Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[Hornytamilan23]

Yeah bro, you pull emotions out of readers — congrats. But let’s be honest, Sneha and Gowtham are the only real USP here. Change their dynamic and the whole thing loses its appeal.

[VinodV]

When readers feel like killing one character and deeply pitying another, it is a clear sign of the author's grand success. That’s good! Beyond just sparking excitement for self-satisfaction, if a story is this engaging, it stays in the mind for a long time.

In the 'Completed Stories' section of this same forum, there is a story called 'A Chapter of Nightmare.' In the climax, the husband catches his long-term cheating wife and her lover red-handed. Despite her pleading, he doesn't forgive her and gives her a divorce. He even brings the lover’s wife into the scene to teach him a lesson. That story had the right amount of sex, and because it ended in just 6–7 chapters, the narration felt very tight.

Our current story has every chance of becoming a masterpiece. All that remains is to intelligently trap Gautham and portray Sneha’s repentance in a heart-touching way. The character Aditya works well as a cameo, but where would a sex element even fit there... I am really curious

1) Any further sex scenes between Sneha and Gautham won't be interesting anymore. We’ve already seen enough of that.
2) After hearing about Varsha’s past, I only feel pity and sympathy for her. Even if she unbuttons her top or cleans an ink stain in the bathroom, I just feel sorry for her!
3) Vinodini (Rakesh's partner) is the only remaining female character, but she hasn't been established in that romantic or sexual light yet.

Well... everything now depends on Heygi's mercy!

[me.you]

When readers feel like killing one character and deeply pitying another, it is a clear sign of the author's grand success. That’s good! Beyond just sparking excitement for self-satisfaction, if a story is this engaging, it stays in the mind for a long time.

In the 'Completed Stories' section of this same forum, there is a story called 'A Chapter of Nightmare.' In the climax, the husband catches his long-term cheating wife and her lover red-handed. Despite her pleading, he doesn't forgive her and gives her a divorce. He even brings the lover’s wife into the scene to teach him a lesson. That story had the right amount of sex, and because it ended in just 6–7 chapters, the narration felt very tight.

Our current story has every chance of becoming a masterpiece. All that remains is to intelligently trap Gautham and portray Sneha’s repentance in a heart-touching way. The character Aditya works well as a cameo, but where would a sex element even fit there... I am really curious

1) Any further sex scenes between Sneha and Gautham won't be interesting anymore. We’ve already seen enough of that.
2) After hearing about Varsha’s past, I only feel pity and sympathy for her. Even if she unbuttons her top or cleans an ink stain in the bathroom, I just feel sorry for her!
3) Vinodini (Rakesh's partner) is the only remaining female character, but she hasn't been established in that romantic or sexual light yet.

Well... everything now depends on Heygi's mercy!

100% agreed. Seduction and humiliation as well as slow burning all finished with Sneha and gowtham. Nothink explore anythink new. Story need to move on, or else it will get lag.. Now we can see slight lag , bz of gowtham and snehas last 2 nights and morning encounters. No new at all. Just same routine.

[Hotgiri]

Sneha encountere with Suresh Boss and Gowtham encounter with Varsha and Suresh Encounter with Rakesh Wife will spice up the story

[Pushpa Purusan]

Don't spoil giving ideas. Author know what to do.

[Mahesh12345]

Sneha encountere with Suresh Boss and Gowtham encounter with Varsha and Suresh Encounter with Rakesh Wife will spice up the story

I don't want to criticize you but this idea is not good.actually it's a bad idea because here in this story till now suresh never sex with any other woman and also except Gowtham Sneha never sex with any other

If  story will be written based on your idea then the soul of the story died then as it is it is also one of the routine story in xossipy.it will never become a master piece till now it is one of the master piece at  xossipy in my point of view not others point of view because I don't know about others.

Don't take it as wrong just it's my openion only 

If you feel bad I apologise to you

[me.you]

Sneha encountere with Suresh Boss and Gowtham encounter with Varsha and Suresh Encounter with Rakesh Wife will spice up the story

Then it will mega serial... Haha.. Let us introduce suresh parents as wel and gowtham parents and Snehas siblings, And Include the Ramya and her friends... OmG .. That will be huge 1000 episode series

[me.you]

Don't spoil giving ideas. Author know what to do.

we are not giving idea. It just opinion. What ur exactly expecting from readers.. No comments or Just Superb update or awesome update. is that u want. As i speak to writer, He always welcome constructive critics like what vinod and Mahesh suggesting.

[SecretFan]

Then it will mega serial... Haha.. Let us introduce suresh parents as wel and gowtham parents and Snehas siblings, And Include the Ramya and her friends... OmG .. That will be huge 1000 episode series

Hahaha...lol

[Bigil]

My only question is..When sneha is not working what is the need to put Ramya in hostel.. is it to allow sneha to sleep with others in her own house.

[SecretFan]

we are not giving idea. It just opinion. What ur exactly expecting from readers.. No comments or Just Superb update or awesome update. is that u want. As i speak to writer, He always welcome constructive critics like what vinod and Mahesh suggesting.

Very well said!

[Hornytamilan23]

Heyyy… after all the brilliant ideas, endless theories, and peak speculation, looks like there won’t be any updates today. Funny how the first 50–70 chapters were actually amazing — probably because nobody felt the need to interfere back then.

