Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[RCF]

First instance of rejection, he is cheating his new girlfriend. So far until now, he was single if we take timeline into account but now it would be considered as cheating. So I am assuming he will get Sneha tonight for him to cheat Varsha.

Also on other perspective, Why would Suresh or Sneha still allow him to keep affair moving ahead is beyond logic in this story. No strong reason to stop but if the guy is insulting your wife, and he thinks he is now powerful then what is stopping him from saying no? Sneha I can understand she has been intimate so there are memories that will haunt her and force her to pursue it one more time but Suresh's mindset is not clear with recent developments taken into account.

If Gautham gets Sneha tonight or any other night without strong reason, I will feel this will be the most illogical chapter in this entire story.

~RCF

[christopernolan]

First instance of rejection, he is cheating his new girlfriend. So far until now, he was single if we take timeline into account but now it would be considered as cheating. So I am assuming he will get Sneha tonight for him to cheat Varsha.

Also on other perspective, Why would Suresh or Sneha still allow him to keep affair moving ahead is beyond logic in this story. No strong reason to stop but if the guy is insulting your wife, and he thinks he is now powerful then what is stopping him from saying no? Sneha I can understand she has been intimate so there are memories that will haunt her and force her to pursue it one more time but Suresh's mindset is not clear with recent developments taken into account.

If Gautham gets Sneha tonight or any other night without strong reason, I will feel this will be the most illogical chapter in this entire story.

~RCF

Yeah thats true if something happens between them and if sneha 
Going to be seduced by gowtham without strong reason after he called her a slut and it will be illogical chapter

[a2011]

I agree. It's time for a sex scene in the story, but I am hoping it isnt Gowtham fucking Sneha again when he randomly shows up with a sob story. Otherwise, she would be the slut that Gowtham and many reader's believe she is :) Why didnt Suresh tell Sneha that Gowtham was with another girl?

[Mrmoon]

Heygiwriter 

I know u r angry with me. But i respect you

Bro..you are one of the best writers which I saw in xossip. U r amazing and very much talented.

In recent time i think i have not login into xossip more than 20 times in a day for any story..that much i like this story these days
I sincerly request one thing to you..

 iI request you please do not degrade the character of sneha into slut image that she eagarley wanted sex with gautham or somebody.


Thanks

[christopernolan]

Will take some time to sketch Part 2. 

Need some honest feedback on Part 1. Which is ending in few more chapters

Hi bro,

I really liked how you wrote the intimate scenes. They felt passionate and emotional instead of just being there for shock value. The chemistry between the characters came through strongly, and the scenes actually helped develop their connection and the story. You balanced manipulation ,sex, emotional bondings,tension, and everything you detail really well.keep rocking

[Johnnythedevil]

Does it mean Gowtham and Varsha are living together. I dont think it could be possible. Otherwise, everything should be over by now. Prakash was at V-Activate group and spoke about Rahul and Aditya suggested suresh to help on it. But suresh never got into that and Mirna came and left.
Like some pages missing in a novel.

[Hornytamilan23]

Finish it, Heygi. Finish it properly. Review will follow.

Readers remember stories not just for how they begin, but for how they end. You started this journey really well, and now the conclusion matters even more. 

A good ending can elevate the entire story and make people revisit it years later.

Right now, every character feels morally compromised in their own way, and that ambiguity is what kept many of us invested. Don’t rush the payoff. Let the consequences land properly. 

Let the characters own their choices instead of escaping through convenient twists or forced redemption.

And one more thing — when you edit chapters, please mention it clearly. Some of the recent edits completely changed the narrative and character perception. 

Readers discuss, analyze, and form opinions based on earlier versions, so silent edits create confusion and make discussions meaningless. Even a simple “Edited on ___” note would help.

At this stage, consistency and closure matter more than shock value. Finish strong.

[RCF]

Will take some time to sketch Part 2. 

Need some honest feedback on Part 1. Which is ending in few more chapters

Your stories stand out because you understand the essence of emotional conflict better than most writers in this genre. One of the strongest aspects of your writing is that none of your characters feel purely good or bad — everyone is flawed, layered, and morally grey. That realism is rare and makes the situations feel far more believable.Another major strength is how you handle the circumstances that lead to betrayal or emotional drift in a marriage. The way you build those moments is often the most compelling part of your stories. Your narratives also avoid falling completely into either extreme cuckold fantasy or total submissive-wife dynamics. Instead, the relationships feel layered and complicated, which gives the stories more emotional weight.I also appreciate that your stories usually give the husband an arc to recover emotionally, regain confidence, and reconnect with his wife. That balance prevents the stories from feeling emotionally hollow. On top of that, your screenplay-style progression and scene structuring keep the pacing engaging and make the stories easy to read.

