09-05-2026, 09:15 PM
Let him update, till then don't comment and bring it to first page.
Waiting is hurting. Hope u got it hey
Waiting is hurting. Hope u got it hey
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II
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09-05-2026, 09:15 PM
Let him update, till then don't comment and bring it to first page.
Waiting is hurting. Hope u got it hey
-Pickup, drop, escape.
09-05-2026, 10:24 PM
My opinion is different. Many writers like readers longing for their updates and expect the follow up messages. Of course, that's the only way writers get the best encouragement too!
09-05-2026, 10:43 PM
Hope Suresh will move out of the house and divorce sneha after the office get together.
09-05-2026, 10:50 PM
09-05-2026, 10:57 PM
Started writing, as im doing this after a long break, just warming up. Tonight no possibility for an update. Tomorrow before noon you can except. All can sleep peacefully :)
09-05-2026, 10:59 PM
Thanks for the update! Please see my comments above and on Page 30.
Good night!!
09-05-2026, 11:07 PM
09-05-2026, 11:11 PM
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(09-05-2026, 10:50 PM)SecretFan Wrote: What about revenge on Gowtham? and Sneha's reaction after realizing the trap? I think Gowtham getting married with sneha and taking the responsibility of Ramya and Suresh climbing the ladder in office with versha is ideal revenge... Suresh should have visiting rights of ramya for every weekend... Suresh has powerful life and new wife Sneha has sex life and irresponsible husband as gowtham Gowtham will be inherited responsiblities for his lust.. Everybody deserves best. A win win solution for all.... Sometimes granting the wish of the people itself is the curse rather than Boon.
09-05-2026, 11:12 PM
(09-05-2026, 11:07 PM)Thalaidhoni Wrote: What revenge needed for the bastard and bitch. Such Gowtham like charectors should be nicely punished to make it a complete story & give satisfaction to readers, right? I am curious how Sneha (a trapped lady)'s charector will be concluded
09-05-2026, 11:19 PM
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(09-05-2026, 11:11 PM)oxy.raj Wrote: I think Gowtham getting married with sneha and taking the responsibility of Ramya and Suresh climbing the ladder in office with versha is ideal revenge... Suresh should have visiting rights of ramya for every weekend... 1) Suresh and Varsha are not in the same office - so their marriage will not be any logical conclusion:-) 2) Will Sneha agree to marry Gowtham? She still looks to be confused between married life bondage and her lust on other side In my view, as another reader said before - Adithya should motivate & help Suresh to come out of this situation himself tactfully! These following two things are interesting - a) Vinodhini getting a clue about Rakesh from their Chennai office b) Varsha's strange & confident behaviour
09-05-2026, 11:27 PM
(09-05-2026, 11:19 PM)SrikanthY Wrote: 1) Suresh and Varsha are not in the same office - so their marriage will not be any logical conclusion:-) Well said... I am also curious about the clues those Suresh might have obtained from Gowtham's gallery photos in the last episode99 (while Gowtham and Sneha were having marathon sex till 2 am in the night). As some other reader already guessed here before, Suresh was affectionately holding Sneha when she came to his bed in the midnight .. giving a sense that Suresh had already found some clues about the trap Gowtham had planned...
09-05-2026, 11:38 PM
Gowtham is not emotionally attached to Sneha. All that he needs is her body for good fuck. Why would he marry her. May be he will wait and fuck Ramya when he get a chance as she grows up to young girl.
09-05-2026, 11:44 PM
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Wow.... so much of discussion would not have been strange, if it is about any normal story on any regular platform.
This is a stunning discussion about the plot, characterization and the narration for a sex story in an adult forum - this is the great achievement of a true writer! Dear Heygi - please take one more day time if you want, but please ensure to close all the open ends nicely so that it will become the magnum-opus of your writing career here! Good luck & night!
09-05-2026, 11:50 PM
Did suresh not find anything about kidnap in the chats
09-05-2026, 11:53 PM
Even if he finds what is the use. His wife is already sex slave of Gowtham and she wants to live with suresh and fuck with Gowtham daily.
10-05-2026, 12:10 AM
10-05-2026, 01:09 AM
(09-05-2026, 02:09 PM)SecretFan Wrote: This is my version of this particular portion.... Else my emotions are not satisfying!! Hahaha... Nice retort to Sneha who was cleverly putting the late night meetings reason on Suresh!
10-05-2026, 10:18 AM
Sneha is great. I am sure she will get Suresh stay with her as her husband while enjoying her sexual life with Gowtham. I think as time passes she will be more open with her lovers while Suresh will accept her his wife and as she is. They will have platonic relationship but her body and passion for her lovers
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