Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[RDX407]

Sneha and Gautam are yet to be seen like this

[heygiwriter]

Superb

How a fresher like varsha prepare something like this. Gowtham had done the paperwork even before he met his friend. Did varsha not know Gowtham will move out again. Or will he present this to Aditya and join the hands. May be Sneha would have thought she should punish Suresh making him father of Gowtham child. Now without any job she has to beg in streets with that child and turn full time prostitute from full time housewife.  Waiting for more

Every achievers are a fresher at sometimes. The learn as they proceed. She researched herself, this subtly telling how sincere she is with respect to helping Gowtham.

[heygiwriter]

Gowtham's sudden change of colours and slipping of his tongue ' Slut'... may please take care to descent his charecter naturally and smoothly ( instead of wrapping up suddenly )

Please ignore if it is otherwise

That's his character, he takes people for granted. 

Jiiva even reminds him in one of chapter, 

"Jiiva shook his head. “Your arrogance has no place, Gowtham. You look calm one moment, serious the next. You know why you don’t have many friends after all these years? Because of this attitude - taking people for granted.”

Yes he changes colors like chameleon.

[jaatrangila99]

Chapter 151 feedback:-

Office arc:- it is clearly showing some satisfying progress. As Suresh is actively participating in every meeting and Aaditya is also realising that he has found a Jem in Suresh. He will put more effort into retaining him.

Also Suresh is behaving like a different person. He is not shying from making his point, even at a risk that others might not line it.


Gowtham is behaving like his character. He is the bad part of this story. I also like the part that the author is not shy after reading so many negative comments about this character.

Sneha:- she is the real charm of this update. Her character is the most evolving here. She is showing restraint. She is not initiating sex with Gowtham. She is being true to her words towards her husband.


Seeing Sneha’s character develop is the most satisfying part of this update. Although Gowtham is doing his best to tempt her.

And I also like this hesitation part about her. Author is mindful to not ruin his story by making Sneha a strong-willed person in one go. Sneha is Sneha, she is not Versha.

And this difference in flavour is what I like the most about this story. Sneha and Suresh have some bad times, but they are still together and fighting together.


Thanks author for this fantastic update.

[jaatrangila99]

Chapter 152 feedback:-

Varsha and Mirna arc: both are women and both are suffering from love. So they both are supporting each other. Don’t know how this will affect the story in upcoming updates?


Gift arc: I like this more. Suresh had allowed Sneha for some outside marriage sex. Now he is also enjoying it. Another important part is that Suresh and Aaditya are coming closer. The boundary between employer and employee is shrinking. Like you can call me Aaditya and meet this Henika. She is your gift.

I don’t know how Aadity will reward Vinodini? Will he do it himself or will he call some BBC for her? I definitely want to know this part as well.

Suresh’s outside marriage sex arc: although it is very small. But I like that this story is evolving from a cuckold story towards an open marriage story. This shift, this change will change the whole dynamics of the game.

Husband and Wife: that teasing like you are extra wet today. LOL. I like this. They are shy about it. Suresh is enjoying teasing his wife and Sneha is also open about it. Like take me baby. Really appreciating.

Henika’s Performance: I think she is a prostitute hired by Aaditya. Otherwise how can she compare a cuck like Suresh to a stud like Aaditya. Or is Aaditya like an all bark and no bite person. Is Aaditya also a 2 minute maggye like Suresh? This comparison is hilarious.

Or might be Aaditya hired a very expensive prostitute and she is giving her best. Like value for money. 5 stars out of 5 stars for her performance. She let Suresh feel like a man again after his pathetic cuckold experience.



Fundamental change in Suresh: I also want to know what fundamental changes are made inside Suresh. This will be interesting. I will be waiting to observe this change.

[Gopal Ratnam]

Gowtham called varsha as slut. Shamelessly she is proposing to him. Gowtham called sneha as slut. Will she too propose as we see some possessive character display when she saw two ladies with Gowtham.

[jaatrangila99]

Chapter 153 feedback:


Suresh hiding the secret: I know it is not easy for him to share it with his wife.


Handjob to Gowtham: I don’t mind it. It’s not like sex but author you are ruining this Sneha character too much. Like she vowed to not fall for these pity things. She agreed to set the boundary and not to do anything before letting her husband know about it.

And hare we are again. Gowtham said 2 lines and Sneha is againg serving him. What the fuck author. You have invested so much time into:
Divorce arc
Suresh hurt arc
Sneha realising something is not right arc
Something shattering inside Sneha arc
Sneha cooking Suresh’s favorite food arc
Husband and wife having heartily communication arc
Setting new boundaries arc

All above hard work and still Sneha is behaving like Sneha behind her husband’s bank.


I have realised one thing, when the author is showing some sign about Sneha having Will power, something shattering inside her, her crying, her shedding tears. He is just having fun.



Emotional arc: like Sneha behaved in Kidnaping arc, she is still behaving in the same manner. Supporting the BULL rather than her cuckold husband. This is nothing new.

