19-04-2026, 04:54 PM
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Coerced Shadow: Entrapment of my mother
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19-04-2026, 04:54 PM
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20-04-2026, 02:08 AM
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20-04-2026, 04:14 AM
Mallika knocked sharply on our peeling wooden door. Not Ma. Ravi Uncle swung it open, filling the doorway. He was shirtless, covered in a slick sheen of sweat that plastered grey chest hair to his skin. He wore only a simple, white cotton dhoti – the kind my father wore when relaxing at home. It was knotted low on his hips. Mallika gasped audibly, her hand flying to her throat. Her obsidian eyes widened in genuine shock, scanning his bare torso, the sweat dripping down his temples, the state of the dhoti. "Ravi!" she hissed, her voice tight with disbelief. "What is this... appearance? You are not still... done?"
Before she could finish, I ducked under Ravi Uncle’s thick arm, the forgotten console box crashing to the floor behind me. I bolted past him, down the short hallway towards our bedroom. The door was ajar. Inside, Ma lay sprawled on our bed, panting shallowly. A thin cotton sheet was tangled loosely around her legs, but her torso was bare, glistening with sweat under the dim bulb. Her breasts rose and fell rapidly with each ragged breath. Her skin looked fevered, flushed pink. She stared at the ceiling, eyes unfocused, lips slightly parted. When my shadow fell across the doorway, her head jerked towards me. Panic flared in her exhausted eyes, sharp and terrified. "Ayan?!" she gasped, her voice raw and weak. "No! Go... go away! Out! Out of this room!" She tried feebly to pull the sheet up over herself, her arms trembling violently. "Now!" "*Ayan" Ravi Uncle’s voice boomed from behind me, filling the cramped hallway. His heavy hand landed on my shoulder, fingers digging in like iron claws beneath the damp silk shirt. "Come." He steered me firmly backwards, away from the doorway, his bulk blocking my view of Ma. "Your mother is... unwell." His breath smelled sharply of expensive cologne and something metallic underneath. "She needs rest. Quiet." He guided me forcibly towards the living room. "Sit." He gestured towards the worn sofa. "Be good." I sank onto the scratchy fabric, my gaze fixed on the floor. Mallika stood rigid by the door, her face a mask of fury and disbelief directed at Ravi Uncle - “I thought you would be done by now” Ravi uncle smiled back - “She is special” I sat rigid on the sofa, the cheap fabric scratching my thighs. Mallika's perfume hung thick in the air, mixing with the sharp tang of Ravi Uncle's sweat. He leaned against the doorframe to Ma's room, arms crossed over his bare, hairy chest, the white dhoti looking obscenely casual. Mallika paced the cramped living room, her silk sari hissing against her legs. Her obsidian eyes burned with a cold fury. "Special?" she spat, the word brittle. "This is reckless, Ravi. Utterly reckless." She gestured sharply towards the closed bedroom door. "Look at the state of you! Look at the time! What if neighbours saw? What if someone came?" Her voice dropped to a venomous whisper. "We have protocols. Discretion. This... this is sloppy.Also, You are casual about boys seeing this." Ravi Uncle just smirked, wiping sweat from his brow with the back of his hand. "Relax, Mallika. The boy saw nothing important. And Debjani..." He glanced towards the door, a possessive gleam in his eyes. "...she understands her position now. Deeply." He pushed off the doorframe. "Alright, alright. We are going now. No one will know about this. You are thinking too much" He strode past Mallika towards the front door, not bothering to retrieve his shirt. "Rohan! Move!...let us go home now" Mallika lingered for a second, her furious gaze sweeping the cramped room, lingering on the forgotten console box lying on its side near the door. She looked at me, sitting frozen on the sofa. "Enjoy your gift, Ayan," she said, her voice devoid of its earlier false cheer, flat and cold. "And remember... quiet boys get nice things." She turned on her heel and followed Ravi out. The door clicked shut, leaving a sudden, heavy silence broken only by Ma’s muffled, ragged breaths from the bedroom. Minutes crawled by. The humid Kolkata night pressed against the windows. Then, the bedroom door creaked open. Ma emerged, fully dressed in her usual faded cotton sari, her hair damp and neatly combed back into a tight bun. Her face was unnervingly composed, the frantic terror from earlier smoothed away, replaced