Misc. Erotica Maa bani Classmate

[BigBlackBull]

Doston, main ek baat clear kar doon—Tripti ko kaun chodega aur kab, woh toh story ka suspense hai aur wo main hi decide karunga. Par abhi mera sawal sirf pacing ko lekar hai:

1. Fast Pace (Abhi Shuru Karun?): Kya aap chahte ho ki main zyada intezar na karwau aur abhi Tripti ki chudai dikhana shuru kar doon? Bina kisi lambe build-up ke, seedha action par aa jaun?
   
2. Slow & Sexy (Excitement Badhaun?): Ya phir aap chahte ho ki main thoda aur slow chalun? Tripti ko thoda aur tadpaya jaye, uski halat aisi kar di jaye ki wo khud sex ke liye pagal ho jaye, aur phir climax mein uski ghamsaan chudai ho?
   

Mera manna hai ki agar hum thoda aur rukenge, toh excitement aur tension double ho jayegi. Par agar aapko lag raha hai ki main zyada hi slow ja raha hoon, toh batao!

Bhai story toh slow aur sexy hi honi chahiye. Lekin updates ken hisaab sen aisaa lag rahaa hain. Revenge kahi nahi hai. Rahul is looking like a looser. Abhi tak Rahul ka character acha lag raha thaa.Strong aggressive joh Kriti ne feel kiya tha.Lekin Trupti joh ki lead heroin hai. Usse abhi tak koi feeling nahi hai.Rahul kon le kar bus woh usse bete ke tarah dekh rahi hain.woh naa uska dard dekh paa rahiin hain. Na hi uska gussa.Na hi uski feeling samajh pa rahi hai.woh toh sirf Abhay ki feeling uska hi dard samaj pa rahin hain.mai bhi yeh story sirf Rahul ka revenge aur Trupti kaise Rahul ki feeling aur dard kon samjegi yehi dekhane ken liyen story read kar rahaa tha.par lag toh aisaa raha hai ki Abhay hi story ka main hero hain. Aur Rahul ek looser joh hamesha sar hila kar trupti kon aage badhane ken liyen sahmati jatata hai.I am too loosing intrest in story.because their is no action between Trupti and Rahul 

[arin736]

Nahi writer, aap jaise chate ho, aap wohi kare. Story ko plz aur interesting aur sexyest banao. Aur a tabhi mumkin hoga jab story slow aur sexy hoga.

[Rinkp219]

Fantastic update Bhai...

Viki ka koi news do

[Tiger687]

Bhai action Trupti aur Rahul ken beech hi hona chahiye. Chahe phir accidently hi kyun na hon. Trupti ne joh blowjob diya hai.woh accidently Abhay samajh kar Rahul kon deti toh maza aatan. Abhay ka Trupti ken liyen koi pyaar nahin. Balki ghamand hona chahiye. Ussen lagna chahiye ki iss college ki khubsurat ladki sirf uski gf honi chahiye. Aur joh Vikki ne Trupti ken saath kiyaa. Woh bhi Abhay ken hi plan ka hissa hon. Taki woh trupti ka dil jeet sakhe aur Rahul kon Tripti ki nazron mein gira sakhen.

[Vkpawar]

Kya chutiyapa hai ye story phale se nhi h kya ye sari story bna ke hi likh rhe ho kya fir to kuch bhi likh do apne hisab se logo ko bevkuf bnane ke liye

[Fing fing]

Sawal kafi Interesting hai aapka bhai
Lekin jis hisàab se scene chal rha hai
Isme sirf
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Abhay ke Chance dikh rha hai mujhe , bhale Chudai na hui Tripti ki lekin Finnaly Tripti to Abhay ki ho jayegi
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Jaba ki baki ke scene ki hisàab se dekha jaaye
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Rahul ka chance 0% dikh rha hai
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Rahul na to Revenge le payega apna
Or
Na he Tripti ko paa sakega
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Mera Comment aapko bura laga ho to Very Sorry Brother
But ab tak aapki story me mai Main Revenge Part ke karan Read kar rha ho mujhe INCEST ya Adultery se matlab nahi rha
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Mai sirf Revenge dekhna chahta hoo Rahul ka
Kaise badla lega
Kaise Dhokha dega apne dosto ko
Kaise Tripti ki najar me uthega Bina kisi ki najar me aaye
Umeed karta ho Brother AAP meri bat samj rhe hoge
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Baki Mera Review bura laga to Dil se ek Bar Fir se SORRY Brother

Literally a gem in xossipy. There is only one jungle rule, stronger takes the prize .No revenge needed at all. Rahul a loser must endure his mom taken by a strong guy Abhay.

your comments section is manipulated,listen to your heart and write whatever you feel like. I will not demand but story has no meaning if it becomes incest / mom-son crap.Look xossipy,how they have destroyed some beautiful story and no one even visit that stories anymore

Be yourself and maintain this  premium story with dignity.Remember, you can not satisfy all. Choose only one path.As of my view,this story is destined for something bigger.

