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(05-05-2026, 11:50 PM)Mukul@99 Wrote: You have such a unique authorial voice—it is absolutely engaging. The imagery in your writing is incredibly vivid & the way you structured it with such a unique perspective, made it so interesting ! Such a fantastic read. A story with heat and substance. An absolute erotic update.
You are a great storyteller. Eagerly awaiting the next update.
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Nice updates.
Next updates - May be after deep thinking, she realized she enjoyed it and now become more bold at home.
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The train pulled into New Delhi station just before dawn. The platform was already alive with coolies and early commuters. Monica and Rakesh stepped down carefully. Monica’s legs still trembled. Dried cum had crusted on her skin beneath her T-shirt, and every step reminded her of the lower berth.
She turned to Rakesh, concern clear in her voice.
“Rakesh… are you okay? Tell me honestly.”
Rakesh nodded weakly, eyes swollen and red. Monica opened her purse, took out a band-aid and a strip of painkillers, and pressed them into his hand.
“Here. Put this on and take one painkiller. We’ll check everything properly once we reach home.”
Rakesh looked at the medicines, then at her. His voice was hoarse.
“Monica… we should report this to the cops. Those men were dangerous.”
Monica shook her head.
“No. Not now. Let’s just go home first. We’ll talk about everything there.”
They took a cab and reached their flat in heavy silence. The moment the door closed, both of them collapsed onto the sofa, completely drained.
After a long, suffocating pause, Rakesh finally spoke, voice cracking.
“Monica… I’m so sorry. I couldn’t save you. I was completely useless. I’m a terrible husband.”
Monica turned toward him and placed a gentle hand on his arm.
“Rakesh, stop. You were helpless. They had weapons. They could have done anything to you. I did whatever I did only to keep you safe. That’s all.”
Rakesh nodded, but his eyes stayed distant. Another long silence passed.
Then he spoke again, quieter this time, almost unable to stop himself.
“But Monica… the way you were moaning… screaming… it looked like you were actually enjoying it. Like you wanted them to do those things to you.”
Monica froze. Her face slowly turned toward him. The softness in her eyes disappeared in an instant.
“So this is what you were thinking the whole night?” Her voice was low and sharp. “While I was on my knees sucking their cocks, you were thinking I’m some randi who was enjoying it?”
Tears welled up in her beautiful eyes and spilled down her cheeks.
“I did everything only because I was scared they would cut your balls off if I refused! I was saving you, Rakesh! And here you are accusing me of being a willing slut? … how could you even think that for fuck sake?”
Her voice broke. She was crying properly now, shoulders shaking with anger and hurt.
Rakesh looked horrified. He immediately tried to backtrack.
“Monica… no… I didn’t mean it like that. I’m sorry… I was just… I don’t know what I was saying.”
Monica stood up abruptly, wiping her tears with angry hands.
“Think whatever the fuck you want. I’m exhausted. I need to rest. I want to be alone right now.”
She walked into the bedroom, slammed the door, and locked it from inside.
Rakesh sat alone on the sofa, head buried in his hands.
It was 3:17 AM when Monica’s eyes snapped open in the dark bedroom.
The lie she had told Rakesh was eating her alive.
“I only did it to save him…”
But that was bullshit.
She had enjoyed every filthy second of it. The moment Javed’s massive black cock stretched her lips… Rafiq’s tongue buried deep in her ass while his fingers worked her clit… the way her body had completely betrayed her, grinding back, moaning like a desperate whore, pulling their heads harder into her tits. She had wanted more. She had wanted them to fuck her properly — both of them at once. She had wanted Rakesh to watch every degrading second.
And the dirtiest part? She had manipulated her own husband into believing she was a pure victim.
A wave of filthy guilt mixed with raw, burning lust hit her so hard she whimpered.
Monica sat up and quickly stripped off her T-shirt, jeans, and soaked panties. She lay back completely naked, spread her legs wide, and shoved two fingers straight into her dripping pussy.
“Fuck…” she gasped.
