Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[VinodV]

Good night Heygi!
Thanks for the nice updates today (though my whole day is gone at work:-))

[RCF]

Chapter 145 - New HR and Old Wounds



The first thing she noticed on her new desk were two resignation letters.
One from Gowtham.
One from Varsha.

Mirna’s sharp eyes narrowed. Prakash had already briefed her about how Rahul had played dirty games in the company — leaking tenders and crossing lines. Gowtham and Varsha were the ones who had exposed him. Their sudden resignations seemed highly suspicious.

What? Why would they resign thinking only one can work here? Did I miss any update? Why can't both of them work? One resigning for other but why?  


Mirna observed Varsha closely. 
She looked young, determined, and strikingly beautiful. The nuptial chain around her neck, the bindi on her forehead, and the slight lining of her stomach visible under the displaced pallu suggested she was married and a young mother. 

Could the man inside be her husband? Mirna wondered.

Did you mean to write Varsha observing Mirna? 




“I’m resigning. I submitted the paper. 
You take back yours.”
Gowtham looked up, stunned.

Same confusion, Did any one announced that only job left? 

“You are quitting because of me, right?
 It’s a harsh decision Gowtham. 
What will you do for your regular bills?
Sending money to your parents? 
How will you manage?”

Why do you care miss?
He doesn't want to tell her that he is not quitting as he felt its not a needed one



Varsha sat on her chair, a cloud of tears welling up in her eyes. 
She couldn’t bear it. She drank some water, then remembered the new HR had seen them. 
She worried what if Mirna took action or informed Prakash.
She decided to meet her and apologize.


Varsha is not this kind of girl who would lose herself over Gautham, Even if she loves him for some reason, she is uncharacteristic in tearing his resignation...Felt little weird reading her extreme behavior. Esp when she clearly rejected him last time. 

Felt this chapter was written in a hurry. 

~RCF

[Dorabooji]

Very interesting update

[heygiwriter]

Felt this chapter was written in a hurry. 

~RCF

Sorry realised its a mistake while typing. 

Yes its Varsha who is Observing Mirna.. 

1. Why thinking only one can work here..// You mistook it , the narrative is that, Varsha started believing, Gowtham is moving or leaving because of her.. She thinks, to stop him, its better for her to leave. 

2. Yes Varsha displaying her extreme because, Gowtham's frequent absence in company is just pushing to that.. internally she did not want Gowtham to suffer anything.. 

Her behavior is attributed to his absence, rejection and sudden coldness towards her.  This where you can see her character arc.

[heygiwriter]

Last chapter - educating message to all the porn readers about fantasies and open relationship
This chapter - thought provocating information about marketing and talent identification
Awesome, Heygi... You are truly a responsible and amazing writer!

I wish Mirna Vikram do well in her 'New Role' as I don't know much about her yet:-)

Read my Adultery Mirna – Vikram's Innocent Hotwife [COMPLETED] Story, she is the best character i written ever.

[oxy.raj]

Read my Adultery Mirna – Vikram's Innocent Hotwife [COMPLETED] Story, she is the best character i written ever.

Then why Mirna is in  tears now after speaking with Vikram? Any leads??

[heygiwriter]

Then why Mirna is in tears now after speaking with Vikram? Any leads??

Those who have read the Mirna - Vikram story.

She is coming with Bharath and Her closeness again with Bharath should shock the readers, that's my intent. 

Which means in their world, the couple is into some issue. I don't need to explain here in the story..

But her character here has a purpose. you will get better idea when you get to know in later part of story

[RCF]

Story has finally moved little bit on the front of couple & Gautham.

Few more predictions:

Suresh's brilliant idea is only going to come back and bite him in the ass, the talent whose idea will be picked from all the firms would be Gautham.
He will join V activate group either by making a deal with Suresh or through some other means and the mess is just going to flow from home to office. Now who will make each other betray Aditya is the point, one who betrays ends up losing his wife to Aditya, In Gautham's case Varsha is there...this could one path story could lead...

