10-06-2026, 07:53 PM
Office of bitches. Arjun sharmi
If there is a relationship, they will be sacked
If there is a relationship, they will be sacked
(10-06-2026, 07:17 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: Why should i make Tharun a villain to make Niki understand Jay's love?
the theme I'm trying here is two people are sincere and genuine towards her, whom she will choose, how will she find the love.
all 3 have little moral grey in them. still they try to be honest open and navigate this storm..
You should wait patiently until then dont judge buddy :)
(10-06-2026, 08:19 PM)amzad2004 Wrote: Oh no no heygi you are going to include love between Tharun and Nikita also countless sex sequence between then, it will degraded the story and portraited Nikita nothing but a filthy whore. Why Nikita has to choose between Jay and Tharun? Oh my god!!! another blunder is coming. However your story your wish Love does not exist in illicit affair, You have taken the story on the wrong track haygi. My hope to see you as a A.R.Rahman has got shattered. :'(
(10-06-2026, 08:24 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: You are my harshest critic, because of you i tried change track once and got hurted as a writer.That is why I always caution you: never let others take control of your story. Stay true to your instincts and do not allow anyone or anything to steer you off course. The moment you do, you risk losing your authentic perspective and becoming distracted from your original purpose. Protect your vision and remain grounded in what you believe.
I know you might set an expection, deep down, you always had a hero, heroine and vilalin. you are okay with villain having her for sometime and you want heroin to reroute to hero
reality is complex, its not just physicall, its emotionally invovled, all my previous storie one of character goes down grey so i easily made them a scape goat, but in this story, im honestly trying to find a track for real love and how they find it. It means, without painting anyone villain they will settled down to who they truly love.
(10-06-2026, 08:34 PM)oxy.raj Wrote: That is why I always caution you: never let others take control of your story. Stay true to your instincts and do not allow anyone or anything to steer you off course. The moment you do, you risk losing your authentic perspective and becoming distracted from your original purpose. Protect your vision and remain grounded in what you believe.
(10-06-2026, 08:33 PM)jiivajothii Wrote: Jai and anjali make good pair.
Tharun and Nikitha made for each other
Nikki should not allow jai to touch her hereafter
Tharun not interested to know her husband name and where he works
Is the HR records also forged
Let's see
(10-06-2026, 08:24 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: You are my harshest critic, because of you i tried change track once and got hurted as a writer.
I know you might set an expection, deep down, you always had a hero, heroine and vilalin. you are okay with villain having her for sometime and you want heroin to reroute to hero
reality is complex, its not just physicall, its emotionally invovled, all my previous storie one of character goes down grey so i easily made them a scape goat, but in this story, im honestly trying to find a track for real love and how they find it. It means, without painting anyone villain they will settled down to who they truly love.
(10-06-2026, 09:25 PM)amzad2004 Wrote: You got hurt because of me now I am getting hurt by you so we are in same page bro, its makes us two brother from different mothers. Your explanation have made my sorrow calm little bit. Pls do not include sex encounter between Tharun and Nikita during their foreign trip and behind Jay's back. Pls Keep the fling short buddy as well the story. You are getting less appreciation not because of sneha part 2 it is because of you have moved this story into wrong direction. I think you should widened the communication gap between Jay and Nikita which they are having already. Jay is not a saint to understand the real motive of Nikita's plan to take revenge on jay. Jay understand it as Nikita is drifting away from him to Tharun. He would decided to let her go. He would secretly manage another job in another city such as Mumbai. Quitly paid off the home loan and transfer the house to Nikita's name, arrange the the divorce paper with signed it and left the docs alongwith the his broken sim card on the dineing table at the 1st floor. When Nikita would find the fact that Jay left her then make her panic first then she would chase jay. When she could not find him then make her mentally unstable and end the fling right away. Make her quit the job and give ground floor on rent for living and keep her searching. Make this search period atleast 3 years. For sex sequence involve jay in his new place with his colleague, senior colleague's wife, neighbor Nikita could find him through news paper, you tube video of Jay's interview, then she could finaly meet him and some emotional drama sequenceyou narrate as a climax. Heygi bro you can still pull back into right track still.
(10-06-2026, 08:54 PM)Arul Pragasam Wrote: Jai is using nikki as sex toy in the night in the name of love and possession. Nikki should realise and throw him out of her life.
(10-06-2026, 09:39 PM)RCF Wrote: Its not that easy to paint Jay as the one who doesn't deserve Nikitha.
One who comes from outside always sees the beauty, brains and the worth immediately because they are single plus their perspective on someone like Nikitha from afar is all the good and best qualities and their interest in them will peak very fast and their approach would also be upfront plus they give more attention and caring right away and that is all part of journey in pursuing them into a relationship so Tharun might easily look glorious in his path of attaining Nikitha.
For Jay, they entered into the marriage as more a convenience right from the beginning so the setting itself is not on a proper emotional grounding to begin with and a mere arrangement so evolving from that stage to a stage where he understands his feelings is complicated journey and requires lot of pain and courage. Yes Jay never treated her good because he always saw her as an arrangement and a good friend with benefits but like I said it all comes down to how their relationship into this marriage began and how it is evolving.
Every one has a way to evolve and grow in a relationship and the one bond that grows through hardships will be the winner at the end in my book.
~RCF