Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[Kohlikohli18]

I'm seriously say one thing, if author takes the break then it will lose the hype and excitement thr story is going well and why does author needs gap because of just one comment??? I hope he reads this comment and starts writing again as some thousand of viewers read the story...

[Hornytamilan23]

Please understand that Heygi doesn't have any such need after such successful completed stories

He also grunted on me 10 chapters ago what else I am expecting in an adultery story and I tendered my apologies

Ya ya...

[Mrmoon]

Brother - thanks for coming forward and apologizing. 

More than a sorry - please give a logical reason why you thought that Heygi degraded women in the story. That helps both of us resolve this amicably. Thank you

Feedback on the Story Line and Character Arc
First of all, I would like to commend the author. You are an exceptionally talented writer. In my six years of reading stories on Xossip and Xossipy, I have rarely come across a writer who provides such high-quality updates at this remarkable speed. You are truly one of the best.
As a regular reader, I became deeply invested in the characters and the plot. Because of this connection, certain developments in the story genuinely upset me, and that is what I shared yesterday.

. I sincerely apologize if my perspective hurts anyone's feelings.

Plot Progression: My Perspective and (this is my response to  Mr.VinodV why i felt like this)

The Foundation: Sneha and Suresh started as a happily married couple. Their sexual adventures—like being half-naked in front of their boss or the room boy—were always based on mutual consent, understanding, and deep love for one another.

The Turning Point: When Gowtham entered the narrative, Suresh developed an erection issue. Suresh suggested using Gowtham’s name for roleplay to fix the problem, but Sneha outright rejected the idea.

The Manipulation: From this point on, the story became entirely one-sided. Gowtham overheard their conversation and began manipulating Suresh into a cuckold mindset, while simultaneously convincing Sneha that Suresh wanted to see them together.

Core Concerns Regarding Character and Balance
While the plot progression was engaging initially, the story has recently become entirely skewed in Gowtham's favour:

Inconsistency in Sneha's Character: Even after Suresh realized the manipulation and informed Sneha, she continued to sleep with Gowtham. While the author has beautifully established Sneha's deep love for her husband, it feels contradictory that a woman who loves her husband so intensely would continue to have rough sex with a man who actively deceived them.
 In my opinion, this heavily degrades her strong character and reduces her to a mere sex doll or slave, ignoring her emotional depth.

Lack of Narrative Balance: The story currently lacks equilibrium. For the last 100 updates, the plot has become repetitive: Gowtham calls Sneha, they engage in brutal sex, she returns with bite marks, and Suresh watches helplessly. There is no new development in their dynamic. Gowtham dominates completely, and whatever he wishes happens effortlessly.

The Need for Just Retribution: Out of 300 episodes, if 295 episodes depict Gowtham’s complete dominance while reducing the main couple to mere puppets, wrapping up his punishment in just the final 5 episodes would feel unfair. Gowtham needs to face a level of suffering and consequences equivalent to the pain Suresh has endured.

Conclusion
We all visit these forums to read adult fiction, but it is disheartening to see a well-crafted, strong female protagonist lose her agency completely. As readers who are emotionally attached to Suresh and Sneha, it hurts to see them treated this way

[VinodV]

Thanks much brother for elaborating. I am yet to read it completely once again

Since I was doubted now, I will leave it to the writer and others in the forum for now.

Thank you once again for caring my comment and speaking your heart out!

[jaatrangila99]

Hi Mr Writer,

Your story is good. I am patient and will wait for your return. Take your time. Don't be in a hurry. You too deserve some rest. I know other people will insult me for this, but I don't care. You take your break and enjoy.



I, myself don't like many things about this story like office arc (in starting because it was slow). I didn't shy about mentioning it in comment, but at the same time I also mentioned that I will support you and will be patient. Now when this office arc is showing progress like Suresh's recent promotion.

I don't know about these other characters from past stories, so no comments.

I also don't like this behaviour of Suresh but when you explained that in 1 full update (open conversation between them) I started supporting them. But still I also complained about Suresh not taking any lead in this regard.


