[seansean007]

Completely agree with you that as a reader it can be frustrating to see infrequent updates that too the same episode being broken into multiple chapters which are posted months apart. However, I can't do much as I have already told that the story is not a priority in my life. I try to post a few updates back to back whenever I get time and feel like writing. Thanks.

Hi Sean,  it's great to see ur update after long long time.   I totally gave up that u will come back.  But alas... Back with great update.   People may have different opinions but personally this is the best story on this forum.   

Only issue is so inconsistency in the updates that readers loose interest.  Please please workout on this n give us regular updates. I am sure regular updates story will move forward n will able to see Anita getting fucked by Hariya, ramu n bus guy also..  thanks again 

[val.coutinho]

Please post another update soon Sean

[sexypreeti]

Completely agree with you that as a reader it can be frustrating to see infrequent updates that too the same episode being broken into multiple chapters which are posted months apart. However, I can't do much as I have already told that the story is not a priority in my life. I try to post a few updates back to back whenever I get time and feel like writing. Thanks.

Sean I agree with you but only partially... Yes you can only write when you get in the mood for it... But dragging a chapter/scene for so much as you have done in almost every scene till now is also frustrating to the readers... Yes Infrequent updates to the story only add up making the whole thing even more frustrating... 

So please, try to post "regular" updates so people on this forum don't end up "begging" you for updates or end up venting their frustrations as a result of the delays...

[val.coutinho]

Sean I agree with you but only partially... Yes you can only write when you get in the mood for it... But dragging a chapter/scene for so much as you have done in almost every scene till now is also frustrating to the readers... Yes Infrequent updates to the story only add up making the whole thing even more frustrating... 

So please, try to post "regular" updates so people on this forum don't end up "begging" you for updates or end up venting their frustrations as a result of the delays...

Preeti your the best.... At words which I could not put up..... Every one has a life and needs to fulfill those demands/wishes which life demands.... But apart from this some have that talent to create something different and authentic which others demand and respect.... So I think that demand/respect should be honoured by the author/writer no matter how busy his/her life is.

[ShadowRising321]

Band kar de story.

[scepter7]

Hello sean bhai you are saying that you don't have time to write the story.I have one suggestion instead of writing the full update write a synopsis of the update and have someone else expand it. write the general short draft and have some of you fans who are good at writing expand it fully. I think there are plenty of fans willing to help you.

[sexypreeti]

Hello sean bhai you are saying that you don't have time to write the story.I have one suggestion instead of writing the full update write a synopsis of the update and have someone else expand it. write the general short draft and have some of you fans who are good at writing expand it fully. I think there are plenty of fans willing to help you.

I doubt if any of the fans of this story can do justice in "DRAGGING/STRETCHING" every scene into multiple pages just the way Sean does...

[scepter7]

I doubt if any of the fans of this story can do justice in "DRAGGING/STRETCHING" every scene into multiple pages just the way Sean does...

yes his style is very descriptive. in real world scenario it might work out in cases where the man is shy and the girl is bold mostly in the case of ramu.it won't work out for hariya because it would just be harresment or it would go to sex very quickly.extended roleplay only works on shy old males like ramu. i think sean should focus on teasing and roleplay aspect if he doen't want to rush to sex which it seems like he doesn't. Anita should now be teasing the hell out of ramu in various scenarios.at this rate the story will be interesting without focusing on sex

[creamydelight]

writer ko koi paisa nahi de raha hai, to na hi kisi ko speed demand karne ka haq hai na hi story bad karna kehne ka. pasand aata hai to padho, nahi aata hai mat padho.

[seansean007]

Sean I agree with you but only partially... Yes you can only write when you get in the mood for it... But dragging a chapter/scene for so much as you have done in almost every scene till now is also frustrating to the readers... Yes Infrequent updates to the story only add up making the whole thing even more frustrating... 

So please, try to post "regular" updates so people on this forum don't end up "begging" you for updates or end up venting their frustrations as a result of the delays...

I have never asked nor do I like readers begging for the updates. No reader should do that. Wait for the story to be updated and provide your thoughts. It's very simple.
As far as stretching is considered, if any reader can volunteer to rewrite chapters 119 to 122 in a way to keep it erotic but without dragging it into 4 chapters then that will be great. Let me learn from the readers. I am open for it. So any volunteer?

