[sunilserene]

No it's great

[Runer]

Great Story 

[tomdickharry2024]

It's a very good story.. only suggestion is why should it be a slow seduction at all.. since her husband has clearly abandoned her even after all her sacrifice and loyalty..Anandhi should herself show initiative to pick a lover

[Mukul@99]

I think this plot really works because of how well you've paced the story. Interesting choice to describe the setting the way you did. Feels like a breath of fresh air. I can tell you are putting a lot of work into this. Love the way you structured it with such a unique perspective & made it so interesting! You are a great storyteller.

[laljal]

You're a master at navigating characters around, great job with all of them. My opinion is we should be keep sex or sexual seduction atleast in 1 out of 4 chapters. Until now story is more of emotionally drawing her to a zone which husband wanted, we are almost in a place he handed over to suriya, A wife should get sexually drawn or seducted before completely falling emotionally, she might prove shes intelligent as well, never know. As of now, story is very good, it captivated us without sexual tension. Hoping for more chapters, this shouldn't be a quick story after all that build up but author is supreme, its your story. Your AI images are lit, keep them coming.

[heygiwriter]

Honestly, I find this story much better as compared to your other two stories. The way you have developed the characters and moved them along with such a fast paced story is commendable.

The fact that we keep coming back every few hours to check for updates just shows how hooked we are.

Can’t wait to dive into the slow seduction!

Not at all Mirna story is my best work for me :) My mind actually stopped getting anything creative post that. Mirna character was so close to me :)

[heygiwriter]

It's a very good story.. only suggestion is why should it be a slow seduction at all.. since her husband has clearly abandoned her even after all her sacrifice and loyalty..Anandhi should herself show initiative to pick a lover

She need a time to accept the change. thats the reason and if she had to go for it before Jeeva/Rahul Vanish, she had to be seduced. slowly step by step so she accept after a point

[heygiwriter]

I think this plot really works because of how well you've paced the story. Interesting choice to describe the setting the way you did. Feels like a breath of fresh air. I can tell you are putting a lot of work into this. Love the way you structured it with such a unique perspective & made it so interesting! You are a great storyteller.

Thanks a lot :)

[Deepak_The_Writer]

Expecting a lot of happenings between suriya and Anandhi in front of jeeva(rahul)

[Deepak_The_Writer]

Expecting a lot of happenings between suriya and Anandhi in front of jeeva (rahul)

[heygiwriter]

You're a master at navigating characters around, great job with all of them. My opinion is we should be keep sex or sexual seduction atleast in 1 out of 4 chapters. Until now story is more of emotionally drawing her to a zone which husband wanted, we are almost in a place he handed over to suriya, A wife should get sexually drawn or seducted before completely falling emotionally, she might prove shes intelligent as well, never know. As of now, story is very good, it captivated us without sexual tension. Hoping for more chapters, this shouldn't be a quick story after all that build up but author is supreme, its your story. Your AI images are lit, keep them coming.

Thanks a lot i will try :)

[robertnow]

The biggest strength of your stories is the solid reasoning behind each character’s decisions, whether it’s about sex or anything else. There’s always a proper story. Whenever I read your work, I can truly feel the characters and visualize the atmosphere, it feels like something happening right around me. I’m not exaggerating.

That’s also one reason why, at times, I wish the characters would go in a direction I personally want. Once you set the platform, it builds into a very engaging and intense emotional and sensual experience.

Coming to this story, it’s no less than your previous ones. It’s unique in its own way. I do feel bad for Anandhi and Rahul, but at the same time, the way you’ve written it makes it feel like Suriya deserves her too.

My suggestion would be: maybe this time, you could explore a complete emotional surrender of the female lead and a stronger sense of seduction from Suriya - letting that dynamic fully play out.

[Deepak_The_Writer]

Waiting for next update

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 44 - A War in the room!


The three of them stood in the flat — the air thick with tension.
Anandhi felt a war-like situation closing in on her.

The sudden realisation that both men wanted to be her better half — her husband — hit her all at once. The thought of competition, the pressure of choice, the fear of hurting one or both… it all flashed before her eyes.

She was not sure how she would respond if either asked for her decision right now.

