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Heygi, can you make sex scenes more vivid and voyeuristic. And lately started to think you are underestimating Sneha in bed. All sex scenes are in a way similar. Let her once break out of that sanskari wife role and show us what a slut she really is... kind of sexual awakening. More like she is dominating.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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17-05-2026, 08:37 AM
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And as far as plot is considered, you are good. Can't expect adhitya darr kind of precision and what's the fun in that. They need erotic scenes in content oriented stories and content in erotic stories. Bizarre.
If this story gets more plot driven, then erotic scenes will get reduced.
To be frank without Suresh, the sex in this story will lose its value. After all its adultery. Let him win all the odds, but for now i am enjoying this. Find more ways to get these female characters get fucked. Why Vinodhini is left out, a BDSM between Adhitya and her, Varsha and gowtham in office place or in cafeteria, sneha and gowtham in the park. A threesome, car sex... endless possibilities
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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(17-05-2026, 01:14 AM)RDX407 Wrote: ![[Image: images-26.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/TDhjDCPs/images-26.jpg)
is this for Sneha?
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When Suresh has the guts to say no to Aditya even after knowing his job is at risk. Why not he say no to Gowtham or Sneha. Does it mean he like sneha opening her legs to Gowtham. Does he believe she is getting better sex from Gowtham than him. Is this not cuckold nature.
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(17-05-2026, 09:52 AM)Arul Pragasam Wrote: When Suresh has the guts to say no to Aditya even after knowing his job is at risk. Why not he say no to Gowtham or Sneha. Does it mean he like sneha opening her legs to Gowtham. Does he believe she is getting better sex from Gowtham than him. Is this not cuckold nature.
Well said.
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(17-05-2026, 09:52 AM)Arul Pragasam Wrote: When Suresh has the guts to say no to Aditya even after knowing his job is at risk. Why not he say no to Gowtham or Sneha. Does it mean he like sneha opening her legs to Gowtham. Does he believe she is getting better sex from Gowtham than him. Is this not cuckold nature.
We simply have to assume if Suresh says no to Gautham then there is no story further to write.
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Hello author, we are expecting some updates today aa it's Sunday you can plan maximum parts or if you are busy please let us know so we will logout.
And btw, soon suresh and sneha will know about Gowtham's plan its easy as they way Gowtham playing with mobile and taking selfies i thought sneha will crack it but nah she is busy in enjoying the pleasure
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(17-05-2026, 09:52 AM)Arul Pragasam Wrote: When Suresh has the guts to say no to Aditya even after knowing his job is at risk. Why not he say no to Gowtham or Sneha. Does it mean he like sneha opening her legs to Gowtham. Does he believe she is getting better sex from Gowtham than him. Is this not cuckold nature.
The answer is already in Chapter 129
//He was deeply conflicted. When he realize, just in the morning, Sneha announced about Gowtham asking her for sex and he allowed it.
He finally got the answer for it.. Deep down, he could somehow allow Sneha to sleep with Gowtham — for whatever reason, even if it hurt like hell. But he could never do the same with Aditya. Never.
He now realized Sneha had been right all along. Gowtham was someone they could still control — younger, manageable, someone they could eventually push out when the time came. He was a known devil.
But Aditya? He was something far more dangerous. He wouldn’t just sleep with Sneha — he would control her. He would control both of them.
Like Sneha had warned, Aditya wasn’t someone they could handle. The moment they let him in, he would own them completely.
That terrifying truth made Suresh want to detach from Aditya and the entire V-Activate Group right away, no matter the consequences.//
Basically he was okay with it as it is already happened and a lot time he had registered over conversation that its not sex , its siding with Gowtham hurt him and made him to extend of divorcing. Even in the start i have mentioned they couple was open enough for adventures.
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17-05-2026, 10:49 AM
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There are few questions though..
1. Suresh or Sneha never thought what would happen if sneha gets pregnant as Gowtham keep pouring his potent semen inside her every time.
2. Not a single time, sneha told Gowtham that she is not in safe period and she is fertile and ask him to wear condoms.
3. Not a single time, sneha took the birth control pills after sex with Gowtham.
4. No solid reason why she has cook for him every single day. She is worried and calls him when he is not returned from office. Is that because he is giving sex to her. There is something emotional connect even though it is not love as such.
5. Gowtham came to house as unwanted guest and called suresh bro. Now he has taken his wife and no more calls him bro. Also he is not calling sneha names. Is he playing safe for the fear of getting thrown out of their life.
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Very well written dear writer.
Gowtham have destroyed all evidences in phone and lock code changed. The unexpected twist would be bringing Rakesh and his wife, if that was not any story woven by Gowtham.
As someone already guessed here earlier, Aditya and team should help Suresh come out of Gowtham himself.
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(17-05-2026, 10:49 AM)Nesamanikumar Wrote: There are few questions though..
1. Suresh or Sneha never thought what would happen if sneha gets pregnant as Gowtham keep pouring his potent semen inside her every time.
2. Not a single time, sneha told Gowtham that she is not in safe period and she is fertile and ask him to wear condoms.
3. Not a single time, sneha took the birth control pills after sex with Gowtham.
4. No solid reason why she has cook for him every single day. She is worried and calls him when he is not returned from office. Is that because he is giving sex to her. There is something emotional connect even though it is not love as such.