by a brittle calm. She walked slowly, deliberately, towards the sofa where I sat, avoiding the gleaming console box on the floor. "Ayan," she said, her voice low but steady. "What did you do outside? With Mallika-di?" She sank onto the worn cushion beside me, her movements stiff, careful. I stared at my hands. " I had Ice cream, ma" I mumbled. "At some place near" I glanced at her face, searching for cracks in the calm. "Then... Mallika-aunty took us to South City Mall. She... she bought me this." I gestured limply towards the garish box. Ma’s gaze flickered towards the console for a fraction of a second. There was no spark of curiosity, no flicker of surprise or disapproval. Her eyes, flat and distant, slid back to mine as if it were just another piece of furniture. She didn’t ask about it. She didn’t seem to hear the price tag and did not seem to be interested in listening to me about the gift. "Ayan," she said, her voice low and steady, cutting through my stumbling words. She leaned closer, the faint scent of her soap barely masking the lingering metallic tang of sweat. Her eyes, though calm, held a desperate intensity. "Listen to me. Whatever happened... whatever you think you saw... you must never tell your Baba.*" Her fingers, cold and trembling despite the heat, gripped my wrist. "Promise me. Swear on my name. You will not breathe a word of this to Dad." The pressure of her grip, the raw plea in her usually soft eyes, left no room for argument. "Promise, Ayan." I nodded, my throat tight. "I promise, Ma." The words felt like stones dropping into my stomach. She released my wrist, the ghost of her touch remaining, and stood up, smoothing her sari with that unnerving calm. "Good boy," she murmured, her voice flat. "Now, eat something. Sleep." She moved towards the kitchenette, her steps slow and deliberate, each movement radiating a bone-deep exhaustion that her composed face couldn’t hide. She didn’t look at the console again. Hours later, the stifling heat and the weight of the promise kept me awake. The flat felt suffocating, thick with unspoken horrors. Needing air, or just escape, I slipped out of my bedroll and padded silently towards the bathroom. The cracked linoleum was cool under my bare feet. Moonlight filtered through the small, high window, casting long, distorted shadows. As I went inside the toilet to empty my bladder, something inside the plastic dustin beside the toilet caught my attention. As I lifted the lid of the plastic dustbin beside the toilet, I could see the item – not crumpled paper, but a thick, rolled-up pouch made of what looked like rubbery plastic, discarded near the top. It was unfamiliar, opaque, and heavy-looking. Peering closer, I saw it was knotted tightly at one end. Inside, visible through the stretched plastic, was a thick, viscous white fluid, glistening faintly. It looked alien, unsettling. My breath caught. I’d never seen anything like it in our dustbin before. A cold dread prickled my skin. Was it medicine? Something from... Ravi uncle? The image of Ravi Uncle’s sweaty torso, the state of Ma on the bed, flashed unbidden. I dropped the lid back with a soft clatter, the sound loud in the silent flat. I didn’t pee. I just stood there, frozen, staring at the closed bin, the pouch’s image burning behind my eyes. The next morning, the pouch consumed my thoughts. At college, the humid air clung like damp cloth, amplifying the restless jitteriness in my limbs. During recess, I found Rohan huddled near the dusty tree, near our classroom. His usual quietness seemed deeper, shadowed. I pulled him further into the shade, my voice a low, urgent whisper. "Rohan," I hissed, glancing around. "I found something. In our dustbin. After... after you and your dad left." I described it quickly: the thick rubbery plastic, the knot, the thick white stuff inside. "What is it?" Rohan flinched, his eyes darting mischievously before fixing on mine. He laughed hard. "It's... it's a condom," he mumbled, his voice barely audible over the distant shouts. "Men... men use them. When they... do it with women." "Why?" I pressed, my stomach twisting. "What's it for?" Rohan shuffled closer, lowering his voice further. "Protection," he whispered. "So women don't get babies." He glanced around again, his face pale. "When a man... puts his thing... inside a woman... Some Stuff comes out from the man. It is called Sperm. It makes babies happen. The condom catches it. Stop it going inside her." My stomach clenched. "So... that white stuff...?" "It's sperm," Rohan confirmed, voice flat. "My dad released it for your mom last night." He