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Excellent, exciting, shandar aur ekdom chamatkar story writing
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Very much sweet update
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Very much sweet and beautiful update! thanks
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Superb, lajawab, chamatkar aur ekdom dhamaka writings!! Namaskar
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WRITER NE SHAYAD SARI STORY DELETE KAR DI HAI

MUJHE SIRF PAHLA UPDATE DIKHA USKE BAAD KOI BHI UPDATE NAHI

I DONT THINK THERE IS ANY MEANING OF THIS THREAD

MODERATORS SHOULD DELETE THIS.

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(23-04-2026, 11:07 AM)Nasheeliaankhein Wrote: WRITER NE SHAYAD SARI STORY DELETE KAR DI HAI

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Kamre mein vishal ne woh ungli jo pehle meri maa ki gaand ke andar thi dheere se apni naak ke paas laayi aankhein band karte hue gehri saans lete hue jaise koi aadmi sabse achhi sharab ka swaad le raha ho. Dheere dheere ek santusht muskaan uske chehre par fail gayi chaudi lagbhag sapnon jaisi honth pure anand mein ghumte hue. 

Usne usse phir se sunga is baar lambi der tak ungli ko apni naak ke neeche seedha daba kar uski mitti jaisi badboo dar ki khushboo ko andar lete hue. Uski muskaan aur gehri ho gayi kuch lagbhag bhakti bhari. Usne ungli ke tip ko halke se chaata bhi uska swaad lete hue phir se sunga aur phir apni shirt par ponchhte hue halki hansi ke saath. 


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Meri maa ki badboo bhari gaand ki khushboo ne usse aisa kyun muskuraya tha main soch raha tha pet mein ghin ke saath. Mere liye toh yeh ghinona tha us gupt nishedh jaisi gandi khushboo ka sochna uski ungli par mere gale mein ulti laane laga. Lekin vishal ke liye yeh sab kuch tha. Woh khushboo uske poore adhikaar ki saboot thi. Woh us chhed ko chahta tha jahaan se meri maa potty karti hai. 

Yeh usse bata raha tha ki woh apna sabse nishedh chhed uske hawaale kar chuki hai kuch aisa jo mere papa ne kabhi chhua bhi nahi. Yeh uske obsession ka sabse bada trophy tha uski badi gaand naram aur bhari jab woh chalti thi hilti hui uske ungliyon ya laude ke charo taraf kabhi bhi jakad leti jab woh chahta. 

Woh isliye muskuraya kyunki yeh pushti karta tha ki woh bhi aadat pad chuki hai ki usne usse party mein jahaan sau log the sirf kuch manzilein door ungli se chodne diya tha. Woh khushboo pichhle raaton ki yaadein lekar aayi jab woh uski chut mein pelta tha usse apna naam moan karwata tha jab uska pati neeche sota tha. 

Yeh ek saans mein power control aur kacchi vikriti sab kuch tha. Woh isliye muskuraya kyunki uski gaand uski dharm ban chuki thi aur woh ungli uski prayer bead thi. Main ghin se bhara hua tha mera chehra sharm aur gusse se jal raha tha phir bhi main wahi jama raha har pal dekh raha tha us aadmi ko jo dheere dheere meri maa ke shareer ke tukde tukde apna bana raha tha. 

Usne apna phone nikala ungliyan tez chalate hue. Main turant samajh gaya woh usse text kar raha tha shayad kuch ganda jaise tumhari gaand abhi bhi meri ungli par hai aaj raat usme apna lauda dafnaane ka intezaar nahi kar sakta. Mainne kaafi dekh liya tha. Main seedhiyon se do do kadam koodte hue neeche gaya dil tez dhadak raha tha. 

Doosri manzil ke landing par main lagbhag mere cousin sameer se takraya. Woh ladka hamesha idhar udhar ghumta rehta tha hamesha bakwas sawal puchta tha hamesha mere plans kharab karta tha. Bhai upar kya kar raha hai khana neeche hai aur antakshari shuru ho rahi hai usne kaha mere raaste mein khade hokar us muskaan se. 