Rohan and Riya hugged her legs, the kids searching her bag excitedly to see if she had brought anything for them from the day’s chaos.
Jeeva handed them a small toy each — simple plastic cars he had picked up while they roamed the streets earlier. Anandhi was surprised. She was not sure when he had got them. It reminded her sharply of Rahul. He never missed bringing toys whenever he came from Mumbai. She remembered the time he missed his purse in the train, got down at the next station, gave his watch to a vendor, and still managed to buy toys for the kids before reaching home.

This was one reason why she could not ignore Jeeva. Rahul - The man she loved once — and still saw echoes of him in Jeeva. The pull, the care, the small thoughtful gestures… everything matched.


Her admiration for Jeeva lingered for a minute.
Then her focus shifted to Suriya — in seconds — as she witnessed something else.
Suriya came in between them and asked Riya and Rohan politely to go to sleep.

“Mom is tired,” he said gently, kneeling down to their level. “The toy travelled a long distance and needs sleep too.”
Normally her kids would shout if someone tried to take the toy away or ask them to do something else. But today, Suriya made them obey with just gentle talk and a warm smile. No force. No raised voice.


Suriya was putting real effort into gelling with the kids.

A person she could rely on now seemed to be none other than Suriya. He was gentle. He was a savior. He had even asked openly for her hand in remarriage — a new life with the kids. He equally weighed her kids and his own. A perfect gentleman.

Just today she saw him properly — quite muscular, his shirt’s top button opened, giving a glimpse of a hairy chest. Earlier she had seen him shirtless but never with these close observations.

Today, with Rahul confirmed to be in an affair with someone else, her mind didn’t act like one woman who had dignity. For a moment she lost herself between both men.

Suriya picked Rohan up in his arms and carried him to bed. Anandhi watched as he laid the boy down and started telling a simple story in a low, soothing voice. He was putting real effort into making them sleep.

Anandhi went in and joined them.

Jeeva just watched all from the hall.

He felt a heartfelt pang seeing them together.
But jealousy crept in. His male ego didn’t want that to happen.

He stepped into the room and said to Anandhi, “We need to talk.”
He really had nothing specific to talk about. It was just that some part of him didn’t want Suriya to steal these moments. He wanted to spend some time with her.

Suriya looked up — calm but firm.
“Whatever it is, let’s speak another day. She might be tired and exhausted from whatever happened.”

Jeeva didn’t expect the response. He thought Suriya was scoring well.
He went back to his guest room — frustrated.

When Suriya was about to leave the room, Anandhi said softly, “Thanks for everything… and thanks for understanding. 
I’m not in the mood to answer both of your questions right now.”

Suriya nodded. 

He had already decided when Jeeva and Anandhi was in Mumbai, that he needs bypass Jeeva and do his own game to take Anandhi in hand, for some reaons he actually thanked Jeeva inside, as he used to say asking her gentle in marriage would take time but seducing her owning her in bed would quickly push her towards marriage.. 

But if he continues to do as per jeeva's order, he may not get her in his bed anytime soon and he was not sure why Jeeva playing this game. 
He does'nt want to believe, who in the world will ignore a beauty like her. 

He decided to talk things in hand, the first step for it should be bypassing jeeva and having secret meetings and plans with Anandhi. 


he was lost in thought, until Anandhi asked! What? did my answer hurt you?

Suriya said no , i lost in some thoughts

“I know,” you are not in position to answer anyone, and frankly i dont want to hear anything from you apart from you are okay, and you are strong enough to handle it. 

Anandhi got relaxed hearing the exact words from Suriya. 

He said gently. “Tomorrow let’s go out — I mean in the noon. You go to college, I’ll pick you up for lunch.”
Anandhi asked, surprised, “Why?”

Suriya said, “Jeeva is always here hanging around. I have certain plans with respect to his education. and keep him focused on his future.  I don’t see any privacy, especially when we talk about him and we need to plan something for ourselves — I mean for protecting ourselves, the family, and even Jeeva.”


Anandhi hesitated for a second, then said, “Okay.”
Suriya smiled lightly.

“Good night. Sleep well. Tomorrow… lunch.”
Anandhi nodded and went to sleep.

The night was long for all three.

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 45: Lunch Date and Suriya gets Anandhi in his Seduction plan 

The next morning after they woke up, Anandhi prepared coffee for Suriya and tea for herself and Jeeva. She placed the tea cup on the table near the sofa and went ahead to give the coffee to Suriya in his flat.


