[VinodV]

dude avoid such comments. Please edit yourself. Do you even understand what are you telling? edit it or i would report it to admin.

Brothers kind request, edit the quote of chellaporuki in your comments, dont want it to get highlighted, i reported to admin. 

The Xossipy is adult forum where we discuss read on a matured topic for sex and some fun. 

Gentle reminder to every readers, please control yourself, don't comment too extreme.

Dear Heygi - You couldn’t tolerate even for a minute for the cruel comment made about a fictional child character in your story and became deeply disturbed by it. Lucky you… within five minutes, you found relief. But we, who kept pleading for a hundred chapters for another fictional character of a helpless husband...remained unfortunate till the end 

Since it is an adultery-based story, giving the female character an affair was definitely fine! She also mindlessly settled into the dilemma-wife role and even had one final round of sex involuntarily (!) with her lover near the pre-climax. Whenever fantasizing seeing the amazing GIFS in the erotic episodes, I would suddenly remember the hapless husband lying sadly in the next room and the mood would collapse. A husband who had no such intentions up to few initial chapters, talks about “open relationship” is a self-deception haplessly.... can’t you almost hear a tragic violin playing softly in the background?! 

Gautham said during the drinks on the terrace “Start a startup in a few months… until then, enjoy your wife.” ...with that clear ambition, he remained the true winner right up to the marriage reception stage!! In real life, readers and viewers enter fictional worlds to defeat enemies they cannot defeat and to experience joys they cannot experience. But if even there the villains keep winning, and even the romance they enjoy is poisoned underneath by a constant tragic tone then where else can they go for comfort

[heygiwriter]

Dear Heygi - 

I hate equalizing apple for orange. 
I have posted an insight read it

[Kohlikohli18]

Sorry to say, but I guess after few months sneha will crave for hardcore intercourse i know suresh is satisfying her well but sneha only agreed that gowtam is much better than her husband so i can see some cravings for gowtam but i don't think she will cheat suresh, but if gowtam initiates again then she will lose the control and also she will slowly surrenders to him, i hope author will write this as one more plot while Aditya seducing varsha and even Suresh gonna enjoy varsha later...

[Hornytamilan23]

Dear heygiwriter,

One thing that genuinely makes you stand out from many other writers is your consistency and discipline in delivering updates. In online storytelling, a lot of authors start strong but disappear for weeks, lose direction, or keep readers waiting endlessly. You, on the other hand, maintain momentum. Readers know the story is alive, progressing, and moving forward. That creates trust. Even when the plot becomes controversial or divisive, people still return because they know the author is committed.

Another important quality is your “one story at a time” approach. Many writers get distracted by side projects, new ideas, or chasing trends. That often weakens the emotional investment readers have in an ongoing story. By focusing your energy on one narrative, you give readers the feeling that the story matters to you as much as it matters to them. It keeps the world immersive and prevents the emotional disconnect that happens when authors keep jumping between projects.

You also deserve credit for how you handle criticism. Most writers either become defensive or completely ignore reader feedback. But you seem willing to listen, observe reactions, and understand why readers are upset or attached to certain characters. That doesn’t mean blindly obeying readers, but it shows maturity. Taking criticism positively is difficult, especially when people are emotionally charged, rude, or overly invested in fictional characters. Still, being able to separate hate from useful feedback is a rare strength.

Another thing readers appreciate is that you acknowledge their emotional investment. When people spend months following a story, discussing theories, defending characters, and waiting for updates, they naturally expect the author to value that attachment. Your edits, clarifications, and responsiveness show that you are aware of the audience experience instead of treating readers like passive consumers.

At the same time, your willingness to adjust pacing or reconsider narrative choices based on reception shows flexibility. Some authors become so rigid about their “vision” that they end up damaging the story-reader relationship. You seem more aware that storytelling is also about engagement and emotional payoff.

Overall, these qualities create loyalty:
Consistent updates
Focus and commitment
Respect for reader investment
Ability to handle criticism maturely
Openness to feedback without losing control of the story.

That combination is why even frustrated readers continue following your work. They may criticize arcs, pacing, or characters, but they still believe the author cares about the story and the audience. And that belief is what keeps a long-running reader base alive.

With loyalty,
HORNYTAMILAN23 

See you soon, in part 2

[Munda007]

Sorry to say, but I guess after few months sneha will crave for hardcore intercourse i know suresh is satisfying her well but sneha only agreed that gowtam is much better than her husband so i can see some cravings for gowtam but i don't think she will cheat suresh, but if gowtam initiates again then she will lose the control and also she will slowly surrenders to him, i hope author will write this as one more plot while Aditya seducing varsha and even Suresh gonna enjoy varsha later...