Update!!

[6sense]

Bhaiyo, Ek Jaruri Sawal: Tripti ki Chudai Kab? (Author's Note)

Kafi bhaiyo ke message aa rahe hain ki story bahut slow chal rahi hai. Sabka ek hi sawal hai: "Tripti ki chudai ab tak kyu nahi hui? Abhay ya Rahul usey pel kyu nahi rahe?"
Toh doston, mera point-of-view thoda alag hai aur main chahta hoon aap log batao ki main sahi hoon ya nahi:

• Purity ka Sawal: Tripti abhi tak ek "Confused biwi - Jisne kuch had par krli but sb kuch nhi diya vo sure nhi hae use kya chaiye" ki image mein hai. Agar main bina kisi solid wajah ke usse randomly kisi se bhi chudwa doon, toh maza thanda ho jayega.
  
• The "Slow-Burn" Thrill: Main chahta hoon ki aap log thoda aur tadpein. Jab tak Tripti ki chudiyan (ya uski halat) aisi na ho jaye ki wo khud chudne ke liye gidgidaye, tab tak asli maza nahi aayega.
  
• Climax ka Dhamaka: Main isliye slow chal raha hoon taaki jab climax aaye aur hero usse chode, toh wo scene ek dum hardcore aur yaadgar ho. Random sex toh har koi likhta hai, main Tripti ki chudai ko ek level upar le jana chahta hoon.
  
• Hero ki Entry: Abhay ya Rahul mein se kaun uski seal todega, ye decide karne ke liye thoda aur build-up chahiye.
  

Mera Sawal: Kya aap mere is "Slow-Build" se raazi ho? Ya aap chahte ho ki main zyada intezar na karwau aur abhi kisi se uski ghamsaan chudai shuru karwa doon?

Abhay must win !! No second thought on rahul.Waiting to see how relatives ,friend,family drama,sanjeev and rahul react when tripti chooses Abhay as partner. 

I am waiting for sex between Abhay and tripti;early sex scene between rahul and Kriti is side dish as the story lies on Abhay trip axis.

[Momsasslover]

Doston, main ek baat clear kar doon—Tripti ko kaun chodega aur kab, woh toh story ka suspense hai aur wo main hi decide karunga. Par abhi mera sawal sirf pacing ko lekar hai:

1. Fast Pace (Abhi Shuru Karun?): Kya aap chahte ho ki main zyada intezar na karwau aur abhi Tripti ki chudai dikhana shuru kar doon? Bina kisi lambe build-up ke, seedha action par aa jaun?
   
2. Slow & Sexy (Excitement Badhaun?): Ya phir aap chahte ho ki main thoda aur slow chalun? Tripti ko thoda aur tadpaya jaye, uski halat aisi kar di jaye ki wo khud sex ke liye pagal ho jaye, aur phir climax mein uski ghamsaan chudai ho?
   

Mera manna hai ki agar hum thoda aur rukenge, toh excitement aur tension double ho jayegi. Par agar aapko lag raha hai ki main zyada hi slow ja raha hoon, toh batao!

Bhai apki writing skill awesome hain. Lekin story sach mein galat direction mein ja rahi hai. Is story ka Hero Rahul hi rahata to acha hota. Ye ek heart touching love story banti. These is my suggestion.

Story jitna Abhay aur Trupti ke irad girad ghumegi. Mere khayal se spoil hogi. Aur shayad ye story jyaada tar reader Rahul aur Trupti ken liyen hi padh rahen hain. AUR EK REQUEST HAI BHAI. NEXT UPDATE JALDI DO AUR AAGE STORY KONSE WAY MEIN JAAYEGI READERS KON BATA DO.MERE KHAYAL SE BOHOT SARE READER NIRASH HON GAYE HAI. DEKHO AUR BHI BOHOT INCEST AUR CUCK STORIES HAI. PARANTU IS STORY KI KYA DEMAND HAI YE JADA MAYANE RAKHATA HAI

[Dash1]

Doston, main ek baat clear kar doon—Tripti ko kaun chodega aur kab, woh toh story ka suspense hai aur wo main hi decide karunga. Par abhi mera sawal sirf pacing ko lekar hai:

1. Fast Pace (Abhi Shuru Karun?): Kya aap chahte ho ki main zyada intezar na karwau aur abhi Tripti ki chudai dikhana shuru kar doon? Bina kisi lambe build-up ke, seedha action par aa jaun?
   
