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The card read: Drip some warm massage oil (or chocolate sauce) onto your partner's chest/stomach and slowly lick it all off.
Evelyn: Hmm… you got a spicy one for the first card itself. Bharat, take off your T-shirt.
Bharat: Me?
Evelyn: Well, who else? Do you want me to wake up Gautam while he’s sleeping? Take it off.
He looked toward Geetha. She nodded in agreement. As he was removing his shirt, Evelyn quickly went and grabbed a bottle of chocolate syrup.
She had Bharat lean back on the sofa and drizzled thin lines of syrup across his chest.
Evelyn: Go ahead, Geetha.
Geetha: Why me? Why don't you do it?
Evelyn: I’ll take the next turn.
As Geetha leaned over him and pressed her tongue against the chocolate syrup in the center of his chest, the cold sensation gave Bharat goosebumps. Once Geetha began licking the sweet chocolate, he held her head and looked at her playfully.
Evelyn drizzled four more drops onto his six-pack and two drops right into his navel.
Licking the chocolate and leaving a trail behind, Geetha moved down toward his upper abs. Remembering the moments in their relationship when Bharat had drizzled honey, smeared Dairy Milk, and poured mango juice over her waist to lick it off, she pressed her tongue into his navel.
A shiver ran through him. "Uff... Miss..." he groaned, tightening his grip on her hair.
Intoxicated by the memories of Bharat’s past flirtations, she laughed and playfully bit the side of his waist.
Bharat: Oh… Miss, no biting. Only licking.
Evelyn: Hmm… okay, that’s enough.
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What if I completely cancel the Canada part and make it so they never go there at all? I want to keep Gautam in the dark about their situation for now and continue the secret bond between Geetha and Bharat as usual.
I’m thinking of fast-forwarding the story to Bharat’s Intermediate years, where Sindhu finds out about the Geetha-Bharat affair, and then starting a Bharat-Sindhu track.
Honestly, I didn’t like the Canada part. I just wrote it as it came to me in the flow. As for the Geetha-Haran part, we can reconnect them later during the college scenes.
I’m thinking of giving a best feeling when the story ends finally.
Tell your take on this readers?
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(11-03-2026, 06:53 PM)Haran000 Wrote: What if I completely cancel the Canada part and make it so they never go there at all? I want to keep Gautam in the dark about their situation for now and continue the secret bond between Geetha and Bharat as usual.
I’m thinking of fast-forwarding the story to Bharat’s Intermediate years, where Sindhu finds out about the Geetha-Bharat affair, and then starting a Bharat-Sindhu track.
Honestly, I didn’t like the Canada part. I just wrote it as it came to me in the flow. As for the Geetha-Haran part, we can reconnect them later during the college scenes.
I’m thinking of giving a best feeling when the story ends finally.
Tell your take on this readers?
If i be honest i like that thought too personally. Gautham being unaware has a nice ring to it. And fill in the next episodes with old characters like sindhu , siva etc .
The story situation now is turning to be too hardcore.i like the old model. (This is just a personal take )
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12-03-2026, 05:50 AM
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I like your idea . By fast forwarding the story you can so bharats urge to be with geetha. Also he will become more mature and intelligent enough to get her for himself and dominate her at his will. Let's go .
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12-03-2026, 07:14 AM
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(11-03-2026, 06:53 PM)Haran000 Wrote: What if I completely cancel the Canada part and make it so they never go there at all? I want to keep Gautam in the dark about their situation for now and continue the secret bond between Geetha and Bharat as usual.
I’m thinking of fast-forwarding the story to Bharat’s Intermediate years, where Sindhu finds out about the Geetha-Bharat affair, and then starting a Bharat-Sindhu track.
Honestly, I didn’t like the Canada part. I just wrote it as it came to me in the flow. As for the Geetha-Haran part, we can reconnect them later during the college scenes.
I’m thinking of giving a best feeling when the story ends finally.
Tell your take on this readers? I like the idea of keeping gautam in the dark...... For me I like it when bharath kept geetha to himself whenever he comes to tution....I like to see how he completely owns her to his will......
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12-03-2026, 07:20 AM
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Haran bro,,could you please explain???? Meaning no more update in xossipy......will update the story in English also....