Obviously there will be something like that involving Sneha and Suresh. This is erotic thriller so element of erotica has to be present but at the same time it will be not like every few sentence Saree is raised and dick is inside pussy and aah uuff... takes half of the page.... this one is like more XX and those are XXX...  

[Ajay Kailash]

If suresh and sneha are in open relationship, with Gowtham moved out, Aditya might fill his shoes. Because this story has only two alpha's. Gowtham and Aditya. Heroine sneha is deserved to open her thighs for one of them always.

[DeanWinchester00007]

First of All , Congratulations ! First Part was a bang .

Because the Part II is not started yet , You might already have or not conceptualized the ending , but PLEASE , dont give your usual ENDINGS , where at First everyone goes to war and then in the end somehow all of them end up with happy endings . Singing , dancing and banging each other .

I know in the end GOWTHAM will realize his mistake , learn his lesson , and Sneha will resume her relation with him , Suresh will cooperate at this time . All the things left behind , Somehow , GOWTHAM and SURESH will team up against the Aditya ? I think Aditya will be a big villain here .

But with so many new character , The story has expanded into new dimensions . It is very hard to predict anything what is going to happen next .


I LOVE MIRNA   . To be honest I was not very thrilled at first , but last update made me little excited for her character , because We have SURESH here . 

I hope MIRNA get to know SURESH here , Both the character are ideal for each other . I just wish , Suresh is a kind Man , Exactly the Man Mirna deserves . Even if you dont have any such plans , At least Let the characters interact with each other for once . MIRNA and SURESH both have that decency and Innocence which none of the other characters have . They both are sensual character , both are fiercely loyal partners . I just wanna see Them interacting with each other about their life .     

Also just a suggestion :- DONT MAKE GOWTHAM ANOTHER BHARATH HERE . 
Just my observation , You get too obsessed with one character and give them thickest plot armor . Detach from the character . ( I might be wrong but that is what I observed , IGNORE IT if that is not the case )

But Again , This is your Story , You are the Captain of the SHIP . We are here for the Journey .

SO WE ARE EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER of PART II  

[amzad2004]

If the ending is going to be same like Anandhi and Suriya then it will be another blunder upcoming. Author will be known as blunder master.

[suryaspk]

Also just a suggestion :- DONT MAKE GOWTHAM ANOTHER BHARATH HERE . 
Just my observation , You get too obsessed with one character and give them thickest plot armor . Detach from the character . ( I might be wrong but that is what I observed , IGNORE IT if that is not the case )

I think it will not happen Sneha and Gowtham will not cross again. Suresh told Gowtham finally "I will never get inside, I will never let you inside my life again. There is always someone better than you"
Suresh is confident Gowtham won't keep his hands clean, at that time devil Aditya will come for revenge.

[suryaspk]

Heygi, I have a suggestion.

I think Suresh and Aditya were close and seems there is strong friendship. It was narrated that they were hanging out, having drinks and have personal talks.
Instead of narration these could have been conversation how they open up. It would show their friendship. You could have even written a chapter on this.
My main point is conversation connects more than narration.

[Munda007]

I think it will not happen Sneha and Gowtham will not cross again. Suresh told Gowtham finally "I will never get inside, I will never let you inside my life again. There is always someone better than you"
Suresh is confident Gowtham won't keep his hands clean, at that time devil Aditya will come for revenge.

what if Aditya is not that bad and turns out to be the Real Hero. Someone who protects his wife, give them all the pleasure? Is that what Sneha was carving all along that her man owns her and keep her happy?

Just saying 

[jaatrangila99]

My feedback:-

Writing style and update timing: I am very much impressed by the writing style of author and also like the speed of delivering speed. 

Intent: my honest one line review - Fuck the Intent. No one (other than author can understand what is going to happen in the story). So don't expect me to understand the intent behind any particular situation.

Moral Lecture: no one is here for learning purpose. If author is trying to teach us that some particular action have some unavoidable reaction, than alright. We all are here to satisfy our lust in one way or another. If someone is thinking (and living in a delululu) that cuckolding and this open marriage is bad, then one line for them. Yes it is not for everyone, but there are many couples (in india as well) who are living these kind of lifestyles and they are happy. I had pleasure of meeting 3 such couple.