That said, I think the emotional depth could go much further. The interactions between husband and wife feel natural, but they do not always fully convey the depth of their bond or history together. Because of that, some of the emotional payoffs don’t hit as hard as they could.Another issue is that miscommunication is sometimes stretched for too long to sustain the plot, and after a point it can make certain character decisions feel illogical rather than tragic. There are also moments where the plot drags unnecessarily.

Most importantly, stories like these become truly impactful when the emotional highs and lows are deeply layered. To create stronger emotional reactions, the situations themselves need to hit harder emotionally and psychologically, and sometimes that buildup is missing.

Overall, your stories are genuinely engaging and fun to read. But if you can deepen the emotional layering and strengthen the husband-wife dynamic at the core, your work could move from being entertaining to truly memorable.

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 164 - The Broken Illusion 

It was 9 PM. The house was quiet. 
Suresh and Sneha were in the living room, sharing a rare moment of calm when the doorbell rang.


Gowtham stood at their door, holding the sweet box and the startup letter like props in a carefully rehearsed play.
His mind, however, was calculating every move.

With such a long break, there’s a real chance she’s shifted. She hasn’t called me once in all these months. Suresh must have filled her head with his sensible talks, made her feel guilty, turned her against me. She might be pulling away emotionally.
He didn’t want to take any unnecessary risk. Forcing things now could backfire badly.

No. Tonight, I’ll play the good man. Make them both feel genuinely happy for me. Show a light, positive image — the guy who’s finally doing something with his life. Then I’ll do the apology drama for those rude words I said at the hospital. Once she softens… then I’ll fuck her. Slowly. Thoroughly. Remind her exactly who she really craves when no one is watching.

This was his plan. Calculated. Patient. Dangerous.
He fixed a warm, humble smile on his face and pressed the doorbell again.
Sneha opened the door.

The moment she saw who it was, her breath caught.
Gowtham stood there, holding a box of sweets in one hand and an envelope in the other. He looked different — cleaner, sharper, with a fresh haircut and a calm, almost humble expression. He smiled softly.

“Hi, Sneha.”
She was stunned. For a second, she couldn’t speak. It had been months. 
The locked door, the silence, the way he had vanished without a word — it all came rushing back.

Suresh, who had been sitting on the sofa, stood up slowly, equally surprised.
Gowtham stepped inside without waiting for an invitation.

“I know it’s late,” he said, his voice unusually polite. 
“But I wanted to share something important with both of you.”
He handed the sweet box to Sneha and the envelope to Suresh.

“I started a new startup firm,” he said, a note of pride in his voice.
“This is the official establishment letter. Approved some times back, but I just got it in hand today. 
You two are the first people I wanted to tell.”

Sneha’s heart lightened instantly. A small, genuine smile appeared on her face.
“You… you really did it?” she asked, surprised and happy. “Your parents must be so proud.”
Gowtham gave a small, almost sad smile.

“They don’t know yet. No one does. You two are the first. I wanted to share this moment with the people who mattered.”
Suresh remained silent, his expression unreadable. He opened the envelope and scanned the document. It looked legitimate. He said nothing, but his mind was racing.

Gowtham continued, acting humble.

“I found a small office nearby. I’ve been staying there, working day and night. I didn’t want to disturb you both after everything. But today, when the approval came… I felt I should come and tell you.”

Sneha felt a strange mix of emotions — relief that he had moved on, happiness that he was growing, and a lingering unease she couldn’t quite name.

“Come in,” she said warmly. “Let me arrange dinner for you. You must be hungry.”
Gowtham smiled.

“I missed your food for so long.”

They sat at the dining table together. The conversation was general at first — about Ramya, the trip, small updates. 
But the atmosphere felt charged. Suresh stayed mostly quiet, observing.

Towards the end of dinner, Gowtham looked at Sneha and said softly,

“Sneha… I was so happy today. I feel like I need to spend some time with you. 
Just to talk. I feel bad for how I behaved last time. 
I want to apologize properly.”

Both Sneha and Suresh were stunned into silence.
Gowtham continued, his voice calm and reasonable.

“Don’t worry. I’m vacating the house here soon. 
This is my last chance to clear the air. Just a small talk — maybe less than an hour. 
Then I’ll move back to my new place.”

Suresh’s eyes narrowed slightly. He knew this was calculated.  .
Sneha looked at Suresh, her eyes pleading for guidance.

Before they could even utter a word, Gowtham stood up with a polite smile.

“I’ll wait in my house. By 11:30, I’ll move everything. Come whenever you’re ready.”
He left.

---

Sneha turned to Suresh the moment the door closed.

“You said you would remove him with your Hands… but he is here. I didn’t expect this. I don’t know if I should believe him or not… but I'm happy he is growing and quite an achiever. He counted us first, even before his parents.”