Jeeva had followed Anandhi across the corridor after she left with the coffee cup.

Now all three were inside. The other two could sense that Jeeva’s eyes burned with urgency.

Suriya panicked looking at him. He had not spoken anything with Anandhi yet — he had just scheduled a meet with her by lunch — and he feared Jeeva might spoil the plans.

He signalled Anandhi to cut short and go to her flat. Before Jeeva could sense it, 
Suriya said, “Jeeva, come with me. I have a task for you at my gym.”

Jeeva was confused.
Anandhi left in a hurry.

Jeeva, seeing that, said, “I would have asked her a question. Why did you spoil it?”
Suriya said, “Not very much in the morning. Ask by evening. Please,” he pleaded.

Jeeva said, “Okay, let me wait till evening. Suriya, you need to fasten up and seduce her soon.”

Suriya didn’t want to respond to his plans. For some reasons he thought his own plan could work, and only the Jeeva method had been slowing down the entire thing. Suriya conveniently forgot how Jeeva had helped him a lot to get him closer to her.

But Jeeva trusted Suriya fully. All he wanted was for Suriya to take her in a marriage relation and for Anandhi to agree that he must seduce her. It was his plan — a dual love attack would make Anandhi lean on a better, more comfortable person. So Jeeva acted a bit aggressive, but he never knew Suriya was going to slip his control and accelerate himself to own Anandhi. Jeeva had really underestimated Suriya’s needs. He is a man who had no sex for 4 years. And he had a beauty toward him, and he is inside the game.

Hours passed.

Noon arrived.
Suriya successfully kept Jeeva in the gym busy, asking him to tally some accounts. 
He arrived at Anandhi’s college and picked her up in his Ford car.

She was wearing a creamy saree. Suriya looked at her and had a good look. 
She was a gorgeous, beautiful woman who looked better than any young woman. 32 is not old, right? he thought to himself. 
Anandhi noticed and asked, “Why are you blushing?”


Suriya replied, “You look beautiful in this creamy saree. This color is your favorite? I saw too many sarees in the same color.”
Anandhi said, “Yes, you observed me a lot.”

Suriya replied, “I am generally blind towards it, but anything with you, how could I miss it.”

Anandhi felt new, shy, and even odd to hear it from Suriya. Is this a flirt or love language? She was confused. She stayed quiet yet blushing till they reached a popular rooftop restaurant.

The atmosphere was breezy and good. It had a lot of privacy.

Suriya ordered a nice lunch deal with rice and parottas.
They started having lunch with small chattering. Minutes later Suriya opened up.

“Anandhi, the reason I want to speak to you is very important and we have to discuss that in private.”
Anandhi said, “Please continue. We are here in private already.”

Suriya then said, “I don’t want to pressure you about re-marriage. I know it’s not easy for you. Even if you had decided on it, you may have to look at a lot of various other factors before committing to it — like making kids agree to it, coming out strong together in society. I know all of it. Above all, I still know you are not ready to think about re-marriage. These are talks we can speak only after you gave a nod. So I can guarantee you that I won’t push you on it. Even without a marriage bond, I can be with you and take care of my kids. I mean even Rohan and Riya — I already consider them as my kids. Even if you don’t agree to marriage in the near future, I would still continue to act as a father figure.

But we still have age. I’m 34, you are 32. We still have youth. We still have a lot to enjoy together. If you agree to start a family with me and turn our family into 5… it’s up to you to give a final nod on turning that into a legal one. We register ourselves into a marriage so that our kids will get a better future.

I just placed my sincere request. But that’s not what I want to say. I just said all of this to be clear, precise, and to tell what I have planned for us, and clearly telling you I won’t talk about marriage anymore. Maybe in some months I may remind you, but I’m never going to pressure you on it.
Is that clear?”


Anandhi shook her head but said, “I’m also wanted to tell you I have not decided about re-marriage. 
The thought didn’t even arise in my head.”
Suriya said, “I know it very well.”


He continued, “So shall I move to the next part?”
Anandhi said, “Yes.”

Suriya then said, “Even though you said you didn’t think about re-marriage, in the next few weeks, we need to act like a couple.”
Anandhi was confused and shocked at the same moment.