Now Story:


Expected ending (with reason):- after reading ending of 1st part, I can say that I also had some idea's about some alternative endings. Let me explain-
(1) Suresh having sex with model. I don't know whether she will be a major character in next part, so I am not using her name. But I think author is trying to make it a open marriage type story. So I think this would have been a simple ending where Suresh is also having sex with some other lady.

(2) Sneha punishing Suresh by having sex with Gauthom. 


Now feedback about last few updates: from update 156 to 167 - 

What the hell man? Seriously ..... What the hell.....

You were writing and providing some fantastic updates and suddenly all this bullshit. I was not expecting this from you. Like story was slow. I agree. But it was making progress.

I know some readers were not satisfied with some updates and some other things. But you don't have to change this much.

Like Suresh. He was stairing at ciling listening to his wife's moaning. He was behaving like a pimp. But now he got balls big enough to physically stop Gowtham. This much character development without any signal or any explanations. And what is his this obsession? Like Sneha also told him to stop the sex part, but he is still hell bend on continuing it. I know you are writing a open marriage story but don't write like this. 

Sneha - you mentioned in your intent that she is falling for the pleasure. No hard feelings. I can understand this part and this is actually very beautifully expressed part. But it was beautiful till Sneha was having sex and breaking rules till the open discussion with her husband. I was able to understand that she was allowed by her husband and she is having fun. She wants to do some experiments and I was ok with it and also enjoying it. After that part it become disgusting. Like she was behaving like a slut. And this is the part where most readers (like me) started disconnecting with the flow. We were not enjoying these parts. 



Further expectations from part 2:-
(1) Character Sneha seriously need some development. Otherwise it will become like any other story where wife of Main character is a bimbo and slut. To fuck her, all you have to do is ..... just fuck her. Nothing else. She does not behave like heroine of this story. Like you don't have to put some efforts to gain her attention. No investment. Nothing. You can fuck her whenever you want. She is behaving like a teenager but she is the mother of a teenager. We expect some maturity from her behavior. In the name of falling for pleasure, don't ruin her.

(2) Suresh- I don't like this sudden change in him. That too without any arc. Like he was staring at ceiling and in next part he was physically stopping the sex. And don't give me this rubbish reason like he has made progress in office.

(3) New couple - Now we have a new couple. I like the part where she stopped him from 1st kiss. That was the part I like about author. He is expressive. He is not doing some earth shattering things in his story. Some normal activities are expressed in such a way that we (readers) are easily attracted to it. But after 2 updates they are couple. Now author had expressed that Gowtham will get the test of his own medicine. But to do that his wife has to open her leg for Suresh. But the problem is we readers were not able to read the journey of their marriage. So revenge will not be so satisfying. 

(4) Fight between Titans- this is the part I am most worried about. One titan is supporting Gowtham (through his wife) and one titan is supporting Suresh (his boss). So I don't want to see both of them fighting with each other. This will ruin the story. And after investing so much time of establishing them in story, author also can't sideline them completely. So I don't know how he is going to do it.



Further suggestion to author:-
(1) Sneha's character need some development. Remove her slut image.
(2) Suresh also has to remove this cuckold tag from his name. I don't like how after each discussion with his wife, he still tells Sneha to continue having sex outside in name of "SLOWING DOWN". 
(3) Don't make Sneha some slut. Like if there are chances then I don't mind her having sex. But not like a slut.
(4) Don't include further character from previous story. Not everyone has gone through past stories. 



If possible, (I am saying if possible) delete all the updates after that punishment arc and re-write them in your style. They don't appear like author was writing in his usual style. They appeared like he was writing under some pressure. They appear rushed. Like author was scared form comments. So to pacify the readers, he did what the readers were demanding. Make Suresh a man. And Gowtham suddenly become 2 minute maggie and ejaculated prematurely (he also said sorry for this, which was new. I was used to Gowtham going on for hours and fucking the shit out of Sneha, but suddenly he is not able to perform) and Suresh suddenly walked in other apartment like a hero and save the girl (that too like a man. He litterly manhandled the fucker. I know he started jogging, but how he is able to suppress that macho type man. Suresh handled him like some grown up man handling some 5 year kid). Don't do this. You were giving 2 - 3 updates to make one single point and now you are doing 2 - 3 things in single update.

Buddy that's not your natural style of writing. 


Don't repeat same mistakes in part 2. My feedback is not structured. I mentioned all the points in frustration after reading some last updates. 


Best of luck for 2nd part. You are doing good. My expectation are very high from you. It is not like you can't deliver some good story. You have done it. Keep rocking .......

