Thriller The Mirage and The Enchantress
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Chapter One

My father, Arun Chatterjee, is a successful man. He serves as the MD of a multinational company. Our home is in Garia. My mother, Bidisha Chatterjee, is a homemaker. Theirs was a marriage born of love, deep bond that spanned seven years before finally culminating in a wedding. While my father came from a modest middle-class background, my mother was the pampered only daughter of a wealthy man. Despite having no lack of material comforts, she was profoundly lonely; her mother had passed away during her childhood, and her father was perpetually consumed by his business. Consequently, she had carved out a small, private world for herself.

It was my father who brought light into the darkness of her solitude. In him, she found a reason to forget all her pain. She broke out of her shell, and thus began their vibrant romance. My father loved her beyond measure and could never bear to see her in distress. To make himself worthy of her, he worked with relentless dedication. Meanwhile, my mother, praying for her lover’s prosperity, would visit temples, observe fasts like Ekadashi, and mastered the art of cooking. she used to feed him with her own hands with such affection; why am I saying "used to"? She still does.

The day my father bought her a saree with his first hard-earned paycheck, my mother’s joy knew no bounds. She felt as though she were walking on air. To this day, she keeps that saree tucked away in her wardrobe with utmost care. Though my grandfather was initially displeased when he learned of their relationship, he eventually accepted it. My father’s integrity and honesty were traits that eventually won him over.

But that is all in the past. Today, through his sheer hard work, my father is a successful man. Grandfather passed away two years ago. The bond between my parents remains unchanged, they are like the inseparable Bangama-Bangami of fables. When Father returns from work, Mother must recount every little detail of her day, and Father listens to her with unwavering patience. Our lives were sailing along smoothly, until a certain incident threw us off course.

I was a college student at the time. That year, we went to Italy on a tour. My father had a business get-together party there, and he took both Mother and me along. An African billionaire was present at that party. For the first time in my life, I saw such an imposing, rugged man in person. My father doesn't have any vices and, out of respect (or perhaps fear) of Mother, doesn't even touch alcohol. Naturally, the party wasn't particularly interesting for him. He stood in a corner discussing business with two associates, while Mother mingled with the other lady guests. Many were praising her beauty, and all the compliments made her shrink back in shy embarrassment.

Suddenly, my eyes fell upon that dark-complexioned man. With a glass of liquor in his hand, he was devouring my virtuous, dignified mother with his gaze. She was wearing a navy-blue saree and a matching sleeveless blouse. He seemed to be drinking in her lush, graceful figure. At one point, she raised her arms to adjust her hair. Seeing her smooth, manicured underarms, the man licked his lips. Finishing his drink slowly, he began walking toward my father. They exchanged words, and to my surprise, I saw Father laughing and joking with him. Then, Father led the man toward Mother.

"Mr. Bongani, this is my wife, Bidisha. Bidisha, meet Bongani, the owner of one of Africa’s largest diamond mines." Bongani extended a hand. Mother shook it. 

Bongani then said, "You are all invited to my mansion in Abruzzo tomorrow. My car will arrive tomorrow evening to pick you up."

Mother and Father accepted the invitation with great delight. The man then glanced at me, ruffled my hair, and swiftly strode out of the hall.
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Chapter Two

I am well aware that a son should not describe his mother’s beauty, yet I cannot help but say that my mother is exquisitely beautiful. Her complexion is a radiant fair, like the luster of a Champa flower. It is a beauty that does not demand attention, yet wholly captivates it. The overflowing, vibrant vitality of her youth seems to have found a tranquil sanctuary in her deep, obsidian eyes. One cannot gaze into them for long; they hold a heavy, almost melancholic depth they hold a heavy, almost melancholic depth a quiet sorrow intertwined with an unbearable sense of aesthetic pleasure. 

She carries herself like a subterranean river, her true depths hidden far beneath a placid surface. To the outside world, she maintains a sweet, meditative gravity, an impenetrable grace that nothing can easily disturb. Because of this, I often found myself wishing for a wife just like her.

Whether dbangd in the nostalgic simplicity of a cotton saree or the striking red gown she wore that night, her elegance remains effortless. 

