Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[imles4le]

Kya story khatam hone ke baad shaadi karne ka intezaar tha ???
Toh 15 se 20 saal shaadi postpone karna....

Hahaha Hahaha.Hahaha Hahaha.Hahaha....

[val.coutinho]

Sean please update man.... how long shud we keep waiting and waiting

[srider69]

One small update and that is it. Again, a couple of months. Of course, he is busy. And we respect that he is giving updates despite his busy schedule.. but we are only saying out of passion for this story.

[val.coutinho]

This story started in 2023 and 3 years down the line Anita has only sucked and massaged Hariya's cock.... As for Hariya he has only sucked Anita's nude boobs/nipples and is still longing for more.... God knows how many more years it will take for them to fuck each other.... Or rather to say anyone of the two take initiative to have sex and fulfil their bodily desire

[imles4le]

This story started in 2023 and 3 years down the line Anita has only sucked and massaged Hariya's cock.... As for Hariya he has only sucked Anita's nude boobs/nipples and is still longing for more.... God knows how many more years it will take for them to fuck each other.... Or rather to say anyone of the two take initiative to have sex and fulfil their bodily desire

Lagta hai kahani likhane wala aise hi chumma chaati aaaur gaaand maslai Kara kar Hi sexy Anita ko hariya ke 10/12 bachhe bhi paida Kara dega..... Hahahha Hahahha Hahahha 

[Hellybelly]

After a long time I would like to say something..,

I am reading this story since 2017, when it was first started not sure if it was (2017-18-19)
2026 mid is running
Almost a decade has passed if I am right.
Story has not passed it's first fucking(newer version)
Erotica or any long novel need to have tight plot, story lacks it, writer must understand that you are not writing a periodical which will last for decades. You are writing an erotica which will last for maximum 500 updates and almost 3000 pages. Where you will slowly develop a charecter and a plot which will eventually end when the character which once started as closed sanskari female would now has reached the upper limits of sex.
Now the reality is, the first extremely erotic version has completely been vanished and new version which is unnecessarily streched is here.
How can readers engage it for another decade?

Have sean ever thought that how great writer he is?, if he has the ability and we do believe that he has, he will create many other anitas in other stories with other name..

He must understand that he is the greatest writer and master of erotica which this anonymous site of stories will ever be able to produce? I'm not flattering I'm saying the truth......but .....but......but
He must also understand that his abilities does not end with one story only ...there are many plots which he can create in friction of seconds...

Now

What he can do


Mix the both plots,....like you can create some parallel event which would create newer events and almost all readers has read the both stories......by. Doing that you'll have a maximised streched story without any new updates. In one update you can mix both.

And


You'll be much more relieved as you will have few new characters as well

Even in its minute to minute details this story has always lacked the essential dick rising details of an erotica
(Lund is 8 inches long...readers don't know if that's circumcised or not) Can a female handle a massive 8 inch inside her anus or not, absolutely no realism... (We can acknowledge the way he stretched the dream sequence is fucking questionable) It was as long as some stories are there in forum

Add details which are humane and realistic, and you can do it.....older character of jeetu was way more erotic as hi actions were more frequent ad humane. Kindly consider my request and add older story in this as a flashback and then continue it without streching it long you must understand the Time .....it's been a decade and you'll never be able to complete it as you don't have time, by adding both you'll be able to create a 300 updates story withing 200 updates....we all are aware of both so we will relate....

Only one story will not decide you as writer but one 1decadelongfailedstory will decide if you are a good writer or good for nothing.

Even novels are not this much confused in plot and actions


I'm telling you because I read it for so long and I keep a very deeper understanding of fiction than 90% of your readers...
I


Even after this much involvement you're not able to do it


Then I'm asking all the readers and with humbleness to you

That I can take this story forward and I will create an erotica this world of readwrs will remember

If you agree with me then do it as I suggested you(you'll thank me) and I'd be happy to suggest you wit9any demands,(just drop a text in DM)

If you don't want to do it then it's okay...

I'm suggesting all readers to find another way ...don't force, ask or demand, a writer's nonchalant attitude is okay but a nonchalant reader is death of writer...


