05-07-2019, 10:39 PM
Update veer
(05-07-2019, 12:12 PM)Waliaz Wrote: Wow! Thats amazing update. This is the writing of legend writer. Thats why many writers also follow you. You are brilliant writer who knows how to mix eroticness with the plot of the story. In this update the depiction of navdeep, ramu and baba is very well written. We can have exact look at their nature.
(05-07-2019, 01:43 PM)Hello523 Wrote: Siraa update keep going
(05-07-2019, 01:44 PM)jatt22 Wrote: good bro keep it up
(05-07-2019, 03:37 PM)SKELTON Wrote: Bhut umda lekhni. Ucch darje de lekhak ho tusi. Saroteya nu keel ke rkh dinde ho. Bakaamal kalam hai.
(05-07-2019, 05:30 PM)Muskan Wrote: Bahut Kamaal Di Update Likhi hai ... Ramu Te Navdeep Di Conversation di wait nhi hundi ...
Uss Vich Poora Masala Paa diooo ....
Baba De Muhre vi Nangi kardoh holi holi
(05-07-2019, 10:39 PM)Dandiwal Wrote: Update veer
(05-07-2019, 11:29 PM)AFSAR Wrote: Brilliant update. I am loving the navdeep character more and more as the story progress. Ramu is a very clever man.
(06-07-2019, 07:13 AM)Hello523 Wrote: Update waiting
(06-07-2019, 02:21 PM)jatt22 Wrote: waiting
(06-07-2019, 05:26 PM)Jatt James Bond Wrote: waiting
(06-07-2019, 05:26 PM)Jatt James Bond Wrote: waiting
(06-07-2019, 05:49 PM)Bhullar Wrote: Navdeep nu karo nangi te deo update jaldi
(06-07-2019, 09:54 PM)jatt22 Wrote: kro update g bhut time ho gya
(06-07-2019, 10:32 PM)Jatt01990 Wrote: super update bro.. waiting for next
(07-07-2019, 09:38 AM)Acoolhunk Wrote: Bro update krde