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15-03-2026, 02:13 PM
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(15-03-2026, 01:33 PM)Joker44 Wrote: Maine pehle hi clear kar diya hai ki abhi tak koi hero decide nahi hua hai. Main characters ko depth de raha hoon taaki wo acche lagein. Sirf isliye ki story aapke hisaab se nahi chal rahi, iska matlab ye nahi ki main waisa hi likhoon jaisa aap chahte ho.
Agar yahi baat hai, toh main suggestions lena aur reply dena band kar doonga. Mujhe opinions aur character improvement tips pasand hain, lekin agar aap bullying karoge toh main parwah karna chhod doonga aur itni depth ya emotions ke saath likhna band kar doonga."
@joker44 We are not hating, bullying or want our ego to be satisfied. We just want to give our points of views of the stroy for more detail and improvements that this story might need. This story is single Handley going in a one direction that you know. As you are saying ending is not fixed so there room for more improvement and detailing that you are missing like Viki,Abhay past affairs if he is an alpha and Rahul character build up which is going wasted. Nothing is more pleasurable than getting revenge for humiliation in fiction or in reality. Lots of big writers here and other platforms takes suggestions and opinions of there viewers after writing so many updates already to make story better and interesting and pleasing while maintaining suspense. We are happy with your slow build up , getting upset about viewers constructive criticism is little bit concerning for viewers because they filled undervalued by writer . Story they attached for more than 6 months can't go wasted for anyone ego. So don't feel demovited it viewers nature to give there opinion for there loved story. If story was not good they wouldn't have complained like this . You should know “Without readers to admire it, a story remains only words, not a living tale.”. So keep writing with more positivity and more energy. Always love everyone opinions and suggestions without hate and ego. And in the end, stories live forever through the people who cherish them.
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15-03-2026, 02:42 PM
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(15-03-2026, 01:36 PM)Joker44 Wrote: "Main ye sab sunte-sunte thak gaya hoon aur kaafi frustrated hoon. Maine kuch chapters likhe hain, unhe update karne ke baad main is story se break le raha hoon. Ab main apni purani story par focus karoonga kyunki mujhe thoda shant hone ki zaroorat hai.
Main apni taraf se puri koshish kar raha tha ki jaldi aur acche updates doon, par kisi ko uski fikar nahi hai. Sab bas apne hisaab se story chalwana chahte hain aur apna ego satisfy kar rahe hain. Toh theek hai, jaisa aap chahein."
Do not listen it anyone, comment section is manipulated and hyperactive newbie with new name every other day; their voice is not what your reader wants. Free will granted brother,  Write this story as per your wish. I have huge respect for your will.
Your update are just mindblowing, I know some twists are coming but keep in mind,this story is just a gem in xossipy and your writing skill is just erotic and awesome.
Waiting for next update!
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(15-03-2026, 01:36 PM)Joker44 Wrote: "Main ye sab sunte-sunte thak gaya hoon aur kaafi frustrated hoon. Maine kuch chapters likhe hain, unhe update karne ke baad main is story se break le raha hoon. Ab main apni purani story par focus karoonga kyunki mujhe thoda shant hone ki zaroorat hai.
Main apni taraf se puri koshish kar raha tha ki jaldi aur acche updates doon, par kisi ko uski fikar nahi hai. Sab bas apne hisaab se story chalwana chahte hain aur apna ego satisfy kar rahe hain. Toh theek hai, jaisa aap chahein."
Joker44 Bhai ek baat hai aap apne hisab se chle aur end badiya dhamake shat closed kre es episode ko abhi kitna baaki hai update ye mujhe nhi pta hai wait jab koi twist aaye khanhi me rahul aaye ya koi new Banda aaye twist romance aur sex berpoour ho ❤️❤️❤️
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(15-03-2026, 01:36 PM)Joker44 Wrote: "Main ye sab sunte-sunte thak gaya hoon aur kaafi frustrated hoon. Maine kuch chapters likhe hain, unhe update karne ke baad main is story se break le raha hoon. Ab main apni purani story par focus karoonga kyunki mujhe thoda shant hone ki zaroorat hai.
Main apni taraf se puri koshish kar raha tha ki jaldi aur acche updates doon, par kisi ko uski fikar nahi hai. Sab bas apne hisaab se story chalwana chahte hain aur apna ego satisfy kar rahe hain. Toh theek hai, jaisa aap chahein."
Bhai apko frustrated hone ki jarurat nahi hai. Story likh rahe hon to comments to aayenge. Kuch positive kuch negative. Kuch readers thoda harsh hon kar comment karte hai. Kyunki woh sabh story kon feel kar rahe hai. Bas apko jyada negative comment iss liye aan rahen hain kyuki jyaada tar readers kon Rahul kon Hero ki tarah dekhna hai. Lekin unko story mein aisa feel nahi aa rahaa hain. Apne kahaa ki apne hero decide nahin kiya. Lekin readers kon aisa mehsoos nahin hon rahaa hai. Story mein suspense hona chahiye thaa . Uske regarding readers comment karte. Kya Trupti Abhay ki hogi yaa phir Rahul ki. Lekin story mein suspense kam aur Abhay ken taraf zukav jyaada lag rahaa hai bas. Let it be it's only a suggestion.