2. Slow & Sexy (Excitement Badhaun?): Ya phir aap chahte ho ki main thoda aur slow chalun? Tripti ko thoda aur tadpaya jaye, uski halat aisi kar di jaye ki wo khud sex ke liye pagal ho jaye, aur phir climax mein uski ghamsaan chudai ho?
   

Mera manna hai ki agar hum thoda aur rukenge, toh excitement aur tension double ho jayegi. Par agar aapko lag raha hai ki main zyada hi slow ja raha hoon, toh batao!

@joker44 slow burn story or fast you do according to your wish .people don't give fuck about Abhay or Rahul having sex with Trupti first they just want you to follow a proper path where you don't favour abhay more or declare him as hero subtly. There are 3 or 4 people in the comments section that thinks Abhay is stronger than Rahul I don't know how they think so. Initially Rahul let Trupti have break up with him because he have lot to lose and have to hide his and Trupti original identity where as Viki and Abhay don't have anything to lose at that time that's why it was easy for them to get her not because Rahul was a loser. Having 0.5 inches dick bigger than Rahul doesn't make abhay stronger there other qualities also that make a character stronger than other which Rahul have like roughness ,tone , intention, proper plan while handling girls like Kriti and other.Rahul is a god damm fucking son of a successful business do you think he is a powerless or less stronger guy than Abhay whose father is not rich ,so obviously Rahul is more power and master mind in any sense fictional or in reality than Abhay. Abhay who can't directly confront Viki is showing as alpha and stronger rahul doesn't make sense. Abhay a playboy and alpha that you have portrait till now don't have bad past with other girls or having multiple affairs that doesn't make any sense . Showing him as a true lover is the main joke of this stroy. And Trupti getting emotional about Abhay mom but can't see herself humiliating her son is doesn't make a sense. Rahul character build up such a waste of the stroy plot if it can't be translated it in the actions. Best plot will be humiliation to revenge stroy( redemption arc).No hate to anyone it is just a constructive criticism.

[Ankita b]

Bhaiyo, Ek Jaruri Sawal: Tripti ki Chudai Kab? (Author's Note)

Kafi bhaiyo ke message aa rahe hain ki story bahut slow chal rahi hai. Sabka ek hi sawal hai: "Tripti ki chudai ab tak kyu nahi hui? Abhay ya Rahul usey pel kyu nahi rahe?"
Toh doston, mera point-of-view thoda alag hai aur main chahta hoon aap log batao ki main sahi hoon ya nahi:

• Purity ka Sawal: Tripti abhi tak ek "Confused biwi - Jisne kuch had par krli but sb kuch nhi diya vo sure nhi hae use kya chaiye" ki image mein hai. Agar main bina kisi solid wajah ke usse randomly kisi se bhi chudwa doon, toh maza thanda ho jayega.
  
• The "Slow-Burn" Thrill: Main chahta hoon ki aap log thoda aur tadpein. Jab tak Tripti ki chudiyan (ya uski halat) aisi na ho jaye ki wo khud chudne ke liye gidgidaye, tab tak asli maza nahi aayega.
  
• Climax ka Dhamaka: Main isliye slow chal raha hoon taaki jab climax aaye aur hero usse chode, toh wo scene ek dum hardcore aur yaadgar ho. Random sex toh har koi likhta hai, main Tripti ki chudai ko ek level upar le jana chahta hoon.
  
• Hero ki Entry: Abhay ya Rahul mein se kaun uski seal todega, ye decide karne ke liye thoda aur build-up chahiye.
  

Mera Sawal: Kya aap mere is "Slow-Build" se raazi ho? Ya aap chahte ho ki main zyada intezar na karwau aur abhi kisi se uski ghamsaan chudai shuru karwa doon?

After a long time, a real cuckson story to remember. The pain, intense feeling, frustation and sanjeev accepting new partner for Tripti is just sexy.
Waiting for next part !!

[Joker44]

Bhaiyo, ek baat saaf kar doon. Main dekh raha hoon ki sab apne-apne hisaab se story ka end maang rahe hain, par main kahani ke hisaab se chalunga. Mera kaam suspense banaye rakhna hai, story ko boring banana nahi.

