feelings won't lie to them, they will reveal where her heart stands at the end. 

~RCF