[Fuckeer]

I wish u will continue this story in more directions never expected this much so early finish

[zulfique]

Waiting for part 2

[Rangabaashyam]

Without spoiling this version, you can start another thread to bring the slutty version of Gayathri. Can't wait to read. Hope you write for die hard readers and fans of Gayathri.

[drillhot]

Without spoiling this version, you can start another thread to bring the slutty version of Gayathri. Can't wait to read. Hope you write for die hard readers and fans of Gayathri.

Well said 

[Paty@123]

Excellent and emotional ending

[Herbiee]

Ufffff…. Each scenes going it’s peak of teasing.
Teasing killer updates. Still reading. . . 

[Herbiee]

 

[xavierrxx]

I feel the love making should have been elaborated more in detail with Gifs and reaction of gayu should be in favor of Raj.

[Yesudoss]

No woman can go back to normal life after such intense love making for first time in life. Her body will crave more for it. Completely disappointed the way author ended the story.

[Sarvesh Siva]

#Justice for Siva

[Sarran Raj]

Waiting for the second part

[কাদের]

Hello Venku, you write a banger. It is all the aspects of a great, slow-burning story. You build up the tempo, and when it is at its peak, you deliver the right amount of throttle. As a reader, I just want to add one more thing, some of the parts seem to be repeating. Next time, if you write a story again, and if you can address that issue, definitely you can make a better one than this one.

[Dumeelkumar]

Please start the second version soon. Cant wait to read the real action.

[Herbiee]

Finally he fullfill his desire. What a story you have created here, brother. It was a perfect creation. Extraordinary writing skills. You showed us every scene as a movie. You have perfectly captured all the emotions in this story, from love, romance, desires, lust, responsibilities, loyalty, respect, decency... Everything was perfect from beginning to end. It was a one of the best stories in this forum. A unique one. Specially noted that,  all the episodes were updated without any delay. Thank you brother. Thank you for this story that we were able to enjoy a lot and your quality presentation.

[Herbiee]

 

[Ragasiyananban]

Not happy with the love making of Raj and Gayathri. We want more adventures, thrills, positions, open terrace fuck, under shower, car fuck, Anal penetration etc etc.

[Gopal Ratnam]

Can someone start part 2 of this story

[Herbiee]

Unique story, Great presentation, erotic scenes, Perfect end. Even if so, I don’t think that Gayatri’s life would end here. 
She tasted the forbidden fruit. She can’t forget it easily once it’s taste. Now she experienced that what is real life pleasures. Her mind will control her maybe, But her body can’t control her desires. It’s will increase day by day. Her mind knows her life partner can’t satisfy her. Body needs will overcome her loyalty, status, responsibilities. She will suffer like how Raj did. Actually her unsatisfied, sleepless nights are coming. 
So This is not just an END. This is a beginning of something more in this story. But unfortunately this is an END OF BEGINNING. Please play again this story as season-2.

[Herbiee]

  

[Ajay Kailash]

Unique story, Great presentation, erotic scenes, Perfect end. Even if so, I don’t think that Gayatri’s life would end here. 
She tasted the forbidden fruit. She can’t forget it easily once it’s taste. Now she experienced that what is real life pleasures. Her mind will control her maybe, But her body can’t control her desires. It’s will increase day by day. Her mind knows her life partner can’t satisfy her. Body needs will overcome her loyalty, status, responsibilities. She will suffer like how Raj did. Actually her unsatisfied, sleepless nights are coming. 
So This is not just an END. This is a beginning of something more in this story. But unfortunately this is an END OF BEGINNING. Please play again this story as season-2.

very well said bro. siva did not stretch her or pleasure or climaxed her like how he did. it is definitely worth going forward with the relationship making siva as cuck. he has already told you both make great pair.