She asked, “Why do we need to act like a couple?”

Suriya said, “Please listen carefully. Jeeva is not looking at the better side of his future or plans. He sticks with you. He wants to marry you. He is not ready to think what society will label you if a 10-year-younger person marries you. 

He is just self-centred. Actually he is a good guy, but your thoughts are destroying him. 
I think it’s just lust. He is complicating it with love. 
As an elder figure, we need to fix him. I know just a single woman cannot handle it — he may force you. 

I fear if he could be a threatening person. If he is someone like Sam or John, I could have beaten him. But he is our person, our relative. He has been here. It’s us who needs to clear his doubt and direct him good.

Anandhi, tell me frankly. Let’s say if his love is very true, not lust, and in case you married him, years later do you think the kids will feel good knowing you married a much younger person? Let’s say we don’t need to care about society cursing about us, but what if it calls out our kids? That case may not arise when we got married or in a relation because we are of almost the same age and I’m elder. In case of him, he is 10 years younger and the kids will have that issue when they grow up.”

It awakened Anandhi, looking at the other end.

Suriya continued, “But the issue is his age. He won’t listen to us, even if we want to enlighten him and teach him what is good and bad.”
Anandhi listened carefully.

She said, “Yes, his age. He was just very proactive and he had been forcing me sometimes.”
Suriya paused and said, “There is one more thing which is very concerning.”



Anandhi asked, “What is that?”
Suriya said, “Promise me you don’t get me bad?”
Anandhi said, “I won’t.”
Suriya said, “Guess where he gets all this confidence?”
Anandhi asked, “Where?”
Suriya said, “I guess it’s coming from you! 

For some reason you allowed him through all these absurdities. Maybe you have a good care for him? Like a brother or even a person you admire. Somewhere he takes all of your care and mistook it as a signal for him to take more advantage in you.”

Anandhi was shocked and asked, “Is it from me?”
Suriya said, “You know the answer better! Whatever you do, you need to reduce it step by step.”

Anandhi intervened and said, “Look at this,” she showed a mobile photo of her old photo with Rahul. Jeeva looked exactly the same.

Anandhi said, “This is one main reason I’m drawn to him. And he too showcases a love that gives me a feel of Rahul. I could not deny it. Maybe I should stop it. Whenever I try to do it, I fear it would hurt him.”

Suriya said, “It will hurt him, but he is not Rahul. He is Jeeva.”

Suriya stretched his hand and caught her hand. Anandhi was confused. She got a smile with the sudden approach from Suriya.
Suriya said, “Why are you smiling?”

Anandhi said, “Why are you taking my hand?”
Suriya said, “No, I just want to hold yours and ask for a promise.”
Anandhi asked, “What?”

Suriya said, “For keeping our dealing secret and maintaining it secret and never let Jeeva know.”
Anandhi asked, “What’s the plan and why we need to plan something. I don’t get it.”

Suriya said, “See, if we want to make Jeeva focus and choose his career, he should not get an idea about you or marrying you. So he won’t keep idle if you say you don’t want to marry anyone, not even me. He will try pushing you and find a reason to stay here.

He will detach from your thoughts and feelings, only when he sees you get into a marriage or love life. I’m proposing you to act with me like a lover.
If my guess is right, he would ask you tonight to choose one among us. Sorry, actually he will push you to choose him.

You pretend you need time. Two days later on Sunday, we pretend like we already fell in love and you chose me before him. He won’t buy it easily. I may need to hug you and maybe kiss lightly to tell him we are a serious couple.”

Anandhi’s eyes raised. “What? Kiss?”

Suriya said, “Just lighter. See, he won’t buy it even if we say we are in love. There has to be something which makes it natural. 
Hug anyone can do. But Kiss is intimate and believable. Don’t worry, I will just bring my lips closer.

He pressed his hand on her hand and assured. 

She was not sure, she said she will think about it but 

Suriya said i wont pressure on you, if you dont want its fine for me, but thats best strategy we can take on his intensity

Once he witnessed it, he would get confused and feel unacceptable, but start accepting that you cannot be his wife.
For the following weeks we need to do some believable acts. Don’t worry, I will guide you. It will be harmless. Safer. I don’t want you to show discomfort before him. I want you to be well prepared.