[SecretFan]

Hi Heygi - what time you are releasing today's updates?
Also please let us know what would be your convenient slots for daily regular updates.
Thanks

[RCF]

So much Hatred for Sneha

Poor woman has to bend for every one's will from the beginning. Naamard Suresh pushed her into Gautham's arms. Now he doesn't want it then she should submit to his wishes again...Unfortunately for Suresh's army here, life doesn't always bend to someone's will when ever they want to....Gautham is giving good time to Sneha and she has every right to enjoy new relationship that her husband chose for her....Suresh needs to learn to wait and this time bend to her wishes but no, he wants her to be out of relationship whenever he wants her to stop lol
As long as she loves him, doesn't she get to enjoy what she is experiencing now? If she knew Gautham manipulated both of them, she would kick him out herself....so patience is needed from readers...not simply vent left and right with hatred.

As for story, I am disappointed, Gautham losing interest on Sneha is a bummer, Suresh and Sneha has to win over Gautham while he is still obsessed over Sneha, Using Varsha to bring him down doesn't seem like a right plot in my opinion.

[me.you]

As for story, I am disappointed, Gautham losing interest on Sneha is a bummer, Suresh and Sneha has to win over Gautham while he is still obsessed over Sneha, Using Varsha to bring him down doesn't seem like a right plot in my opinion.

200% Agree on this

[Mahesh12345]

So much Hatred for Sneha

Poor woman has to bend for every one's will from the beginning. Naamard Suresh pushed her into Gautham's arms. Now he doesn't want it then she should submit to his wishes again...Unfortunately for Suresh's army here, life doesn't always bend to someone's will when ever they want to....Gautham is giving good time to Sneha and she has every right to enjoy new relationship that her husband chose for her....Suresh needs to learn to wait and this time bend to her wishes but no, he wants her to be out of relationship whenever he wants her to stop lol
As long as she loves him, doesn't she get to enjoy what she is experiencing now? If she knew Gautham manipulated both of them, she would kick him out herself....so patience is needed from readers...not simply vent left and right with hatred.

As for story, I am disappointed, Gautham losing interest on Sneha is a bummer, Suresh and Sneha has to win over Gautham while he is still obsessed over Sneha, Using Varsha to bring him down doesn't seem like a right plot in my opinion.

Actually sneha and Gowtham both are actively participated in sex but suresh didn't get pleasure even one time also after gowtam entered into their life that means gowtam  sex with sneha.

And suresh  says sneha don't trust gowtam.he is manipulating us  but sneha trust only gowtam but not suresh that means she didn't have minimum concern about her own husband words and coming to suresh  he stays only in guest bedroom.she Even didn't think about it

Why don't she said to gowtam go sleep your flat.i and suresh want to sleep in my master bedroom. Even if suresh rejected sneha when she want to seduce suresh but he said I have work then immediately she change her mind without one second late. She enjoys with gowtam don't she have minimum concern about suresh 

And even she didn't think about what is last time they are physically done both suresh and sneha .she always thinks about her own pleasure and think about gowtam only 

Everytime suresh try to maintain distance with sneha then why don't she talk to suresh.she knows personally she manipulated suresh for sexual pleasures with gowtam.

Then here my point is If gowtam will go to Chennai in future then she don't have that type of pleasures like given by gowtam then at that moment if any other guy approach sneha then at that time also she will mingle with other guy and same manipulate suresh also.

Here the point is I am not suresh army or sneha hatered or don't have grudge on gowtam.i am just taking about characters only.


It's my openion only if you hurt I apologise to you because it's just a story


Only whatever the reactions in heighy mind that all are placed in xossipy only.that's it

[Hornytamilan23]

So much Hatred for Sneha

Poor woman has to bend for every one's will from the beginning. Naamard Suresh pushed her into Gautham's arms. Now he doesn't want it then she should submit to his wishes again...Unfortunately for Suresh's army here, life doesn't always bend to someone's will when ever they want to....Gautham is giving good time to Sneha and she has every right to enjoy new relationship that her husband chose for her....Suresh needs to learn to wait and this time bend to her wishes but no, he wants her to be out of relationship whenever he wants her to stop lol
As long as she loves him, doesn't she get to enjoy what she is experiencing now? If she knew Gautham manipulated both of them, she would kick him out herself....so patience is needed from readers...not simply vent left and right with hatred.

As for story, I am disappointed, Gautham losing interest on Sneha is a bummer, Suresh and Sneha has to win over Gautham while he is still obsessed over Sneha, Using Varsha to bring him down doesn't seem like a right plot in my opinion.

My dear RCF, so you are the right person, don't you think when authors get frequent ideas, and sabotaging their plot, is the reason why most stories get abonded. In some cases the authors missing that energy which they had at the beginning? Example Shipra-suraj. 

This is out of this stories concept, pls forgive heygi

[VinodV]

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And suresh  says sneha don't trust gowtam.he is manipulating us  but sneha trust only gowtam but not suresh that means she didn't have minimum concern about her own husband words and coming to suresh  he stays only in guest bedroom.she Even didn't think about it

Why don't she said to gowtam go sleep your flat.i and suresh want to sleep in my master bedroom. Even if suresh rejected sneha when she want to seduce suresh but he said I have work then immediately she change her mind without one second late. She enjoys with gowtam don't she have minimum concern about suresh 
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Excellent points! Difficult for God also to defend this yorker 

[SrikanthY]

Excellent points! Difficult for God also to defend this yorker 

Hahaha... Good IPL language...
I am afraid Heygi also must be busy with IPL and neglecting his fans here!!

[RCF]

My dear RCF, so you are the right person, don't you think when authors get frequent ideas, and sabotaging their plot, is the reason why most stories get abonded. In some cases the authors missing that energy which they had at the beginning? Example Shipra-suraj. 

This is out of this stories concept, pls forgive heygi

Lol strong writers can take negative points, no need to defend them saying stories get abandoned due to different ideas or opinions. Opinions are what matters for writers even if it is against their plot, silence is what they hate on their stories. So its OK if my opinion differs from the rest. 

~RCF