But at the same time I also supported sex between Sneha and Gautam. Because at the end of the day, this is a FICTIONAL & ADULTERY STORY. So it is basic comman sense that either one of the couple (Sneha in this story) will be having sexual relationship outside her marriage. And the thing I like is them teasing each other after her sex with Gautam.


The reason why Gautam is so bad in this story is because author want to continue this story. He don't want to end it in next 10 updates. If he did that, then that will be truly disappointing. I will miss the pleasure of seeing some Revenge arc. Because revenge is the dish better served cold.


I mean the more dark side he shows now, the more satisfying the revenge will be. Like if Gautham has a sudden change of heart and he started supporting Sneha and stop all these backstabbing moves then revenge will be boring.

He is getting attention from Sneha and Suresh, but also think that the couple is ok with him having sex with Sneha for some time. They are slowing down like for past week Gautam is only listening Sneha's moaning her husband's name. He is just listening and (maybe masterbating) but definitely no sex. Otherwise author would have mentioned.


I don't like the introductory remarks about Aaditya, and I mentioned it 2 - 3 time. And I am glad that author stopped mentioning those things. Appreciate it bro. It shows that you were reading my comments and you liked it. Now I also like how Suresh and Aaditya are working together and making an empire where both of them will win and grow together. I like this subtle change between there relationship like Suresh was used to be at receiving end (like always mind his next words carefully, not scared but somehow his heart beat used to rise etc) and Aaditya being more dominant in every move (like that Predator waiting for hunt, always dark), but now both are sharing breakfast. I also like the think that author didn't make them partners after just 1 blockbuster idea. This will make story more realistic.



This new female character. I think she is someone who has suffered greatly for her love (her husband). Don't know why she was crying. She is also indirectly helping Versha. Like she is seeing herself in her. Now the most interesting thing to see will be how she will find about true nature of Gautam, how she will save Versha (I think she like her), how she will meet Suresh and then Sneha and how she will help Suresh in revenge.

Because at this point Suresh is not in mood of revenge. He is just happy with his wife, his family. So how will he change his mind and become the beast that will hunt Gautam and will let him know what does the word CONSEQUENCES even means.( Most probably Gautam will blackmail them with Sneha's nude pic and video).


So I am eagerly waiting for next updates, but buddy take your time. If you think you need a break, then go ahead. I will support you. But I will continue to mention the things I don't like and don't understand.


Waiting for next update......

[jaatrangila99]

Erectile Dysfunction is rarely permanent. It usually comes from a mix of:
1. Nicotine / Tobacco Damage
Nicotine narrows blood vessels.
Erections are 100% blood-flow dependent.
Even chewing tobacco reduces penile blood circulation.
Good news:
➡️ Blood vessels start recovering within weeks after quitting.
2. Porn-Induced Dopamine Burnout
Heavy porn use can cause:
Reduced libido
Weak erections with real partner
Need for stronger stimulation
Brain becoming less responsive to normal intimacy
This is called porn-induced erectile dysfunction (PIED).
Recovery usually happens in 6–12 weeks after stopping porn.
3. Psychological Pressure
You are:
Married
Have a child
Want to perform well
Your brain shifts from desire → performance anxiety.
And erection dies when the brain enters stress mode.
4. Why Medicines Aren’t Working
Drugs like Sildenafil citrate only work if:
libido exists
blood vessels respond
brain is aroused
If libido is low → tablets feel useless.
So this is not failure, it means the root cause is deeper than just blood flow.
? The Recovery Plan (Most Important Part)
✅ Step 1 — Total Porn Detox (Non-Negotiable)
No porn
No edging
Reduce excessive masturbation
Real intimacy only
Expect:
2–3 weeks: low desire (flatline phase)
4–8 weeks: libido returns naturally
This phase is normal.
✅ Step 2 — Quit Tobacco Completely
Not reduce. Stop.
Within:
2 weeks → better circulation
1–3 months → stronger erections
Nicotine is one of the biggest hidden ED causes in men under 40.
✅ Step 3 — Exercise Like Medicine
You don’t need bodybuilding.
Do:
30–40 min brisk walking daily
Squats
Pushups
Core exercises
Exercise increases:
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Nitric oxide
Confidence
Libido
Many men reverse ED without drugs using this alone.
✅ Step 4 — Fix Testosterone Naturally
Sleep = sexual hormone factory.
You need:
7–8 hours sleep
Morning sunlight
Reduce late-night phone scrolling
Testosterone drops sharply with poor sleep.
✅ Step 5 — Rebuild Sexual Confidence
For some time:
Avoid “performance goal”
Focus on touch, intimacy, affection
No pressure to penetrate
Your brain must relearn: ? intimacy ≠ performance test.
✅ Step 6 — Medical Check (Very Important)
At 35, rule out hidden causes.
Consult a Urologist or andrologist and check:
Testosterone
Blood sugar (Diabetes)
Thyroid
Lipid profile
Blood pressure
Many young men discover early metabolic issues causing ED.
⚠️ Avoid These Mistakes
❌ Increasing tablet dosage yourself
❌ Alcohol before sex
❌ Comparing with porn performance
❌ Testing erection every day
Recovery needs relaxed consistency, not pressure.