kicked at a pebble. "He always uses them. With his girls as well. I know about it. My dad is just making sure that your mom does not get pregnant” The word "sperm" hung in the humid air, thick and ugly. My mind raced, trying to fit this horror into the world I knew. "So... that white stuff... that's how...?" I couldn't finish. The image of my parents flickered – Baba’s gentle smile, Ma’s soft hands. "Is that how I was born? Did... did my Baba put his... sperm... inside Ma? And his... sperm... made me?" Rohan stared at the cracked earth beneath the neem tree. "Yeah," he mumbled, kicking a clod of dirt. "That's how everyone starts. Your dad and mom... they must've done it. To have you." His voice was flat, matter-of-fact, stripped of any tenderness. "But with my dad... it's different. He uses the condom. Catches it. So no baby happens. He doesn't want babies from... from his girls. Like your ma." He spat out the last words, his face twisting with a bitterness far too old for him. " If your ma become my dad's wife, he might have treated her differently. He brought me in this world by giving his sperm to my mom” The image of the knotted pouch in our dustbin haunted me. Days later, while searching for a lost marble under the sagging sofa, my fingers brushed against another one – identical, thick rubber, knotted shut, heavy with its viscous load. It lay half-hidden in the dust bunnies near Ma’s knitting basket. A cold wave washed over me. Then, emptying the small bin beside Ma’s dressing table – another one, crumpled beneath used tissues. Every few days, like a grotesque scavenger hunt, I’d find them: behind the water drum in the bathroom, tucked under the edge of the thin rug in the living room. Always the same thick, opaque plastic, knotted tight, filled with that glistening white fluid. Ravi Uncle’s signature and presence was always evident in our home, left like trophies, or simply discarded trash in the home. I realized Ravi uncle was continuously visiting mom during my absence and probably violated her in every place of our home. Each discovery tightened a vise around my chest. I couldn’t tell Baba. But the evidence piled up, invisible to everyone but me. The house started smelling different when I returned from college – a lingering mix of Ravi’s cloying cologne and something sour, underlying, that wasn’t Ma’s soap or cooking. One Saturday morning, Ma moved stiffly, brewing tea with unnerving focus. Her eyes avoided mine. "Ayan," she announced, her voice unnaturally bright, brittle. "We're going out today. With Ravi Uncle. Shopping. Then maybe a movie. Dinner somewhere nice." She poured the tea, her hand trembling slightly. My stomach clenched. "Shopping?" I echoed, disbelief thick in my throat. "With him?" Ma flinched, busying herself with wiping the counter. "Yes. He wants to... to buy you some new clothes. Something nice." Her voice sounded strained, rehearsed. "Be ready by ten.” She retreated to her room. When she emerged an hour later, I froze. She wore her best silk sari – the deep blue one with silver thread Baba had bought her years ago for Durga Puja. Her hair was oiled and coiled elaborately, not her usual loose bun. Kohl rimmed her eyes, making them look bruised and enormous against her pale skin. Rouge stained her cheeks unnaturally bright. She looked like a garish imitation of herself, dressed for a festival she despised. She hadn't worn makeup since Baba left. Last time when we went out with Ravi uncle she did not wear makeup. Her lips was shining with lipstick. She avoided my stare, fussing with her purse.
20-04-2026, 11:55 AM
Waiting to know what’s in store
Story is going great. Wondering where this will end for Ayan…Incest?
20-04-2026, 05:49 PM
Great Update and please can you give the updates a bit faster or you can give us a big update.
20-04-2026, 09:19 PM
nice narration keep going with hot updated
21-04-2026, 11:34 PM
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22-04-2026, 10:04 AM
Bro update
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23-04-2026, 02:22 PM
Ravi Uncle arrived precisely at ten, driving his sleek black sedan. He wore crisp linen trousers and a silk shirt unbuttoned too low, revealing grey chest hair. "Debjani!" he boomed, stepping inside without invitation. His eyes swept over her, lingering on her painted lips, the exposed curve of her neck. "You look stunning. Like a goddess." Ma flinched, a tremor running through her silk-clad shoulders, but forced a thin smile. "Thank you, Ravi ji." Her voice sounded brittle, rehearsed. He turned to me, his smile sharp. "And Ayan! Ready to go out with us".