Main busy hoon sameer baaki logon ke saath khel ja maine jhatka marte hue kaha. Woh sach mein pareshan dikha bh eyebrows sikode hue. Busy kya kar raha hai upar toh purani kursiyan hain chal na chal pehle sab gulab jamun khatam ho jayenge. Baad mein maine kaha main busy hoon awaaz tight karke. Usne kandhe uchkaaye abhi bhi pareshan lekin mujhe jaane diya. Main mehsoos kar raha tha uski nazrein meri peeth par jaise main neeche utra. 

Baad mein jab kursiyan shift karne mein madad kar raha tha maine aunty najma ko phir dekha is baar woh 58 saal ke aadmi amir ke saath gehri baat cheet mein thi wohi aadmi jisse mainne pehle cricket match ke baare mein baat ki thi. Tab woh harmless lage the hasste hue apne purane mazedaar dinon ke baare mein mujhe thanda drink offer karte hue. Ab uska haath najma aunty ki kamar ke neeche halke se tha jaise woh dessert table ke paas khade the. 


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Woh uske saamne muskurate hue upar dekhti hui sar jhukaaye ek haath uske bazu par lagate hue bol rahi thi. Aunty najma ke pati dubai mein kaam karte hue lagbhag teen saal seedhe the har mahine sameer ke college aur ghar ke liye paisa bhejte hue. 

Najma aunty hamesha madadgaar rahi thi sabko chai banana party ke auraton wale hisse ko organize karna kabhi baal bhi bigadna nahi. Toh woh amir ke itna kareeb kyun khadi thi har uski baat par hans rahi thi uski aankhein chamak rahi thi jaise mainne sirf filmon mein dekhi thi. 

Shayad woh purane mohalle ke dost the. Shayad woh kuch paperwork mein madad kar raha tha kyunki uska pati door tha. Lekin woh jhuk kar jab woh kuch fusa fusa raha tha aur tezi se idhar udhar dekhti hui check kar rahi thi ki koi dekh toh nahi raha yeh masoom nahi lag raha tha. Mujhe nahi pata woh usse aise kyun baat kar rahi thi lekin yeh shak ki ek beej boya. 

Mainne unhe bees minute baad phir dekha abhi bhi usi kone mein baat karte hue ab aur kareeb. Amir ki ungliyan uske chehre se baal ki lat ko hata rahi thi. Najma hasi uske neeche ka honth kaat te hue bilkul waise jaise maa ne upar kiya tha. 

Kuch gehra shak tha. Kyun? Kyunki ek bhare pure family party mein rishtedaaron aur padosiyon se bhare hue woh date par couple jaise behave kar rahe the baaki sabko ignore karte hue shareer ek dusre ki taraf jhuke hue private muskaanen badalte hue. Aunty najma ke pati hazaaron mail door registan ki garmi mein mehnat kar rahe the sasta khana khaate hue ghar ke sapne dekhte hue jabki woh yahaan kisi aur aadmi ke saath khule aam flirt kar rahi thi. 

Shayad unki pehchaan kai saalon se thi amir do galiyan door rehte the kabhi eid par mithai lekar aate the. Akelapan ek aurat ko ajeeb cheezein karwa sakta hai jiska pati saal mein sirf ek baar ghar aata hai. Ya shayad amir behtar baat karne wala tha zyada dhyaan dene wala zyada maujud. Chahe jo bhi ho shak mere seene mein bhari ho gaya. 

Tabhi mauka aa gaya. Ab meri maa ki taraf lautte hue maa ne apna phone paani ke cooler ke paas side table par rakh diya tha jab woh serve karne mein madad kar rahi thi. Mainne turant pakad liya doosri manzil ke khaali store room mein ghus gaya darwaza lock kiya aur uske messages khole. Mere haath kaanp rahe the scroll karte hue. Vishal ke kai text hafte purane kuch gande hote ja rahe the: 

Baby teri badi gaand mere laude ke liye bani hai. Ruk nahi sakta us tight chhed ko phir se stretch karne ke baare mein soch kar. Aaj raat main teri gaand ki ungli karunga jab tak tu maangegi phir gehra chodunga. Baingani shalwar pehen usme teri gaand ke dono hisse bahut bade lagte hain. Kamra 304 mujahiroon hotel mein. 9:30. Lube le aana. Main paagal hoon us tarah se teri gaand mujhe poora nigal leti hai. Baad mein meri ungli ko sung. Abhi bhi teri khushboo hai. Tu meri anal slut hai aur mujhe yeh pasand hai. 