[val.coutinho]

Sean bro please post another update soon

[scepter7]

I have never asked nor do I like readers begging for the updates. No reader should do that. Wait for the story to be updated and provide your thoughts. It's very simple.
As far as stretching is considered, if any reader can volunteer to rewrite chapters 119 to 122 in a way to keep it erotic but without dragging it into 4 chapters then that will be great. Let me learn from the readers. I am open for it. So any volunteer?

I don't think they need to be shortened. You are very descriptive but the situation itself is repetative. Situation like going shopping with hariya, eating ice cream, rickshaw ride or bus ride was done more than once so even if the story is good it will feel repetative. I think you should try some new scenarios like going on a vacation with hariya, shopping but for clothes, aeroplane ride insted of bus ride where aeroplane is partially empty and hariya tries to seduce air hostess,cuckold angle but with another girl who tries to seduce hariya and anita gets jealous, going to gyms but while they are empty as you can put anita on gym clothes which many readers will like.There is also the cuckold husband angle as many readers like cuckold stories.

[scepter7]

I don't think they need to be shortened. You are very descriptive but the situation itself is repetative. Situation like going shopping with hariya, eating ice cream, rickshaw ride or bus ride was done more than once so even if the story is good it will feel repetative. I think you should try some new scenarios like going on a vacation with hariya, shopping but for clothes, aeroplane ride insted of bus ride where aeroplane is partially empty and hariya tries to seduce air hostess,cuckold angle but with another girl who tries to seduce hariya and anita gets jealous, going to gyms but while they are empty as you can put anita on gym clothes which many readers will like.There is also the cuckold husband angle as many readers like cuckold stories.

[Mayur5555]

I'll put it in simple words get Anita fucked that's what most of us are waiting for since the inception of this story since 2023 . You write exceptionally well that's why your story is a huge hit but get the thing done don't drag this particular part rest you keep writing however you feel fit.

[val.coutinho]

Sean
Now that you have posted back to back some updates.... will there be more updates coming or we will have to wait for another 2 or 3 months for updates ?

[Yampag]

Super one.. Seanbro..
Thanks for the updates after long time..
But worth reading.. mazaa aa gayaa.. wo hi aapki behtarin style.. super slow.. touch n go.. abhi kuchh ho jaayega.. lekin abhi bhi control apne characters par.. character khool bhi rahe hain par controlled way me.. bahut dhima fir bhi har ek pal kucch kucch hota raheta hai.. patro ki bhaav bhangima aur saath me khul kar baatcheet.. patro ka eke dusare se kucch na kuchh samvaad chalta hi raheta hai aur wo padhane me bahut uutejana feel hoti hai.. aur yahi aapki erotic story writing ki nipunata hai.. Anita ka pallu gira huva rahena.. apne boobs ka blouse me kaid khoolapan.. Anita ka aise hi Hariya ke muuh ke upar jhookna.. vaapia kpada leke baithana aur hariya ke mathe par lagana aur balo me haatha pasarana.. ufff.. vaise hi Ramu ka yeh sab kucch dekhana aur saathe me khooli chikni peeth dekhana.. fir Anita ke chhodne jaate vakt mirror se uchhalate huve boobs ko dekhana aur utarate vakht pallu ke lund ke ubhhar par tik janaa.. aur vahi juice wali double meaning ki chedchhad.. mujhe to aapki yahi style bahut bhaati hai.. mazaa aa jata hai.. mujhe kuchh farak nahi padta aise hi aage chalta rahe.. bas thoda update jaldi expect karta huu.. but koi shikayat nahi.. aap swasth rahe.. khuush rahe.. thanks..

[val.coutinho]

Sean bro post an update please

[srider69]

103, 104, and 105 are the best episodes by far. Wish we got similar updates further

[val.coutinho]

Sean please post an update soon cant wait to read more about Anita and Hariya's erotic encounter

[Ankyxxx]

Lagta hein, Sean ka khud ka engine kharab ho gaya hai. Isliye voyeurism ke agey kahani nehi bad rahi.