I asked him - “where is Rohan?” He replied - “He has a martial arts class today. We will pick him up after our shopping” The mall air conditioning hit us like a physical blow after Kolkata’s humid oven when we reached there.Ravi Uncle steered us towards a men's boutique filled with blindingly bright shirts. "Pick something, Ayan," he commanded, gesturing vaguely at a rack. "Something smart." I stared at the garish patterns – electric blues and violent pinks – feeling sick. Ma nudged me gently. "Choose one, beta," she whispered, her eyes pleading. "The blue one is nice." I grabbed the nearest blue shirt, a hideous polyester thing with shiny buttons. Ravi Uncle barely glanced at it before tossing it to a bored salesman. "Wrap it." He pulled out a thick wad of notes. "Now, say thank you, Ayan," Ma murmured, her painted nails digging into my arm. The words stuck in my throat. "Thank you, Uncle" I choked out, staring at my sandals. Ravi Uncle clapped me on the shoulder, hard. "Good boy. Now, ladies first!" He steered Ma firmly towards the escalator. "Time for your treat, Debjani." Two floors up, we entered a lingerie store bathed in soft pink light. Mannequins posed in lace and satin, faceless torsos dbangd in scraps of fabric. Ma froze just inside the entrance, her silk sari suddenly looking cheap against the gleaming displays. Ravi Uncle strode confidently towards a young salesgirl scrolling on her phone. "Hey" he barked, startling her. "Show us your best pieces. For my wife." He gestured carelessly towards Ma. "She deserves something special. Today is our anniversary" The salesgirl blinked, then smiled brightly at Ma. "Oh, madam! Lucky you!" she chirped. "Husband appreciating your beauty after one kid? That’s rare!" Ma flushed crimson, shrinking into herself. Her fingers twisted the pallu of her sari into knots. "He... he's not..." she stammered, voice barely audible. The salesgirl ignored her protest, already pulling out shimmering sets. "This French lace," she gushed, holding up a sheer black bra and thong. "Very sexy! …will suite you well…madam" Ravi Uncle grinned, leaning close to Ma. "Yes," he murmured, loud enough for me to hear. "That will look perfect on you tonight." Ma stared at the floor tiles, her painted lips pressed into a tight line. "No," she whispered. Ravi Uncle waved dismissively. "Nonsense. Wrap it." He pulled out his wallet again. "And that red one," he added, pointing to a flimsy teddy. The salesgirl beamed, folding the garments into crisp tissue paper. Ma stood rigidly, a statue of humiliation, as Ravi Uncle paid. He took the glossy bag himself, handing it to Ma with a flourish. "For tonight," he said, his voice thick with promise. Ma clutched the bag like it contained something valuable. I was not sure what was going around me. Why was Ravi uncle talking about tonight? What was going to happen tonight? Why was mom silent? Why was she not protesting? Why was she allowing Ravi uncle to buy such things for her? We picked Rohan up from his martial arts class. He climbed into the back seat beside me, smelling of sweat and disinfectant. He avoided looking at Ma or me, staring fixedly out the window. Ravi Uncle drove to the multiplex, its neon lights harsh against the dusk. Inside the cavernous theatre lobby, Ravi Uncle bought tickets for a loud superhero film. "Popcorn?" he asked, gesturing towards the counter. "No," Ma whispered. Ravi Uncle shrugged, buying a large tub anyway. He handed it to Ma. “Hold this.” The theatre was dark and cold, the booming soundtrack already assaulting our ears. We shuffled down the aisle. Last time, Ma had insisted Rohan and I sit between her and Ravi Uncle. This time, Ravi Uncle gestured sharply. "You boys, there," he pointed to the seats on the far left aisle. "Debjani, here.sit beside me" He slid into the middle seat, patting the plush chair beside him for Ma. She hesitated, clutching the popcorn tub like a shield, then sank stiffly into the seat directly to his right. Rohan and I sat on the outside edge, flanking them, Rohan beside Ma, me beside Ravi Uncle. He stretched his arm casually along the back of Ma’s seat. The superhero punched through walls, explosions shaking the seats. Beside me, Ravi Uncle leaned close to Ma. His head tilted towards her ear, his lips moving silently against the roar. Ma