Maine kabhi nahi kaha ki ye koi cuckold ya incest story hai, aur ye zaroori nahi ki ek sex story mein ek aurat sirf ek hi mard ke paas jaye. Kyu ek itni badiya aurat ko sirf ek hi bande ke liye rakha jaye? Tripti kisi ke bhi beech juggle ho sakti hai, isliye kisi ek ko pakad kar mat baitho aur mujh par apna opinion mat thopo. Kahani kab palat jayegi kisi ko nahi pata. Tripti kab kiske saath kaisa sex karegi ye sirf main decide karunga. Bas maze lo aur dekhte jao aage kya hota hai.

[Ravi1991]

Bhaiyo, ek baat saaf kar doon. Main dekh raha hoon ki sab apne-apne hisaab se story ka end maang rahe hain, par main kahani ke hisaab se chalunga. Mera kaam suspense banaye rakhna hai, story ko boring banana nahi.

Maine kabhi nahi kaha ki ye koi cuckold ya incest story hai, aur ye zaroori nahi ki ek sex story mein ek aurat sirf ek hi mard ke paas jaye. Kyu ek itni badiya aurat ko sirf ek hi bande ke liye rakha jaye? Tripti kisi ke bhi beech juggle ho sakti hai, isliye kisi ek ko pakad kar mat baitho aur mujh par apna opinion mat thopo. Kahani kab palat jayegi kisi ko nahi pata. Tripti kab kiske saath kaisa sex karegi ye sirf main decide karunga. Bas maze lo aur dekhte jao aage kya hota hai.

 bro.

[Sam.hunter7898]

Bhaiyo, ek baat saaf kar doon. Main dekh raha hoon ki sab apne-apne hisaab se story ka end maang rahe hain, par main kahani ke hisaab se chalunga. Mera kaam suspense banaye rakhna hai, story ko boring banana nahi.

Maine kabhi nahi kaha ki ye koi cuckold ya incest story hai, aur ye zaroori nahi ki ek sex story mein ek aurat sirf ek hi mard ke paas jaye. Kyu ek itni badiya aurat ko sirf ek hi bande ke liye rakha jaye? Tripti kisi ke bhi beech juggle ho sakti hai, isliye kisi ek ko pakad kar mat baitho aur mujh par apna opinion mat thopo. Kahani kab palat jayegi kisi ko nahi pata. Tripti kab kiske saath kaisa sex karegi ye sirf main decide karunga. Bas maze lo aur dekhte jao aage kya hota hai.

Aapke iss comment ne dil jeet liya joker bhai
Mey bhi yahi chata tha ki tripty kisi ek ki naa ho aur nahi rahul cocson ho

Ek request he bhai vikky ko wapas laya jaye

[Bansalboy]

Tripti ki Gand Ki Seal tudwao aache se

[Joker44]

Fest ka dusra din shuru ho chuka tha, par Trupti ke liye pichli raat abhi khatam nahi hui thi. Jab wo subah uthi, uske jism mein ek ajeeb si thirkan aur hothon par Abhay ka naseela swad abhi bhi baaki tha. Emerald green dress ab hostel ke kone mein padi thi, par us raat ki deewangi Trupti ki ragon mein daud rahi thi. Wo aaine ke samne khadi hui aur apni gardan par wo halka sa nishaan dekha jo shayad Abhay ne pakadte waqt banaya tha. Wo darri nahi, balki muskura di—use pehli baar mehsoos ho raha tha ki wo zinda hai.




Subah 10 baje auditorium mein dance rehearsal shuru hui. Raat ke fashion show ki kamyabi ke baad auditorium mein ek alag hi energy thi, par Trupti aur Abhay ke beech ki energy 'sexual tension' se bhari thi. Stage par sirf wo dono the, aur lightman upar se halki lights set kar raha tha.


"Chalo, lift wala step phir se practice karte hain," Abhay ne kaha. Uski aawaz aaj pehli baar thodi zyada possessive aur bhari lag rahi thi.


Jaise hi music shuru hua, Abhay ne Trupti ko kamar se pakda aur hawa mein uchhala. Jab wo niche aayi, toh Abhay ne use apne seene se itni kaskar sata liya ki Trupti ki saansein atak gayin. Uska naram badan Abhay ke muscular jism se poori tarah press ho gaya tha.


"Kal raat toh sirf shuruat thi, Trupti," Abhay ne uske kaan ke paas dhire se fusfusaya, uski garam saansein Trupti ko dobara madhosh karne lagin. "Abhi toh poora fest baaki hai... aur hamari poori zindagi."



Trupti ne ek lambi siskaari li. Wo empowered mehsoos kar rahi thi, jaise wo is college ki malkin ho. Par tabhi uske dimaag mein wo anonymous message chamka: "Your husband is watching." Uska chehra thoda peela pad gaya. Usne socha ki wo Abhay ko sab bata de—ki koi use stalk kar raha hai, koi use dhamka raha hai.