Har ek message. Mainne unhe do baar padha dil baith raha tha. Vishal aaj raat uski gaand chodne wala tha. Woh meri maa ki badi gaand par poora obsessed ho raha tha uske hilne ka tareeka uske jakadne ka tareeka woh nishedh tightpan jo usse raja jaisa mehsoos karata tha. 


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Woh uski pooja karta tha kyunki yeh sab kuch nishedh aur perfect ko darshata tha ek shaadi shuda aurat ka sabse private chhed potty ke liye istemal hone wala uske hawaale khushi khushi. Messages mein planning anticipation dominance dikha raha tha. Woh mujahiroon hotel jaane wale the jo mujhe achhi tarah pata tha sirf pandrah minute door meri scooter par thoda purana jagah patli deewaron wala aur discreet staff couples ke liye popular jo privacy chahte the. Mainne bazaar jaate hue sau baar dekha tha. 

Mainne jaldi se maa ka phone wapas rakh diya jahaan tha taaki woh shak na kare. 

Main abhi bhi doosri manzil par tha dimag ghum raha tha jab mujhe kamra 205 ke end se awaazein aane lagi. Pehle halki phir saaf: rhythmic bed ki awaaz chamdi ke thappad aur ek aurat ki zor zor se bechain moan. 

Ahhh haan mujhe aur zor se chod! Main jam gaya. Kaun family party ke dauran sex kar raha tha? Curiosity ghin se zyada jal rahi thi. Mujhe pata karna tha shayad koi aur couple chupke se gaya ho ya shayad... nahi maa neeche thi. 

Phir bhi main dheere se kareeb gaya jute carpet par chup. Mera dimag daud raha tha kya yeh connected tha? Kya poori raat kisi secret veshyaalay mein badal gayi thi? Mujhe khud dekhna tha. Kyun? Kyunki aaj raat jo kuch mainne dekha tha ungli texts shak bhari muskaanen mera duniya ulta ho gaya mehsoos ho raha tha. Mujhe jawab chahiye the bhale hi woh dukh pahunchaaye. 

Main darwaze ke paas jhuk kar dekhne laga. Purana lakdi ka darwaza neeche ke panel mein thoda loose tha jahaan lakdi tedhi ho gayi thi chhota gap tha ek aankh ke liye agar main kareeb daba kar saans roke. 

Kamra ek bedside lamp se halka roshan tha. Bed par bilkul nange aunty najma chaar pairon par uske bhari chooche har dhakke ke saath jhool rahe the lambe kaale baal paseene se geele peeth se chipke hue. 



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Uske peeche uncle amir 58 saal ke lekin achhe fit gray seene ke baal paseene se sate hue uski chaudi kamar pakad kar uski chut mein doggystyle dhakke maar raha tha uska mota lauda andar bahar wet awaazon ke saath. Uske gaand ke dono hisse uske hips ke har thappad se hil rahe the. 

Najma besharm moan kar rahi thi awaaz unchi aur pleasure se tooti hui: Ahhh haan amir mujhe apni personal whore jaise chod! Tera lauda mere pati se kaafi mota hai meri chut ko stretch kar baby woh hazaaron mail door registan mein paseena bahate hue jabki tu yahaan mujhe apna bana raha hai oh god haan meri gaand aur zor se thappad maar! 

Aunty najma sameer ki maa bilkul heat mein kutiya jaise behave kar rahi thi. 

Uncle amir gurraya zor se uski gaand thappad marte hue. Sahi baat hai tu cheating slut. Mujhe bata kitna pasand hai usko dhokha dena. Woh uske against dhakelti hui chillayi mujhe pasand hai main ab teri dirty wife hoon andar cum kar meri shaadi shuda chut bhar jabki mera beta neeche khel raha hai tere balls mere clit par thappad marte hue bahut achhe lag rahe hain zor se mujhe kutiya jaise chod jaise main tere liye hoon! 