Night sex with Gowtham: like I already mentioned Sneha is SLUT. S is S. Nothing else. All above mentioned arcs are nothing to her. All it takes is the will of Gowtham and she will surrender. She will betray her cuckold husband.

My suggestion: As I have already mentioned that I am not against Sneha having sex with Gowtham. But the couple had discussed, they had shed tears, they are ok with this sex. But they have also set some new rules. And Sneha is again breaking the rules with her bull. Nice and fantastic.


Truth arc: It is good that Suresh is open about it. He did not hide it from Sneha. And the funny part is Sneha is hurt, shocked and betrayed all at once. Seriously, what the fuck. Suresh had many times mentioned another woman. And she is the one who is betrayed. LOL.

[heygiwriter]

Gowtham called varsha as slut. Shamelessly she is proposing to him. Gowtham called sneha as slut. Will she too propose as we see some possessive character display when she saw two ladies with Gowtham.

There is a difference between why it didn't bother Varsha and why it bother Sneha.

[RCF]

Predicting next curve is tough at this point, I predicted Sneha to be with Gautham to punish Suresh and end up getting drowned in sexual pleasure with Gautham and slowly emotionally detach herself from Suresh but first ball is a googly, She was called slut and I think the affair between Gautham and Sneha is practically over unless Sneha thinks about revenge and this time hell bent on destroying Gautham so she might act as a slut. Otherwise I do not see her going back to Gautham, infact she might kick him out of house. Her emotional state with Suresh won't improve as she might think he doesn't value her either hence cheated her, I would be really surprised if the couple patch up this soon...

All signs point to Gautham will end up in V Activate group, he missed the chance of survey and questions so the 154 ideas selected might not be part of it or maybe Varsha has submitted his idea we will know soon....

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Predicting next curve is tough at this point, I predicted Sneha to be with Gautham to punish Suresh and end up getting drowned in sexual pleasure with Gautham and slowly emotionally detach herself from Suresh but first ball is a googly, She was called slut and I think the affair between Gautham and Sneha is practically over unless Sneha thinks about revenge and this time hell bent on destroying Gautham so she might act as a slut. Otherwise I do not see her going back to Gautham, infact she might kick him out of house. Her emotional state with Suresh won't improve as she might think he doesn't value her either hence cheated her, I would be really surprised if the couple patch up this soon...

All signs point to Gautham will end up in V Activate group, he missed the chance of survey and questions so the 154 ideas selected might not be part of it or maybe Varsha has submitted his idea we will know soon....

~RCF

Good catch, the circular and interviews done when Gowtham was on bed rest. Naturally stopping his chance to submit. :) i carefully hid this fact subtly. and you catched it .

[Chitrarassu]

So far sneha did not go to Gowtham unless he called her. Past few days has been different. She went and initiated sex willingly. Gowtham doesn't know what changed between husband and wife. So far sneha proud thinking she is beautiful and it is the reason suresh and Gowtham are behind her. After hearing about henika she can't tolerate someone beautiful than her seduced and bedded her husband. Also she knows that suresh is not man enough like Gowtham and can't stay long and perform multiple times in single night and give multiple orgasm. So she wants to humiliate suresh by moaning louder that she is beautiful enough to made loved by real man. Gowtham knows the change in behaviour means he has more advantage and she is not getting satisfied sex with suresh for 6 week and it is the reason she is coming to him badly. It made her call her slut. She says to suresh that she has no emotional siding with Gowtham. Now she would realise that she was really having feelings toward Gowtham and it is the reason his words hit her like a sharp knife.

[sat200322]

Awaiting the next chapter, getting very interesting!

[a2011]

All characters are going through phases of ups and downs, it's now Sneha's turn. Now that she knows what Gowtham really thinks of her. I hope it doesn't go down the path of Sneha going even more crazy fucking Gowtham to distance herself from Suresh as that has been an arc in previous stories. Waiting for the Gowtham getting punished arc now.

[RCF]

All characters are going through phases of ups and downs, it's now Sneha's turn. Now that she knows what Gowtham really thinks of her. I hope it doesn't go down the path of Sneha going even more crazy fucking Gowtham to distance herself from Suresh as that has been an arc in previous stories. Waiting for the Gowtham getting punished arc now.

Gautham getting punished is not in the cards for a very long time, he doesn't value anything...he is this free bird who can harm many emotionally but he keeps himself emotionally detached to everything. You saw how he was frustrated when he lost the patent to the investor but it only made him more focused. Gautham needs to emotionally get invested in Varsha or something like his AI startup, invest his time and money everything to an extent that he will bleed for her and project and die for both, at that point there will come time for others to give him his medicine back...until then he will be invincible...

Even if he loses Sneha now, he has Varsha and his project. He is not going down soon....

~RCF

[oxy.raj]

Gautham getting punished is not in the cards for a very long time, he doesn't value anything...he is this free bird who can harm many emotionally but he keeps himself emotionally detached to everything. You saw how he was frustrated when he lost the patent to the investor but it only made him more focused. Gautham needs to emotionally get invested in Varsha or something like his AI startup, invest his time and money everything to an extent that he will bleed for her and project and die for both, at that point there will come time for others to give him his medicine back...until then he will be invincible...