"Abhay... mujhe kuch kehna hai. Wo... mujhe kuch messages aa rahe hain," Trupti ne himmat juta kar kaha.


"Kya?" Abhay ne uski aankhon mein dekha.


Trupti ne hoth kante. Wo darr gayi ki agar usne bataya, toh shayad Abhay darr jaye ya ye sab yahi ruk jaye. Wo is naye-naye mile 'freedom' ko khona nahi chahti thi. "Nahi... kuch nahi. Bas thodi thak gayi hoon." Usne baat taal di.


Upar balcony ke andhere mein, hamesha ki tarah ek saaya maujood tha. Rahul wahan baitha apne naye phone (jo usne shayad subah hi khareeda tha) se unhe record kar raha tha. Usne dekha ki kaise uski Maa Abhay ki baahon mein pighal rahi hai. Rahul ne koi action nahi liya, koi message nahi bheja. Wo bas shaant baitha unhe ghoorta raha. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi thandak thi jo niche stage ki garmi ko raakh kar sakti thi.


Rahul ne ek 'save' button dabaya aur video gallery mein add kar diya. Uske liye ye sirf ek video nahi tha, ye uski Maa ke 'guilt' aur 'pleasure' ka aakhri gawah tha. Wo bas sahi waqt ka intezaar kar raha tha jab wo ye saara raaz ek jhatke mein fash karega.


Trupti ne upar balcony ki taraf dekha, par use koi dikha nahi. Use laga shayad wo uska waham hai. Wo waapas Abhay ki baahon mein simat gayi, ye sochte hue ki jab tak Rahul uske saath hai, use kisi se darrne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Par wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki Rahul 'saath' nahi, balki 'saaye' ki tarah uski tabahi bun raha hai.


Fest ka dusra din apni poori raftaar par tha. College ka ground stalls, music aur hazaron students ki bheed se bhara hua tha. Trupti aur Abhay, President aur Vice-President hone ke naate, har jagah maujood the. Aaj Trupti ne ek halki gulabi (peach) rang ki saree pehni thi, jisme wo behad masoom par uttejak lag rahi thi.
Dopehar ki dhoop tez thi, aur dono ek ice-cream stall ke paas khade hokar volunteers ko instructions de rahe the. Bheed ke beech Abhay ka mardana rob saaf dikh raha tha, par uska poora dhyaan Trupti par tha. Sabke saamne Abhay ne ek ice-cream cone liya aur bade hi pyaar se Trupti ke hothon ke paas laya.
"Khao, thoda thanda mehsoos karogi," Abhay ne kaha. Uska ek haath Trupti ki kamar par tha, jo bheed ki wajah se 'protective' lag raha tha, par Trupti jaanti thi ki wo haath use kaskar mehsoos kar raha hai. Trupti ne ice-cream ka ek bite liya, aur Abhay ne apni ungli se uske hothon par lagi cream ko saaf kiya aur phir wahi ungli apne muh mein daal li. Ye 'public flirting' Trupti ko ek naya nasha de rahi thi.


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Thodi der baad, jab bheed dusri taraf gayi aur wo dono stall ke piche ek chote se storage area mein akele hue, toh mahol achanak badal gaya. Wahan dher saare carton aur boxes rakhe the jo unhe bahar ki nazron se chhupa rahe the.
Abhay ne bina waqt zaya kiye Trupti ko ek bade box se sata diya. Uska haath Trupti ke saree ke pallu ke niche gaya aur seedha uski nangi kamar ko sehlaate hue niche sarakne laga. Trupti ki saansein turant bhari ho gayin.
"Abhay... koi aa jayega... bahar sab hain," Trupti ne dabi hui aawaz mein kaha.
"Koi nahi aayega," Abhay ne guraate hue kaha. Usne apna haath Trupti ki lace panty ke upar rakha aur uski garam aur gili chut (pussy) ko dhire-dhire rub karna shuru kiya.
Mmmhhhh... Trupti ne apne hothon ko kaskar kaat liya (biting her lip) taaki uski cheekh bahar na jaye. Abhay ki ungliyan panty ke kase hue kapde ke upar se uski 'clit' ko sehla rahi thin. Trupti ka jism dhoop aur hawas se tapne laga. Wo 'teasing' itni jabardast thi ki Trupti ke pair kanpne lage.
Abhay ki raftaar thodi badhi, uski ungliyan ab panty ki gehraiyon ko mehsoos kar rahi thin. Trupti madhoshi ki dehleez par thi, uska ek haath Abhay ke baalon mein phans gaya tha aur dusra haath usne apne muh par rakh liya tha taaki siskaariyan bahar na nikal sakein.


