[PELURI]

dear author....request to plz continue the story...its too good we don't want to miss    even if it has to end, plz do so with your touch...it'll have a flavour of its own....waiting for your comeback....

[PELURI]

Esha is gradually slipping into depression....Aniket has come across as a third rate womaniser....even during the early part of their companionship,  he was caught by Priya roaming with a girl in a mall...how she missed this red flag....not sure if he'll at all marry her after the divorce...he doesn't need to as the baby is lost and she cannot force him to...she's desolate, weak and worthless....no support of friends or family....she has destroyed the family she had....entirely dependent on Aniket and Priya, both proven cheats...what now...suicide...what about Aditya...can he be abandoned and punished for her vulnerabilities and decadence....Kunal is a kind person...willing to give her a second chance...she wanted to keep both...now both are gone....

 wives in most marriages are neglected ....spend loveless / sexless days in utter despair, given up and compromised,  just for the sense of security marriage offers....here Esha chased bodily pleasures, prioritising the lover over the young son on occasions, grave mistake in any society, and paid the due price...highest price of course is paid by the adolescent son....leaving a bitter taste in the mouth

[Harry Jordan]

I am pretty sure this story is dead. But I wanted to share something interesting here for readers who liked this story. Not so long ago , I found an author Penda at Literotica. He also writes the cheating wife type stories , and the unique part about the author is all the stories have a manipulative and sadistic wife. Husbands in these stories are obviously idiots , but the stories by the author was straight up Mashochism Masterpieces. And the best part , not a single story has a happy ending for the husband , and the wife gets rewards after rewards. 

Reading those stories made me remember about this one. Damn , this story definitely had potential , but sadly I think it will remain an unfinished one. Wish the author completed this , but he hasn't visited this site for months so sadly this will be another one for the unfinished archives. 

Guess we can all make up something for this story's ending so in my mind. Kunal commits suicide but sets Priya up for his 'murder'. Priya goes to jail and Esha lives a happy life with Aniket and Aditya making more kids and breedings like Rabbits!!! 

[PELURI]

thanks Harry for coming over....i would like the story to end as :

Esha is staying at home on maternity...growing belly making her uncomfortable....unable to bring herself to service Aniket...he's becoming restless...Priya is visiting frequently...Esha could sometimes hear them both talk in hushed tones....

Aditya's visits have become irregular...his face doesn't lit up anymore on seeing Esha....has many questions about her growing belly but doesn't ask...can'task...doesn'tknow whom to ask...oflate, Priya is playfully demanding payback for pairing them up...Aniket is game for that....Asks Esha if its OK with her too...what sort of payback....Priya suggestively hugs Aniket...Esha doesn't know how to respond....angry but can't show....Aniket now a days gets irritated easily...she once labours to kitchen to fetch a glass of water....finds Priya hands on shoulder's, standing close to Aniket, pelvis pushed in grinding slowly....shrieking collapses...heavy bleeding...suffers miscarriage...bleeding doesn't stop....
BP fluctuates...heavy loss of blood and fluids...Priya and Aniket away on Business....what Business she knows only too well...final divorce decree still pending...though all procedures are completed....her maternal family cut ties with her...her calls are not returned..she doesn't have a family...the man for whom she left her family has no interest in her...he's a cheat and now with Priya, another cheater....when they'll return she doesn't know...they didn't care to inform her.. ..she's got no body now...if bleeding continues thisway, she'll die all alone in this flat....and she remembered, kunal last parting words at the family court....Esha..you have given me Aditya...that cannot change...Aditya is what I have now...I'll be there for him come what may...however,  if anytime in future, if you have to make one last call, for you to survive and live, you have my number...now she dials Kunal....

[PELURI]

this is my suggestion...may be blended with others by any amendments done as required for final conclusion....full rights bestowed....appreciate the initiative Harry...good luck

[PELURI]

this is my suggestion...may be blended with others by any amendments done as required for final conclusion....full rights bestowed....appreciate the initiative Harry...good luck

The divorce proceedings withdrawn...college love takes over...kunal completely forgives and brought her back home and into his life whole heartedly...but Esha is paying the price....perhaps will continue to pay for a long long time to come...there's no greater punishment than true repentance...Aditya hadn't accepted her back completely...he's always apprehensive as far as things Esha are concerned...however much she tries to bridge in, he's stiff, a little distant...... intereactions from his side have ceased...if any at all, are monosyllabic... stopped calling her as mommy ever since....the highest price is being paid by himself....once a happy go lucky boy is now evolving into a brooding bitter young man...a knife through her heart every day....
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In the meanwhile, markets crash and Aniket hits ground zero...Priya drops him like a hot charcoal...The Facilitator scoops away herself with negligible damage to her....Priya cheats Karma as well....Bank learns about Esha's involvement with a client which is against their corporate policy and decides to terminate her services....Kunal steps in to establish a contact with one of the Banks' higher ups and gets it converted into a voluntary cessation of service without benefits...to keep alive her chances of furure employability.....true love triumphs...did it really...Esha is the best judge...her life, as it unfolds nowon, will be the testimony...

[PELURI]

I am pretty sure this story is dead. But I wanted to share something interesting here for readers who liked this story. Not so long ago , I found an author Penda at Literotica. He also writes the cheating wife type stories , and the unique part about the author is all the stories have a manipulative and sadistic wife. Husbands in these stories are obviously idiots , but the stories by the author was straight up Mashochism Masterpieces. And the best part , not a single story has a happy ending for the husband , and the wife gets rewards after rewards. 