I have not read Mirna's story but probably she will play a pivotal role in helping out Suresh at some point. Immediate concern is how would Sneha keep Gautham at bay for rest of the week, I think she will give up at some point after resisting initially causing some tension again between the couple, Suresh might now understand how far Sneha could lose herself if he is not there to help her, maybe its a wake up call for him not to leave everything for fate.

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 146 - The Accident


It was 7:20 PM when the calling bell rang.
Suresh had returned home just five minutes earlier.
He was still in his formal shirt, loosening his tie, when the sound echoed through the house.

He smirked, glancing at Sneha who was in the kitchen.
“Is your lover back today so soon?” he teased lightly.

Sneha rolled her eyes with a small smile and throws a tumbler on him in a childish fake anger.
But its a mix of shame and shyness. 

She walked to the door, Surprisingly noticing why Gowtham is so soon.

The moment she opened it, her expression changed.
Two cops stood outside, their faces serious.

“Ma’am, is that Gowtham’s residence?” one of them asked. Pointing at the closed door. 
Sneha’s heart skipped a beat. 
She called out immediately, “Suresh!”

Suresh came to the door, his casual smile fading the second he saw the uniforms.
“Yes? What do you want?” he asked, voice steady but alert.

The senior officer explained calmly, “There was an accident involving this person. 
We called his office and got the address from security. 
We thought his parents or wife would be here, but the door is locked.”

Suresh’s face tightened with worry.
What Accident?
“Is he critical?”

“We don’t know the full extent yet, sir. He was taken to Government Hospital. 
We just came from local station after receiving the report. 

Whom we should call, do you have any of their numbers?
Suresh said no, He is not married and their parents are at distance like it would take hours. 

The officer said, There was significant blood loss from a sharp cut on his leg. We heard someone to has to accompany him, they may even require consent from family for further treatment.”

Suresh and Sneha exchanged a quick, heavy glance. A thousand thoughts passed between them in that single look — concern, suspicion, responsibility.

“We’ll come, we are his family as well,” Suresh said without hesitation. 
“Give us two minutes.”

Sneha quickly grabbed her dupatta and phone while Suresh took the car keys. 
Within minutes, they were in the car, following the security officer vehicle through the evening traffic.

---

At the Hospital, the scene was chaotic but organized. 
They were led to the emergency ward.

Gowtham lay on a bed behind a thin curtain, covered partially by a sheet. His leg was heavily bandaged, blood still visible on parts of the dressing. Monitors beeped steadily around him. He looked pale, unconscious from the sedatives.
The doctor approached them.

You are his relatives?
Yes I'm like a brother to him.. 

Doctor smiled, not to worry.. i would not have discussed with the "I'm Like" people if he had a serious issue. As consents may require real relatives.

Fine you came to take care of him right?

“He lost a lot of blood due to a deep cut from the accident. We’ve taken X-rays. It’s a hairline fracture on the tibia. He’ll need to rest for at least six weeks. We’ve stitched the wound, but we recommend keeping him under observation for the next 3 days to monitor for infection and ensure proper healing.”

Suresh nodded, processing everything.
“Can we see him?”
Yes absolutely.. 

The doctor allowed them a short visit.
Inside the ward, Gowtham slowly stirred as the sedatives began to wear off. 
His eyes opened, hazy at first, then focused on Sneha and Suresh standing there.

They immediately asked gently about his parents’ contact numbers.
Gowtham shook his head weakly.

“No… don’t bother them. 
It will take them 10 hours to reach here. 
I heard what the doctor said. 
This can stay between us. Six weeks… I can manage.”
I don't want them to get worried. 

Suresh and Sneha looked at each other again.
After a brief discussion with the doctor, they agreed.

“We’ll take care of him,” Suresh said firmly. 
“We’ll bring him home once he’s stable enough to be discharged.”
Sneha nodded beside him, her expression a mix of concern and quiet resolve.

[heygiwriter]

Story has finally moved little bit on the front of couple & Gautham.

Few more predictions:

Suresh's brilliant idea is only going to come back and bite him in the ass, the talent whose idea will be picked from all the firms would be Gautham.
He will join V activate group either by making a deal with Suresh or through some other means and the mess is just going to flow from home to office. Now who will make each other betray Aditya is the point, one who betrays ends up losing his wife to Aditya, In Gautham's case Varsha is there...this could one path story could lead...