Tabhi bahar se kisi volunteer ne awaz di, "Abhay sir! Stage par mike testing ke liye bulaya hai!"
Trupti jhatke se hosh mein aayi. Usne Abhay ka haath kaskar pakda aur use niche se hata diya. "Nahi... abhi nahi... yahan nahi (Not now, not here)," usne haanfte hue kaha. Uska chehra poori tarah laal ho chuka tha aur uski aankhon mein abhi bhi adhuri pyas thi.
Abhay ne ek gehri saans li aur apna haath bahar nikala. Usne Trupti ki saree sahi ki aur uske maathe ko choom liya. "Theek hai... par aaj raat, tum meri hogi. Poori tarah."
Trupti ne apne bikhre hosh samete aur stall se bahar nikli. Uske jism mein abhi bhi Abhay ki ungliyon ki thar-tharahat baaki thi. Wo bheed mein wapas toh chali gayi, par uska man ab sirf raat ka intezar kar raha tha jab koi 'stall' aur koi 'volunteer' unke beech nahi hoga.

Raat ke sannate mein college campus kisi gehri khamoshi mein dooba hua tha, par auditorium ke backstage storage room mein ek alag hi toofan pal raha tha. Agli subah main dance competition tha, aur Trupti aur Abhay ne "rehearsal" ke bahaane wahan milne ka faisla kiya. Trupti ne ek patli silk ki night-suit jaisi dress pehni thi, jo uske bhari badan par kisi dusri twacha (skin) ki tarah chipki hui thi.


Jaise hi storage room ka bhari darwaza band hua, Abhay ne bina koi waqt zaya kiye Trupti ko deewar se sata diya (pins her against the wall). Room mein purane pardo aur lakdi ki sondhi khushboo thi, par unke beech sirf hawas ki mahak thi.



Abhay ne Trupti ke hothon ko apne kabze mein le liya. Ye ek deep, wet kiss tha, jisme unki saansein ek-dusre mein ghul rahi thin. Abhay ne Trupti ki kamar ko kaskar pakda aur use apne tanaav (erection) par zor se press kiya. Trupti ne ek bhari siskaari li aur apne haath Abhay ke baalon mein phansa diye.



"Abhay... humein rehearsal karni chahiye," Trupti ne haanfte hue kaha, par uski aankhein kuch aur hi maang rahi thin.


"Wahi toh kar raha hoon, Trupti. Tumhare jism ke har mod ki rehearsal," Abhay ne guraate hue kaha.


Usne dhire se Trupti ke blouse ke button khole. Uska bhari 38-inch ka seena hawa mein aazaad ho gaya. Abhay ne pehle apne haath un naram pahadon par rakhe aur unhe kaskar masalne laga. Trupti ka jism dhanush ki tarah akad gaya. Phir, Abhay ne apna sir neeche kiya aur ek nipple ko apne muh mein bhar liya.


Slurp... slurp...


Abhay ne Trupti ke nipple ko sucking aur licking se poori tarah bhigo diya. Wo use kabhi apne hothon se suck karta, toh kabhi apni jeebh se circular motion mein chat-ta. Trupti ne apni aankhein band kar li thin aur uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Usne Abhay ka sir apne seene se aur kaskar chipka liya.



"Ahhh... sssss... Abhay... tum pagal kar doge!" Trupti ki dabi hui cheekh purane storage room ki deewaron se takra kar wapas aa rahi thi.


Abhay ka haath ab niche ki taraf sarakne laga tha, us gili darar ki taraf jahan kal raat ka nasha abhi bhi baaki tha. Trupti ko lag raha tha ki wo is mard ke samne poori tarah bebas ho chuki hai, aur ye bebasi use duniya ki har khushi se zyada maza de rahi thi.

Storage room ki hawa mein purane pardo aur hawas ki ek maseeli khushboo ghuli hui thi. Trupti ne dekha ki Abhay ka dhairya (patience) khatam ho raha hai, toh usne khel badalne ka faisla kiya. Emerald green silk toh kal ki baat thi, aaj uski peach-colored dress uske ghutno tak simat gayi jab wo dhire se niche baithi.
Trupti ne Abhay ke jeans ki zip kholi aur us mardana hathiyar ko aazad kiya jo abhi lohe ki rod ki tarah tana hua tha. Usne turant use muh mein nahi liya. Pehle, usne apni jeebh nikali aur us par thoda thook (saliva) jama kiya, aur phir lund ke tope (glans) par ek bohot hi dhimi aur gili lakeer khenchi.