Her fingers moved fast, curling inside her, finding that spot that made her hips jerk violently. With her other hand she pinched and twisted her stiff nipple the same way Javed had sucked it.
In her mind, it was Javed’s thick, veiny cock again — stretching her throat while Rafiq’s tongue fucked her tight asshole like an animal.
“Uhhh… yes… deeper…” she moaned softly, now using three fingers, pumping them in and out of her soaked cunt. The wet, obscene sounds filled the dark room. Her juices were running down her ass and soaking the bedsheet.
She imagined Rakesh watching — broken, crying, his small cock useless while these two brutal goondas used his wife like their personal fucktoy.
“Rakesh… you’re nothing compared to them… their cocks make yours look like a joke…” she whispered viciously to herself, fingers moving faster, thumb rubbing her swollen clit in tight circles.
Her back arched hard. She added a fourth finger, stretching herself wide, imagining it was Javed’s wrist-thick cock forcing its way into her married pussy.
“Javed… Rafiq… fuck me… both of you… ruin my cunt and ass together…” she gasped, fucking herself harder and faster, the bed creaking beneath her.
Her heavy tits bounced wildly with every thrust of her hand. Sweat covered her entire body. She was right on the edge.
The final image that pushed her over was Javed deliberately smearing his thick cum all over Rakesh’s face while staring straight into his eyes.
“OHHH FUCKKKK—!” Monica bit her pillow hard as the orgasm ripped through her. Her pussy clenched violently around her fingers, squirting hot liquid all over her hand and the bedsheet. Her whole body shook for nearly twenty seconds, legs trembling uncontrollably, a long broken moan muffled into the pillow.
She lay there panting, fingers still buried inside herself, slowly coming down from the most intense orgasm of her life.
Guilt crashed over her immediately.
“I’m such a dirty fucking randi… I lied to my husband and now I’m fingering myself thinking about the men who humiliated him…”
But even the guilt felt dangerously kinky. It made her pussy twitch again.
She slowly pulled her fingers out, brought them to her lips, and sucked them clean — tasting her own juices mixed with the memory of Javed’s cum.
Next morning, 8:40 AM.
They met in the living room before Monica left for office. Rakesh looked exhausted, still wearing yesterday’s clothes.
“Monica… we really should report this. We can’t just keep quiet about it.”
Monica shook her head calmly.
“No, Rakesh. Reporting it will only bring more trouble — legal cases, statements, media attention. It could get dangerous for both of us. Those men might even find us. Let’s just keep this between us. It’ll be our dirty little secret.”
Rakesh looked down at the floor, ashamed.
Monica stepped closer and gently lifted his chin with her fingers. Her voice softened.
“Rakesh… about last night… I’m sorry I snapped at you. I was angry and exhausted. It wasn’t fair. You didn’t do anything wrong. None of this was your fault.”
She took a deep breath, then gave him a small, strange smile.
“Just remember — whatever happened… it’s our dirty little secret now. And we need to move forward"
Rakesh looked into her eyes for a long moment. Something dark and unspoken passed between them. He nodded slowly.
Monica kissed his forehead, picked up her bag, and walked to the door.
Just before leaving, she turned back one last time.
“Rakesh… I’ll be home early tonight..tum ghar pe hi Rahena and take rest..okay?”
The door closed behind her.
Rakesh stood alone in the living room, heart heavy, his cock already half-hard from the way she had said “dirty little secret.”
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Such a fantastic read. A story with heat and substance. It owned me from beginning. Beautiful descriptive writing that doesn’t hold back. The use of sensory details made the setting feel vivid. The story is so tightly written, highly entertaining, definitely immersive, and all-around delightful.
Eagerly awaiting the next update.
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Amazing! I was hooked from start to finish and couldn’t stop reading till the last update.
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The summer heat in Noida had turned vicious. By mid-april, the afternoons felt like they were burning everything in sight. Monica had been shifted to the underwriting team and was now mostly working from home on the UK project. The days had started feeling long and strangely empty since Rakesh was mostly in office.. Pointless client calls, back-to-back presentations, and the same boring discussions on loop.