Apko suggestions story improve karne ken liyen lene chaiye. Na ki frustrate hone ken liyen. Mere khayal sen Rahul an team jyaada nirash hon rahe hain. Let it be you go with your on way.
And I humbly request. Rahul an team. If these story is disappointing you leave it. But don't be harsh with writer. Let him go with his plot. Please Don't give suggestions or comments.
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15-03-2026, 04:02 PM
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(15-03-2026, 02:42 PM)Fing fing Wrote: Do not listen it anyone, comment section is manipulated and hyperactive newbie with new name every other day; their voice is not what your reader wants. Free will granted brother, Write this story as per your wish. I have huge respect for your will.
Your update are just mindblowing, I know some twists are coming but keep in mind,this story is just a gem in xossipy and your writing skill is just erotic and awesome.
Waiting for next update!
@Fing fing ohh aren't you cute little manipulative guy my brother . Just subtle( indirectly ) ,you and your 4 or 5 friends expressing adultery and cuckold view by discarding newbie opinions. Who gives you right to call yourself a real reader and other fake.Do you know lots(80 percentage) junior,senior,active and also story writer of this platform are giving there opinions for this stroy. Don't you know we can see your see your previous comment where you just want to make this story fully cuckold, so don't try to manipulate or change topic. You only like adultery and cuckold stories I know that which is good for you but don't try to force other into your desire. I know story is your liking and other 3 or 4 people which is good for you guys , but don't force others to have same opinions(cuckold) as yours, let other enjoy there opinion and suggestions even if they are newbies, active, junior or senior members. No hate to anyone and let other enjoy there life and opinions. Don't tag(label) them as manipulative.
This story is mis erotica so any characters should not be blindly favour by the writer.
Criticism are the lifes of any stories or movies with it you can learn many things ,but writer should take it positively and starve to make story more interesting and thrilling.
Wishing the writer all the best. Be positive
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(15-03-2026, 04:02 PM)Dash1 Wrote: @Fing fing ohh aren't you cute little manipulative guy my brother . Just subtle( indirectly ) ,you and your 4 or 5 friends expressing adultery and cuckold view by discarding newbie opinions. Do you know lots junior,senior,active and also story writer of this platform are giving there opinions for this stroy. Don't you know we can see your see your previous comment where you just want to make this story fully cuckold, so don't try to manipulate or change topic. You only like adultery and cuckold stories I know that which is good for you but don't try to force other into your desire. I know writer favour you and other 3 or 4 people which is good for you guys , but don't force others to have same opinions(cuckold) as yours, let other enjoy there opinion and suggestions even if they are newbies, active, junior or senior members. No hate to anyone and let other enjoy there life and opinions. Don't tag(label) them as manipulative.
This story is mis erotica so any characters should not be blindly favour by the writer.
Criticism are the lifes of any stories or movies with it you can learn many things ,but writer should take it positively and starve to make story more interesting and thrilling.
Wishing the writer all the best. Be positive
Admin mentioned me that you hv created 3 accounts.
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15-03-2026, 04:11 PM
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(15-03-2026, 04:02 PM)Dash1 Wrote: @Fing fing ohh aren't you cute little manipulative guy my brother . Just subtle( indirectly ) ,you and your 4 or 5 friends expressing adultery and cuckold view by discarding newbie opinions. Do you know lots junior,senior,active and also story writer of this platform are giving there opinions for this stroy. Don't you know we can see your see your previous comment where you just want to make this story fully cuckold, so don't try to manipulate or change topic. You only like adultery and cuckold stories I know that which is good for you but don't try to force other into your desire. I know writer favour you and other 3 or 4 people which is good for you guys , but don't force others to have same opinions(cuckold) as yours, let other enjoy there opinion and suggestions even if they are newbies, active, junior or senior members. No hate to anyone and let other enjoy there life and opinions. Don't tag(label) them as manipulative.
This story is mis erotica so any characters should not be blindly favour by the writer.
Criticism are the lifes of any stories or movies with it you can learn many things ,but writer should take it positively and starve to make story more interesting and thrilling.
Wishing the writer all the best. Be positive
Did i say anyone name ??? .Be diplomatic and respect boundaries. Too much noise decrease value and worth
Please respect writer and allow him to write as his wish
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15-03-2026, 04:18 PM
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(15-03-2026, 04:09 PM)Joker44 Wrote: Admin mentioned me that you hv created 3 accounts.