Reading those stories made me remember about this one. Damn , this story definitely had potential , but sadly I think it will remain an unfinished one. Wish the author completed this , but he hasn't visited this site for months so sadly this will be another one for the unfinished archives. 

Guess we can all make up something for this story's ending so in my mind. Kunal commits suicide but sets Priya up for his 'murder'. Priya goes to jail and Esha lives a happy life with Aniket and Aditya making more kids and breedings like Rabbits!!! 

gd mrng harry....our suggested ending to this story are diametrically opposite....hope some more suggestions flow this weekend....perhaps a fusion is possible to frame a conclusion,  which conforms to the principles of natural justice, still melodramatic and ends the story of Esha on a bitter sweet note ( a tiny bitterness is suggested for the mess up caused by her own actions)....even as I write these lines, my heart grows heavy with longing for well being of Esha....I re-write here my lines in respect of Kavya ( another story here in xossipy...the plot is largely similar)..." for after all....Kavya is a girl and every girl deserves a happy, secure and protected life"..

thank you

Ps:- plz suggest some indian authors who writes similar genre stories here or in literotica

[Joseph Rayman]

If the husband is a wimp, every girl has the right to decide with whom she should sleep or live with. What Esha did is 100% correct. Let the useless husband kill himself and go to hell for cheating a woman.

[Rangushki]

It has been exactly 6 months since author visited here. The hope is very less.

[Ayush01111]

If the husband is a wimp, every girl has the right to decide with whom she should sleep or live with. What Esha did is 100% correct. Let the useless husband kill himself and go to hell for cheating a woman.

Use aisa banaya bhi esha ne hi hai

[PELURI]

If the husband is a wimp, every girl has the right to decide with whom she should sleep or live with. What Esha did is 100% correct. Let the useless husband kill himself and go to hell for cheating a woman.

you are right Joseph...but if the girl is a mom and a wife as well, then the rights shrink ...

[PELURI]

I am pretty sure this story is dead. But I wanted to share something interesting here for readers who liked this story. Not so long ago , I found an author Penda at Literotica. He also writes the cheating wife type stories , and the unique part about the author is all the stories have a manipulative and sadistic wife. Husbands in these stories are obviously idiots , but the stories by the author was straight up Mashochism Masterpieces. And the best part , not a single story has a happy ending for the husband , and the wife gets rewards after rewards. 

Reading those stories made me remember about this one. Damn , this story definitely had potential , but sadly I think it will remain an unfinished one. Wish the author completed this , but he hasn't visited this site for months so sadly this will be another one for the unfinished archives. 

Guess we can all make up something for this story's ending so in my mind. Kunal commits suicide but sets Priya up for his 'murder'. Priya goes to jail and Esha lives a happy life with Aniket and Aditya making more kids and breedings like Rabbits!!! 

mrng Harry!... not many have responded with suggestions.....

[Harry Jordan]

mrng Harry!... not many have responded with suggestions.....

I honestly don't have time to check other stories as I have debuted my own story in this site and it has taken all my attention because readers are liking it so far. It was initially similar to this story , but my story is quiet dramatic with a bigger world building.

But I do feel sad that this story had been left unfinished. It had potential , for a moment I had hope since it was building up to be not a  "wimp Husband" type story where Kunal was starting to develop as a character despite the damage done to it in the first few chapters , but I had hope , now , not so much. I instead spend time on my own story , and thanks this author and his story as motivation and inspiration for me to start my own journey as an author.

You can check it out if you want , the story is named Love Sex and War : Age Of Darkness

[RCF]

Why hanging in here still hoping for an update. Clearly author has not visited the site nor gave any indication that he would continue the story. He could have faced some hardships in life or life changing events which might have been the cause for sudden full stop to this story.

I wish him luck,success and safety in his life. I would suggest users to not bring this on top of the charts with comments. People might come here in hope that there is an update but would get disappointed every time.

~RCF

[PELURI]

I honestly don't have time to check other stories as I have debuted my own story in this site and it has taken all my attention because readers are liking it so far. It was initially similar to this story , but my story is quiet dramatic with a bigger world building.

But I do feel sad that this story had been left unfinished. It had potential , for a moment I had hope since it was building up to be not a  "wimp Husband" type story where Kunal was starting to develop as a character despite the damage done to it in the first few chapters , but I had hope , now , not so much. I instead spend time on my own story , and thanks this author and his story as motivation and inspiration for me to start my own journey as an author.

You can check it out if you want , the story is named Love Sex and War : Age Of Darkness

am reading Age of Darkness since beginning....as forewarned by you, there isn't much sex.....coming to The Facilitator,  I thoroughly enjoyed the indepth analysis of yours as well as many others....infact i found the reader comments more endearing and fulfilling than the story itself...any ways..gud luck & take care

[Saibabugvs]

One of the best story stopped abruptly. Should have continued. Some comments are irritating with guess work but writers imagination and minute details are awesome

[olumannan]

This author visited one year go. Why you guys comment on this already dead story and pushing the active stories down.

[Saibabugvs]

Then do one thing. List down stories on which we can comment which we cannot.

[olumannan]

Then do one thing. List down stories on which we can comment which we cannot.

[Kamalesh Nathan]

I wish the author come back and complete the story and also continue entertaining more.