A GOAT is spotted. Buddy you have my respect for this research. Also clarify which exercises will improve .....

[jaatrangila99]

Brother - thanks for coming forward and apologizing. 

More than a sorry - please give a logical reason why you thought that Heygi degraded women in the story. That helps both of us resolve this amicably. Thank you

Yes, behanchod I also want to know where was this degradation part. How the hell this thing even started.

I know Gautam is a bad guy, but ......

[jaatrangila99]

OMG, please don't take this to different direction:-)
V-activate group is just a fiction company in story
Why would I be Heygi.. did you ever see my comments in any of his stories before?
I also said I am yet to read his other stories

Yes, writer can comment whatever he want from his account. It's not like he had not mentioned it earlier. He had replied to my comments as well. He had replied to many other comments as well.


So why now all this .......

[heygiwriter]

Feedback on the Story Line and Character Arc
First of all, I would like to commend the author. You are an exceptionally talented writer. In my six years of reading stories on Xossip and Xossipy, I have rarely come across a writer who provides such high-quality updates at this remarkable speed. You are truly one of the best.
As a regular reader, I became deeply invested in the characters and the plot. Because of this connection, certain developments in the story genuinely upset me, and that is what I shared yesterday.

. I sincerely apologize if my perspective hurts anyone's feelings.

Plot Progression: My Perspective and (this is my response to  Mr.VinodV why i felt like this)

The Foundation: Sneha and Suresh started as a happily married couple. Their sexual adventures—like being half-naked in front of their boss or the room boy—were always based on mutual consent, understanding, and deep love for one another.

The Turning Point: When Gowtham entered the narrative, Suresh developed an erection issue. Suresh suggested using Gowtham’s name for roleplay to fix the problem, but Sneha outright rejected the idea.

The Manipulation: From this point on, the story became entirely one-sided. Gowtham overheard their conversation and began manipulating Suresh into a cuckold mindset, while simultaneously convincing Sneha that Suresh wanted to see them together.

Core Concerns Regarding Character and Balance
While the plot progression was engaging initially, the story has recently become entirely skewed in Gowtham's favour:

Inconsistency in Sneha's Character: Even after Suresh realized the manipulation and informed Sneha, she continued to sleep with Gowtham. While the author has beautifully established Sneha's deep love for her husband, it feels contradictory that a woman who loves her husband so intensely would continue to have rough sex with a man who actively deceived them.
 In my opinion, this heavily degrades her strong character and reduces her to a mere sex doll or slave, ignoring her emotional depth.

Lack of Narrative Balance: The story currently lacks equilibrium. For the last 100 updates, the plot has become repetitive: Gowtham calls Sneha, they engage in brutal sex, she returns with bite marks, and Suresh watches helplessly. There is no new development in their dynamic. Gowtham dominates completely, and whatever he wishes happens effortlessly.

The Need for Just Retribution: Out of 300 episodes, if 295 episodes depict Gowtham’s complete dominance while reducing the main couple to mere puppets, wrapping up his punishment in just the final 5 episodes would feel unfair. Gowtham needs to face a level of suffering and consequences equivalent to the pain Suresh has endured.