Main har detail dheere dheere horror mein dekh raha tha uski chut ke lips uske laude ko pakadte hue har bahar nikalne par uske ras se chamakte hue uski gaand par laal haath ke nishaan uske thappadon se uska chehra side ki taraf aankhein pichhe ghumti hui khushi mein muh khula hamesha gandi baaton ka silsila. 

Amir main har raat jab woh bahar se call karta hai tere laude ke baare mein sochti hoon main khud ko chhuti hoon soch kar ki tu yeh kar raha hai. Mat rok mujhe uske liye barbaad kar de! Amir andhere se hansa. Tera pati bewakoof hai. Yeh gaand aur yeh tight chut mere hain jab woh door hota hai. Woh aur zor se moan karti hui haan main teri secret slut hamesha ke liye hoon mujhe chod jab tak main party mein seedha chal nahi paaun! 

Mera shock poora tha. Main saans nahi le paa raha tha. Meethi respectable aunty najma jo mujhe yaad dilati thi paanch baar ,,., padhne ki jo sabse achhi kheer banati thi jo hamesha achhi baatein karti thi ab chillati hui maangti hui mess ban chuki thi jaise porn star ek aadmi ke saath jo uske sasur jitna umar ka ho sakta hai. 

Avishwas ne mujhe bhar diya. Yeh kitne din se chal raha tha hafte mahine saal? Ab bilkul samajh aa gaya kyun woh shaam bhar amir ke bazu ko chhuti muskurati rahi thi. Unki pehchaan bahut purani hogi shayad uske pati ke jaane se pehle chori chori nazrein secret meetings mein badal gayi hongi jab woh abroad hota tha. 

Usne apne pati ko dhokha diya kyunki doori ne unki closeness khatam kar di thi woh akeli thi sex mein frustrated aur amir ne rough dhyaan dene wali passion offer ki jo uske mehnati pati gulf ki garmi ke long shifts ke baad shayad match nahi kar paata. Shayad amir ka lauda bada tha ya woh uske pleasure ka dhyaan rakhta tha jaise uske pati bhool chuke the. 

Mujhe uske pati ke liye gehri dard bhari udaasi mehsoos hui usko dubai ke chhote kamre mein dal chawal khaate hue har extra rupaya ghar bhejte hue soch kar family achhe se jee sake kabhi socha bhi nahi hoga ki uski biwi chaar pairon par khadi apni shaadi shuda chut dhakwa rahi hai aur kisi aur aadmi se maang rahi hai usko apna banane ko. 

Achanak peeche se baahen lapet li mujhe sameer ne. Bhai kya kar raha hai tu us kamre mein jhaak kyun raha hai usne fusa fusa kar mujhe itna daraya ki main lagbhag chillaya. Main ghuma chehra jal raha tha dil phat raha tha. 


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Kuch nahi sameer mainne apni ghadi girayi ya kuch chhod do abhi neeche chalte hain. Woh pareshan hua confused aur curious. Lekin maine awaazein bhi suni. Lagta hai koi bahut zor se kar raha hai mujhe dekhne de! 

Mainne keyhole ko apne shareer se block kar diya usse dheere lekin mazbooti se seedhiyon ki taraf dhakelte hue. Nahi yeh private adult cheez hai. Vishwas kar yahaan nahi hona chahiye. Party wait kar rahi hai baraf ki mithai khel jo bhi tu chahe. 

Woh poochta raha awaaz thodi unchi. Kyun nahi sirf ek nazar! Lagta hai bahut hot hai kaun andar itna zor se chod raha hai? Kamre ke andar moan aur tez ho gayi saaf: Amir main tere laude par cum kar rahi hoon andar bhar de tu bastard! Najma ki besharm chillahaten corridor mein goonj rahi thi. 

Maine panic ke saath note kiya ki sameer apni maa ki awaaz ko kabhi bhi pehchaan sakta tha. Mainne uske kandhon ko aur zor se pakda. Hamein jaana chahiye abhi. Maa shayad humein dhoond rahi hogi. Woh rok raha tha abhi bhi mere aas paas dekhne ki koshish kar raha tha. Lekin woh aurat lag rahi hai jaise khushi se mar rahi ho! Chal na sirf ek second! 

