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Hi bro,
Story is good. Story plot is extraordinary.
But one small thing pls add some detailed sex scenes between both of them. This is my humble request only.
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Bro I am a big fan krf ur stories.
I must say this is an awesome and extraordinary story. Very unique from other ones.
Thanks for presenting it to us but i got oy one request and that's please provide update a bi quick. There have been too many delays and looking at th story we don't want to keep any patience :) such is a story mqn.
Please give hs fast and bog updates. Its a humble request.
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Good to know you are liking the story deepika and desilund. I am going to post my next update late in the night. Hope you will enjoy it.
Like erotic stories? check my Profile
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Eagerly waiting for the erotic update
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Is that it for the day bro and leaving us hanging or coming more of updates?
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When will you publish next update?
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Ahaha! very interesting what will happen next, will save his mom or stand & see his mom as helpless son.
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I have to tell truth here bro, i was upset with quantity of update... The story is slow and erotic but that is the speciality of your story that's what i liked it but small updates make the story stranded on same point what left before...and we lost interest and dissapointed. I think we viewers rushed u post quickly... So please take your time and post big update then only story is smooth and keep on entertaining... Already story is slow paced with Small update makes story kept still... So please big update and inform us when will be next huge update...its our request bro
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This storyline is awesome but definitely need big update with pictures and elaborate more
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You are writing a nice story but you are giving very small updates. You should update the story within 2 to 3 days and also post AI images. Give bigger updates of story and write a lengthy story whenever you write a chapter of the story
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Good .but aftermath is always more interesting