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(28-01-2026, 02:41 PM)Haran000 Wrote: Okay, hear me, it’s not like I’m going to put ladies in queue and let bharath fuck them one by one. I think most of you had already observed, the intimacy between bharath and Geetha turned out to be rather almost love, not like a relationship of sex required. In due course I happened to put Evelyn as a friend of goutham just establish his character, then Evelyn got portrayed as an unsatisfied milf who got Goutham, and also it’s obvious she put expectations on bharath right. She’s going to request Goutham to setup Bharath for her.
And Sindhu, she is a character who played a pivotal role in this story. That restaurant and bar scene which actually pushed Geetha to open up to bharath that night. That is the reason I brought Sindhu in first place. You know Sindhu impacted more than Ramya, for pushing Geetha to think of her sexuality. Otherwise this story could have been a little less exciting. Without these friendly characters of Geetha I could have ended the acceptance Of Geetha to bharath like just a normal sexual seduction, right?
However, whatever these side characters role is, in the beginning of this I’m an amateur writer, who never ever thought this story would become this long and good. I just thought a student teacher sex story in first place, like that Dhika, Jaya stories. I wanted to make unique so this happened.
I got good encouragement in Telugu section, so I translated to English, now I’m happy here also there is good response.
Thank you for reading, please give likes, comments and ratings to encourage me more.
There is only 2 more nights & updates left in Canada.
Indian log hamesha baap ko chodna Kyu sikhaate rehte Hain? Free me itni umda story mil Rahi hai, but still readers are giving suggestions on what to do, what not to do? And the ones who never write a whole sentence properly are the loudest and most entitled to control the flow, pace and direction of the author's story. It annoys good authors who get frustrated and abandon their stories due to constant pestering. Leave the fucking author alone. Sachin ko batting mat sikhao. Anurag kashyap ko film banana mat sikhao. Jo free me mil rha hai, Prasad ki Tarah grahan karo chup chap aur thank you k alaava aur kuchh mat bolo. Seriously. What's wrong with people? Haran is doing such a great job but so many clowns giving unsolicited advice!!!
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you have taken a good decision. thanks anyways.
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Thanks. Please kindly next update eagerly waiting. Whatever direction, please don't break Geetha and Bharats love affair. Also, your idea of removing the Canada Trip would be great. Lastly, an young man normally have multiple sessions unlike Bharat only doing one session, May be Bharat can do multiple sessions for Geetha's liking, just a thought.
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30-03-2026, 05:23 PM
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(11-03-2026, 06:53 PM)Haran000 Wrote: What if I completely cancel the Canada part and make it so they never go there at all? I want to keep Gautam in the dark about their situation for now and continue the secret bond between Geetha and Bharat as usual.
I’m thinking of fast-forwarding the story to Bharat’s Intermediate years, where Sindhu finds out about the Geetha-Bharat affair, and then starting a Bharat-Sindhu track.
Honestly, I didn’t like the Canada part. I just wrote it as it came to me in the flow. As for the Geetha-Haran part, we can reconnect them later during the college scenes.
I’m thinking of giving a best feeling when the story ends finally.
Tell your take on this readers?
Please do so as you said above …… Even I don’t like canda trip …and please move story further.
Canada trip truely defined Geetha character as a true whore and slut and a heartless BITCH.
It seems Geetha never love Gautham or Bharath it’s purely LUST. ( she forget her family , marriage her parents - Willing to destroy her life just for sex and that unrealistic, that’s totally against her character ) .
She humiliated her husband In front of a kid and demanding to be with someone else shamelessly.
Doesn’t care about husband feelings and respect his pride.
She is educated knows the consequences must choose clever partner such as shiva should be more safe after ditching Bharat. Story should gone more longer episodes.
Even Bharath doesn’t love Geetha it also pure lust- if he love her - never let Gautam call her slut and whore…..
If story goes this way let Gautham get rid off Geetha and let her free .
No man will allow his wife to get fucked in front of someone unless he is chuck and no women let her husband humiliate in such way even in front her lover( she let Bharat doing in front of her , that means she doesn’t having any REAL FEELINGS only lust , does she forget what gawthan does / did for the family )
Don’t humiliate Gautam more he is the guy just like story in Dhika story . He loves his wife more and give freedom for little adventurers.
You ultimately made a chuck sorry bro . Not an adultery.
And change the title - from Geetha to Bharath the college guy .
There is no justification from the title of your story bro .
But really appreciate bro your writing skill is awesome ? most of them liked it and it’s just my opinion what I said ?
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