I have not read Mirna's story but probably she will play a pivotal role in helping out Suresh at some point. Immediate concern is how would Sneha keep Gautham at bay for rest of the week, I think she will give up at some point after resisting initially causing some tension again between the couple, Suresh might now understand how far Sneha could lose herself if he is not there to help her, maybe its a wake up call for him not to leave everything for fate.

~RCF

Mirna will carry the graciousness here as well :) she definitely plays a pivotal role but for whom will be an interesting one.

[Mahesh12345]

Due to this accident may be sneha will be going emotionally attached to Gowtham I think.

[RCF]

Due to this accident may be sneha will be going emotionally attached to Gowtham I think.

Or Maybe he realizes who his true family is and for first time see this as his family rather than trying to split them and use them for his needs.

[oxy.raj]

Or Maybe he realizes who his true family is and for first time see this as his family rather than trying to split them and use them for his needs.

Same pattern with Bharath, Mirna and Vikram..

[Hornytamilan23]

Let him write… he’s still ‘setting the stage,’ as usual. The real drama, apparently, is forever loading.

Now Gowtham is injured — so I’m genuinely curious: from where is Heygi going to magically insert the compulsory sex scenes this time? Divine intervention? Flashbacks? Emergency replacements?

Because if this turns into actual drama without the usual ‘content,’ I’m afraid my interest may need medical support too.?

[Kohlikohli18]

Accident will benefit to Gowtam actually 

1) Gowtam will gain more sympathy and love from the varsha as she feels it happened because of her negligence..

2) Now he can't move leg, sneha will initiate the light romance first and also she starts seducing him as she can't see him depression and she will even told to suresh to make him little happy by light romance...

[Munda007]

OMG.. Now Sneha will be whole day alone with Gowtham and Suresh will be on edge. Will Sneha control her temptation or Gowtham will be able to seduce her?
For sure Gowtham will try to turn the moment for his benefit

Suresh in the meantime might get involved with Mirna, her loneliness and his doubts will give space for them to come together or not? Will Varsha in pursuit of growing get closer to Aditya?

Lots of possibilities and roller coaster rides

[Dorabooji]

Did Gowtham lost his erection and became impotent. It would have been great.:)

[Munda007]

Did Gowtham lost his erection and became impotent. It would have been great.:)

LoL ... Iconic

[heygiwriter]

OMG.. Now Sneha will be whole day alone with Gowtham and Suresh will be on edge. Will Sneha control her temptation or Gowtham will be able to seduce her?
For sure Gowtham will try to turn the moment for his benefit

Suresh in the meantime might get involved with Mirna, her loneliness and his doubts will give space for them to come together or not? Will Varsha in pursuit of growing get closer to Aditya?  

Lots of possibilities and roller coaster rides

Bharath will shoot Suresh. :D 

One who read Mirna - Vikram Story wont comment like this

[VinodV]

1) Right 'Tibia' - correct medical name for that organ. Three days observation for infection & six weeks bed rest - perfect medical treatment. I am surprised for your informative writing. You also explained well about marketing strategies and open relationship side affects in the previous chapters. Great jack of all!

2) Gowtham woke up up at 6.30 am IST next day morning after the candle light fucking. He got ready in two hours and came for breakfast to Sneha's house. He doesn't have a maid also and he wouldn't have been able to clean all the rose petals in his house properly in that two hours span. Went to office straight from Sneha's house and met with accident in that evening. It would be natural to show the uncleaned house to Suresh/Sneha when they bring him back or open his house to get his clothes & dental kit to hospital. Just a thought for the sake of good continuity

3) Initially I didn't like the cinematic turn of his accident, but later realising that it would help in multiple ways to progress the story
a) The couple may get a clue about kidnap while adjusting things in his house
b) Gowtham repents the way the couple treat him as a family member
c) Alternatively - the peaks of sadism can also be shown when he tries to pull Sneha more towards him in the sympathy angle

Yes,  I saw you were mentioning great about Mirna charecter in your comments under that story. I read the synopsis. Yet to read it

Good luck for the remaining chapters of this Part-1 ahead!