Conclusion
We all visit these forums to read adult fiction, but it is disheartening to see a well-crafted, strong female protagonist lose her agency completely. As readers who are emotionally attached to Suresh and Sneha, it hurts to see them treated this way

Out of 300 episodes, if 295 // This is your assumption. 

RCF Had rightly predicted, something on it in one of his previous comment. 

The grey characters will be punished but if i start responding and giving a clue you wont have a suprrise factor, shock value when you read.

Also the past whatever episode i'm not trying to prove Gowtham's dominance, i'm trying to tell, how its hard to come out of an adulterous relationship, how emotions works,  how one mind works, hwo one would manipulate for their benefits. Its all a hard lesson. 

If you cant look at lessons, emotions and the retributions i dont know what you have read.

This is the graph the story gone so far

1. Husband sexually frustrated as his wife is too much into family 
2. To bring excitement back he bring in fantasy 
3. Wife is against it, yet she tries for him 
4. Comes in third person who want to capitalize on it and overstep, starting the sexual relationship - Until here its Fantasy/Trial to fix things
5. Given past how adventeours couple in sex, Suresh tries to fix it and set rules
6. The rules and other stuffs backfires, as Wife and Gowtham over cross things - Here fantasy blurs and Adulterous stuffs starts
7. Husband decides to detach , wife realize something wrong she tries to fix it
8. Gowtham continues to derail all effort knowingly/unknowingly 
9. Bringing in New characters, new setup, new challenge in form of Aditya, makes both Sneha and Suresh realize and get them back into reality
they start speaking, things become more vocal and they finally seeing clear picture - Here they are joining again as one for love 
10. The couple as they speak realise practically widthrawing is not simple, with a manipulator like gowtham, they decided to slow down, in the process, they are turning into a Open Relationship with conditions or understanding 
11. Now they are in process of getting back on their feet, ignoring revenge and stuff, and potential tricks from Gowtham, but the new accident stuffs puts a new challenge. Brings him back in their close proximity. 


I carefully bring in every angle, every emotions in to play, gave enough justification as why. 

Carefully pinning the new characters with purpose, Aditya, Mirna, Bharath, Prakash, Rahul. Everyone serves a purpose.

[heygiwriter]

Hi Mr Writer,

Your story is good. I am patient and will wait for your return. Take your time. Don't be in a hurry. You too deserve some rest. I know other people will insult me for this, but I don't care. You take your break and enjoy.



I, myself don't like many things about this story like office arc (in starting because it was slow). I didn't shy about mentioning it in comment, but at the same time I also mentioned that I will support you and will be patient. Now when this office arc is showing progress like Suresh's recent promotion.

I don't know about these other characters from past stories, so no comments.

I also don't like this behaviour of Suresh but when you explained that in 1 full update (open conversation between them) I started supporting them. But still I also complained about Suresh not taking any lead in this regard.


But at the same time I also supported sex between Sneha and Gautam. Because at the end of the day, this is a FICTIONAL & ADULTERY STORY. So it is basic comman sense that either one of the couple (Sneha in this story) will be having sexual relationship outside her marriage. And the thing I like is them teasing each other after her sex with Gautam.


The reason why Gautam is so bad in this story is because author want to continue this story. He don't want to end it in next 10 updates. If he did that, then that will be truly disappointing. I will miss the pleasure of seeing some Revenge arc. Because revenge is the dish better served cold.


I mean the more dark side he shows now, the more satisfying the revenge will be. Like if Gautham has a sudden change of heart and he started supporting Sneha and stop all these backstabbing moves then revenge will be boring.

He is getting attention from Sneha and Suresh, but also think that the couple is ok with him having sex with Sneha for some time. They are slowing down like for past week Gautam is only listening Sneha's moaning her husband's name. He is just listening and (maybe masterbating) but definitely no sex. Otherwise author would have mentioned.