Suresh looked at her for a long moment, then said calmly,

“Cut the crap. If you want to spend some time with him, go ahead. It’s up to you whether you have sex or not. But tell him strictly,  we are stopping right after today. It would be better if you don’t even have sex.”

I'm telling this again, we are in an open marriage, I'm willing to share you with that person, but that person we have here is not the right one.

A part of her felt aroused by Gowtham’s sudden return — the old heat, the familiarity.
But another part remembered everything Suresh doubted. 

Suresh was kind of irritated, so he left the place. Leaving her to decide. 
She washed the plates, her mind racing. Finally, at 10 PM, she made her decision.
Sneha stood outside her own door for a long moment, her heart pounding.

She was still confused. Gowtham’s sudden return, his achievement, the apologetic and gentle tone — it all felt… different. Part of her wanted to believe he had changed. Another part remembered Suresh’s warning. But the pull was there — the old familiarity, the heat she had tried so hard to forget.

Just talk, she told herself. Sex depends on what happens next.

She crossed the hallway and opened Gowtham’s door. For a brief second, she hesitated, then decided not to lock it behind her. She didn’t know why. Maybe a small part of her wanted Suresh to know. Maybe she was testing herself.

She heard movement from the bedroom. When she entered, Gowtham was arranging fresh bedsheets, wearing only a towel around his waist. His back muscles flexed as he worked. He turned when he heard her, a soft, almost vulnerable smile on his face.

“So tell me,” Sneha said, trying to sound steady.
Gowtham continued the act, smoothing the sheet with deliberate care.

“I’m sorry, Sneha,” he said, voice low and remorseful. 
“That day at the hospital… it didn’t come from my heart. 
It was just a playful moment, like the ones we used to have in bed.
I promise.”

Before she could respond, he stepped closer. 
The towel slipped slightly, revealing the hard line of his hips.
“I missed you,” he whispered. “For such a long time… the sex between us.”

Sneha’s breath hitched. She realized he wanted her like old times — raw, urgent, without boundaries. Before she could process or pull away, his body pressed against hers. His lips found her neck, kissing hungrily. His hands slid under her nighty, gripping her waist.

The towel fell completely.

His naked form shocked her — hard, aroused, pressing against her thigh. Before she could react, he pushed her onto the bed. He came on top of her, his mouth claiming hers in a brief, fierce kiss. Their lips met, tongues brushing.

Suresh’s words flashed in her mind like fire: Don’t believe him.
She turned her head away.

Gowtham, driven by suppressed heat and months of frustration, didn’t want to waste time. He quickly raised her nighty, positioned himself between her legs, and thrust into her hard.

Sneha gasped, conflicted. Her body reacted instinctively — wet, warm, welcoming despite her mind screaming to stop. But it was too late. Gowtham was already moving, thrusting deep and relentless, his hips slamming against hers with raw need.
All of Suresh’s warnings burned in her head.

Before she could say “no,” Gowtham groaned loudly and came inside her, his body shuddering with release.
“I’m sorry… I came too soon,” he panted, still buried deep.

“Tonight we’ll play the long game.”


Meanwhile, Suresh sat alone in the master bedroom, the silence of the house pressing down on him like a weight.
The clock on the wall read 10:30 PM.

He knew exactly what was happening across the hall.

All these days, he had held back. He had told himself it was because Sneha still had some lingering attachment, some physical need she wasn’t ready to let go of. He had watched her go to Gowtham night after night, knowing she came back to him afterward. He had tolerated it — not out of weakness, but out of a calculated patience. He wanted her to realize on her own. He wanted her to choose him freely.

But tonight was different.

The image of Gowtham’s smug face at the door, the way he had looked at Sneha like she was still his to use, the casual entitlement in his voice — it had finally pushed Suresh past his limit.

No more.

He no longer cared if Sneha still liked it. 
He no longer cared about giving her space to decide. 
Gowtham had crossed the line one too many times. 
and Sneha keeps falling for his tricks. 
It was time to kick him out of their lives for good.

Suresh stood up, his jaw clenched.
He didn’t even bother changing out of his casual home clothes. 
He walked straight out of the master bedroom, crossed the hallway, and pushed open Gowtham’s door.
It was unlocked.

The moment he stepped inside, the sight that greeted him made his blood boil.

Sneha was lying on the bed, completely naked, her nighty discarded on the floor. Her legs were slightly parted, her chest rising and falling rapidly. She looked conflicted — eyes wide, face flushed, one hand pushing against Gowtham’s shoulder as if she wanted to stop but couldn’t find the strength in that moment.

Gowtham was on top of her, also naked, his body pressed against hers, breathing heavily. He was getting ready for a second round. 



Sneha finally got some strength 
“No…” she whispered, pushing Gowtham off her.

She said it louder. 
“It’s over between us.”

Gowtham turned, surprised but quickly recovering with a smirk.

“Why not?” he said, not even bothering to cover himself. 