"Mmm... Trupti... sssss!" Abhay ne deewar par apna sar tika diya.
Trupti ne apni jeebh ko uski ragon (veins) par ghumana shuru kiya, jaise wo har ek nas ka swad lena chahti ho. Uska 'saliva play' Abhay ko pagal kar raha tha; wo kabhi tope ko apni jeebh se circular motion mein chat-ti, toh kabhi apni ungliyon se uske tatiyon (balls) ko sehlaati. Trupti ne upar dekhkar Abhay ki aankhon mein dekha—uski nazron mein ek shaitani sukoon tha. Usne lund ko apne hothon se halka sa chhua aur phir apni geeli jeebh se use poora bhigo diya.


Abhay ka jism buri tarah kanp raha tha. Usne Trupti ke baal pakadne ke liye haath aage badhaya hi tha ki achanak...
Tring... Tring... Tring...
Andhere kamre mein Abhay ke phone ki ringtone ek jhatke ki tarah gunji. Abhay ne gusse mein phone nikaala, par caller ID dekhte hi uske chehre ka rang badal gaya.
"Helllo? Kya? Lights main short-circuit? Stage ka poora setup band ho gaya hai?" Abhay ne chilla kar pucha. Usne Trupti ki taraf dekha, jo abhi bhi uske kadmon mein baithi haanf rahi thi, uska chehra aur hoth uske ras se geele the.
"Trupti... emergency hai. Main Stage setup ke bina fest cancel ho jayega. Main bas 5 minute mein wapas aata hoon. Please... yahan se hilna mat. Wait here for me," Abhay ne haanfte hue kaha. Usne jaldi se apni zip band ki, Trupti ke maathe par ek jaldi-baazi wala kiss kiya aur storage room ka bhari darwaza kholkar bahar nikal gaya.
Thud!


Darwaza band ho gaya. Trupti wahan andhere mein akeli reh gayi. Uska jism abhi bhi tap raha tha, uski chut se nikalne wala garam paani uski jaanghon ko bhigo raha tha, aur uska muh abhi bhi us adhure swad se bhara tha.
Storage room mein ab sannaata tha, sirf purani cheezon ke girne ki halki aawazein aa rahi thin. Trupti ne apni dress sahi ki aur andhere mein ek kursi par baith gayi, darwaze ki taraf takti hui. Par us sannate mein use aisa mehsoos hua jaise wo akeli nahi hai. Piche rakhe dher saare pardo ke piche se ek halki si sarsarahat aayi.
"Abhay? Tum ho?" usne tharrati hui aawaz mein pucha.
Koi jawaab nahi aaya. 

[Dash1]

Bhaiyo, ek baat saaf kar doon. Main dekh raha hoon ki sab apne-apne hisaab se story ka end maang rahe hain, par main kahani ke hisaab se chalunga. Mera kaam suspense banaye rakhna hai, story ko boring banana nahi.

Maine kabhi nahi kaha ki ye koi cuckold ya incest story hai, aur ye zaroori nahi ki ek sex story mein ek aurat sirf ek hi mard ke paas jaye. Kyu ek itni badiya aurat ko sirf ek hi bande ke liye rakha jaye? Tripti kisi ke bhi beech juggle ho sakti hai, isliye kisi ek ko pakad kar mat baitho aur mujh par apna opinion mat thopo. Kahani kab palat jayegi kisi ko nahi pata. Tripti kab kiske saath kaisa sex karegi ye sirf main decide karunga. Bas maze lo aur dekhte jao aage kya hota hai.

@joker44 aren't you being little harass on your viewers opinion. When previously 2 or 3 months ago those 4 to 5 people used to bluntly or arrogantly support Abhay and want to make this story fully cuckold story you didn't have any objections or problems because you always have soft corner (satisfy your desire ) for Abhay in this story but now when 80 to 90 percentage viewers want Rahul ( not fully incest story but use his character properly) as a main hero you have problems in there opinion. I would have understand if Rahul didn't know about Trupti affair with Abhay then we could have considered as not a cuckold story but you directly showing it and Rahul(humiliated )is supporting Trupti affair so it is an fully cuckold without any doubt. Rahul taking revenge for humiliation will be shown as bad or morally wrong ,am I not right ??.Story will be like this: Rahul will force or blackmail Trupti have sex with her but Trupti will never love him and one day trupti  "knight in shining armour" Abhay will save her from Rahul and she will fully love Abhay ,start hating her son and give Abhay love that his mother haven't given ( what about Rahul getting his mother love without humiliating him). Possibly ending: Trupti will choose her playboy bf Abhay because he such a true lover and leave Sanjeev or she will realise her mistake after fucking with Abhay and choose Sanjeev after destroying his trust. Is this little familiar flimsy story where women having affair choose her lover( playboy like Abhay) or husband(loyal) in the movies. You can make Trupti have sex with Abhay or Rahul as you desire, people don't care that much but favouring Abhay in a good way and showing Rahul with evil intentions is bad.Why Abhay past like his multiple affairs ( treating women like object) are not been shown if he such a big alpha guy. If it a mis erotica story why heavily favour one character (Abhay in good way) . When maximum viewers favour rahul. No hate to anyone just giving constructive criticism.