Even if he loses Sneha now, he has Varsha and his project. He is not going down soon....

~RCF

True..

[Chitrarassu]

Superb

How a fresher like varsha prepare something like this. Gowtham had done the paperwork even before he met his friend. Did varsha not know Gowtham will move out again. Or will he present this to Aditya and join the hands. May be sneha would have thought she should punish suresh making him father of Gowtham child. Now without any job she has to beg in streets with that child and turn full time prostitute from full time housewife.  Waiting for more

Begging in streets with the child. 
Gowtham coming in car with varsha and giving money and ask how is your life slut. Do u get enough customers daily for your living or should I get  a corporate slut job. Many men will be happy to fuck u hard.
Suresh coming in car and giving money in signal. Ramya sitting next to him turns her head seeing her mom. Can't get better. 

[jaatrangila99]

Chapter 154:

Punishment heading: this is the part which gives me a minny orgasm just by reading about it. I am eagerly waiting to read the whole part.


Couple talk: it feels boring and a waste of time. Seriously author. It seems like Sneha is already decided to go and fuck Gowtham. It was like she was waiting for a reason. If Suresh had confessed that he had started doing Meditation behind her back, she would have already felt betrayed and gone to Gowtham for sex. LOL.


Sneha: I will not make it easy for him. LOL LOL LOL LOL. She is not making it easy for her husband and by doing what? Having sex with another man. Seriously?


2nd Sex arc:
Suresh: He is doing his best by stating the ceiling. What else can a cuckold can do when his wife is getting fucked in next room.
Sneha: As I have already said, S is S. That’s all.
Gowtham: At Least he is playing his part properly.

My expectation: As I have already said that I am not against them having sex. So author could have let them have sex once a week. It would have looked like Gowtham is still trying his best, but Sneha is showing some resistance. But ……

Message to cuck arc: LOL. I will not waste my words on this stupid thing. Sneha can moan loudly. She can do whatever she wants to do.


Suresh: At the end of update, he is again showing signs of a cuckold. It is him who has to console his wife. LOL. 2nd betrayal in marriage. Still he is enduring it. Why? Because the Show must go on. That's all.




My overall feedback: pathetic. I was getting used to eating 7 stars hotel dishes at roadside Dhaba with this author, but now it is just repetition.

Let me ask you one question, what was Suresh’s fear in the earlier update? That they will again go to LEVEL ZERO. And where is the story right now? LEVEL ZERO.

[Kohlikohli18]

So sneha wanted to punish Gowtham, when she saw Gowtham message she immediately goes.

Here i can say sneha enjoying the se*x it's not about punishing gowtam actually she wanted it and she got the reason at right time...


Now gowtam called sneha a SL*T and Cu*t, she got hurt and betrayed and went back to home .. what happens here is my prediction is like sneha cries in her room but after sometime gowtam also reaches the home but with jasmine and her fav gold ring once he grabs her waist and a tight kiss she will forget and submit as we know about her..

I'm just kidding, sneha will see Aditya visiting card and goes to him, she will say everything and asks to take Revenge on behalf of her and the gift will be sneha submitting to Aditya

[Chitrarassu]

Suddenly varsha turned lucky cunt for Gowtham

[jaatrangila99]

Chapter 155 feedback:-

Varsha and Mirna: how can HR support all this bullshit? She is a new Investor. She is the new HR. Her new company has 2 key performing employees. One is trying to start a Startup and another is supporting him. And She is standing right there at the moment and supporting them. WOW. I also deserve such HR. I am seeing HR in a new Light after my experience with them. It is clearly eye opening.


Varsha and Sneha: Every time Varsha visits Gowtham, author makes sure that Sneha and Suresh are nowhere near them. Why? I don’t know. But I will wait to know. I think it is done intentionally to increase the length of the story.


Hurt arc: Now this makes things interesting. Gowtham had used the word SLUT. and something inside Sneha is again shattered. I don't know how much Sneha has inside her. Because many things have shattered inside her. Does she have something intact or broken things are breaking again.


Future Expectation: Sneha is not Varsh. So I don’t expect anything groundbreaking from her. Like distancing away from Gowtham. If this happens, then it will be utterly disappointing. She had fallen for sex so many times that this word SLUT will not affect her. When will Suresh stop behaving like a cuck? When Sneha and Versha will face each other. Whose side does Mirna will take? When will this revenge arc start? When Sneha will start creating boundaries and not just brag about them?



Last comment: Just like Hornytamilan23, this is my last update. I am fed up after reading these repeating things after every few updates. Like something shattering inside Sneha. Suresh staring at the ceiling. Gowtham fucking Sneha whenever he wants. This is getting boring man.

I am not saying that I will stop reading the story from this moment onwards. Just will not comment until I think it is required.


I am also not threatening and demanding the author to write as per my wish. But I was expecting some open discussion after the confession from Suresh. But….. not this loop.


Good Luck author ………