“Suresh came in at the perfect time. 
Gowtham couldn't believe? You didn't lock the door?

Oh i got it. 
Now the husband and wife have joined together.
How nice.”

His ego flared as he stood up, naked and unashamed.
Hey bro why do you enter here? cant you wait in your place like previous times?

“But isn’t it funny? Your wife came to me by herself the last three times.
 Every night she rode me like she couldn’t get enough. It was like—”
Slap.

Sneha’s hand connected hard with his face.
Gowtham’s head snapped to the side. The sound echoed in the room.
His eyes darkened with rage.

“How dare you slap me?” he growled, stepping closer. “You came to me every time. Like a real slut. You begged for it. You think you are some beautiful angel out there. You are not at all in my range.. Even in my worst phase I wont beg for you. I was blind”

The rage after the slap made him talk a lot rubbishly, which made Sneha get a real picture of him. 

Suresh moved faster than either of them expected.

He grabbed Gowtham by the throat and slammed him against the wall with surprising strength.
“Say another word,” Suresh said, voice dangerously low, “and I’ll make sure you never touch another woman again.”
The room fell deathly silent.

Gowtham stared at Suresh, shock and fury mixing in his eyes. 
For the first time, he saw something in Suresh he hadn’t seen before — cold, calculated power.
He had underestimated him. 

Sneha stood there, breathing hard, tears in her eyes.
Trusting the manipulator there. 

The illusion was finally broken.

But Gowtham didn't want to let it slide, his EGO, wanted to teach Suresh a lesson. 
An marketing guy showing his supremacy?
He has a sudden urge to show himself and satisfy his own ego.

[oxy.raj]

Not sure if it is typo at end of the chapter, Siresh want to teach a lesson to Suresh?

Apart from that poor Sneha... Trusting Goutham again? Allowed to take off nighty...

[RCF]

Not sure if it is typo at end of the chapter, Siresh want to teach a lesson to Suresh?

Apart from that poor Sneha... Trusting Goutham again? Allowed to take off nighty...

To elevate Suresh, Author needs to degrade Sneha more and more...Is there any other choice? yes there is but won't take it. Why would she even allow to penetration, her falling for his sweet talk after calling her slut and after being hurt so much is unbelievable. Poor writing here no doubt, just taking shortcuts wherever it is needed. 

I was just saying the emotional layers need to be written in this story well and in his writing in general. I feel that is lacking immensely in lot of episodes. If such nuances are corrected, his stories will become epic. I know its not a career and just fun but I genuinely want author to see if there can be improvement. 

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 165 - The Final Cut

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Suresh stepped near him, his presence suddenly filling the space.

“Sneha told you it’s over between you two,” Suresh said, his voice low but dangerously calm. “For the sake of everything that happened before and for the old friendship or bonding, I’ll let you leave peacefully. You came to Vacate the house right? vacate and move on. 
I should never see you near Sneha again.”

Gowtham stared at him, stunned. 
This was not the weak, tolerant Suresh he had known.

Suresh picked up Sneha’s discarded nighty from the floor and handed it to her without looking at her body.
“Wear this and follow me,” he said firmly.

Sneha, still dazed and conflicted, quickly covered herself. 
She didn’t dare look at Gowtham as she stood up and walked toward her husband, her head lowered in shame.

Gowtham remained alone in the room, breathing heavily, trying to process what had just happened. 
The door closed behind them.

This is not over, he thought, his fists clenched. 
I will come back, Suresh. I won’t touch a finger on you… 
but I will make sure it pains you forever.

---

Back in their house, Sneha felt a deep wave of embarrassment wash over her. 
She stood in the living room, unable to meet Suresh’s eyes.

“I’m sorry,” she whispered, her voice cracking. “I… I thought maybe he had changed. I was stupid.”
Suresh looked at her for a long moment. 
There was no anger in his eyes — only quiet disappointment and resolve.

“Don’t apologize,” he said softly. “From now on, you have to listen to me. 
This was a hard lesson for both of us. You should have trusted me. 
At worst, I should have acted sooner. We both learned it today.”

He looked at her and her head was on shame, looking down. 
What happen he asked. 

I feel shameful! I dont know how to name it, is that need of lust or actually i foolishly fall for his tricks i dont know. 

Suresh said. 
There is nothing to shame about it. 
I know your need. You are not a fool
You shamelessly need one thing. 

I know you as a friend, husband and a lover.
I know your appetite. 

I know about you and you know about me. 
I'm just telling from the start, the person is wrong, not the idea. 

He stepped closer and gently touched her cheek.
“Have a bath and come to me.
I want you to wash his memories along with the sweat. 
It’s my mistake too — I overlooked this for too long.”

Sneha nodded, tears in her eyes. 
She went to the bathroom without another word.