That afternoon, she did not feel like working..She searched for her packet of cigarette, but there was none. She really wanted either cigarettes or weed.
She had to step out even in the blazing sun.
She changed into a pair of jeans and a plain white top, tied her hair loosely, and left the society. The moment she stepped outside, the sun hit her hard. Sweat formed quickly on her neck and between her breasts as she walked toward the narrow bazaar bordering the slum.
She stopped in front of a small, rundown tong shop.
A faded board simply said Paan & Cigarettes. It looked ordinary from outside — chips packets hanging on a string, a dirty fridge with cold drinks, and the smell of fresh paan and bidis. But everyone around knew what was actually sold here.
Sadlur was sitting behind the counter when Monica arrived. The moment he saw her, his face changed. A thick, bald, dark-skinned man in a faded delivery uniform was sitting on a stool in front of him, chatting casually.
Sadlur quickly turned to the man
“ Bhai, chalo fir kabhi baat kartein is bare Mai... baad mein milta hoon.”
The bald man looked at Sadlur, then noticed Monica standing there. A slow grin appeared on his face. He got up without argument, picked up his helmet, and walked toward his bike. As he passed Monica, he looked at her openly — eyes moving from her face down to her body — before riding away.
Monica stepped up to the counter and spoke casually.
“Ek Gold Flake Kings dena...”
Sadlur quickly gave her the packet and then leaned forward, lowering his voice.
“Last wala maal kaisa tha madam?”
Monica glanced around once before replying softly.
“It was okay. But I want something stronger this time.Please”
Sadlur nodded. He bent down, took out a small black packet from under the counter, and slid it toward her.
“Ye lijie. Is baar ka double strong hai.”
Monica quickly put the packet in her purse, paid, and walked away.
When she reached the main gate of her gated Society, she saw the same bald delivery man standing there with a heavy bag. The moment he saw Monica, he walked up to her.
“Madam, B Wing Diamond Society… yeh address theek hai na?”
Monica stopped and replied in a calm, slightly polished tone.
“Haan, address sahi hai. B Wing society ke doosre side pe hai. Aapko ghum ke jaana padega.”
The man nodded, then looked at her curiously.
“Aap bhi yahin rehti ho kya?”
Monica gave a small smile.
“Haan… ”
There was a short pause. Monica tilted her head slightly and spoke again, keeping her voice casual.
“Main aapko us dukaan pe dekha tha… paan-cigarette wali chhoti si dukaan pe. Aap us dukaandaar ko kaise jaante ho?”
The bald man wiped sweat from his head with the back of his hand and replied casually.
“Haan, uska cousin mera dost hai. Kabhi-kabhi milne chala jaata hoon.”
Monica nodded lightly, maintaining a neutral expression. She didn’t push further.
The man looked at her for another second, that same crude grin returning briefly, before he picked up his bag and left..
He didn’t seem to know anything about Sadlur’s real dealings — just a regular delivery guy who happened to know someone connected to him. Still, the way he had looked at her stayed in her..
Monica got back to her apartment, the afternoon sun still burning on her skin. She bolted the door, cranked the AC to maximum, and let the cold air wash over her sweat-damp neck and cleavage. The laptop was already open for the client workshop. She joined the call, typed “Will be off camera guys” in the chat, and muted herself. The voices droned on — the same pointless slides, the same fake enthusiasm. She didn’t care.
She took the small black packet from her purse, that sticky “double strong” maal Sadlur had given her, and rolled it quickly.
The first few pulls hit hard. This wasn’t the usual stuff. It was denser, heavier. A slow, deep heat began pooling between her legs.
She lay back against the pillows, joint in one hand, and let the memories come.
Javed’s huge, dark cock flashed behind her eyes — thick, veiny, the head almost purple when he was fully hard. She remembered how it had forced her open that night in the train, She could still feel the burn, the way her mouth had clenched around that girth, the wet slapping sound every time he bottomed out.