That’s why I called you here.
Don’t worry, I won’t act anything wild before the kids. Our act only when we suspect Jeeva is around us. Doing before him will make a doubt that we are deliberately doing, so we need to make scenarios like we get caught in the middle of some lovey-dovey.”

Anandhi could not contain a smile. It was strange for her. She was not in a place to say okay or not. She was just looking at him with some unbelievability.

Suriya, looking at her, asked, “Anandhi, do you trust me?”
She looked at him for a few minutes and said, “I have to trust you.”
Suriya said, “Let’s get ready.”

The lunch got over, and they got up to leave. Suriya held her hands. She said, “Jeeva is not around us.”
Suriya said, “Let us have some friendly moments like this, like we get practiced to stay closer, so it would be natural.”

Anandhi just wished Jeeva could stay away from her for his own good. Marriage, lust she is not ready yet, she knows but she agreed only for one thing, that Jeeva's future is safe and secured, focused without her. But she does'nt know Suriya who is holding her hand now, has deeper intentions and schemes and she is already into it. 

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 47: The Kiss That Broke Everything


On the drive back home, Anandhi sat quietly in the passenger seat, the creamy saree still hugging her curves. The afternoon sun filtered through the windows, casting soft light on her face.

She turned to Suriya and asked, “You said Jeeva might ask me to choose one among you two. You also said let’s push that two days away. Will he be okay with that? How should I react?”

Suriya kept his eyes on the road, voice calm and steady.

“See, I remember you slapping Sam. I remember how you defended yourself from that VIP politician. Who taught you those instincts? They’re still inside you. Just activate them. I guess you’ve become emotionally attached to both of us, so you’re not even ready to think for yourself.”
He reached over and gently caught her hand.

“Trust me. Be yourself. Scold him if you want. Tell him you’re still recovering and not to pressure you into something you haven’t decided yet.”
Anandhi looked down at their joined hands. A quiet realization settled over her — she had become weak in front of these two men who claimed to love her. But to her, Suriya still seemed better. He was gentle, calm, and supportive. Jeeva felt like a storm she couldn’t control.

They picked up the kids on the way back. Jeeva arrived later that evening and saw Anandhi already home.
He didn’t waste time.

“Choose one of us,” he said, voice low and insistent. “Stop dragging this out. I love you. I want you.”
Anandhi exploded.

“What do you think you’re doing? Why do you keep pressuring me? Don’t you see I’m still lost in thoughts? Leave me alone!”
The words hurt her even as she spoke them. She felt a sharp pain in her chest shouting at him, but she trusted Suriya — this had to stop.
Two days passed like a storm.

Anandhi avoided Jeeva at all costs — short answers, quick exits, never meeting his eyes. Meanwhile, she and Suriya had secret meetings. Their lunch dates became regular. Slowly, a real bond started forming. She found herself secretly appreciating his efforts — the quiet way he listened, the patience he showed, the way he never pushed too hard.

Suriya was determinted to make everything appear normal and not to deliberate attempt,
On Friday night under his instruction, Anandhi got prepared and left with Suriya for a marriage event, they took photo together, 

That was the first time Anandhi got a close photograph with any men, she know why t hey are taking this photo suriya had revealed it as he gonna make Jeeva look at it, after 4-5 attempts she looked normal around him and then he put his hand on her and they together took a photo so close. 

Suriya made it his phone wall paper and he made Jeeva to look at it casually.

When Jeeva enquired he said, the couple happened to be common friends for us, like groom is my friend and Bride is her old colleague, so we both went together, nothing much. Jeeva asked how you both look so close. Suriya winked its AI ;)


Sunday came.

The morning as usual, Anandhi prepared coffee and carried a cup to Suriya’s flat. Jeeva followed her silently across the corridor.
This used to be routine. Today was different.

Jeeva was determined. He was ready to corner her and force an answer. He thought this way she would finally choose Suriya and fear him enough to stay away.

Anandhi felt a war-like situation closing in again. The intensity of the last week weighed heavily on her.
Jeeva grabbed her hand the moment they were inside.

“You can’t deny this time or escape. I need an answer. Choose me. Marry me. I can’t leave you alone here. I know Rahul hadn’t touched you in years and you’ve never allowed anyone near you. Why not me?”

Suriya stepped forward — calm, composed.
“Stop it, Jeeva.”