It took Sneha a few weeks to slowly return to normalcy. 
The guilt, the shame, and the lingering confusion took time to fade. 

Suresh was patient with her — loving, attentive, but firm. 
Their bond slowly strengthened again through quiet conversations and renewed intimacy.

---

One Sunday Morning

Suresh opened the door after hearing noises in the hallway.

A group of laborers was carrying out furniture, a bed, and several boxes from Gowtham’s old flat. 
The door was wide open. 
Everything was being loaded into a small truck.

Gowtham appeared from inside the flat, dressed casually. When he saw Suresh, he paused for a moment, then walked over.
“Suresh,” he called.
Suresh nodded once.

“I’m vacating today,” Gowtham said, his tone surprisingly calm and civil. “I didn’t get a chance to thank you properly for taking care of me when I was injured. I’m moving on with my life. I won’t bother you or Sneha anymore. Take care.”

He didn’t wait for a reply. He didn’t ask about Sneha. He simply turned and walked away.
Ramya, who had come out curiously, waved at him.
“Bye, uncle!”

Gowtham gave her a small smile and left without looking back.
Finally, Gowtham was gone.

For months after that, there was no sign of him. 
No calls. No unexpected visits. Sneha, Suresh, and Ramya gradually forgot about him, focusing on their own healing and happiness.
But Gowtham had not forgotten.

In his new office, working late into the nights with Varsha, he had turned the startup into a profitable business through sheer obsession and hard work. Yet the sting of that slap, the humiliation of being thrown out like a dog, and the way Suresh had looked at him with quiet dominance — it all festered deep inside him.

He had developed a burning hatred for Suresh.
One day, he thought, staring at the city lights from his window, I will see you humiliated. Broken. Lesser than me.
I don't need to touch Sneha to make you look her with disgust in your eyes
i don't need to beat you to get you a pain

The game was far from over.

[Hornytamilan23]

To elevate Suresh, Author needs to degrade Sneha more and more...Is there any other choice? yes there is but won't take it. Why would she even allow to penetration, her falling for his sweet talk after calling her slut and after being hurt so much is unbelievable. Poor writing here no doubt, just taking shortcuts wherever it is needed. 

I was just saying the emotional layers need to be written in this story well and in his writing in general. I feel that is lacking immensely in lot of episodes. If such nuances are corrected, his stories will become epic. I know its not a career and just fun but I genuinely want author to see if there can be improvement. 

~RCF

RCF, this is what was supposed to happen, but not now. This should have happened 50 chapters earlier — cut off Sneha, move on with Gowtham and Varsha, and take the story in a different direction. That might have worked, but now it’s too late.

He dragged it unnecessarily, kept recycling the same plot, started multiple arcs, and then dropped them halfway.

Still, till around 70–80 chapters, it was top-notch. After that, the story started going downhill.

If this was always supposed to happen, it should’ve happened the moment he shoved his dick into Sneha’s mouth in front of Suresh on the sofa. Now it just feels too late.

[Hornytamilan23]

Heygi, this feels unnecessary at this point. It’s better to leave her arc behind and focus on the other characters. For me, Sneha’s part in the story already feels done and dusted. 

Bringing the Sneha–Suresh arc back into the main plot now could lead to a severe backlash from readers. Of course, the final decision is yours, but that’s honestly how I see it.

A simple closure would work much better. Later in the story, you could just add a couple of lines mentioning that Sneha is living her life happily with Suresh and Ramya. 

That alone would be enough to conclude her journey respectfully without dragging the narrative back again.

Generally, I don’t like giving direct story ideas to authors because I hate putting words into an author’s mouth or influencing their creative direction. 

I prefer observing quietly and letting the writer tell the story they want to tell. But after following the discussions and thinking about it for a day, this is the conclusion I arrived at.

The story has many other characters and unresolved dynamics that deserve more focus now, and revisiting the same emotional loop again may only make the plot feel repetitive instead of impactful.

[Mrmoon]

Looks like.the writer focus on sneha only how to destroy her and how to make her degrade, worst and more lusty and greedy for sex

After 165 episodes also there is no punishment to gautham..

He only focus on.how gautham.fucks her, degrade her, humilate her

Looks.like.he lost thw grip on story..

I.really domt know why other charecters are there..like.powerfull man adhithya, varsha etc..

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 166 - The Unexpected Invitation

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Friday evening arrived with the usual weekend warmth. 
Suresh and Sneha had gone together to pick up Ramya from her hostel. 
The little girl was overjoyed to see both her parents, chattering nonstop about her week as they drove back home.

As their car slowed down entering the apartment parking lot, another sleek, brand-new luxury SUV pulled up smoothly beside them. 
It was noticeably more expensive and flashy than Suresh’s car.

Ramya’s eyes lit up instantly.