The weed made the flashback viciously vivid. Her free hand slid down her stomach, under the waistband of her panties. She was already soaked. Two fingers pushed straight into her slick heat. She gasped at how sensitive she was — the strong maal had turned every nerve raw. She pumped her fingers slowly at first, then faster, curling them against that spot inside while her thumb rubbed tight circles over her swollen clit.
She kept the laptop on the bed beside her, camera and mic safely off. Her other hand pushed her white top up, unhooked her bra and yanked it off. Her massive tits spilled free, heavy and warm. She squeezed one hard, rolling the stiff nipple between her fingers the way Javed used to, and moaned his name out loud.
“Javed… fuck… your cock was so fucking big…”
She kicked the jeans the rest of the way off. Now she was only in panties, top bunched above her breasts, legs spread wide on the bed. The mirror on the opposite wall showed her exactly what she looked like — flushed face, parted lips, one hand buried between her thighs, the other mauling her own tit. The sight made her even wetter. She added a third finger, fucking herself harder, hips lifting off the mattress. Wet sounds filled the room. She was close — so fucking close — the orgasm coiling tight and low in her belly.
The doorbell rang.
She ignored it, fingers moving faster, breath coming in short gasps.
It rang again. Longer this time.
“Behenchod!” she hissed, yanking her fingers out of her dripping pussy. “Who the fuck is that now? I was just about to cum…”
She sat up, frustrated and still throbbing. She grabbed her jeans and pulled them on roughly over her bare, wet pussy. The bra stayed on the bed. She pulled the white top down over her naked breasts.
Without the bra the heavy breasts hung free, swaying and jiggling with every angry movement. The thin cotton did almost nothing to hide them. Her nipples, still rock-hard from arousal and the cold AC, poked out obscenely. She didn’t give a single fuck. She was too pissed off and too close to orgasm to care who saw what.
She stormed to the door -The same bald, fat delivery man from the paan shop stop there, sweating like a pig in the corridor heat. His faded uniform clung to his thick body. He held a medium-sized parcel and looked startled by the sudden angry face in front of him.
She snapped, "Yes, what do you want?”
He wiped his forehead with the back of his hand. “Madam, agle flat mein koi nahi hai. Aap ye parcel le sakti ho? aap unko de dena.”
Monica was really irritated and wanted to blast him, but she just said, “Theek hai.”
The man thanked her. “Thank you madam. Sign kar dije please.”
He handed her the receipt book and pen.
As she took it and signed, standing in the doorway with sunlight streaming in from the corridor window at an angle, the light hit her chest directly. The white top turned almost transparent in the bright light. The full, heavy shape of her braless tits was completely visible — the deep cleavage, the way they hung and shifted as she wrote, and most of all her large, dark nipples standing out hard and obvious against the thin fabric. Every jiggle, every breath made them move. He had a perfect, unobstructed view from less than four feet away for the entire time she signed, took the parcel, and spoke to him.
She signed, handed the book back, took the parcel. He thanked her again, “Thank you madam,” and turned to leave.
Monica stopped him. “Tum is building mein naya delivery kar rahe ho kya?”
He turned back, nodded, and smiled sheepishly. “Haan madam, naya route mila hai. Last week se shuru kiya.”
He walked away down the corridor.
Monica closed the door and leaned her back against it. The parcel was still in her hand. Only then did the full realization hit her.
She looked down at herself. In the light inside the flat she could see exactly how exposed she had been. The white top clung to her sweat-damp skin, stretched tight over the heavy curves of her tits. Her nipples were still visibly erect, dark circles clearly outlined. He had stood there talking to her, watching her sign, handing over the parcel — for at least five full minutes — with her massive bra-less tits practically on full display.
And he hadn’t flinched. Not once. No lingering stare, no awkward cough, no crude comment. He had kept his eyes mostly on her face, answered politely in that calm, sheepish way, and left.