“She already chose me,” he said quietly, looking straight at Jeeva. “She decided to start a life with me. She doesn’t want to hurt you, so she’s been silent. Don’t take advantage of her calmness.”

Jeeva’s expression darkened. This was what he had wanted… but something felt wrong. 

Suriya had moved faster than planned. In his mind he screamed: She is my wife. I planned to give her to you, but you’re stepping over me without even telling me?

He hated how it was unfolding. He wanted to shout “bullshit.” 

Anandhi was pure — she couldn’t choose someone so quickly. They must be lying. Or maybe… he had to push harder. No, this wasn’t the way.

“I don’t believe it,” he shouted sharply. “You two are acting.”

Anandhi looked at Suriya — her eyes searching for a cue.
Suriya met her gaze — steady, reassuring.

Jeeva couldn’t believe Anandhi stayed silent, standing idle.
“Tell me something, Anandhi. Why are you silent?”

Suriya answered for her, “She can’t say it. I told you — she’s just afraid of hurting you.”

“We started liking each other the day she saw Rohan sleeping peacefully on me. When you two were in Mumbai, we had lunch and dinner together every day. We’ve been figuring out how to lead a life soon.”

“No… something is odd here,” Jeeva said, shocked. “How did Suriya hide all this?”

Suriya stepped closer to Anandhi and put his arm around her waist. Their bodies touched. Anandhi just looked at him, saying nothing.

“Look at this,” Suriya said, showing his mobile with daily selfies from their lunches and dinners.

He leaned in and whispered in her ear, “Get ready. Don’t get agitated or shocked and spoil the plan. Trust me to the end, please.”

Anandhi stood like a puppet listening to its master — shock, confusion, and everything crashing together. Her only anchor right now was Suriya standing beside her. From today, Jeeva wouldn’t be a bother anymore, she thought.

Jeeva stared. “Okay… okay, I got it. Are these AI-generated photos?” 
Like one you showed last time. 

Suriya said this is real and that one too is real. 
I just dont want to make you worry. 

Suriya looked fed up. “Jeeva, you’re young. We both don’t want to disappoint or hurt you, but this is on you. Now look carefully — you don’t trust us, right?”

Jeeva said confidently, “No.”
“Will you believe it now?”

Jeeva looked puzzled — confused and suspicious, his face twisting with disbelief.

Before he could respond, Suriya turned Anandhi toward him with one strong arm pulling her flush against his body. He caught her face in both hands, fingers firm on her jaw and cheek, and forced his lips onto hers.

Anandhi’s eyes widened in pure shock — sudden, unexpected, violating.

She didn’t want to kiss back willingly. This was supposed to be an act, a desperate shield to push Jeeva away, nothing more. Her mind screamed no, stop, this is wrong — she was still a married woman, still waiting for Rahul in some buried corner of her heart. Her hands came up weakly, palms pressing against Suriya’s chest, ready to push him away.

But the moment his warm, firm lips pressed against hers, something deep inside her shifted.
Years of untouched longing — nights alone with only her fingers and quiet frustration — surged up like a dam breaking. The heat caught her fast, flooding her body before her mind could fight it. The sexual feeling kicked in hard — strong, overwhelming, undeniable.
Her body responded, betraying her.

Her lips parted slightly, almost against her will, allowing him deeper. Her hands, which had been pushing weakly, softened. Fingers curled into his shirt instead, gripping the fabric as if anchoring herself. A soft, involuntary moan escaped her throat — low and breathy — as his tongue brushed hers for the first time.

Suriya didn’t hesitate.

He explored her mouth like a rare achievement he had waited years to claim. His tongue pushed past her lips, slow and deliberate, tasting her fully. The warm, slick slide of saliva mixed between them — hers sweet and hesitant, his bolder, claiming. He licked along the inside of her lower lip, savoring the soft, plush texture, then swirled his tongue around hers, coaxing it to dance with his. He sucked gently on her tongue, drawing it into his mouth, tasting every inch — the faint coffee from earlier, the natural sweetness of her, the wet heat that made his own cock twitch hard against her belly.


Anandhi’s mind was in chaos.