“Uncle Gowtham!” she squealed in delight, unbuckling her seatbelt before the car had even stopped properly.
Suresh and Sneha froze.

Gowtham stepped out of the driver’s seat, looking sharp in a well-fitted casual shirt and jeans. 
He smiled casually, waving at them as if the ugly confrontation months ago had never happened.

Sneha’s heart skipped a beat. 
She turned to Suresh, visibly stunned.
“Why is he here?” she whispered.

Suresh glanced at her. 
There was no fear or longing in her voice — just pure surprise.
A small, satisfied smile touched his lips. She really has changed, he thought. Good.

They stepped out of the car. 
Ramya ran straight to Gowtham, who laughed and ruffled her hair affectionately.
Before anyone could speak, the passenger door of the luxury car opened.

Jiiva stepped out gracefully,  .
“Hello, Sir. How are you?” he asked.

After exchanging pleasantries, they all moved inside Suresh’s house. 
The atmosphere was tense but civil. Once seated, Gowtham finally revealed the reason for his visit.

“I’m getting married,” he announced with a calm smile. 
“This Sunday. It’s a love marriage. 
The reception is in the evening. 
and lot more surprises. 

You both have been pillars for me during my toughest time. 
I sincerely hope you’ll come.”

Sneha stayed completely silent, leaving the decision entirely to Suresh. 
She simply watched her husband.

Suresh studied Gowtham for a long moment. There was something in his eyes — a quiet challenge hidden behind the polite smile. The luxury car, the confident tone, the “surprises” he hinted at… it didn’t feel like a simple invitation.

“Sure,” Suresh finally replied, his voice steady. “We’ll be there.”
for a sake of formality!

Gowtham’s smile widened slightly.

“You should come. 
I have a lot of surprises planned.
Specially for you”

It wasn’t just an invitation. 
It felt like a gauntlet had been thrown.


After Gowtham and Jiiva left, Sneha turned to Suresh, her expression uncertain.
“Should we really go?” she asked.

Suresh stared at the closed door for a moment, then looked at her.

“We’re not going to hide or show weakness,” he said firmly. 
“Whatever game he’s playing… 
I want to see it with my own eyes.”
Sneha nodded slowly, though a flicker of unease passed through her.

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 167 - There is always someone better than you!

Sunday evening arrived with an air of grandeur. The wedding reception venue was nothing short of royal — sprawling lawns, crystal chandeliers hanging from massive tents, and elegant floral arrangements that screamed money and power. Luxury cars lined the driveway, and the guest list was filled with recognizable faces from the corporate world — businessmen, investors, and influencers.


Suresh and Sneha stepped out of their car, both dressed elegantly. Sneha looked beautiful in a deep maroon saree, while Suresh wore a sharp black suit. As they entered the venue, Suresh’s eyes scanned the crowd. He recognized many faces — people he had seen during high-level meetings with Aditya. But they didn’t recognize him. His role had always kept him in the shadows.

The moment they looked toward the stage, they saw Gowtham and Varsha standing together, looking like the perfect power couple. Gowtham spotted them immediately and waved dramatically with a big smile. The entire crowd turned their attention toward Suresh and Sneha for a brief moment.

Sneha leaned closer to Suresh and whispered, 
“That bastard has some plan. If he’s acting like this, he’s definitely up to something.”

Suresh smiled faintly. “I don’t care. I’m happy my wife has finally started using her brain these days.”
Sneha playfully stomped on his foot, making him chuckle.

Jiiva approached them with a polite smile.
“Please follow me,” he said.

He led them toward the stage. 
Gowtham, seeing them coming, loudly announced, 
“Let’s pause for a few minutes. I need to greet my special guests.”

He left Varsha on stage and came down. With a calculated smile, he said to Sneha, 
“Why don’t you speak with Varsha? I’ll take Suresh aside for a moment. I want to show him something.”

Before Sneha could protest, Gowtham grabbed Suresh’s arm and led him toward the dining hall. Once they were relatively alone near a dessert counter, Gowtham picked up a sweet and offered it to Suresh with mock politeness.Suresh didn’t take it.

“Why did you bring me here?” he asked coldly.
Gowtham’s smile faded into something darker.

“Well, I know you would suspect me. What to do? I’m that kind of person.”
He leaned in slightly. “Two things. The day you and your wife slapped me… I made two decisions. First, I won’t beat you, but I will make sure you feel pain. Second, I won’t come back into your and Sneha’s life, but you will constantly look at her with disgust in your eyes.”

Do you want another slap?
Calm down Suresh just hear me! I have not even started.

Gowtham’s voice dropped even lower.
“You know what’s the worst feeling? Being tricked.” He nodded toward a man distributing laddoos in the corner. “That man over there? He’s the one who kidnapped you that day.”

