11-06-2026, 06:20 AM
Bloody old dogs spoiled the party
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Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair
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11-06-2026, 06:20 AM
Bloody old dogs spoiled the party
11-06-2026, 08:33 AM
She has to go far away from him, only to realize how close she is to him. She has to be with someone else to realize how much she is truly in love with him. Wow ! Classic an absolute classic. Many stories are read and forgotten. But your stories Mr.Heygi will always be remembered. They capture your heart and invade your mind. Brilliance .. Sheer Brilliance. Thank you for an absolute surreal reading experience.
11-06-2026, 09:04 AM
For Nikki, Tharun for love, jai for lust
For jai, Nikki for love anjali for list For Tharun nikki for love and lust For anjali love for money lust for every powerful man
11-06-2026, 09:06 AM
(11-06-2026, 08:33 AM)Mukul@99 Wrote: She has to go far away from him, only to realize how close she is to him. She has to be with someone else to realize how much she is truly in love with him. Wow ! Classic an absolute classic. Many stories are read and forgotten. But your stories Mr.Heygi will always be remembered. They capture your heart and invade your mind. Brilliance .. Sheer Brilliance. Thank you for an absolute surreal reading experience. Thanks a lot comments like this keep me charged
11-06-2026, 09:09 AM
We all are animal inside and sexual needs are basics of us as human. Monogamy is Social imposition while Polygamy is human basic. Every character need a reason to have multiple partners because each one give pleasure in different way.
11-06-2026, 09:17 AM
11-06-2026, 09:36 AM
If you create a plot like seeing Nikitha in bikini? , you missed in mirna vikram story too so we asked. Is there any chances for that tharun taking advantage in swimming pool after seeing Nikitha in bikini
11-06-2026, 09:39 AM
11-06-2026, 10:13 AM
Hows the story so far guys!
Let me know who you are rooting for!
11-06-2026, 10:14 AM
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11-06-2026, 10:15 AM
11-06-2026, 12:47 PM
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Author left lot of bread scrums for us to pick and figure out, At least based on story so far without taking any future predictions into consideration, I can confidently say Nikitha is already in love with Jay for a very long time, just did not realize it yet. We have given direct context on how Jay is feeling and he proposed his love already. Whether Nikitha believes it or not doesn't matter, we know Jay loves her now...at least we have seen him grow close to her recently. Nikitha thinks its only insecurity and possessiveness and from her perspective it is true as she always thought if she pursues relationship outside their marriage she thought Jay would understand and adjust as she did in case of Anjali. As he is behaving irrationally she is now mad at him as she thinks he is not fair to her as she was to him. Only thing she did not realize is that arrangement was when both of them were just friends with benefits. When in love seeing lover with another person is very painful, she is not realizing that she is not just taking revenge or pursing new experiences by trying to seek love or that thrill of being wanted with Tharun but also breaking Jay slowly piece by piece and pushing him away.
Nikitha though as projected here as caring only as a friend, we have many instances all over 40 chapters where she was a wife to Jay not only on paper but in life as well. She gave her everything to this marriage as a wife should all these years and in doing so she herself committed to this marriage knowingly or unknowingly. When some one does that there is no going back, she will miss her home, her marriage, her constant care she takes of Jay, her constant worry about him all the time...all these feelings are not just care, they are domestic, comes with proprietary over other person thinking he is mine...only difference here is she did not realize yet what she is sacrificing in falling for Tharun's charm. When that initial attraction, lust and attention dries out, she will see the clear skies with out fog where she would crave her caring for Jay, she would crave her grounded life where her role is a wife all these years. By that time she will push Jay as much as possible to the edge unknowingly by being in relationship with Tharun. Both of them constantly worry about each other right from their breakfasts to their health and one realized his love for her and it would take time for her to realize it. All these years, Jay did not feel it nor added any efforts, its time he sacrifices his love for her so she could experience true relationship outside, like properly date, get attention and enjoy physical relationship that comes from young love. She has missed all those by marrying Jay in the process of escaping so she never got to enjoy any of these hence her cravings are genuine, Jay needs to understand this and give her space. As for Tharun, Though author mentioned he did not want to make any one villain of the story wantedly, he still will end up one as his intentions were never noble. Whether he saw Jay with Anjali or not, whether this office every one openly flirts with others or not, doesn't give him rights to pursue a married lady being a manager himself, there itself his righteousness fails in the very first step. So him getting Nikitha at the end would be a serious flaw to the natural order. Excellent story again and perfectly written emotional games between all 3 characters. ~RCF
11-06-2026, 01:28 PM
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(11-06-2026, 12:47 PM)RCF Wrote: Author left lot of bread scrums for us to pick and figure out, At least based on story so far without taking any future predictions into consideration, I can confidently say Nikitha is already in love with Jay for a very long time, just did not realize it yet. We have given direct context on how Jay is feeling and he proposed his love already. Whether Nikitha believes it or not doesn't matter, we know Jay loves her now...at least we have seen him grow close to her recently. Nikitha thinks its only insecurity and possessiveness and from her perspective it is true as she always thought if she pursues relationship outside their marriage she thought Jay would understand and adjust as she did in case of Anjali. As he is behaving irrationally she is now mad at him as she thinks he is not fair to her as she was to him. Only thing she did not realize is that arrangement was when both of them were just friends with benefits. When in love seeing lover with another person is very painful, she is not realizing that she is not just taking revenge or pursing new experiences by trying to seek love or that thrill of being wanted with Tharun but also breaking Jay slowly piece by piece and pushing him away..
-Pickup, drop, escape.