sat rigidly upright, staring fixedly at the screen, her face pale in the flickering light. I strained to hear, leaning slightly towards them, ignoring the flashing images. Fragments drifted through the noise: "...so soft..." I heard Ravi uncle saying a low murmur. Ma’s head dipped slightly, her lips moving rapidly. "...please... stop...Ravi" I heard my mom's voice. "Not here... the boys..." Ravi Uncle chuckled, a low rumble lost in the movie’s thunder. His hand, resting on the seatback behind her, slid down. His fingers brushed the bare skin of her shoulder where her sari blouse ended. Ma flinched violently, jerking away. "Don’t!" she hissed, louder this time, glancing desperately towards Rohan and me. Rohan stared straight ahead, motionless, pretending not to see. Ravi Uncle leaned in again, his mouth brushing her earlobe. "You look stunning," he breathed, his voice thick. "Can’t wait to taste those lips...I will lick you everywhere tonight." His hand slid lower, tracing the curve of her spine through the silk. Ma froze, a trapped animal. "Stop it!" she whispered fiercely. "They’ll see!" "They see nothing," Ravi Uncle murmured, his fingers digging into her waist. "Just enjoying the film. Like good boys." He shifted his bulk, pressing closer. Ma squeezed her eyes shut, her knuckles white on the popcorn tub. "Please," she begged, her voice cracking. "Not here. Later... whatever you want... just not here." He grinned, a flash of teeth in the dim light. "Later," he promised, his hand finally retreating to the armrest, but his thigh remained firmly pressed against hers. Ma stayed rigidly upright, barely breathing, her gaze glued to the screen but seeing nothing. The film dragged on, explosions and quips meaningless noise. Rohan remained a statue beside her. I watched Ravi Uncle’s profile—the smug satisfaction, the way his eyes kept drifting to Ma’s trembling lips, her neckline. Every flinch she made was a tiny victory for him. When the credits finally rolled, flooding the theatre with harsh light, Ma practically leaped from her seat, dropping the untouched popcorn. "Let’s go," she gasped, pushing past Rohan towards the aisle. Ravi Uncle chuckled, rising slowly. "Impatient?" he teased loudly, drawing stares from exiting patrons. Ma didn’t answer, fleeing towards the lobby’s brightness. He steered us towards ‘Saffron Dreams,’ an Indian restaurant dripping in gold leaf and velvet. The air hung thick with cumin and clove. Ravi Uncle ordered a lavish spread—butter chicken, lamb rogan josh, fragrant biryani. Ma perched on the edge of her plush chair, her untouched water glass clutched tight. She stared at the gleaming silverware like it was a trap. Ravi Uncle piled food onto her plate. "Eat, Debjani," he commanded, his voice smooth velvet over steel. "You need your strength." He winked, slow and deliberate. "For tonight." Ma flinched as if struck. She picked up a spoon, her hand shaking so violently the metal clattered against the china. She managed a single grain of rice. "Not hungry?" Ravi Uncle feigned concern, leaning closer. His gaze roamed her face, her collarbones, lingering on the swell of her breasts beneath the silk. "You will be," he murmured, low enough for only our table. "By the time I’m done with you." It wasn’t hunger in his eyes. It was predation—the look a leopard gives cornered prey before the pounce. He’d devour her, piece by piece, tonight. Outside, the humid Kolkata night swallowed us whole. Ravi Uncle unlocked his sedan, its black paint gleaming under the streetlights. "Hop in, boys," he ordered, opening the rear door. Ma moved stiffly towards the back seat. "No, Debjani," he stopped her, his hand firm on her elbow. "You ride with me. Up front." He steered her firmly towards the front passenger door. Ma hesitated, her eyes darting to me, wide with panic. "But... Ayan..." she stammered. "He’ll be fine with Rohan," Ravi Uncle dismissed, pushing her gently but insistently into the seat beside him. "Close the door." He slammed it shut himself, the sound final. "Now," he announced, turning to Rohan and me as he slid into the driver’s seat. "Ayan, you’ll stay at our place tonight. Sleep in Rohan’s room." He started the engine, its low growl vibrating through the chassis. "Your mother needs uninterrupted rest tonight . Our house is