The following evening, a black limousine arrived outside our hotel to pick us up. Mother was wearing a red gown paired with rose-gold plated jewelry. She looked like a living Apsara. We were stunned upon seeing Bongani’s mansion. It was a palace built in the style of ancient Roman architecture. A massive three-story edifice with a total of forty-eight rooms. With a tennis court and a swimming pool on the side, it possessed an ancient aura that made one contemplative. It felt disheartening to see a hideous monster emerge from such a magnificent mansion. Bongani stepped out and greeted us.

“Welcome, Mr. Chatterjee, I have been waiting for you. Greetings, Mrs. Chatterjee, a beauty such as yourself has truly illuminated this mansion by coming here.”

With those words, the beast kissed my mother’s wrist. I noticed a shadow of embarrassed discomfort flit across her face. My father didn't seem to pay it much mind. And so, one by one, we entered the vast building.
Bongani said something to a man beside him in an unknown African language, after which a foul smirk played on both their lips. I felt the first tremors of an ill omen.

They seemed disappointed to hear that my father and mother did not drink. There was an African girl inside, she appeared to be staff with a striking, sexually charged figure. I noticed her studying my mother intently. Bongani went over and whispered something to her; she replied, and both of them shared a sly grin.

“Look, a party is only half the fun if you don't drink. Listen, I have top-tier Russian vodka here. It’s a very feminine drink. Give it a try; I promise you’ll like it.”

I saw Father whisper something in Mother’s ear. She shot him a fiery look. Father held her hand and pleaded. After much persuasion, Mother finally relented. I saw a look of triumph in Bongani’s eyes. It filled me with dread.
Realizing it wasn't right to stay there, I began to wander through the mansion. The party was on the second floor. I walked slowly down the corridors. Some time passed.

I noticed Mother leave the room and head toward the washroom. I turned to head back as well. Suddenly, I saw Bongani exit the room. I hid behind a wall.

I watched as Bongani finished the drink in his hand, tossed the glass aside, and stood slowly by the washroom door. He pressed his ear against it, trying to hear something. Then, I watched in horror as Bongani unzipped his trousers and exposed himself. I gasped at the sight, it looked like a hissing black cobra. He began to stroke himself slowly. Several minutes passed this way. Then, the villain quickly tucked himself back in, zipped up, and stood by the balcony, pulling out his phone as if nothing had happened, staring at the screen.

Mother stepped out a minute later. Seeing her, Bongani approached with a smile and said something. Mother laughed, replied to him, and walked back into the room with him. I immediately stepped out from behind the wall and followed them in.

Inside, I found my parents sitting side by side. Father seemed slightly out of sorts; since he had never touched alcohol before, this was to be expected. Mother, having shed her shyness, was talking fluently with everyone. She, too, had perhaps had some of the drink. Suddenly, Bongani said something to the maid. Upon hearing it, the girl went over to Mother, helped her up, and led her outside. Only Father, myself, Bongani, and two of his security guards remained in the room. I, too, stepped out.

Once outside, I couldn't see Mother or the girl anywhere. Thinking they might have gone upstairs, I began to ascend. Reaching the top, I saw the girl and my mother standing with two glasses, talking and sipping slowly. They were likely drinking wine, and the girl was explaining the techniques of wine tasting to her. Once they finished their drinks, the girl led Mother into a room. I quietly stood by the door. I saw that the room was beautifully decorated, with rose petals scattered across the bed and a sweet essence scenting the air. The sight triggered a profound sense of fear within me.
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(02-04-2026, 06:01 PM)Pvzro Wrote: Wow keep writing seems excellent potential

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Very well-written.
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Fantastic writing well narrated!!!
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Chapter Three

I hurried downstairs. Peering into the room where the party had been held, I saw Father almost unconscious from the alcohol. I heard footsteps behind me and turned to see Mother and that girl approaching. I quickly rushed to Mother and said, “Ma, Baba has had way too much to drink.” Mother gasped in shock. She rushed into the room and sat beside Father.