[amzad2004]

As the story title has edited my opinion is writer should keep the love bond between suresh and sneha intact as it is the soul of the story. No powerful man should not be sexually involve with the sneha, it will not be erotic. There can be flirty conversation/ interaction. In part 2 I think it will be best a teenager boy (age 19-23) play the sex partner for sneha. This time through raw flirt and bold brave move should be the base of the relation with suresh consent. Stricly based on lust nothing else. Not by any unethical evil tricks. Teen age college boy could be easily controlled. For additional thrill sneha could be flirted by Aditya, Vhikram, Bharat or junior colleagues during the office parties/birthday parties. Suresh witnessed these incidents from sound bless distance not for pleasure, just for cautious whether she might cross the line or break rules. Suresh must punish gowtham in part 2, this is must be main goal in part 2. Hope hegi will narrate a master pice through part 2.Finger cross. .

[Rocky_Gowda]

Guys first time I am messaging in this platform. After reading this story I want to disclose about my mom, whom once we had taught is a sati satvitri had her dirtiest past and present which she is secretly maintaining.
If any one is interested to write her story contact me on telegram @Kingpgrt
It will be one of the evergreen stories in history

[amzad2004]

Dear Hegi pls inform us the tentative time of the publish the 1st chapter of the part 2.

[Raj521]

Hi heygi, waiting for part 2,

[Wickedvivs]

Erectile Dysfunction is rarely permanent. It usually comes from a mix of:
1. Nicotine / Tobacco Damage
Nicotine narrows blood vessels.
Erections are 100% blood-flow dependent.
Even chewing tobacco reduces penile blood circulation.
Good news:
➡️ Blood vessels start recovering within weeks after quitting.
2. Porn-Induced Dopamine Burnout
Heavy porn use can cause:
Reduced libido
Weak erections with real partner
Need for stronger stimulation
Brain becoming less responsive to normal intimacy
This is called porn-induced erectile dysfunction (PIED).
Recovery usually happens in 6–12 weeks after stopping porn.
3. Psychological Pressure
You are:
Married
Have a child
Want to perform well
Your brain shifts from desire → performance anxiety.
And erection dies when the brain enters stress mode.
4. Why Medicines Aren’t Working
Drugs like Sildenafil citrate only work if:
libido exists
blood vessels respond
brain is aroused
If libido is low → tablets feel useless.
So this is not failure, it means the root cause is deeper than just blood flow.
? The Recovery Plan (Most Important Part)
✅ Step 1 — Total Porn Detox (Non-Negotiable)
No porn
No edging
Reduce excessive masturbation
Real intimacy only
Expect:
2–3 weeks: low desire (flatline phase)
4–8 weeks: libido returns naturally
This phase is normal.
✅ Step 2 — Quit Tobacco Completely
Not reduce. Stop.
Within:
2 weeks → better circulation
1–3 months → stronger erections
Nicotine is one of the biggest hidden ED causes in men under 40.
✅ Step 3 — Exercise Like Medicine
You don’t need bodybuilding.
Do:
30–40 min brisk walking daily
Squats
Pushups
Core exercises
Exercise increases:
Testosterone
Nitric oxide
Confidence
Libido
Many men reverse ED without drugs using this alone.
✅ Step 4 — Fix Testosterone Naturally
Sleep = sexual hormone factory.
You need:
7–8 hours sleep
Morning sunlight
Reduce late-night phone scrolling
Testosterone drops sharply with poor sleep.
✅ Step 5 — Rebuild Sexual Confidence
For some time:
Avoid “performance goal”
Focus on touch, intimacy, affection
No pressure to penetrate
Your brain must relearn: ? intimacy ≠ performance test.
✅ Step 6 — Medical Check (Very Important)
At 35, rule out hidden causes.
Consult a Urologist or andrologist and check:
Testosterone
Blood sugar (Diabetes)
Thyroid
Lipid profile
Blood pressure
Many young men discover early metabolic issues causing ED.
⚠️ Avoid These Mistakes
❌ Increasing tablet dosage yourself
❌ Alcohol before sex
❌ Comparing with porn performance
❌ Testing erection every day
Recovery needs relaxed consistency, not pressure.

Respect bro

[Wickedvivs]

 LET’S SETTLE THIS ONCE AND FOR ALL! 

THREESOME

If the story gives you one unforgettable trio, which combo are you choosing?