quieter." Ma stared rigidly ahead through the windshield, her knuckles white where she gripped the seatbelt. The garish makeup looked clownish under the dashboard lights. Her lips, smeared lipstick catching the glow, pressed into a tight, furious line. Not fear this time – pure, simmering irritation. She didn't look at Ravi Uncle, didn't look back at me. Her silence screamed louder than any protest. "Is that clear, Ayan?" Ravi Uncle pressed, pulling away from the curb. "You’ll stay with us." I forced a nod, my throat tight. "Yes, Uncle.” Beside me, Rohan slumped deeper into his seat, staring out at the passing blur of streetlights and shuttered shops. The air inside the car thickened with Ma’s silent fury and Ravi’s smug satisfaction. Deep inside, I knew what would happen between them tonight. The lingerie bag lay crumpled at Ma’s feet. I started recollecting Rohan’s fake birthday events—the Playroom’s cold metal bed frame, the shackles clicking shut, Ma’s choked sobs drowned by music. Her pain echoed in my ears now, sharp as broken glass. Would Ravi Uncle tie her again? To the same bed? The thought coiled in my stomach like a live wire. Ravi Uncle’s penthouse smelled of stale perfume and leather. He steered Ma towards the master bedroom, his hand possessive on her silk-clad back. "Go to Rohan’s room," he commanded me without looking back. "Sleep." Ma paused at the threshold, her shoulders rigid. "I need... to freshen up," she murmured, her voice flat. She bent stiffly, retrieving the glossy lingerie bag. Her fingers trembled against the plastic. Ravi Uncle grinned, patting her hip. "Hurry," he ordered, pushing her inside and slamming the door. The lock clicked—a small, final sound. Rohan tugged my arm. "Come on," he muttered, dragging me down the corridor. His room was a sterile museum of untouched toys—dusty Lego sets, unread comics. He kicked the door shut behind us. "My dad is going to fuck your mom now," he stated, dropping onto his bed. His voice was unnervingly casual, like announcing rain. "Want to see? Or sleep?" My throat tightened. "See?" I croaked. Rohan shrugged, pulling his laptop from under the bed. "The Playroom cameras. Same as before. But first..." He powered it on, the glow reflecting in his hollow eyes. "*You need to see this" He navigated to the encrypted folder, the one filled with horrors—Sneha Saha’s terrified eyes, other women’s muffled pleas. "Do you remember I told you Dad makes an intro video. For every woman. Before he... uses them." His fingers hovered over the keyboard. "He made one for your Ma.You have seen the other videos. Your ma’s one is special.” He clicked a file named ‘DEBJANI_PRELIM.mp4’. The screen flickered to life. Not the Playroom. Our bedroom. Our mattress on the bed . Ma sat perched on the edge, wearing her everyday cotton sari – the faded yellow one. Her hair was loose, messy. Her eyes were fixed on the floorboards. She looked smaller, younger, terrified. Ravi Uncle stood just off-camera, his shadow stretching long and distorted across the wall. "Introduce yourself," Ravi Uncle’s voice commanded, smooth and detached. A clinical tone I’d heard from him before. Ma flinched. Her fingers twisted in the faded yellow cotton of her sari. "Debjani Sarkar," she whispered, the name sounding unfamiliar, brittle. Her eyes stayed glued to the worn floorboards near her bare feet. "Age?" Ravi Uncle prompted, his shadow shifting impatiently on the wall. "Thirty-six" Ma whispered, her voice cracking. She swallowed hard. "Married...My husband…”She paused, Her fingers tightened on the mattress edge. "He... he works away. Six months... then home for six months." A tremor ran through her shoulders.
23-04-2026, 09:58 PM
nice update please make the upcoming update more hot and elobrated manner
24-04-2026, 12:17 AM
Nice one Waiting for long update
24-04-2026, 08:39 AM
Just don't stop. Outstanding ??
25-04-2026, 04:20 AM
Update kab aayega
25-04-2026, 02:38 PM
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What a narration and suspense buildup man.
Too good and too entertaining. Feels like not reading any update for a month and reqd every update in one go
26-04-2026, 05:38 PM
Update
26-04-2026, 08:53 PM
Ravi Uncle's shadow leaned closer. "And your experience? With men?" His voice was clinical, detached. A scalpel probing.