A slow, reluctant smile curved Monica’s lips.
“Ugly monkey,” she muttered, but there was no real anger left. “Is he gay or what? Didn’t even flinch after getting a clear view of my tits for five minutes straight.”
She shook her head, still smiling!
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This is amazing ! I love your creativity. Every sentence flows beautifully and is exceptionally well-organized and persuasive. The illustrations are so appealing & plot so captivating and absolutely intriguing characters. You have a unique voice that makes your stories immediately engaging.
Love the way you structured it with such a unique perspective & made it so interesting! You are a great storyteller. Thank you for an absolute surreal reading experience. Eagerly awaiting the next update.
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Good Updates. Poor Hubby does not now Wifey's Devilish hanging behavior
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Which app do you use to make AI images? They are so realistic
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Sexy story with Sexiest character. Superb BrO.
Please update soon. I’m waiting for Monica’s adventurous scenes.
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Even the next morning, as Monica sat through the endless office presentation in her office, her mind kept drifting back to that fat, bald, dark-skinned delivery man.
The way his eyes had stayed politely on her face while her heavy, braless tits had been swinging free under that thin white top. The way he hadn’t leered, hadn’t stammered, hadn’t even adjusted his crotch like every other desi mard would have done. He had just stood there, sweating in the corridor heat, calm, almost amused, and walked away like her body was nothing special.
It infuriated her. It aroused her. She had gone to the ladies’ washroom twice during the day, locked the door, and fingered herself furiously to the memory of his thick belly, his faded uniform clinging to his sweaty skin, and that slow, controlled grin. Each time she released, it was his face she saw — ugly, bald, ordinary — yet somehow more masculine than men she knew closely or her husband for that matter.
The thought why not a little dirty dark experiment?
She opened the e-commerce app, scrolled without thinking, and ordered a random dress she could find — a tiny, skin-tight bodycon dress with a neckline that plunged to the navel and a hem that barely covered the ass. Delivery by 4 PM. She knew the route. She knew who would be delivering it.
Thursday afternoon arrived hot and merciless.
Monica had her usual pointless client meetings in the morning and got free by afternoon. She stood in front of the mirror in her bedroom and decided what to wear!
The kurti she choose was otherwise decent, but she deliberately kept the top two buttons open which made her neckline low and wide. She decided not to wear a Bra today as well, which meant her massive, heavy breasts spilled out on both sides, the deep olive skin of her areolas visible no matter how she moved. The thin fabric clung to every curve, stretched drum-tight over her thick, dark nipples that were already stiff from anticipation and the cold air. Though incredibly sexy, the kurti still gave a homely feeling like many women would go Bra less at home on a hot summer afternoon..
But the real killer was the shorts she put on below! , she wore the tiniest pair of black cotton micro-shorts — the kind that disappeared between her ass cheeks and rode so high in front that the puffy outline of her bare pussy lips was unmistakable. The seam pressed right into her slit. She turned sideways, checked the mirror, and smiled darkly. From the right angle, anyone standing close would see the dark shadow of her trimmed bush and the wet sheen already forming between her thighs.
She tied her hair in a messy high ponytail, and spritzed perfume between her tits and on the insides of her thighs.
At 3:47 PM the doorbell rang.
She checked the peephole.
There he was.
Same faded uniform, same thick belly, same bald head shining with sweat, same dark, ugly face. He held the slim red package under one arm and wiped his forehead with the back of his hand.
She took a deep breath, felt her nipples tighten even more, and opened the door.
The moment his eyes landed on her, something shifted.
His usual sheepish grin faltered. His gaze dropped — slowly, deliberately — from her flushed face to the obscene spill of her tits, lingered on the hard bullets of her nipples poking obscenely through the white cotton kurti, then travelled down the flat plane of her stomach to the tiny black shorts that left nothing to the imagination. He stared openly at the way the fabric clung to her puffy mound, at the clear outline of her lips, at the tiny wet spot already darkening the crotch.
He just looked. The bulge in his loose trousers twitched visibly.