This is wrong… I shouldn’t… Rahul… Jeeva is watching…


But her body had already surrendered. The taste of him — masculine, slightly salty, mixed with the lingering coffee — flooded her senses. His tongue licked deeper into her mouth, exploring every corner, licking the roof of her mouth, tracing her teeth, then sliding wetly against her own tongue again and again. Their saliva mingled freely now, slippery and intimate, strings of it connecting their lips when he pulled back slightly only to dive in deeper.


She could feel every detail — the way his tongue curled around hers, sucking, licking, owning. The wet, obscene sounds of their mouths moving together filled the small space. Her nipples hardened instantly under the thin blouse, aching as they pressed against his firm chest. A warm, aching wetness bloomed between her thighs, her pussy clenching involuntarily as heat pooled low in her belly. Her hips shifted closer without her permission, seeking more contact, her body craving the hardness she could feel growing against her.



Suriya’s hand cupped her jaw possessively, tilting her head for better access while the other rested on her waist, fingers digging in just enough to hold her in place. He kissed her like a man starved — deep, hungry licks, slow drags of his tongue over hers, sucking her lower lip into his mouth and biting it gently before plunging back in. More saliva coated their lips and chins, the wet glide making the kiss messier, more carnal.

Anandhi’s resistance crumbled further. Another soft, helpless moan vibrated against his mouth as her tongue finally moved — shyly at first, then with growing hunger — tasting him back. The years without a man’s touch, without being kissed like this, made her body sing. Shame burned in her chest, but the pleasure was stronger, flooding her veins, making her thighs tremble.

When some one see the visual now, it looked like Anandhi had pulled Suriya in for a kiss. 

Jeeva stood frozen a few feet away, watching the entire thing.

His heart twisted violently, a sharp, jagged pain cutting through him. This was his wife — his Anandhi — being kissed so deeply by another man. He saw the way her body softened, the faint moan that escaped her, the way her hips pressed closer. From his perspective, it looked shameless, intimate, real. His own cock throbbed painfully under the chemical storm raging inside him — jealousy and unwanted arousal crashing together in a sickening wave. Pre-cum leaked hotly into his underwear as he stared, unable to look away, unable to stop the scene unfolding before him.

After what felt like an eternity, Suriya finally pulled back, breathing slightly heavier, a thin string of mixed saliva still connecting their lips for a second before breaking.

He looked at Jeeva — eyes calm but firm, almost victorious.

Jeeva’s face was a mask of disappointment and raw pain. He had just witnessed his own wife being kissed so thoroughly, her body responding, a soft moan leaving her lips. He couldn’t face the reality. Without a word, he turned and stormed out of the room, slamming the door hard behind him.

The sound made Anandhi too look at the door, her mind was in a storm entirely. Her heart felt heavy watching Jeeva leave so broken.

Suriya turned to Anandhi, his voice soft, almost apologetic.


“I’m sorry if that was too much… I’m a very controlled man, but your closeness, your scent, your lips… you are the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen. I got carried away.”



The words brought Anandhi back to reality. She touched her swollen, wet lips with trembling fingers — flushed, heart still racing wildly, thighs pressed tightly together from the sudden, shameful rush of wetness between them.


She knew it was supposed to be just an act from Suriya to make Jeeva withdraw. But the way he had explored her mouth — tasting her tongue, licking every inch, sharing their saliva so intimately — had awakened something dangerous inside her. 


No… this just happened unconsciously. Just for today. Suriya got carried away and I… I did too. Let’s stop this from going further.

Yet another voice whispered: Trust Suriya. He won’t take advantage of me. After all, he’s become the only truly reliable person in recent days.


She hit Suriya lightly on the arm, a small, embarrassed laugh escaping as she tried to hide how deeply affected she was.
“You should have informed me prior… Why did you kiss me for real?”

Suriya smiled — warm, genuine, though his eyes still held heat.
“I know. But sometimes words aren’t enough. It had to feel real.”

She whispered, voice shaky, “Please don’t do this again. Let this be the last one.”
Suriya nodded, but deep down he already had bigger schemes ahead.

Suriya’s plan was working.
But for Jeeva, it had only brought unbearable pain.

[amzad2004]

Where is chapter 46?

[Deepak_The_Writer]

Excellent narration of the kiss

[sunilserene]

Nice build-up

[rhtkumar672]

Suriya has upped his game catching both Jeeva and Anandhi off guard. Let's see how the tension unfolds.

Great update as always