Thank you

[Hellybelly]

1- with next update give something to readers that has never happened before

2- add flashback of old story within this story in one update that update should include one more charecter Jeetu who will not appear in new updates as long as it is required.

3- complete the first session with hariya as his leg is broken since last 3 months even real broken legs would be fine since then?

4- as anita is shameless she can involve in casual sexual acts with strangers as well so Ramu. Must get something..not sex but definitely something

5- jeetu and hariya will continue for rest....older version will provide readers a very wide storyline so they will not be upset

6- people related with details , they are not here to imagine everything otherwise you don't need to write anything...readers can imagine everything ?

7- add humane kink stuff ...jeetu was very good at it, nose licking, spitting in mouth and snuffing was revolutionary in erotica when you wrote that back then...that's why readers are associated with you, not because they want fucking, they wanted novelty without sudden events.

8 - add parallel character and plots, like new job of anita and quicky fucking of her in multiple instances, that's soul of main character that she is open to sex in veils

9- as it is already long enough to take it forward...now give tight action packed yet with greater details and erotic update, you know you repeate dialogues so many times that even real life events would never..
10- stop repeating, start reacting, I'm saying is because you always demand that readers don't engage, now I'm engaging in the core of the story


You should act now

[val.coutinho]

After a long time I would like to say something..,

I am reading this story since 2017, when it was first started not sure if it was (2017-18-19)
2026 mid is running
Almost a decade has passed if I am right.
Story has not passed it's first fucking(newer version)
Erotica or any long novel need to have tight plot, story lacks it, writer must understand that you are not writing a periodical which will last for decades. You are writing an erotica which will last for maximum 500 updates and almost 3000 pages. Where you will slowly develop a charecter and a plot which will eventually end when the character which once started as closed sanskari female would now has reached the upper limits of sex.

I agree with you bro.......
I have been following the 1st version/edition when xossipy was originally known or used to run as xossip and it shut down due to insufficient funds to run the website from the admins....

Sean should have put atleast 2 or 3 sexual encounters till now but the hotness keeps stretching and going round and round the bush.... Till date in this version Anita has only sucked 2 cocks (Hariya and the stranger) and only Hariya has sucked Anita's nipples that also after 2 years of the newer version starting.....

Even on xossip sean mentioned he was busy 2017 till 2019 and now after so many years he is again busy.... But one thing i seriously do not understand is HOW CAN ONE JUST IGNORE HIS OWN PASSION ???
On one hand he says its his passion to write and on other hand he says thats not his priority..... 
I think everyone here on xossipy are earing bread and butter by whatever means..... And even they have time to come visit and comment... Some authors do update stories atleast one a week or once in 2 weeks.... But Sean here is so busy..... I dont think the PM CM MAYOR even the PRESIDENT will not be so busy.....

Come on Sean you want each and every reader to beg you for an update is that what you are looking forward to ???

Hellybelly..... Please go ahead and write your own version of it there is no need of DM/PM about it this can be said out in front of everyone as most of the readers are fed up of waiting for an update......

[Ankyxxx]

Nehi. Gf nehi hai, toh story se kabhi kabhi time nikal jata hein.

[Ankyxxx]

Dono ne abhi tak Anita ka doodh muh laga ke nehi piya. Isbaar bistar mein sulake dono uska doodh piyenge.

[val.coutinho]

Dono ne abhi tak Anita ka doodh muh laga ke nehi piya. Isbaar bistar mein sulake dono uska doodh piyenge.

Hariya ne toh doodh piya hai... Use 2 saal lag gaye chunchi choosne mein..... Ramu ko aur 2 saal intezaar karna padega..... Dono mard ek saath doodh piye yeh scene aane ko aur 2 saal lagenge kul milakar 4 saal baad dono mard ek saath Anita ke doodh peete hue nazar aayenge.....

[Ankyxxx]

Aab dono uska doodh pite pite aandhi tufaan ayegi, aur upar se paani girkar, sabko bhigo degi. Ramu, upar polythene ka chadar se pani roke ga, lekin tabtak sab ka bhig chuka hoga. Ab Hariya aur Ramu, dono hi Khud nange hone ke betaab hein, toh mauke ka fayda uthakar dono milke bahlake fuslake Anita koh khali thong panty chor ke, baaki sab utaar denge. Aur uska paati Raaj rahega kaam ke chakkar mein outstation 10 din ke liye. Aur idhaar andhi tufaan aane ki waja se Hariya, Ramu dono milke Anita koh do din ke liye rokh denge, aur fir chalti rahegi Raat Baaki, Baat Baaki, Ho na he Jo, Ho jane Doh.