Then that same slow, dangerous grin spread across his face as if nothing happened and it's usual business. The man has remarkable composure and professionalism - one must say.
“Madam… aapka package,” he said, voice calm as usual
Monica stepped aside, letting him see her in full profile ..
“ andar aa jao na… thoda garam hai bahar,” she said sweetly, as if she were fully dressed.
He stepped inside. The door clicked shut behind him.
The small living room suddenly felt smaller. His thick, masculine presence filled it — the smell of his sweat, the faint trace of bidis, the heat radiating off his body. Monica could feel her pussy throbbing in time with her heartbeat.
He held out the package. “Madam Sign aur OTP chahiye.”
She took her phone, opened the message , and held it deliberately at chest level. Then she bent forward at the waist — slowly — pretending to read the OTP while giving him an unobstructed view straight down her bra less kurti. Her massive tits hung heavy and bare, nipples inches from his face, swinging slightly as she moved.
“Sahi hai na?” she asked, eyes flicking up to meet his.
The delivery man’s jaw tightened. But he didn’t look away. He stared straight at her exposed breasts, then at the phone, then back at her tits.
“Haan… sahi hai,” he muttered, but his voice had dropped an octave.
Monica straightened just enough to make her breasts jiggle, then bent again, this time even lower, letting one dark nipple almost slip free.
“OTP sahi hai na, bhaisaab?” she repeated, “Ya kuch aur bhi dekhna hai?”
The man’s eyes darkened. He didn’t flinch. Instead, he slowly pulled out his own phone, typed the OTP with thick fingers, and looked straight into her eyes.
“Sahi bhi hai… aur badiya bhi, madam,” he said, voice calm " Delivery package dekh lijie"
She hadn’t expected him to match her so boldly. The controlled, masculine confidence in that ugly, bald face was quite rare, especially the composure the man had... Must be really desperate for this job, Monica thought
She replied. “Ha thik hai”
As he pulled back, he casually reached down and scratched his balls suddenly — right in front of her — adjusting the thick, obvious bulge that had grown down his left thigh. The movement was crude, unapologetic, and it sent a violent shiver straight through Monica’s core.
He grinned wider, that same slow, filthy grin with confidence of a composed man..
“Thank you, madam.Have a good day.” He spoke in broken English in what seemed like uneducated accent..
He turned, opened the door, and walked out into the corridor without another glance.
The moment the door clicked shut she dropped the package on the sofa and muttered...
“Fuck… that ugly bastard…” she gasped, “He didn’t even lose control… he fucking owned me…”
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Super update !!! Rocking it !!!
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(15-05-2026, 01:18 AM)qazmlp Wrote: Super update !!! Rocking it !!!
Thanks sir for your encouragement
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This is beautifully written—clear, vivid. Your writing is so engaging; I couldn't stop reading ! The way you have it structured with such a unique perspective makes it so interesting ! The characters feel real and very detailed and the circumstances that lead to those scenes quite intricate. The transitions are seamless; the argument builds naturally to a satisfying conclusion.
Story, which has implications far beyond the obvious, so skillfully handled. Can tell that you are putting a lot of work into this. Thank you for an absolute surreal reading experience. You are a great story-teller.
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(15-05-2026, 08:02 AM)Mukul@99 Wrote: This is beautifully written—clear, vivid. Your writing is so engaging; I couldn't stop reading ! The way you have it structured with such a unique perspective makes it so interesting ! The characters feel real and very detailed and the circumstances that lead to those scenes quite intricate. The transitions are seamless; the argument builds naturally to a satisfying conclusion.
Story, which has implications far beyond the obvious, so skillfully handled. Can tell that you are putting a lot of work into this. Thank you for an absolute surreal reading experience. You are a great story-teller.
thanks for your great encouragement
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Looks like the delivery guy leaving unfazed has rattled Monica. Waiting for the bald bastard to get lucky
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Wow... Amazing writing. Very descriptive. Had me dripping like Monica
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