Ma flinched. Her knuckles whitened against the faded yellow sari. "Experience?" Her whisper was barely audible. She hesitated for a moment and then responded- "Only... only my husband." Her eyes remained glued to the floorboards. "Before marriage... nothing. He was... the first." Ravi Uncle's shadow shifted, leaning closer. "*Virgin?" The clinical tone sharpened. "Were you a virgin before marriage?" Ma nodded jerkily, a tremor running through her shoulders. "Yes." Ravi uncle asked again- "And now? After marriage? Only your husband?" Ma flinched, her fingers twisting the yellow sari into knots. "Yes. Only him." Her whisper was swallowed by the room’s stillness. "Faithful? Always?" Ravi Uncle’s shadow pressed closer, his voice dropping to a predatory murmur. "Never strayed? Not even... recently?" Ma froze. Her fingers dug into the mattress edge. "No," she whispered, too fast. "Only... only my husband." Her eyes darted towards the camera lens for a fraction of second, raw panic flashing before she snapped them back to the floorboards. Ravi Uncle’s shadow shifted, blocking more light. "Debjani." His voice dropped, losing its clinical edge, becoming intimate, dangerous. "Don’t lie . Not now. Not after... everything." He paused, letting the silence stretch, thick and suffocating. "Tell me about the other man." Mom panic- “Why are you doing this to me? …What you want to do with my confession.” Ravi uncle - “I told you darling…this will be discreet…tell the truth now.” Mom- “You are sick. You want me to say it? Okay. Yes. There was someone else. One person and you know who is it.” Her voice cracked like dry clay. “After my husband left.” She swallowed hard, staring at her knees. “He forced me.” Ravi Uncle’s shadow didn’t move. “Force? Why didn't you report it to the security officer?” Ma’s shoulders hunched inward, collapsing like a broken kite. Her face, pale moments before, flooded crimson—a sudden, violent blush creeping from her neck to her temples under the harsh laptop glow. She stared at her knees, fingers twisting the yellow sari into frayed knots. “He… he made me see,” she whispered, the words thick, clotted with shame. “What I was missing.” Her gaze flickered towards the camera lens—quick, terrified—then snapped away. “My husband…he is gentle. Soft. Always.” Her voice dropped to a murmur Rohan had to lean close to hear. “The other… he was… big. Rough.” She swallowed hard, a visible lump traveling down her throat. “It hurts. But… after… I felt… awake.” She pressed her lips together, trembling. “Like I’d been sleeping my whole life.” Ravi Uncle’s shadow shifted, leaning forward with predatory stillness. “Size?” His voice was smooth, clinical again, but threaded with dark curiosity. “Compare them.” Ma’s blush deepened into a mortified crimson, spreading down her neck beneath the yellow sari. She stared at her knees, fingers twisting the fabric violently. “My husband…” she whispered, the words thick with humiliation, “…he is… normal.” Her voice cracked. “Gentle.” Ravi Uncle’s shadow leaned forward, filling more of the screen. “Define ‘normal’,” he commanded, his tone stripping away any pretense of detachment. “Be precise.” Mom fingers dug into the mattress edge like claws. Her voice emerged as a choked whisper, barely audible over the laptop’s fan hum. “My husband… he is… average.” She squeezed her eyes shut, tears escaping onto her cheeks. “Gentle. Always gentle.” Ravi Uncle’s shadow leaned forward, filling more of the screen. His voice dropped to a low, insistent murmur. “Define ‘average’. In inch” Ma’s fingers dug into the mattress edge like claws. Her voice emerged as a choked whisper, barely audible over the laptop’s fan hum. “My husband… he is… five inches.” She squeezed her eyes shut, tears escaping onto her cheeks. Ravi Uncle’s shadow shifted, leaning forward with predatory stillness. “And the other man?” His voice was smooth, clinical, but threaded with dark curiosity. “He… he was… bigger,” she choked out, “Much bigger.” Her voice dropped to a whisper Rohan and I strained to hear. “Nine inches.” She shuddered, a convulsive ripple passing through her - “He forced… forced himself inside. It tore… hurt so much.” She pressed a fist against her mouth, muffling a sob. “But… after… the pain… it felt… alive.” Her confession hung in the digital air, raw and violating. “Like fire.” Ravi Uncle’s shadow shifted, leaning closer until it dominated the screen. His voice, when it came, was low, intimate, stripping away any pretense of detachment. “Tell me, Debjani,” he murmured, the sound thick and dangerous. “Did you want it?” The question landed like a physical blow. Ma flinched violently, her head snapping up, eyes wide with horrified disbelief. “Did you crave that big cock splitting you open?” he asked her ,“Did you beg him for more?” Ma recoiled as if slapped, pressing back against the headboard of our own bed. Her mouth opened and closed soundlessly. Ravi Uncle didn’t relent. “Answer.” His command was soft, absolute. A tear tracked down Ma’s