[val.coutinho]

Aab dono uska doodh pite pite aandhi tufaan ayegi, aur upar se paani girkar, sabko bhigo degi. Ramu, upar polythene ka chadar se pani roke ga, lekin tabtak sab ka bhig chuka hoga. Ab Hariya aur Ramu, dono hi Khud nange hone ke betaab hein, toh mauke ka fayda uthakar dono milke bahlake fuslake Anita koh khali thong panty chor ke, baaki sab utaar denge. Aur uska paati Raaj rahega kaam ke chakkar mein outstation 10 din ke liye. Aur idhaar andhi tufaan aane ki waja se Hariya, Ramu dono milke Anita koh do din ke liye rokh denge, aur fir chalti rahegi Raat Baaki, Baat Baaki, Ho na he Jo, Ho jane Doh.

Idea acchi hai.... lekin updates ki raftaar dekhar is scene ko page par aane ke liye 20 se 25 saal lag jaayenge

[Ankyxxx]

Aur ha, Ramu aur Anita special, dono ek Saath nahayenge, Ramu aapne Haath se Anita ko bathroom le jake nehlayega. Reason, barish hone ke karan, floor bhiga hoga, anita koh bathroom jana tha, magar paiyr fiselke usko moch aa jayegi. Woh gir paregi, pura kapda ganda ho jayega, aur majboor ho ke use aapne kapde utarne honge, jo Ramu acche se dho dega. Ab Ramu uske aache se sewa karega, zaroorat se zyada fayda nehi uthayega, par isse Anita santooshth hoke, uske aur liberty degi. Is bich, Hariye, khatiye ke bagal wale almari se naya oil cloth, chadar nikaal ke rakhega, joh Ramu aur Hariye milke khatiya mei bichayenge, taaki moch lage huye Anita ko naha aake sone mein koi asubidha na ho. Ramu isi bich jake tin o ke liye khane ka bandobast, aur Anita ke liye dawai wagera le ke ayega, lekin usko bato mein uljhake, usko naye kapde nahi lane denge nahi pehnne denge. Idhaar Hariya ki garam Garam batein aur uski hadkato se Anita sab bhule huye rahegi, aur Ramu tab tak Dawa, Daru aur Khana le ke ayega. Tin o ek sath khayenge, piyenge, ab dono budhho mein hawas bhari hogi, uske upar room mein paani ghusne ke karan niche pura bhiga rahega, toh Hariya, Anita, Ramu, tin o koh ek sath ek hi bistar mein sandwich hoke sona padega.. Anita koh bich Raat ko thand lagegi, toh thand se kaapne lagegi, toh Hariya aur Ramu, usko dono side se tight se pakad kar soyenge, usko garmi dene ke liye. Anita ke pair me monch hone karen, Pehli raat usko koi thukai nehi kadega, lekin usko tease kar kar ke behal kar denge. Dono ka control dekh kar Anita aur impressed hogi aur behekh jayegi, aur badle mein next din subah dono se puchegi, ki woh un dono ke liye kya kar sakte hein. Reply mein, dono milke Usko Zeenat Aman se compare karenge aur usko aur sar pe chadayenge. Raat hote hote, us din bhi bhaadi barish rahegi, toh Anita ka pair thik bhi rehna ke bawajud, woh ghar nehi ja payegi. Ab bahar ka ye mausam, idhar do hawasi buddhe, Behala fusla kar ek aur Raat ke liye aapne logo ke sath Anita koh Rehne pe mazboor karegi, khali ye nehi, subah Anita ne dono ko favour karne ka wada kiya tha, uska bhadpoor fayda uthate huye, do hi usko daru pilaake, garam gana chala ke, usko strip tease karne ko bolenge. Dhire dhire Anita, puri ki puri nangi ho jayegi Pehli baar ke liye dono ke samne. Bahar mein bohot der tak tej barish chalegi, aur dono milke Anita ko bistar mein le kad raas leela karenga tan maan bhadke. Aakhir mein tin o ek sath judh jayenge. Aur Anita ke ek hi bill mein do saanp ghuske uski band bajayega.