Hamare poore argument ke dauran kamra wet slapping aur najma ki tooti chillahaton se bhara tha haan is cheating gaand ko thappad maar phir se mujhe teri slut wife bol le lekin sameer ne dots connect nahi kiye. Woh sirf jaanta tha ki koi aurat zor zor se aur zor se chodi ja rahi thi aur yeh uske teenage curiosity ko excite kar raha tha. 

Main usse zor force karke seedhiyon neeche le ja raha tha ek ek kadam banate hue excuses ghadte hue shayad kisi ke phone par loud movie chal rahi hai ya nasha kiye uncle masti kar rahe hain jabki uski awaaz humare peeche aa rahi thi andar cum kar amir mujhe party ke baaki samay ke liye tapakne de! 

Mujhe sameer ko nahi batana tha ki uski maa uske papa ko dhokha de rahi hai kyunki yeh usko barbaad kar deta. Us umar mein najma aunty abhi bhi uski hero thi strong single parent family ko sambhale hue jab uska papa abroad kaam kar raha tha. 

Jaanna ki woh secretly kisi aur ke liye taange faila rahi thi whore jaise moan karte hue bharne ko maangte hue jab uska beta neeche khel raha tha us image ko hamesha ke liye tood deta. Woh dhokha mehsoos karta gussa shayad agle video call par papa ko bata deta jisse divorce custody battles financial ruin aur anant family sharm hoti. 

Main usko us crushing sachai se bachana chahta tha uski jo bhi innocence bachi thi usko preserve karna aur hamare extended family ki kamzor shanti ko thoda aur lamba rakhna. Us secret ka bojh mera tha uska nahi. 

Jab tak hum main hall pahunche mainne usko convince kar diya tha ki baaki bachchon ko dhoondhe. Tab mainne notice kiya maa aur vishal gayab the uski baingani dupatta kapde tangne wali jagah se gayab uski gaadi parking mein nahi thi. 

Woh already hotel ke liye nikal chuke the. Mainne ek pal bhi nahi socha. Mainne apni scooter ki chabi pakdi peeche ke gate se nikal gaya raat ki sadkon par race kiya hawa mere chehre par mere dimag mein jo kuch mainne dekha aur pada tha ghum raha tha. 

Mainne scooter ko halke roshan parking mein park kiya aur chhote thode gande lobby mein ghus gaya. Receptionist ek young aurat shayad pachees saal bhari eyeliner tight low cut blouse gehri cleavage dikhati hui name tag sana upar dekhi dheere jaanti hui muskaan ke saath. 



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Swagatam sundar. Raat ke liye kamra? Ya kuch aur manoranjan dhoondh rahe ho? Mainne pehle innuendo ignore kiya. Ek aurat baingani shalwar kameez mein kisi aadmi ke saath bees tees minute pehle check in ki thi kaunsa kamra? Sana counter par aage jhuki chooche lakdi par dabaati hui aankhein mischief se chamakte hue. 

Oh haan woh eager couple kamra 304 mein. Uski gaand mainne kaafi time mein sabse badi rasili dekhi thi baingani kapda itna tight ki jaise paint kiya ho. Woh desk par bhi haath usse hata nahi paa raha tha. Unhe jaante ho? Unke bagal wala kamra chahte ho? 305 free hai perfect sunne ke liye deewaron se. Woh shayad already nange aur busy honge. Yahaan patli deewarein moan bahut achhe se aati hain. 

Usne aage badh kar mera bazu pakad liya ungliyan halke se sahlate hue. Lag rahe ho tense beta. Aise jagah pe pehli baar? Zyadatar tere umar ke ladke apne chhote adventures ke liye aate hain. Kya main extra towels laaun ya shayad tere saath jaldi swagat malish join karun? Main bahut achhe deti hoon sukoon bhari ant wale shamil agar achha tip doge. Usne aankh mari honth kaat te hue. 

Main jaanta tha muhajiroon ek veshyaalay tha main kabhi nahi jaanta tha yeh hotel veshyaalay ke dhandhe ke liye istemal hota hai lekin ab pata chala. Mujhe sach mein ghin aayi vishal meri maa ko uski badboo bhari gaand chodne ke liye veshyaalay le gaya. Lekin kuch mujh mein tha jo mujhe bahut excited kar raha tha. 