cheek. Slowly, agonizingly, her head dipped in a single, jerky nod. “Yes,” she breathed, the word barely audible, thick with self-loathing. “I… wanted it.” He leaned in, his shadow swallowing her trembling frame. “Good girl,” he purred, satisfaction dripping from the words. “Now, what did he praise? What did he love about your body?” Ma squeezed her eyes shut, tears flowing freely now. Her fingers twisted the yellow sari into knots. “My… softness,” she whispered, her voice breaking. “He… he said I felt soft inside.” She shuddered, hugging herself. “And warm. He said… I was so warm around him.” Ravi Uncle’s hand shot out from the darkness off-camera. It clamped hard under Ma’s jaw, forcing her head up. The laptop screen filled with her terrified face—her large, dark eyes swimming with tears, her trembling lips smudged and pale. He held her jawbone like a sculptor examining flawed marble. “Beautiful face,” he declared clinically, tilting her chin towards the light. “Big eyes… perfect for tears.” His thumb brushed roughly across her lower lip. “Sexy lips. Very suckable.” He traced the curve of her mouth with his thumb. “You have a nice cock sucking face, Debjani.” Ma whimpered, trying to turn her head away, but his grip tightened like steel. “Did your husband ever make you suck his cock?” Ma squeezed her eyes shut. “No,” she choked out, her voice muffled against his thumb. Ravi Uncle’s grip tightened, forcing her jawbone upward. “Why?” His voice was low, insistent, stripping her bare. “Didn’t he like it? Or didn’t you?” Ma’s eyes squeezed shut tighter, tears leaking onto his fingers. Her voice was a choked whisper, muffled against his thumb. “I… didn’t like it.” The admission seemed to cost her everything. Ravi Uncle’s grip shifted, his thumb pressing harder against her lower lip, forcing it down slightly. He leaned closer, his shadow engulfing her. “Did that big cock man make you suck him?” Ma froze. Her eyes squeezed shut, tears escaping faster. She tried to shake her head, but his grip held her jaw immobile. A choked sound escaped her throat—part sob, part gasp. She remained silent, trembling violently. "Answer," Ravi Uncle commanded, his thumb pressing hard against her lower lip, forcing it down slightly. His voice dropped to a dangerous murmur. "Did he? Did he force that big cock into your pretty mouth? Did he make you choke on it?" "Yes," she finally whispered, the word thick with shame, barely audible over the laptop's hum. "*He… made me.*" Ravi Uncle’s thumb pressed harder, forcing her lips apart slightly. "*How?*" His voice was low, insistent, stripping her bare. "*Describe it.*" Ma squeezed her eyes shut, tears leaking onto his fingers. Her voice was a choked whisper, muffled against his thumb. "He… forced my mouth open." She shuddered violently. "He was… demanding. Kept pushing deeper… until I choked." Her breath hitched. "Made my throat burn." "Good girl," Ravi Uncle murmured, his thumb tracing her lower lip again, possessive. "Such pretty lips." His grip shifted slightly. "But let's see what treasure you hide beneath this saree.” His hand vanished from her jaw, then reappeared abruptly inside the neckline of her yellow sari blouse. Ma gasped, flinching back against the headboard, but trapped. His fingers slid roughly over the thin cotton of her bra cup, groping the soft flesh beneath. "*Size?*" he demanded, his voice clinical again. "*Tell me.*" Ma squeezed her eyes shut, tears streaming freely now. Her voice was a choked whisper, thick with humiliation. "Thirty-six... C." The admission seemed to tear something vital from her. Ravi Uncle’s hand vanished from her blouse. The camera view shifted slightly, pulling back to frame Ma’s trembling form entirely. "Stand up," his voice commanded, detached again. "Turn around. Show me." Ma hesitated, frozen on the mattress edge. Her fingers trembled near the hooks of her blouse. "Please..." she whispered, eyes pleading towards the lens. "Not... not like this." Ravi Uncle’s voice sliced through the silence, cold and sharp as shattered glass. "Debjani." The name was a command. "Now open your blouse and show me your asset” He paused, letting the threat hang thick in the air. "Or do I need to remind you how much worse I can make it? Remember the pain? Remember how you screamed?…and you know what secrets of yours are hidden with me. Don’t dare to say no to me." Ma flinched violently, her breath catching in a ragged gasp. Her trembling fingers, pale against the faded yellow sari, moved to the small hooks at the back of her blouse. Each tiny metallic click echoed in the stillness of our bedroom on the laptop screen—a sound like bones snapping. She hesitated after unhooking the top fastening. "*Faster,*" Ravi Uncle hissed, the clinical detachment gone, replaced by raw impatience. "Show me those big mangoes of yours”
26-04-2026, 09:22 PM
Amazing writings….pls continue with regular updates
27-04-2026, 12:23 AM
Nice one waiting for more updates as soon as possible
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