I don't like the introductory remarks about Aaditya, and I mentioned it 2 - 3 time. And I am glad that author stopped mentioning those things. Appreciate it bro. It shows that you were reading my comments and you liked it. Now I also like how Suresh and Aaditya are working together and making an empire where both of them will win and grow together. I like this subtle change between there relationship like Suresh was used to be at receiving end (like always mind his next words carefully, not scared but somehow his heart beat used to rise etc) and Aaditya being more dominant in every move (like that Predator waiting for hunt, always dark), but now both are sharing breakfast. I also like the think that author didn't make them partners after just 1 blockbuster idea. This will make story more realistic.



This new female character. I think she is someone who has suffered greatly for her love (her husband). Don't know why she was crying. She is also indirectly helping Versha. Like she is seeing herself in her. Now the most interesting thing to see will be how she will find about true nature of Gautam, how she will save Versha (I think she like her), how she will meet Suresh and then Sneha and how she will help Suresh in revenge.

Because at this point Suresh is not in mood of revenge. He is just happy with his wife, his family. So how will he change his mind and become the beast that will hunt Gautam and will let him know what does the word CONSEQUENCES even means.( Most probably Gautam will blackmail them with Sneha's nude pic and video).


So I am eagerly waiting for next updates, but buddy take your time. If you think you need a break, then go ahead. I will support you. But I will continue to mention the things I don't like and don't understand.


Waiting for next update......

Thanks buddy, i just had a long sleep, after the frustration. 
Waking to comments, and hornytamilan's comment :D looks like everyone here should sleep properly 

I dont change course of story for comments but i do take some points for improvisation

[heygiwriter]

OMG, please don't take this to different direction:-)
V-activate group is just a fiction company in story
Why would I be Heygi.. did you ever see my comments in any of his stories before?
I also said I am yet to read his other stories

 hello Mr. V ACTIVATE ACTUAL OWNER VINOD V. The MYSTERIOUS CEO who lives in XOssipy

[heygiwriter]

I'm seriously say one thing, if author takes the break then it will lose the hype and excitement thr story is going well and why does author needs gap because of just one comment??? I hope he reads this comment and starts writing again as some thousand of viewers read the story...

I will write bro. No worries. let me go out , take a leave. Enjoy myself and sit back sometimes today later and post updates Cheers :)

[Mrmoon]

Out of 300 episodes, if 295 // This is your assumption. 

RCF Had rightly predicted, something on it in one of his previous comment. 

The grey characters will be punished but if i start responding and giving a clue you wont have a suprrise factor, shock value when you read.

Also the past whatever episode i'm not trying to prove Gowtham's dominance, i'm trying to tell, how its hard to come out of an adulterous relationship, how emotions works,  how one mind works, hwo one would manipulate for their benefits. Its all a hard lesson. 

If you cant look at lessons, emotions and the retributions i dont know what you have read.

This is the graph the story gone so far

1. Husband sexually frustrated as his wife is too much into family 
2. To bring excitement back he bring in fantasy 
3. Wife is against it, yet she tries for him 
4. Comes in third person who want to capitalize on it and overstep, starting the sexual relationship - Until here its Fantasy/Trial to fix things
5. Given past how adventeours couple in sex, Suresh tries to fix it and set rules
6. The rules and other stuffs backfires, as Wife and Gowtham over cross things - Here fantasy blurs and Adulterous stuffs starts
7. Husband decides to detach , wife realize something wrong she tries to fix it
8. Gowtham continues to derail all effort knowingly/unknowingly 
9. Bringing in New characters, new setup, new challenge in form of Aditya, makes both Sneha and Suresh realize and get them back into reality
they start speaking, things become more vocal and they finally seeing clear picture - Here they are joining again as one for love 
10. The couple as they speak realise practically widthrawing is not simple, with a manipulator like gowtham, they decided to slow down, in the process, they are turning into a Open Relationship with conditions or understanding 
11. Now they are in process of getting back on their feet, ignoring revenge and stuff, and potential tricks from Gowtham, but the new accident stuffs puts a new challenge. Brings him back in their close proximity. 


I carefully bring in every angle, every emotions in to play, gave enough justification as why. 