Cast your vote:

Option 1️⃣ — Gowtham • Sneha • Varsha
Chaos, passion, and pure drama

Option 2️⃣ — Suresh • Sneha • Varsha
Emotional tension meets forbidden balance

Option 3️⃣ — Adhitya • Vinodhini • Sneha
Unexpected chemistry & wildcard energy

Option 4️⃣ — Gowtham • Mirna • Varsha
Power dynamics + dangerous attraction

⚡ Vote. Defend your choice. Start the war in comments.

1 - that will continue to make the story more exciting - it's adultery story and yes more exciting would be the climax - but no unreal action pls

[Hotgiri]

1 - that will continue to make the story more exciting - it's adultery story and yes more exciting would be the climax - but no unreal action pls

4th Option

[Wickedvivs]

Chapter 167 - There is always someone better than you!

Sunday evening arrived with an air of grandeur. The wedding reception venue was nothing short of royal — sprawling lawns, crystal chandeliers hanging from massive tents, and elegant floral arrangements that screamed money and power. Luxury cars lined the driveway, and the guest list was filled with recognizable faces from the corporate world — businessmen, investors, and influencers.


Suresh and Sneha stepped out of their car, both dressed elegantly. Sneha looked beautiful in a deep maroon saree, while Suresh wore a sharp black suit. As they entered the venue, Suresh’s eyes scanned the crowd. He recognized many faces — people he had seen during high-level meetings with Aditya. But they didn’t recognize him. His role had always kept him in

The moment they looked toward the stage, they saw Gowtham and Varsha standing together, looking like the perfect power couple. Gowtham spotted them immediately and waved dramatically with a big smile. The entire crowd turned their attention toward Suresh and Sneha for a brief moment.

Sneha leaned closer to Suresh and whispered, 
“That bastard has some plan. If he’s acting like this, he’s definitely up to something.”

Suresh smiled faintly. “I don’t care. I’m happy my wife has finally started using her brain these days.”
Sneha playfully stomped on his foot, making him chuckle.

Jiiva approached them with a polite smile.
“Please follow me,” he said.

He led them toward the stage. 
Gowtham, seeing them coming, loudly announced, 
“Let’s pause for a few minutes. I need to greet my special guests.”

He left Varsha on stage and came down. With a calculated smile, he said to Sneha, 
“Why don’t you speak with Varsha? I’ll take Suresh aside for a moment. I want to show him something.”

Before Sneha could protest, Gowtham grabbed Suresh’s arm and led him toward the dining hall. Once they were relatively alone near a dessert counter, Gowtham picked up a sweet and offered it to Suresh with mock politeness.Suresh didn’t take it.

“Why did you bring me here?” he asked coldly.
Gowtham’s smile faded into something darker.

“Well, I know you would suspect me. What to do? I’m that kind of person.”
He leaned in slightly. “Two things. The day you and your wife slapped me… I made two decisions. First, I won’t beat you, but I will make sure you feel pain. Second, I won’t come back into your and Sneha’s life, but you will constantly look at her with disgust in your eyes.”

Do you want another slap?
Calm down Suresh just hear me! I have not even started.

Gowtham’s voice dropped even lower.
“You know what’s the worst feeling? Being tricked.” He nodded toward a man distributing laddoos in the corner. “That man over there? He’s the one who kidnapped you that day.”

Suresh’s rage peaked. His hand shot forward to grab Gowtham’s collar, but Gowtham raised his hands calmly.
“No, no. Don’t overdo it. People are watching. And you will never know how much I’ve prepared to confront you here in public. So keep your hands away. There are a lot of things I wanted to tell you, but I’ll keep it quick.”

Gowtham smirked.
“Yes, it was me who arranged your kidnapping. You’ve been tricked. It should pain you, right? See, I didn’t beat you, but you still felt the pain and rage.

Gowtham laughed coldly, 
You feel like beating me right? 
I know.. But you can't, you know why?

Look at all the big shots out there. Do you think you have a chance to touch me now? My status and power have gone to a different level in these five months. 

How dare a marketing guy like you try to show supremacy?”
I'm always an Alpha and i'm always superiror to you .

He paused, enjoying the moment.
Gowtham teased further, oh wow, your eyes turning red. You have good amount of hemoglobin bro, he mocked. 
Okay calm down, now the next thing

“The second part. Even before the hill station trip, I had entered your wife. In the name of a ‘training session.’
She never shared it with you, did she?” Gowtham laughed softly. 

“Will you be able to see her the same way again? I have always been the alpha in your life. 
Your role was only to stay in your room while I enjoyed your wife.