[BigBlackBull]

@joker44 aren't you being little harass on your viewers opinion. When previously 2 or 3 months ago those 4 to 5 people used to bluntly or arrogantly support Abhay and want to make this story fully cuckold story you didn't have any objections or problems because you always have soft corner (satisfy your desire ) for Abhay in this story but now when 80 to 90 percentage viewers want Rahul ( not fully incest story but use his character properly) as a main hero you have problems in there opinion. I would have understand if Rahul didn't know about Trupti affair with Abhay then we could have considered as not a cuckold story but you directly showing it and Rahul(humiliated )is supporting Trupti affair so it is an fully cuckold without any doubt. Rahul taking revenge for humiliation will be shown as bad or morally wrong ,am I not right ??.Story will be like this: Rahul will force or blackmail Trupti have sex with her but Trupti will never love him and one day trupti  "knight in shining armour" Abhay will save her from Rahul and she will fully love Abhay ,start hating her son and give Abhay love that his mother haven't given ( what about Rahul getting his mother love without humiliating him). Possibly ending: Trupti will choose her playboy bf Abhay because he such a true lover and leave Sanjeev or she will realise her mistake after fucking with Abhay and choose Sanjeev after destroying his trust. Is this little familiar flimsy story where women having affair choose her lover( playboy like Abhay) or husband(loyal) in the movies. You can make Trupti have sex with Abhay or Rahul as you desire, people don't care that much but favouring Abhay in a good way and showing Rahul with evil intentions is bad.Why Abhay past like his multiple affairs ( treating women like object) are not been shown if he such a big alpha guy. If it a mis erotica story why heavily favour one character (Abhay in good way) . When maximum viewers favour rahul. No hate to anyone just giving constructive criticism.

Why reader's are giving suggestions to him. He doesn't care about your suggestions. He has already decided. Abhay is going to be hero. And Rahul is going to be a Devil character. So Trupti will never love him.

If you guys want Read story or otherwise leave it.

Maa chod di puri story ki. Pahle wale writer ne . Or is bhai sahab ne bhi.

[Joker44]

Why reader's are giving suggestions to him. He doesn't care about your suggestions. He has already decided. Abhay is going to be hero. And Rahul is going to be a Devil character. So Trupti will never love him.

If you guys want Read story or otherwise leave it.

Maa chod di puri story ki. Pahle wale writer ne . Or is bhai sahab ne bhi.

Maine pehle hi clear kar diya hai ki abhi tak koi hero decide nahi hua hai. Main characters ko depth de raha hoon taaki wo acche lagein. Sirf isliye ki story aapke hisaab se nahi chal rahi, iska matlab ye nahi ki main waisa hi likhoon jaisa aap chahte ho.

Agar yahi baat hai, toh main suggestions lena aur reply dena band kar doonga. Mujhe opinions aur character improvement tips pasand hain, lekin agar aap bullying karoge toh main parwah karna chhod doonga aur itni depth ya emotions ke saath likhna band kar doonga."

[Joker44]

"Main ye sab sunte-sunte thak gaya hoon aur kaafi frustrated hoon. Maine kuch chapters likhe hain, unhe update karne ke baad main is story se break le raha hoon. Ab main apni purani story par focus karoonga kyunki mujhe thoda shant hone ki zaroorat hai.
​Main apni taraf se puri koshish kar raha tha ki jaldi aur acche updates doon, par kisi ko uski fikar nahi hai. Sab bas apne hisaab se story chalwana chahte hain aur apna ego satisfy kar rahe hain. Toh theek hai, jaisa aap chahein."

[Erotica erotica]

Dhamkedar update bhai!! Do not listen to anyone and write from your heart bhai. I support you-Joker44 .Write whatever feels like but i believe this story is not meant for incest.

"Write what your heart feels, Stories are written for writer soul"