Carefully pinning the new characters with purpose, Aditya, Mirna, Bharath, Prakash, Rahul. Everyone serves a purpose.

Thank you for taking the time to share such a detailed breakdown of the story's emotional graph and your underlying vision. It genuinely helps to see the narrative from the creator's lens, and I completely respect the depth and psychological realism you are trying to portray regarding manipulation and adulterous relationships.

However, as a reader who is deeply invested in the journey of Suresh and Sneha, I would like to gently present why the execution still feels heavily skewed from our perspective:

Intent vs. On-Screen Impact: While your intended graph shows the couple trying to fix things and realizing the manipulation (Points 7 to 11), the sheer volume and graphic detail of the updates have heavily favored Gowtham’s absolute dominance for a very long period. When a reader spends months reading back-to-back updates of brutal intimacy and submission, that visual impact completely overshadows the subtle emotional progression or the "lessons" happening in the background.

The Weight of the Retribution: You mentioned that my "295 vs 5 episodes" ratio is an assumption, and that grey characters will be punished. My concern is about the narrative weight. If a antagonist dominates, manipulates, and breaks down a couple for over 100 updates, a swift or sudden downfall in the final chapters will feel mathematically and emotionally unearned to the audience. For the trauma to feel resolved, the retribution needs to be just as impactful and deeply felt as the suffering was.

The Line Between Realism and Hopelessness: I completely understand your point about how difficult it is to escape a master manipulator like Gowtham, and how an open relationship with conditions might be a pragmatic step for them to get back on their feet. However, because Suresh and Sneha are continuously portrayed as helpless puppets in the face of his tricks, it occasionally crosses the line from a "hard emotional lesson" into total helplessness, which is why it feels draining for readers who care for them.

I am not looking for spoilers or shock-value clues, and I appreciate that every new character like Aditya or Mirna has a purpose. My feedback stems entirely from the fact that your writing is powerful enough to make us feel the couple's pain acutely

Hope u take my opinion positively

Im eegarly waiting for next update

[heygiwriter]

Readers should learn to have patience, If you have read the story and comments thoroughly, Author clearly mentioned that the couple will know Gautham's kidnapping plan soon and when they do it will be interval...So you see this is still early stages of story and you guys want punishment even before Gautham turns evil, My assumption is Gautham has still not completely turned to Evil or to darker side. He is going to go bad from here on, his obsession would only grow more for Sneha...he is addicted already. As his obsession for Sneha grows, his love and closeness for Varsha grows as well, only then the revenge will be sweeter because Varsha will be the one to take the blunt for his wrongdoings.

Only hope is what ever happens, Couple need to stick together, misunderstandings between them are boring and tried and tested so many times till now, Now it should be them vs the world.

So readers, your empathy is needed for couple for very long time :)

~RCF

 thanks RCF

[VinodV]

 hello Mr. V ACTIVATE ACTUAL OWNER VINOD V. The MYSTERIOUS CEO who lives in XOssipy

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[VinodV]

 hello Mr. V ACTIVATE ACTUAL OWNER VINOD V. The MYSTERIOUS CEO who lives in XOssipy

Thank you, Heygi! 

I am able to see a smile on your face now. I was always hesitating if you were liking my comments (tried in a lighter way every time) or not
I should be thankful to the fellow reader, without him raising that question I wouldn't have got this nice reply :-)

Just for more clarity to the friends here - I am basically from Andhra and have been into astrology and regular fiction stories writing as hobbies besides my primary job

[VinodV]

I found one more interesting point.
Exactly at 99th Chapter - Heygi took a break for a week and couldn't continue writing due to his work / personal schedules
Another break is happening at 150th chapter now.
Looking at this pattern - should we be ready for something around 200th chapter!?

What else can be the better roller coaster ride than the real life :-)

[Hotgiri]

As per story total Neighbours gain, by the end of the story the winner will be neighbour, there are many story on this portal where manipulator wins at the end , it’s story so take it as a story

[Vasanthan]

Will there be a lesbian action between mirna and varsha or sneha.

[Bigil]

Gowtham should fuck mirna and varsha in a threesome. He never had any so far.