Suresh’s rage peaked. His hand shot forward to grab Gowtham’s collar, but Gowtham raised his hands calmly.
“No, no. Don’t overdo it. People are watching. And you will never know how much I’ve prepared to confront you here in public. So keep your hands away. There are a lot of things I wanted to tell you, but I’ll keep it quick.”

Gowtham smirked.
“Yes, it was me who arranged your kidnapping. You’ve been tricked. It should pain you, right? See, I didn’t beat you, but you still felt the pain and rage.

Gowtham laughed coldly, 
You feel like beating me right? 
I know.. But you can't, you know why?

Look at all the big shots out there. Do you think you have a chance to touch me now? My status and power have gone to a different level in these five months. 

How dare a marketing guy like you try to show supremacy?”
I'm always an Alpha and i'm always superiror to you .

He paused, enjoying the moment.
Gowtham teased further, oh wow, your eyes turning red. You have good amount of hemoglobin bro, he mocked. 
Okay calm down, now the next thing

“The second part. Even before the hill station trip, I had entered your wife. In the name of a ‘training session.’
She never shared it with you, did she?” Gowtham laughed softly. 

“Will you be able to see her the same way again? I have always been the alpha in your life. 
Your role was only to stay in your room while I enjoyed your wife.

Now I can see your jaw hardening.. Come beat me, let me tell the crowd the real reason.. He coldly laughed. Knowing he won't take risks that damage Sneha’s name. 
You should not have tried to become a hero.”

Gowtham stepped back, adjusting his coat.
Looking at your helpless look.. I feel very very satisfied. 

Don't worry, I can promise you that, I won’t come into your life or Sneha’s again. We will travel separate paths now, and my level is truly different. But I believe these memories are enough to haunt you forever.”

He gestured toward the stage.

“Look at my wife. Look how beautiful she is. 
A bull like me needs a woman like her, sexy and brainy.” He laughed again. 
“I feel my ego is completely satisfied. 

Wait here, take a photo, eat the food, and have a nice day.”

---

Suresh could have beaten him up right there — his fists were clenched so tightly his knuckles had turned white. But he knew better. Not here. Not in front of hundreds of powerful people. He would plan something far more devastating later. He never know his schemes. He truly doesn't want anything that could damage Sneha’s name.  He controlled himself with iron will.
Sneha, sensing something was wrong, came looking for him. She saw the tension on his face immediately.

I don’t know what he said, but we don’t need to stand here.”
“Don’t get emotional,” she said quietly, holding his hand. 
“He invited us for a reason — to shame us, to ridicule us. 
Let’s go back to home she said 

Suresh nodded. 
Right now, leaving this place was the smartest move.

As he turned to guide Sneha toward the exit, a loud, familiar voice cut through the crowd.
“Deii! Your old boss is here!”

Jiiva was waving enthusiastically near the entrance. Behind him walked Prakash, Mirna, Bharath, and another man Suresh instantly recognized Mirna and Bharath from Aditya’s private gathering months ago and Prakash, he had spilled coffee on him, one of the Hands.” Prakash didn't see him. 

Suresh froze for a split second.
Then a slow, dangerous smile formed on his lips.

He caught Sneha’s hand firmly in his and changed direction, walking straight back toward the stage instead of leaving. Sneha looked at him, confused, but followed without question.

They reached the stage area just as Prakash stepped forward with a large gift box. Gowtham welcomed him with an exaggerated, theatrical tone.

“Boss, leave a big smile," Jiiva mocked. 
Gowtham said.. He is not just an old boss, he is my lucky investor!”

After the photo, Gowtham exclaimed loudly, hugging Prakash. “Thank you for making my day special!”
Suresh stood a few steps away, watching with a calm but sharp gaze. A small, knowing smirk played on his lips. Sneha noticed it immediately.

“What happened? Why are you smiling like that?” she whispered, confused.
Suresh didn’t answer. He simply squeezed her hand gently.

Mirna went next, gracefully introducing the man beside her.

“This is my husband, Vikram,” she said with a warm smile. 
Bharath stood beside them like a quiet shadow. 
He saw how Mirnaa and Varsha were closer. 

Finally, it was Suresh and Sneha’s turn.

As they stepped closer to the stage, Gowtham’s face broke into a full, arrogant smirk — the mask of politeness slipping for just a moment. Sneha congratulated Varsha warmly, while Suresh stood beside Gowtham for the mandatory photo.

While the camera flashed, Suresh leaned in slightly and spoke in a low, steady voice only Gowtham could hear.

“You told me you’re really superior to me, right?”

Gowtham’s smirk deepened. In the same low tone, he replied, “Have you not seen enough?”

Suresh smiled calmly, almost serenely.

“If you think you’re an alpha,” he whispered, “remember — there is always someone better than you. 

That’s an old saying. Good luck.”

Are you telling, you will enter my life like i did to you,, he laughs.. I wont, i will never get inside, and i will never let you inside my life. I'm just saying don't be arrogant, there is always someone better than you. 