Is that show my brother. Baselesly accusing me of having 3 accounts. Are you only seeing 3 accounts like you said ,commenting in your stories,lots of active,senior and story writer also giving there opinions. Minimum of 20 to 30 different accounts are giving there opinions. So I think I use all of those accounts also. Giving opinions and criticism are now bad my friend??. I never hated you , I am just expressing my opinion. Sorry if giving constructive criticism is bad and offensive
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(15-03-2026, 04:11 PM)Fing fing Wrote: Did i say anyone name ??? .Be diplomatic and respect boundaries. Too much noise decrease value and worth
Please respect writer and allow him to write as his wish
I am also newbie my brother. Is it indirectly about me also. I also used more respectable language my brother . Sorry my criticism offended you. Enjoy your life.
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(15-03-2026, 04:18 PM)Dash1 Wrote: Is that show my brother. Baselesly accusing me of having 3 accounts. Are you only seeing 3 accounts like you said ,commenting in your stories,lots of active,senior and story writer also giving there opinions. Minimum of 20 to 30 different accounts are giving there opinions. So I think I use all of those accounts also. Giving opinions and criticism are now bad my friend??. I never hated you , I am just expressing my opinion. Sorry if giving constructive criticism is bad and offensive
Per the admin, the accounts Dash1, Testmaster, and hellomax belong to the same user ID.
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(15-03-2026, 01:36 PM)Joker44 Wrote: "Main ye sab sunte-sunte thak gaya hoon aur kaafi frustrated hoon. Maine kuch chapters likhe hain, unhe update karne ke baad main is story se break le raha hoon. Ab main apni purani story par focus karoonga kyunki mujhe thoda shant hone ki zaroorat hai.
Main apni taraf se puri koshish kar raha tha ki jaldi aur acche updates doon, par kisi ko uski fikar nahi hai. Sab bas apne hisaab se story chalwana chahte hain aur apna ego satisfy kar rahe hain. Toh theek hai, jaisa aap chahein."
Plz bhai aysa naa karo,, kuch chutiyo ke wajese aap story band kiu karenge
Wo log to owhi chate he ki unke hisab se story nahi chale to apko gussa dilaye ga fir story band
Hamlogo ka keya galti bhai
Unko jabab dena he to apko apne hisab se likhte rehna hoga, wo log jo apko tang karrahe he na, wo bhi ayenge padne chupke
Dekhlena
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(15-03-2026, 04:09 PM)Joker44 Wrote: Admin mentioned me that you hv created 3 accounts.
Why are you guys fighting. I humbly request reader's don't be so harsh to him. What the writer wants to write leave upto him. If you guys like than read. Otherwise don't read. But why are you guys fighting.
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(15-03-2026, 04:57 PM)Tiger687 Wrote: Why are you guys fighting. I humbly request reader's don't be so harsh to him. What the writer wants to write leave upto him. If you guys like than read. Otherwise don't read. But why are you guys fighting.
Mr @joker44 I want to humbly ask you did I give any hate or did I bullied you my friend. Give opinion and criticism for the story for favouring a single character or showing him a clear winner ( hero is not decided) is it bad. I have been invested in this story for around 5 months .I never told your writer is bad. I always think you writing is phenomenal. I think opinions are mean to share in the comments section. If you think was hating you then I am sorry but I was expressing my opinion.
Do as you like this your story but also consider your viewers opinion if needed and theme of the stroy is Mis erotica
No hate always love to everyone
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Bhai aapne jaise socha ho waise END kar do story ko
Sara Matter he Close ho jayega
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Mere khyal se writer ko clear kar dena chahiye ki ye cuck story hai ya incest story jisse log samajh jayenge ki unko ye story read karna hai ki nahi aur mere khyal se story ka plot already hi kharab ho chuka hai pahle bahot badhiya chal rahi thi lekin writer ne suggestion ne lekar barbad kar di isko aap khud se hi isko likhte jao whi thik rahega aur clear do ki ye cuck story hai ya incest ya tripti slut ban jayegi
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Moving on from this quarrel. Appreciate the opinions, but I'm done. Big update dropping tonight at 8-9pm. Enjoy!
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(15-03-2026, 05:01 PM)Dash1 Wrote: Mr @joker44 I want to humbly ask you did I give any hate or did I bullied you my friend. Give opinion and criticism for the story for favouring a single character or showing him a clear winner ( hero is not decided) is it bad. I have been invested in this story for around 5 months .I never told your writer is bad. I always think you writing is phenomenal. I think opinions are mean to share in the comments section. If you think was hating you then I am sorry but I was expressing my opinion.
Do as you like this your story but also consider your viewers opinion if needed and theme of the stroy is Mis erotica
No hate always love to everyone
Don't feel bad brother. Writer was frustrated. We should understand him. Don't take it seriously. And let it be leave writer freely. what he wants to write. Don't give any suggestions.
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(15-03-2026, 05:12 PM)Joker44 Wrote: Moving on from this quarrel. Appreciate the opinions, but I'm done. Big update dropping tonight at 8-9pm. Enjoy!
Good. Take all the comments as suggestion. Don't be hyper or frustrate. You are free to write your own way. Those who like your update. They will continue these story. Those who don't like will leave the story.
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Yr update ka bolkr shi chutiya bnaya aapne yha mai apne important meeting drop krde pr yr aapne shi nhi kiya bhai
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