Ya agar adventurous feel kar rahe ho toh main 304 par knock kar sakti hoon dekhoon kya woh company chahte hain. Aadmi obsessed lage tha woh apni ungliyon ko sung raha tha jaise duniya ka sabse bada secret ho. Aurat poore time has rahi thi. Kinky jodi. 

Mainne apna bazu politely lekin mazbooti se peeche kheench liya gaal garam. Sirf unke bagal wala kamra please. Koi extra nahi. Sana ne dramatically pout kiya lekin booking ko dheere soch samajh kar process kiya key counter par slide karte hue mere ungliyon ko brush karte hue. 

Kamra 305. Sirf cash. Aur agar malish ke baare mein soch badlo ya bagal ka show bahut loud ho jaye aur tumhe sukoon chahiye toh reception call kar ke sana maang lena. Main 2 baje tak hoon aur mujhe handsome young ladkon ko lambi raat ke baad relax karane mein madad karna pasand hai dekhne ke baad. 

Woh dheere se hansi ek gulgulaati awaaz promise se bhari. Apna stay enjoy karna. Bahut zor se sunne mein khud ko thaka mat dena. Mainne jaldi se payment kiya key pakdi elevator ki taraf bhaga uski flirtatious hasi mujhe peeche follow kar rahi thi. 

Kamra chhota aur basic tha murjhaaya floral bedsheet purana ac unit gungunata hua ek single window gali ki taraf. Mainne darwaza lock kiya main light band ki bedside lamp halki on ki. Mera dil itna zor se dhadak raha tha ki sun sakta tha. Mujhe dekhna tha. 

305 aur 304 ke beech connecting darwaze ke neeche chhota gap tha jahaan seal ghis chuki thi agar main zameen par let kar aankh kareeb dabaun toh kaafi. Mainne waise hi kiya gaal thandi tile par ek aankh agle kamre ke halke sunehre roshni mein jhaak rahi thi. 

Woh wahaan the. Maa bed ke kinare jhuki hui baingani shalwar aur kameez kamar ke aas paas bunch kiye hue uski shandar badi gaand bilkul nangi aur unchi hawa mein pesh ki hui dono gaand thodi faili hui. Vishal uske peeche khada shirt utari hui pants ghutnon tak tube vaseline ka bada nikaal kar. 

Usne do ungliyan gehri tarah us moti saaf gel se coat ki phir aage badh kar dheere pyaar se uske khule gaand ke chhed par lagane laga halke gol gol ragadte hue uske puckered dark pink rim ke aas paas sirf tip andar daba kar lube ko patient obsessive care se andar kaam karte hue jabki maa saans leti hui uske haath ke against push back kar rahi thi. 

Main har dheere soch samajh kar movement har chamakte vaseline ke smear har chhoti si twitch uske chhed ki dekh raha tha jaise woh usse aane wale ke liye taiyar kar raha tha. 

 
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Your writing is very much exciting and erotic. Please give more importance on Aisha and Vishal. It will be more erotic and exciting if Vishal seduces Saima also and if there will be threesome sex encounter among Aisha, Saima and Vishal. And my request, please don't give more importance on asshole fucking and please don't use dirty words like potty and tatty. These kinds of dirty words make the story less erotic and exciting.
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(25-04-2026, 01:03 PM)Priyanka Nair Wrote: Your writing is very much exciting and erotic. Please give more importance on Aisha and Vishal. It will be more erotic and exciting if Vishal seduces Saima also and if there will be threesome sex encounter among Aisha, Saima and Vishal. And my request, please don't give more importance on asshole fucking and please don't use dirty words like potty and tatty. These kinds of dirty words make the story less erotic and exciting.

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Wah! bahut khoob! bahut acha writings! Namaskar
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bahut badhiya update, very nice writings! bahut acha laga padhke
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(25-04-2026, 01:03 PM)Priyanka Nair Wrote: Your writing is very much exciting and erotic. Please give more importance on Aisha and Vishal. It will be more erotic and exciting if Vishal seduces Saima also and if there will be threesome sex encounter among Aisha, Saima and Vishal. And my request, please don't give more importance on asshole fucking and please don't use dirty words like potty and tatty. These kinds of dirty words make the story less erotic and exciting.

Agree thanks
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Just superb and awesome update
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Danshu aur ekdom fataka update.
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