11-06-2026, 03:27 PM
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(11-06-2026, 10:13 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: Hows the story so far guys! Tharun is a master with his words , he has lot of patience to get Nikitha as his sex partner or even his wife too . And story looks like Nikitha has started having feelings for Jay but still I am routing for Tharun and Nikitha all the way
11-06-2026, 04:27 PM
Nikitha character reminds vijay Sethupathi character in movie Kaathuvaakula Rendu Kaadhal. I love you two
11-06-2026, 05:47 PM
I just want to know how you think of a story like this. It feels so real. The emotions, feelings, anger, disappointments, and the situations that lead to the affair all feel authentic.
The surprising factor, especially in this story, is that the man who is losing his wife doesn't seem to lose his dignity. He isn't ridiculed. Instead, he is questioned directly by the woman, and they openly discuss their issues. The conversations feel natural and realistic, which makes the whole story even more believable.
11-06-2026, 06:01 PM
MAN, trust me, Nikitha loves Jay the most. She hasn't dropped even a pinch of that love. Everything she is doing now comes from anger and pain. She is venting it all out. She waited patiently for years, and when she finally got the right weapon in Tharun, she started using it.
The only thing she hasn't realized yet is that she loves Jay more than anything. Every minute, her mind is filled with him. She is just using a better-looking, more attentive man like Tharun to erase Jay's memory because she is hurt. There are some brilliant moments in this story. I honestly don't know how Hey Gi writes like this. Tharun took Nikitha to a rich restaurant. There were royal dresses, luxury, romance—everything. He took her to his apartment, kissed her passionately, and she got involved in the moment. You could feel the sensual, romantic atmosphere between them. Then, in the very next scene, when she becomes worried about Jay, she rushes home and takes him out for dinner. Jay takes her to a small hotel. It isn't luxurious. It isn't royal. With her modern, elegant outfit, she almost looks out of place there. Yet somehow, that's where she seems most like herself. The entire time, when she came back from Tharun's palce.. She was worried, she's beating him, cursing him, teasing him, ordering him around. She looks like a bossy wife who has complete rights over her husband. That's the love. The writer quietly shows us the difference between those two worlds. We know Nikitha is madly in love with Jay. We know Jay is making mistakes. We, as readers, are practically screaming at them, but the characters themselves haven't heard it yet. I have a feeling Nikitha will realize what true love is only after she gives herself completely to Tharun. Sometimes lust and excitement have to fade before a person can see love clearly. That's what makes this story so fascinating to me. There are many beautiful moments, interesting one i will post in next comment. MUCH LOVE HEY GI
11-06-2026, 06:16 PM
My Favorite Moments
1. The Parking Lot Fight Jay beating Tharun in the parking lot was one of my favorite moments. He called it as fun fight for taking a women.. Honestly, which husband would stay calm when another man talks about his wife like that? Jay actually controlled his anger better than most people would, but at the same time, he proved to the world that he couldn't simply stand by and watch. Nikitha panicking and fearing a war between them was a bonus. I was actually expecting that reaction from her! She might have feared they gonna fight for her. More importantly, that entire sequence was a moment to understand Jay's love, possessiveness, anger, and mindset. The conversation in the car afterward felt like a huge hypocrisy checkmate by Nikitha against Jay. 2. The Promotion Decision When HR asked them to choose their preferred roles for the promotion, Nikitha pulled off a "one stone, two mangoes" move. On the surface, she stayed calm and ensured Jay got his dream position. But at the same time, when Jay started struggling with the thought of Tharun getting closer to her, her sweet revenge was on full display. She actually stopped him from stupidly choosing a different role trashing his own dream for petty thing. Yet, in the end, she still made the decision primarily for Jay's benefit. That was another moment that showed how much she truly loves him. 3. The Burn Dosa Incident When Nikitha smelled something burning and immediately panicked, shouting Jay's name, that scene said everything. Her first instinct was concern for Jay. That moment clearly revealed how deeply she cares for him. 4. Nikitha's Jealousy Games This isn't a single scene, but a collection of moments. Whenever Jay was around, Nikitha would casually chat with Tharun just to irritate him or make him jealous. Saying yes to a date, mentioning deleted messages as dirty sex chats, hinting at conversations that never actually happened—it was all part of her game. Some of the funniest and most revealing moments came from watching Jay react while Nikitha quietly pushed his buttons. 5. The Secret Breakfasts Jay and Nikitha secretly arranging breakfast for each other without telling anyone in the office was classic. Neither of them wanted credit. Neither openly acknowledged it. Yet both continued caring for each other in small ways. Those tiny acts often felt more meaningful than the grand romantic gestures. And then there's Tharun genuinely caring for Nikitha as well, which makes the whole situation even more complicated. It's like the topping on an already delicious cake (lets call it PIZZA) haha. That's probably what makes this story work for me. The big dramatic scenes are great, but it's the small moments—jealousy, concern, habits, routines, silent acts of care—that constantly remind us how deeply Jay and Nikitha are still connected, even while they're hurting each othe
11-06-2026, 06:55 PM
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(11-06-2026, 10:13 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: Hows the story so far guys! In my opinion you did fantastic job so far. But my hart got bleed when I read the 1st date chapter, I think unwillingly it showed a gold digger posture of Nikita. I have lost few galloon of blood, do not worry I visited hospital and refill from the blood bank. I understand this would necessary for the story's progression. I am very tense for upcoming chapters because you have a tradition to blunder a story at any stage. Also you have replied to a reader that every dynamics will change. It makes me to plan to book a bad in cardiac department at nearest hospital. I have already weaken eye sight. Any normal person with a mature brain witho0ut hesitation is rooting to Jay and Nikita. Only those who are brainless immature people are rooting to Tharun and Nikita. I hope those sex retarded people will rotten in hell. Pls heigi do not sent me to hospital. |
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