5. Gowtham came to house as unwanted guest and called suresh bro. Now he has taken his wife and no more calls him bro. Also he is not calling sneha names. Is he playing safe for getting thrown out of their life.
1-3 -> I don't feel like elaborating it as a liberty .. i let it people assume she had taken pills.
4 --> they had this bond even before they got sexually together, he call them bro, anni (Sister in law at start).
5 --> Post sex, he used all this to affirm he is dominant and he lost respect to Suresh long back..
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(17-05-2026, 10:14 AM)Kohlikohli18 Wrote: Hello author, we are expecting some updates today aa it's Sunday you can plan maximum parts or if you are busy please let us know so we will logout.
And btw, soon suresh and sneha will know about Gowtham's plan its easy as they way Gowtham playing with mobile and taking selfies i thought sneha will crack it but nah she is busy in enjoying the pleasure
Yes 10 chapters planned for today.. im not sure how many i can write and post :) have to go out for chililng :)
but hope todays chapter will be surprising.. some may even start bashing me :D
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(17-05-2026, 10:56 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: 1-3 -> I don't feel like elaborating it as a liberty .. i let it people assume she had taken pills.
4 --> they had this bond even before they got sexually together, he call them bro, anni (Sister in law at start).
5 --> Post sex, he used all this to affirm he is dominant and he lost respect to Suresh long back..
Only 5% of the stories attract such questions in this forum because the story and the roles went deep into audience minds and they own Suresh & Sneha roles. Rest of the stories, readers would just enjoy the sex part and leave. Congratulations.
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(17-05-2026, 10:57 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: Yes 10 chapters planned for today.. im not sure how many i can write and post :) have to go out for chililng :)
but hope todays chapter will be surprising.. some may even start bashing me :D
That means more sex for Sneha and more humiliation for Suresh :)
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(17-05-2026, 10:56 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: 1-3 -> I don't feel like elaborating it as a liberty .. i let it people assume she had taken pills.
4 --> they had this bond even before they got sexually together, he call them bro, anni (Sister in law at start).
5 --> Post sex, he used all this to affirm he is dominant and he lost respect to Suresh long back..
Only because of suresh he got sneha. If he lost respect to suresh, he can humiliate him and fuck his wife without any rules or anything make her moan loud beg direct in his front. He can show his power and say, you useless cuck see how your wife is begging for mine cock and make him lick and clean the well fucked vagina of sneha. Why would he maintain a distance and accept whatever sneha says. So suresh is not man enough. In that case, even sneha wont respect him and how would person like Gowtham would do. It looks suresh is fearing gowtham as he would take his wife from him and it is the reason he is keeping mum.
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(17-05-2026, 10:56 AM)heygiwriter Wrote: 1-3 -> I don't feel like elaborating it as a liberty .. i let it people assume she had taken pills.
4 --> they had this bond even before they got sexually together, he call them bro, anni (Sister in law at start).
5 --> Post sex, he used all this to affirm he is dominant and he lost respect to Suresh long back..
5) Gowtham must starting respecting from now on when Suresh goes there as superior boss in his company from V-active. Varsha will make Gowtham to withdraw his resignation as she also another spy appointed by Prakash
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17-05-2026, 11:14 AM
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(17-05-2026, 11:06 AM)Nesamanikumar Wrote: Only because of suresh he got sneha. If he lost respect to suresh, he can humiliate him and fuck his wife without any rules or anything make her moan loud beg direct in his front. He can show his power and say, you useless cuck see how your wife is begging for mine cock and make him lick and clean the well fucked vagina of sneha. Why would he maintain a distance and accept whatever sneha says. So suresh is not man enough. In that case, even sneha wont respect him and how would person like Gowtham would do. It looks suresh is fearing gowtham as he would take his wife from him and it is the reason he is keeping mum.
Yes. Author clearly established multiple times earlier that Suresh had worry that Sneha already supporting Gowtham, helped him manipulated the rules...hence he went upto divorce level too with broken heart.
Suresh now has some confidence after patching up with Sneha and she assured that she will close this after investigation
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(17-05-2026, 11:04 AM)a2011 Wrote: That means more sex for Sneha and more humiliation for Suresh :)
Of course, Sneha is definitely here to suffer more and humiliate Suresh by losing herself over and over for sex. I am just hoping Author doesn't mess up the love bond between the couple to just write something radical and obsess over giving something that no one can predict. It kills the story if it is driven by such thoughts.
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(17-05-2026, 11:04 AM)a2011 Wrote: That means more sex for Sneha and more humiliation for Suresh :)
For God sake... Suresh should not be humiliated any more!
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17-05-2026, 11:18 AM
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(17-05-2026, 11:16 AM)RCF Wrote: Of course, Sneha is definitely here to suffer more and humiliate Suresh by losing herself over and over for sex. I am just hoping Author doesn't mess up the love bond between the couple to just write something radical and obsess over giving something that no one can predict. It kills the story if it is driven by such thoughts.
Well said. Let's hope the bondage will be intact...
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