Bongani, wearing a feigned look of guilt, said to her, “What can I do, Madam? I tried to stop him many times, but he wouldn't listen. It’s his first time; Mr. Chatterjee should have been more careful. Anyway, please tell your wife to listen to me now. Otherwise, who knows what danger might strike? Isn't that right, Madam?”

Upon hearing this, Mother looked up at Bongani’s face in shock. It was no longer the face of an ordinary human; it was the face of a vermin of hell, a fierce, bloodthirsty wolf. He looked as if he had emerged from some infinite abyss of the underworld where there is only darkness and no path for light to enter.

Bongani began to speak, “I fell in love with you the moment I saw you, beautiful. Anyway, listen, from today, you are my queen. Your beauty, your youth, have set my veins on fire. This palace, this immense wealth, is yours from today. And your husband, your son -they are all your slaves now. Come, darling, tonight is our wedding night.”

With that, Bongani reached out to grab Mother’s hand. Like a flash of lightning, Mother sprang up and moved aside. “A devil like you won’t be able to touch a single hair on my head,” she spat. “And don't you dare try to lay a finger on my husband or child, or you will burn in the fires of hell.”

Bongani burst into laughter. “Damn, my queen has incredible fire! This is going to be very enjoyable. Listen, your husband and son are my slaves from this day forward. If you don’t listen to me, my queen, I’ll have them chopped up and thrown into the river. The Italian security officer care for nothing but money—they stay in my pocket. I’ve bedded many women in my life, but today I am burning in the fire of love. How can I let this chance go?”

Looking at Mother’s face, I realized she had given up all hope of being saved. She walked slowly back to Father and sat down, stroking his head in an attempt to bring him back to his senses. Bongani laughed and said, “It’s no use, darling. His drink was spiked. Anyway, he’ll regain consciousness tomorrow morning, and then we can 'update his software.' Tonight is our wedding night; I don't want to ruin this mood with trifles. Come, get up.”

Mother said nothing; she simply closed her eyes. A relentless stream of tears began to flow. Holding Father’s head with both hands, she pressed a deep kiss onto his forehead, then rested her brow against his for a long moment with her eyes shut. Finally, she stood up slowly. As Bongani began to lead her out of the room, I ran quickly and hid behind a wall. The devil began taking Mother upstairs.

There are two staircases leading to the third floor. Since there was still a guard in Father’s room, I took the other staircase. Reaching the top, I found the corridor completely deserted. The door to the room where my virtuous mother’s "wedding night" was to take place was locked from the inside. Where did the security guard and that girl go? I wondered. I pressed my ear against the door but could hear nothing.

Driven by an unknown instinct, I entered the adjacent room. It was a filthy room, devoid of furniture, with the plaster peeling off the walls in patches. On the eastern wall, the wall that separated me from where Bongani was about to ravage my mother, there was an old picture hanging at eye level. On a whim, I took the picture down, and I was left utterly stunned by the sight that was revealed.

As soon as I removed the picture, the scene in the other room unfolded before my eyes. There was a hole in the wall, and the picture had been used to hide it. A dim light was burning inside. I saw my mother sitting on the bed with her head bowed, while Bongani held a joint (at the time I didn't know it was marijuana, but I do now). Bongani was wearing nothing but underwear. The monster had quite a physique, standing over six-and-a-half feet tall with a gym-honed body and I had already seen his "weapon" earlier. He was slowly dragging on the joint, watching Mother.

Suddenly, Bongani took a long drag and moved his face close to hers. Squeezing her cheeks with the fingers of his right hand, he forced a long lip-lock on her, blowing the smoke directly into her mouth. Mother struggled desperately to free herself, but against that giant, her efforts were like a paper boat trying to survive the waves of the ocean.

After the kiss, Bongani lifted his head and said, “Queen, I have never seen lips as sweet as yours in my life. What a beautiful taste, like the nectar of heaven.” Taking another long drag, he blew the smoke all over Mother’s body. Her entire frame was trembling from this violation.

Then, Bongani walked toward the table nearby and picked up a bottle of liquor. Pouring some into a glass, he held it out to Mother and commanded sharply, “Drink.” Mother looked up at him and did something unthinkable. She spat directly into Bongani’s face.
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