The camera clicked one final time.

Suresh and Sneha stepped down from the stage. As they were about to leave the hall, Suresh turned back once more and looked at Prakash standing near the stage. A cold, calculated smirk appeared on his face again.

All these days, you thought you were the puppet master, Gowtham.
From here… I will show you how a real puppet master plays.
and i will also make sure you go through, what we went through"


The game begins. End of Part I

[RCF]

Heygi, this feels unnecessary at this point. It’s better to leave her arc behind and focus on the other characters. For me, Sneha’s part in the story already feels done and dusted. 

Bringing the Sneha–Suresh arc back into the main plot now could lead to a severe backlash from readers. Of course, the final decision is yours, but that’s honestly how I see it.

A simple closure would work much better. Later in the story, you could just add a couple of lines mentioning that Sneha is living her life happily with Suresh and Ramya. 

That alone would be enough to conclude her journey respectfully without dragging the narrative back again.

Generally, I don’t like giving direct story ideas to authors because I hate putting words into an author’s mouth or influencing their creative direction. 

I prefer observing quietly and letting the writer tell the story they want to tell. But after following the discussions and thinking about it for a day, this is the conclusion I arrived at.

The story has many other characters and unresolved dynamics that deserve more focus now, and revisiting the same emotional loop again may only make the plot feel repetitive instead of impactful.

I wouldn't go that far, Story needs to revolve around the couple else its meaningless. What you said was right,we could have skipped some chapters because Suresh was earlier trying not to push Gautham and make him a desperate man, he was trying to slow down things so there won't be enmity and they can amicably part ways. I at that point understood the intention and in that process, new characters were introduced and each might have a role even if its not in part 1 maybe part 2 but now reflecting back on all those chapters, Only thing achieved is making Sneha brainless and degrade further to show that sex is her weakness. Gautham ended up becoming enemy anyways, if that was the intention, there could have been a nasty fight one of the times. Esp when Sneha asked Suresh that she will stop going to Gautham, Suresh said no and continue...there at that point story could have been written differently. 

But still I feel that story is going in right direction, Gautham seems will definitely end up humiliating Sneha and Suresh. He will break them apart by end of part 1, Its inevitable. Part 2 is there for them to find a way to come back together I guess. 

~RCF

[DeanWinchester00007]

I trying really hard to understand the character of Gowtham . What is the obsession with this character . 82 Pages , and This character just keeps on winning winning winning . Now his startup is successful , He found a women who loves him very much and supported him. The wife Suresh deserved somehow will end up with Gowtham . He literally got everything . Sneha as sex toy and Varsha as loving wife and supporting partner still this guy needs more and then There is brain dead zombie Suresh .

First He fucked his wife , and fucked up their marriage and Now He wanted to destroy their life and wants to teach him lesson ?

Husband is brain dead zombie and wife is Slut , They are no match for Gowtham . The whole setup is just wrong . If you wanna set up a plot including the rivalry between the two , At least they should be equal . Here Gowtham will eat them .

We all know in marriage He is again gonna fuck SNEHA , though i want to believe Suresh should be immune from this but still .

I am not saying it is wrong or right . It just does not make sense .

Or Suresh when He said about taking care of Her needs , Will he introduce Aditya in their life ? Sneha's new lover , and then Use Aditya to destroy Gowtham , which would be very pathetic .



Or maybe finally you are doing justice with the TITLE of the STORY  *NEIGHBOUR's GAIN*

So according to Title , Neighbor should and will Wins . That is the only this all makes sense . But again Question arises , How much he should gain ? What is end point ? He completely owned Sneha and Make Suresh cuck for life ? or Does this will end with Suresh ending his marriage ? or Suresh dying in the end which would be extreme , but In Order to gain , someone must lose . Let see What happens ? 

[Hornytamilan23]

I wouldn't go that far, Story needs to revolve around the couple else its meaningless. What you said was right,we could have skipped some chapters because Suresh was earlier trying not to push Gautham and make him a desperate man, he was trying to slow down things so there won't be enmity and they can amicably part ways. I at that point understood the intention and in that process, new characters were introduced and each might have a role even if its not in part 1 maybe part 2 but now reflecting back on all those chapters, Only thing achieved is making Sneha brainless and degrade further to show that sex is her weakness. Gautham ended up becoming enemy anyways, if that was the intention, there could have been a nasty fight one of the times. Esp when Sneha asked Suresh that she will stop going to Gautham, Suresh said no and continue...there at that point story could have been written differently. 

But still I feel that story is going in right direction, Gautham seems will definitely end up humiliating Sneha and Suresh. He will break them apart by end of part 1, Its inevitable. Part 2 is there for them to find a way to come back together I guess. 

~RCF

Bro you miscalculated