Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[Mrmoon]

Gautham is given unnecessary attention, a bastard like him should be put in place. I am unable to understand Suresh and his cowardice behaviour, if Jiva can understand from stare of Gowtham - the disrespect towards Sneha at hospital then why Suresh is not understanding that... this story should close the loop of disrespecting Sneha anymore

Lets see what happens next

Sex stories is ok but treating women im degrading mode for continiously is not looking good author..

U need to think once again on this

[heygiwriter]

Sex stories is ok but treating women im degrading mode for continiously is not looking good author..

U need to think once again on this

I REALLY DONT KNOW IF YOU ALL ARE READING THE ENTIRE STORY or JUMPING IN MIDDLE OF SOME CHAPTER AND BLAMING ME HERE.

[Thasa]

@heygi bro can we expect double penetration with shena or any other character in this story like (husband Doubt ) story nivi with rohan and adhil

Bro there is any chance for this ?

[Mrmoon]

I REALLY DONT KNOW IF YOU ALL ARE READING THE ENTIRE STORY or JUMPING IN MIDDLE OF SOME CHAPTER AND BLAMING ME HERE.

Actually story was very goo and i like it and refresh mpage for every 2 minutes for update..but slowly u r missing soul by makimg gautham.charecter strong instead of realiszing his mistakes or get punished and making female charecter more amd worst degrading and make his husband more useless..he impress adithya  with strategies but he is behaving as useless when gautham uses his wife..

How can it be possible

[heygiwriter]

Actually story was very goo and i like it and refresh mpage for every 2 minutes for update..but slowly u r missing soul by makimg gautham.charecter strong instead of realiszing his mistakes or get punished and making female charecter more amd worst degrading and make his husband more useless..he impress adithya  with strategies but he is behaving as useless when gautham uses his wife..

How can it be possible

If you feel disappointed in middle of a 350 + Chapter story. I'm very sorry to say, that  i have disappointed you 
I don't know if you expect Gowtham to get punished or taste his own medicine in first few chapters?

[heygiwriter]

Also it clearly shows you didn't read the story. 
or any interactions between Husband and Why and why he allows now.

Sorry to say bro

[heygiwriter]

Now i understand why many stories are abandoned on Xossipy

[heygiwriter]

Good night Guys to others who expect me to post update, VERY SORRY. 

let me try to come back asap.

[Muhammad Hasan]

Dear Author, I don't get it why you take comments so seriously. Please we are also readers who comments good. Look at us. At least you could think about us who always likes your Stories.

Ignore some comments and do what you do best.

Thank You.

[a2011]

I think we readers feel so connected to the characters that we feel emotionally vested in the plot. The fact that you got readers so worked up shows how good you are as a storyteller.

[oxy.raj]

Good night Guys to others who expect me to post update, VERY SORRY. 

let me try to come back asap.

Have a tight sleep..may you ignore and forgive worthless commnets by worthless people...

[Mrmoon]

Good night Guys to others who expect me to post update, VERY SORRY. 

let me try to come back asap.

Sorry bro if i hurt your feelings by talking anything wrong.

My sincere appologies.

Iam emotioanlly connected with story due to which i couldnt control my feelimgs when the couple still facing issues from gzutham.

This is your story and i do not hzve any right to interfere.

Please continue and give updates.

Do.not stop the story just because of one person lile me

Sorry once again

[heygiwriter]

Dear Author, I don't get it why you take comments so seriously. Please we are also readers who comments good. Look at us. At least you could think about us who always likes your Stories.

Ignore some comments and do what you do best.

Thank You.

There is a reason

think like this a new user is trying to see what this story offers and by seeing recent interactions and he see some comments like im degrading a women character out of nowhere, don't it look absurd?

I'm trying to improve myself adding more points and advices inside the sexual stories and these pepole out of nowhere suddenly coming and posting a comment should not i react/

wont it upset me?
and this is happening repeatedly

[Mrmoon]

There is a reason

think like this a new user is trying to see what this story offers and by seeing recent interactions and he see some comments like im degrading a women character out of nowhere, don't it look absurd?

I'm trying to improve myself adding more points and advices inside the sexual stories and these pepole out of nowhere suddenly coming and posting a comment should not i react/

wont it upset me?
and this is happening repeatedly

Sorry bro..my mistake.

Please forgive me 

Thanks 

Bye

[Hornytamilan23]

And you guys made the same mistake again…

Another writer, another good story — gone.

Always remember this:

Criticize the character,

but never criticize the writer.

If you want regular updates, make sure he doesn’t get annoyed.

Remember, he is writing for his own enjoyment, so don’t put him under pressure.

This applies to all authors and readers.

[Mrmoon]

And you guys did the same mistake again..

Another writer and another good story, gone..

Here everyome has right to say their opinion and i said
.
But later i felt that author felt bad on my opinion so i immediately said sorry and gave my appologies.

[heygiwriter]

Calm down people, i know the feel of getting blamed. I Don't want any one to experience it. 

Let me take a short break anyalsye and come back to post some days later

[Mrmoon]

There is a reason

think like this a new user is trying to see what this story offers and by seeing recent interactions and he see some comments like im degrading a women character out of nowhere, don't it look absurd?

I'm trying to improve myself adding more points and advices inside the sexual stories and these pepole out of nowhere suddenly coming and posting a comment should not i react/

wont it upset me?
and this is happening repeatedly

Bro..iam.sorry 

Dont.dissopoint hundreds of your fans just because of one simgle man.opinion.

Keep going and continue ur story

Once again my sincere appologies

[VinodV]

Dear All,

Like everyone else, I am also a reader who hates Gautham’s character and Sneha’s cunningness (in some chapters of the story). What we all dislike is Gautham deceiving an innocent husband who holds a great, high-paying job and loves his family. On top of that, making the wife a partner in this deception and planning to break their bondage is worse. Unlike other adult/erotic stories, Suresh's character is neither incapable nor does he have a cuckold mentality. That is exactly what is disturbing all of us. Another reader, named 'Secret Fan', has already pointed all of this out in the comments recently.

The author has a unique style. Unlike many other adult stories on this forum, he doesn’t use secret cameras. Instead, he plays with subtle emotions that many others can't handle and weaves hardcore sex into them. Honestly, this is a masterpiece, but these characters will also haunt us for a very long time.

He has nowhere demeaned the female characters. Having a sex-interested female character (like Sneha) is necessary for an adult story, isn't it? Along with that, he also introduced Varsha's character — a woman of high integrity in a supporting role. Moreover, he recently introduced the graceful Mirna as well. This technique is often used in movies too. If a hero plays a villain's role, they make it a dual role where the same hero plays a good character in the other role. If someone in the security department is shown in a bad light, they place another good security character right next to them.

The author, with great enthusiasm, is expanding what was initially meant to be a short story into a much larger one. Accordingly, punishing the villain might be delayed by a few chapters. Don't we patiently watch movies like Durandhar and Baahubali in theaters for four hours? They didn’t disappoint us, did they? We should only judge the taste of the food after it is completely cooked :-)

[RDX407]

Heggi plz don't take break bro