Now I can see your jaw hardening.. Come beat me, let me tell the crowd the real reason.. He coldly laughed. Knowing he won't take risks that damage Sneha’s name. 
You should not have tried to become a hero.”

Gowtham stepped back, adjusting his coat.
Looking at your helpless look.. I feel very very satisfied. 

Don't worry, I can promise you that, I won’t come into your life or Sneha’s again. We will travel separate paths now, and my level is truly different. But I believe these memories are enough to haunt you forever.”

He gestured toward the stage.

“Look at my wife. Look how beautiful she is. 
A bull like me needs a woman like her, sexy and brainy.” He laughed again. 
“I feel my ego is completely satisfied. 

Wait here, take a photo, eat the food, and have a nice day.”

---

Suresh could have beaten him up right there — his fists were clenched so tightly his knuckles had turned white. But he knew better. Not here. Not in front of hundreds of powerful people. He would plan something far more devastating later. He never know his schemes. He truly doesn't want anything that could damage Sneha’s name.  He controlled himself with iron will.
Sneha, sensing something was wrong, came looking for him. She saw the tension on his face immediately.

I don’t know what he said, but we don’t need to stand here.”
“Don’t get emotional,” she said quietly, holding his hand. 
“He invited us for a reason — to shame us, to ridicule us. 
Let’s go back to home she said 

Suresh nodded. 
Right now, leaving this place was the smartest move.

As he turned to guide Sneha toward the exit, a loud, familiar voice cut through the crowd.
“Deii! Your old boss is here!”

Jiiva was waving enthusiastically near the entrance. Behind him walked Prakash, Mirna, Bharath, and another man Suresh instantly recognized Mirna and Bharath from Aditya’s private gathering months ago and Prakash, he had spilled coffee on him, one of the Hands.” Prakash didn't see him. 

Suresh froze for a split second.
Then a slow, dangerous smile formed on his lips.

He caught Sneha’s hand firmly in his and changed direction, walking straight back toward the stage instead of leaving. Sneha looked at him, confused, but followed without question.

They reached the stage area just as Prakash stepped forward with a large gift box. Gowtham welcomed him with an exaggerated, theatrical tone.

“Boss, leave a big smile," Jiiva mocked. 
Gowtham said.. He is not just an old boss, he is my lucky investor!”

After the photo, Gowtham exclaimed loudly, hugging Prakash. “Thank you for making my day special!”
Suresh stood a few steps away, watching with a calm but sharp gaze. A small, knowing smirk played on his lips. Sneha noticed it immediately.

“What happened? Why are you smiling like that?” she whispered, confused.
Suresh didn’t answer. He simply squeezed her hand gently.

Mirna went next, gracefully introducing the man beside her.

“This is my husband, Vikram,” she said with a warm smile. 
Bharath stood beside them like a quiet shadow. 
He saw how Mirnaa and Varsha were closer. 

Finally, it was Suresh and Sneha’s turn.

As they stepped closer to the stage, Gowtham’s face broke into a full, arrogant smirk — the mask of politeness slipping for just a moment. Sneha congratulated Varsha warmly, while Suresh stood beside Gowtham for the mandatory photo.

While the camera flashed, Suresh leaned in slightly and spoke in a low, steady voice only Gowtham could hear.

“You told me you’re really superior to me, right?”

Gowtham’s smirk deepened. In the same low tone, he replied, “Have you not seen enough?”

Suresh smiled calmly, almost serenely.

“If you think you’re an alpha,” he whispered, “remember — there is always someone better than you. 

That’s an old saying. Good luck.”

Are you telling, you will enter my life like i did to you,, he laughs.. I wont, i will never get inside, and i will never let you inside my life. I'm just saying don't be arrogant, [color=#000000][size=x-large][font=Arial, sans-serif]there is always someone better than you. 

The camera clicked one final time.

Suresh and Sneha stepped down from the stage. As they were about to leave the hall, Suresh turned back once more and looked at Prakash standing near the stage. A cold, calculated smirk appeared on his face again.

All these days, you thought you were the puppet master, Gowtham.
From here… I will show you how a real puppet master plays.
and i will also make sure you go through, what we went through"


The game begins. End of Part I

Master piece - you are a great great writer - I have been here from long long time but you story telling is way different - emotions you capture twist you play thrill you create are way beyond. Please continue to write your own thoughts - I had read through some comment - don't let those gauthams trick you (pun intended) will wait for your next.