[Ankyxxx]

Ab, writer bhaiya ko aur tease karna aata hein, ye idea le kad, kuch apna original aur add karke, ek aisa update de, ki padne ne, log Zeenat Aman ko bhul jaye. Mano, erotic film ban ne ke liye, ek bahut badiye shandar story base mil jayega.

[Ankyxxx]

Dono se thukai hote hote, Anita muh fisalke casually bol degi ki Anita aur Raaj dono family planning ke barein me soch rahe hein, Ab do dehati ko samajh nehi ayega uska matlab, toh hindi mein samjhane bolenge woh dono, toh Anita sharmate huye bachha lene ka Baat bolegi. Harami Hariya ye sunte hi puchega, ki ye sab Raaj kab karega. Toh, Anita galti se bol padegi, uske lautne ki baad hi. Sunke, Hariye ke Dimaag mein chaal ayega, aur woh Ramu ko involve karke dono hi milke usko achche se thukai kadenge, aur usko pet se karne ki zimmedari Hariye apne aur Ramu ke upar le lega. Ab, Hariye chahta, toh, khali Khud hi usko pregnant kar sakta tha, par use toh khali masti karni thi, Ramu ko bhi, lekin jab Anita ne by accident, ye bata diya ki Raaj bachha chahta hai, toh ye sun kar usse aur josh a gaya, Anita ko pel ne ka, pad usno khud ko bachana tha, toh Ramu ko bhi involve kiya, ki woh bhi ye khabar sunke Anita ko khub pele, aur uski kokh bhar de, toh woh pregnant ho jaye toh Anita kisiko pin point na kar paye, ki uska aasli Baap kaun hai. Udhaar 10 din ke jaga pe, 3 din baad hi Raaj laut ke aata hein aur Anita ki jaaamke pelai karta hein, usko Maa banane ke liye. Aakhir mein Anita Khud confused hi jaati hein ki uske pet mein bachhe ka asli basp kaun hoga.

[Ankyxxx]

Aab Anita ke, do judwa bachhe payda hote hein, ek gora aur ek kala, Ab Raaj Aur Ramu, do hi gore hein, par Hariya hein bhyaas jaisa kala. Anita guess laga ti he ki ek bachha Hariya ka hi Hoga, lekin dusre gore bachha ka aasli Baap kaun hein, woh zindegi mein figure out nehi kad payegi.

[Ankyxxx]

Aab aisi Anita chalegi ??

[creamydelight]

People wanting to "help" the writer are kindly requested to create their own threads with their own original ideas and not spoil this. I have read parts of the other Anita Singh thread that's going on, and it has made an absolute helpless damsel out of this original character of Anita. The guy is predatory, the Anita is a helpless mess. It is a completely different genre of erotica, sure some people would like it as this is subjective,, but has none of the high this style of writing and characterization creates.

While I also liked the original version when it was written, it makes absolutely no sense to add that as a flashback in this version, there is just no consistency with her character. Even in the older version I did have this thought.. at home she was one woman and in the market she was another.

There are parallel stories. This is already a flashback that Anita is having while lying on the bed in the village.

Even if it is the writer's passion, it need not be his priority. There is real life. Comparing the "time taken" writing a comment/reply with the effort required to generate original content is ludicrous.

Even I'm frustrated sometimes by the time between updates, but even if some updates come after months, there are always banger mega updates like 113-115 that more than make up for it.

[val.coutinho]

Guys dont get into arguement and become enemies for one story.... We are living in a republic country where everyone has his/her rights to express feelings..... so for the moment both of you take a chill pill....

This story is out of it's class..... Some excellent erotica Sean has created but his updates come way too late and the readers/fans he has created for it story are vanishing slowly......

No one in life so damn busy that he/she cannot write one paragraph everyday..... even if that is done then on every weekend an update can be posted.... or least say alternate weekend.... but maybe Sean is busy running our country or maybe 2 or 3 countries more.....

It's always so frustrating that either good erotica's are either left incomplete by the author's or the updates come way too delayed and kills the charm of the story.....